SwaRagini Fan Fiction.. Part 24

Hey guys Heer here. I am very happy to see the love and support from all of you.

Your comments are my energy drink that boost me to give updates fast.

So last episode link is :

Part 23

And here goes the next part:

‘Seeing you drinking water , I remember the main part of my story darling. Lets continue ‘ said Lakshya pulling Ragini by hairs so that she face him now while she was craving for more water as she felt suffocation to go lessen as the tiny droplets of water touched her throat.

‘Well the day came and our engagement happened. Till bhai was busy in spending time with my Swara I bribed the priest that dadisa has chosen for the well being of our marriage and do you know baby why Swara was not able to keep the fast ‘ saying this he jerked Ragini and laughed like a maniac.

Well I learnt it from you , ‘ Every thing is fair in love ‘ saying this he once again jerked Ragini pressing her cheeks.

Ragini in unbearable pain held her stomach that has started to feel the burning sensation. She forced her body towards the water to have some but again lakshya pulled her mercilessly.

‘Water..yeah..it was the water that the priest gave to Swara mixed with something that her bp went down amd her loverboy came ahead to keep the fast just as I wanted’ said Lakshya with an angry grin,  ‘ afterall he had to pay for loving my girl .’

‘And there comes the finale ‘ saying this lakshya stood up and went towards the gate to unlock it.

‘You must be wondering why I unlocked the gate, well till now Sanskar’s condition will also have worsened and might doctor have come too and they will be searching for you in no time but you will have to die but not before you come to know what made your condition like this. ‘ saying this lakshya went towards Ragini,  halting in mid way such that he was just down the fan that was swinging on its own ready to fall down any moment while lakshya was anaware of it.

‘So take my secret to your grave and listen the rice were poisoned. And i made you eat that with love similarly Swara will have fed Sanskar and he will die soon. Bless us a happy married life Ragini’ saying this he started laughing.

Ragini felt her stomach burned up in sensation she clutched it hard and in extreme pain looked up feeling helpless. Her eyes reached the fan that was falling right over lakshya with loose lighting wires containg current.  An unknown power embraced her. She crawled upto lakshya who was busy dreaming her future with Swara with his face up and eyes closed.

Fan was about a inch aaay from lakshya. She cried with her all might , ‘ Lakshhhhhhh’ and pushed him towards the wall and tried to crawl backside to be saved but due to the effect of poison she felt her body lifeless and numb and the fan with electrical wires hit her causing blood to flow out everywhere.

Lakshya stood froze. It didn’t took a while to understand him that she has sacrificed her life to save him even after he was on the urge to give her a painful  death.

His limbs felt motionless. He stood numb and could only mutter , ‘ why..Ragini..why ‘.

Swara, dadisa , samishtha and shekhar came up and were shocked to see the scene in front of them.

Swara switched off the main switch and ran towards Ragini and took her out from the fan. Her had was badly hurt and drained in blood.

Tears welled up in Swara’s eyes while pleading Ragini to get up.

Ragini opened her eyes and took Swara’s  hand in her hand , ‘ Don..don’t..let…Sanshh..karr..eathh..aahh..the…porri..dge…’

Saying this and leaving Swara in a confused state she closed her eyes. Till the then dadi sa and samishtha sat near her crying hard. Shekhar called the ambulance.

As Ragini was carried in the ambulance Swara pondered over her last words. ‘ Don’t let Sanskar eat that porridge.’

But why she said that thought Swara , ‘ Did she come to know about the rice. But how’ swara went in deep thought as whole family rushed to hospital she stayed back to come with lakshya.

Lakshya fall on ground lifeless muttering only , ‘ why..Ragini..why’

This is all.

Do comments and let me know are you liking it or not.

Tell me what you think of Ragini now. Is she paying for her sins or she is the victim.

What you guys think??

Tonss of love and thanku :))

Next part on way 🙂


    • Heer


      Hey lol..now i have really not decided to go for a memory loss track or not..whether Ragini will survive or not it is also not confirmed dear.

      Keep supporting nf stay tuned

  1. lisa

    whatever ragini is or whatever she do i wil always lover her
    u can say she’s getting the taste of her own medicine but she just can live without laksh

  2. Fairy

    |Registered Member

    oh god heer!!!
    it ws damnnnn amaznggg…
    rags loved lucky sooo much even after his betrayel..
    omg!!!dat scene wen she saved him hurtng herself ,made me cry!!!
    m eagerly waitng for nxt episide…
    its super interestng story…
    keep rockng n stay blessed dear 😉

    • Heer


      Thanku fairy for commenting here.
      Yeah Ragini love him a lot. Its a bit emotional too. Hope lKshya understand her live now 🙂
      Keep supporting dear 🙂

  3. lovely

    Ragini is obviously victim, reading her state cause tears in my eyes, laksh have to pay for this , I hate him

  4. Ashnoor

    Awsm….yaar it was dam emotional. Ragini 😭😭😭😭😭 . Don’t kill my rago. Laksh pls now understand her feelings for you .

  5. j.

    amazing episode and now how did swara knew about rice????? ohhhh a new twist and plzzz make laksh realise his mistake and ragini’s love for him

    • Heer


      Thanku dear j.
      And only you caught that special line. Hmm.
      Swara knows about it. Is she in plan with lakshya ??
      Keep supporting 🙂

  6. Akshata

    |Registered Member

    I have just read your all the updates in one go, i loved it totally. i must say you are an amazing writer. you made me cry. God !!!! ragini loves laksh more than anything, beyond everything…. even after he made her eat poison, she protected him which is really commendable and may be she was an obsessive lover but yes her love was always true towards laksh.
    coming to ragini i love her to the core so for me yes she is a victim. eagerly waiting for the next.

  7. Sreevijayan

    |Registered Member

    I dnt wana think right npw if she is paying fr her sins or she is d victim…she is such a selfless lover ..laksh dnt deserve her..

    Pls dnt kill our ragini..was literally in tears…

    Awesome update dear…..

    • Heer


      Thanku dear sreevijyam for supporting it.
      Yeah she is a selfless lover.
      I am happy that u r enjoying it 🙂
      Keep supporting 🙂

  8. chanu

    Sry 4 late cmnt dr..
    in last epi my cmnt is 1 st cmnt & 2dy my 1 is da last. @.@ lols
    Cmng 2 dis epi..it is nice as always.
    and abt ragini…… ummmmmmmmm
    she did a wrong thing earlier. Bt after dat she is repenting abt it na.. so we shd 4gv her. & abt her lv… she always lv luksh unconditionally na… bt nly nw laskh will realise it.. feeling bad 4 ragini.. & I hate u laksh.. hw cn he do such things with ppl.. even if thy r his enemies!! Urggg.. im sure he also gonna repent abt his deeds..
    sry 4 my bak bak
    keep writing dr
    waiting 4 da nxt epi
    Be hpy always

    • Heer


      Don’t be sorry dear chanu. I loved your comment. It may be last but nor least.

      Yeah Ragini did wrong but is repenting and also laksh actions cannot be justified.

      I agree with you dear.

      Next part is almost ready ..will post ot soon.
      Thanku for giving your time here. I aas missing your comment 🙂

      Keep supporting and commenting dear.

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