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SwaRagini Fan Fiction.. Part 22

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Hey guys Heer here. Telly updates didn’t include the links of previous chapters.

So in this new chapter I am giving links along with new part of story.

http://www.tellyupdates.com/user/3098/?profiletab=posts

So here is next part. Read it and give your feedback πŸ™‚

‘ Here it is baby ‘ Swara said as she put the porridge on the plate and touched Sanskar’s face in awe.

Laksh coughed to gain there attention and said , ‘ Well i am taking Ragini to her room. I want to feed her there.’

Ragini hung her head shying and the voices of SwaSan who were teasing them.

Lakshya took her helding her by hand and on his other hand he was holding porridge.

Ragini’s Room :

Lakshya made Ragini sit on the bed and closed the door beside him.

‘Lakshya don’t close it. What will family members think about us ‘ said Ragini shying.

‘ They will think that two couples who are deep in love are making love ‘ Lakshya said with a wink.

‘ Lakshhhyyaa’ Ragini said and closed her eyes.

‘ Romance will be after dinner ‘ said lakshya teasing Ragini.

Ragini opened her eyes and looked at Lakshya smiling. ‘ I love you Lakshya ‘ she said with a smile covering her face.

‘ I know that but first open your mouth and have this ‘ said Lakshya while moving the spoon towards her mouth.

She compiled and allowed the porridge flow through her mouth down to the stomach.

‘Its very tasty Lakshya ‘ she chirped happily.

Lakshya smiled meanwhile feeding her some more of porridge.

‘ You know Ragini ‘ lakshya continued talking while feeding her. ‘ The day I came to know about your betrayal,Β  I was shattered ‘

‘ I am sorry lakshya ‘ said Ragni with teary eyes.

‘ Don’t be sorry darling ‘ said he and cupped her face. ‘ And when everything seemed to be right and I thought I will get Swara , I came to know that Swara loves bhai. I was angry at myself but then I realised its not my fault.’

‘Lakshhh’ she said in a teary voice.

‘Sushh baby..let me complete ‘ he stopped her.

‘Then I realised there are only two persons at fault. You andΒ  Sanskar. You have done all this mess by your dirty drama and bhai who was villian of my story has become hero of my girl . And then I decided to be the villian of their love life and be the hero of my Swara ‘ Lakshya said with a smirk.

‘ Please don’t joke lak…’ Ragini said and felt her throat choking in mid way. She held her throat and looked at Lakshya who was smirking behind.
‘Helpp…chok…me…chok…lak..laksya..chok.. I……ahh…ammm…suff..ocating ‘ said Ragini in a weak and pleading voice.

‘Haha..I have helped you b*t*h by feeding you this poisonous rice. Bhai will also die like you and you know the most interesting part doctors will only find it a case of food poisoning. I have planned everything like you. And then I will win Swara someday for sure.’ said lakshya leaning over Ragini’s face who was suffocating badly and yearning to be saved from the devil.
‘Lak…sh…pl..ease…do..don’t..please..’ she pleaded again.

‘ Baby you are not gonna die this soon . This poison will work slowly. Till then be the partner of my secret. I will tell yoy hoa and when I planned everything.Β  Till then Sanskar will also get a painful death’ said Lakshya with an angry grin.

Ragini collasped on floor. Holding her throat unable to speak anything. Tears of helplessness flew out of her eyes.

‘ So where were we. Yes that day when..’ lakshya continued.

Here it is guys.

Tell me what you feel for the track. So that I may improve it further.

Shower your love in comments .

Really need your feedback to give the story a perfect turn amd track.

Love u all.

34 Comments
  1. WT??!
    hey dnt harm 2 my sanskar.
    expose his evil plan 2 evry1.
    keep writing
    be hpy always

    1. Heer

      Dear chanu thnku fr ur feedback. Relax your thoughts and just wait for new part haha..well have you tead previous chapters..if no..here is the link
      http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-fan-fiction-part-20/

  2. SHAN

    Awesome but i dont want laksh in negative pls…

    1. Heer

      Sorry dear πŸ™ but it turned out to be this..but I assure you..you will enjoy the story just some more episodes πŸ™‚

  3. Expose Laksh don’t separate them

    1. Heer

      Sure seema..just wait for some episodes..stay tuned πŸ™‚

    1. Heer

      Thankuhhh lisa..stay tuned πŸ™‚

  4. yaar this was a shock plzzzz ……..nahiiiiii…mera sanskar………

    1. Heer

      Aww that was cute momo..mera sanskar..you will soon come to know aby it dear πŸ™‚
      Stay tuned

  5. nice don’t kill my rag next part soon

    1. Heer

      Thanku dear nikky..fingers crossed for Ragini..you will soon come to know about her πŸ™‚

  6. Soujanya

    Awesome

    1. Heer

      Thanku dear saujanya..stay tuned dear

  7. I have read the previous chapters from the starting. I totally loved it . Awsm chappy β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘ .

    1. Heer

      Thanku ashnoor..loved that you read all chapters..keep supporting dear πŸ™‚

  8. Arshaanya

    I knew it…πŸ˜‰ laksh is bhnd evrythng dat chnge of pics n al…πŸ˜’πŸ˜’
    Loved it….πŸ‘ hope swara wil save sanskar..
    Want to see lots of swasan moments

    1. Heer

      So u guessed before..great..and Swasan moments will come dear just some wait dear ..keep supporting arshaanya

  9. ohh nooo what will happen to ragini don’t kill her

    1. Heer

      Dear j. Just few more episodes to go..tull then stay tuned.. πŸ™‚

  10. Mica

    waaaa. nice move laksh!!!!!! *evil laughbut hmm.. Sanskaaarr!!!! wish Swara eat that porridge herself

    1. Heer

      thanku dear mica..have you read previous parts..??

      1. Mica

        i starting to read in wattpad now..i prefer to read there since i can’t give you feedback here due expired date

  11. Hemalattha

    i dont want laksh in negative please.will ragini get well soon?today part amazing.

    1. Heer

      Sorry hemlatha..but its just a track and it will change with time..till then enjoy the story and please keep supporting πŸ™‚

  12. Fairy

    U know wt heer dis is d frst ff i had read in swaragini ff…dat tym i ws a silent reader n couldnt comment!!so frstly sry for dat…
    Dis is an amazngggg ff….i loved it..
    N wen i saw dat u r back ,i became reallly happy.. πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ so thnx for coming back!!!
    N now about d chappy-omg!!!!laksh had poisoned ragsan πŸ™ πŸ™ πŸ™ no no no i jst cnt beliebe it…oh god …i thought dat he started lovng my ragss….feelng reallly bad for ragini….hope sooon he wl realise his mistake……n start lovng her truelly πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ ….waitng for nxt part eagerlyyy!!!
    N i cnt comment regularly so again sry for dat as m really busy dese days!!!
    Bt keep on writtng ur creativity dear….u always rocked it…keep smiling n stay blessed πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

    1. Heer

      Omg..omg..omg..fairy..u cannot imagine what you habe done to me.
      First of all no sorry for not commenting in fact I am sorry for not posting it for ages..I had just got lazy back those days..then my phone cracked..and then my exams.

      But now i will post reguraly withoit any excuse.

      I am happy beyond imagination reading your comment. Never expected this dear .

      And don’t worry if you comment or not I will remeber that fairy is there who must be appreciating my story.

      Stay tuned dear. Thanksss a tonnnn for this comment. You have raised my spirit above 100%.

      Love u <3

      1. Fairy

        Awww!!!how sweet of u😊….n thnku so much for understandng…keep smiling…take care of urself😊😊😊

    2. Heer

      My pleasure dear..u too take care and keep smiling. .stay tuned πŸ™‚

  13. Liz2896

    Laksh should forget about swara and start liking ragini. I wish laksh’s plan fails and he gets exposed soon. After he is exposed, ragini should go far away from him. So, laksh realizes his love for ragini. Laksh should be exposed by Swaragini. Finally there should be a swansan and Raglak.

    1. Heer

      Already gave next part..well stoty will eventually come in track ae u all want..now some twist and turns..hope u enjoy that..thanku for your valuable decesion..i will keep it in mind..keep supporting dear πŸ™‚

  14. KUMUTHA

    nice epi…

    1. Heer

      Thanku kumutha..next part posted have a lookhttp://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-fan-fiction-part23/

      http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-fan-fiction-part-22/

  15. Neha1

    Nice Episode.πŸ‘

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