Swaragini Fan Fiction.. Part 15

guys heer again. here is a teaser . some part of next episode. hope you are not going to kill me after reading that. and yes i want you to make guess that what might have happened and what will happen ahead.

and yes
ANU
your idea was awesome of sanskar being in comma and swara being pregnant with raglak chemistry going on and two years leap and then swasan with their baby.
but as i said previously i already had a story and i will stick to it, but really i loved your creativity.

and secondly
HEENA
in case of sanskar’s death a lookalike of swara. i also liked this idea but again i have my story dear πŸ™‚

and thanku for you all for your comments. i really loved it when i read them all. and yeah sanskar maheshwari you have to wait one day more to know your story, haha. (this sanskar case only those can understand who have read all the comments )

guys if you have missed previous parts here is the link

http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-fan-fiction-part-1/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-fan-fiction-part-2/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-fan-fiction-part-3/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-fan-fiction-part-4/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-fan-fiction-part-5/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-fan-fiction-part-6/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-fan-fiction-part-7/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-fan-fiction-part-8/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-fan-fiction-part-9/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-fan-fiction-part-10/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-fan-fiction-part-11/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-fan-fiction-part-12/
http://www.tellyupdates.in/swaragini-fan-fiction-part-13/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-fan-fiction-part-14/

and guys here is the teaser. guess what might have happened and will happen πŸ™‚

Ragini took lakshya head on her lap and caressed his head shedding tears. ‘ It all happened due to me. Today i am the cause of death of both the brothers. The sin i have committed in past are unforgivable, but why god, why the both. You should have killed me instead . What have you dine lakshya. Why?? Its all due to me. I stepped on the wrong path and eventually i destroyed everything. Each and every relation. I should die, not you. ‘ saying this she cried hard, tears flowing enourmously from her eyes. She really repented each and every mistakes of past. She had thought life will be smooth now when she stepped again on right path but the wrong deeds are to be paid but why now and why with them who were right. Few hours ago they were happy couples; Swara and Sanskar and there was also a chance of new relation between lakshya an Ragini. But what is now , two dead bodies.Her and her sister’s love is dead ___________________________________————————————————————————–
Swara looked at Ragini. Her eyes were red and was looking very miserable. A heart that was broken as her beloved had gone forever. The person who has promised to love her forever has left her. Ragini said , ‘ Swara , i have killed lakshya as he killed Sanskar. Call the police and tell them to come and areest me. And you go to home , take better care of our parents as well as maheshawari family as they have lost everything. Tell them Ragini has killed lakshya and is arrested. And live rest of your life forgetting everything about me .’

guys please tell me how is that. and please comment on what you think about it. whether u liked it or not. and yes please don’t kill me if u want to do so haha. and yeas comments are reuired πŸ™‚
full part tomorrow πŸ™‚ please please please comment..i need your honest feedback

33 comments

    • Heer

      Sorry dear sruthikasyap for the confusion..and yes today new chapter will be posted then u will understand the whole track πŸ™‚

  1. shabrin

    Shocking I think nobody would think like that…really nice twist but what about the pairs? Are you planning 4 new characters?

    • Heer

      Dear shabrin..thanku for such a supportive comment. And dear suspense will be over in today’s episode πŸ™‚
      Keep supporting dear πŸ™‚

  2. aashi

    Yr raglak KO separate Mt Kroo….swara strong ? lady bankar aage life Mein rahe n sankaar na Ho chalega…..har luv story successful nhi hoti n yaa uski life Mein twist hona chahiyee???

    • Heer

      Dear aashi..so u r a raglak fan..nd yes love story me twists and turn hone chahie. So just wait for today’s chapter. Hope u like it πŸ™‚

    • Heer

      Hey dear dhoni..your tears made my phone full of water and now its not working property. How will i write next part dear..haha.. dear hope u like today’s part πŸ™‚ stay tuned

  3. Fallingstar

    This track is nice with many many twists But then will you add new characters?? I’m a huge fan of swasan pls don’t separate them. The story line 2 or 5 you gave in last part were better. Pls let lakshya repent. Don’t kill him. Pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls
    N updates the next part soon:-)

    • Heer

      Hey dear fallingstar..thanku for such a supportive comment..and just wait for today’s episode and then tell me if you like it or not. I really want to see your comment in my next upcoming episode πŸ™‚

  4. Fallingstar

    Hi Heer love your ff. This track is nice with many many twists But then will you add new characters?? I’m a huge fan of swasan pls don’t separate them. The story line 2 or 5 you gave in last part were better. Pls let lakshya repent. Don’t kill him. Pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls
    N updates the next part soon:-)

    • Heer

      Dear surbhi sorry if i hurt you..plese stay tuned and read the next chapter when posted πŸ™‚
      Hope u like it. πŸ™‚

    • Heer

      Dear devi sorry if your feelings are hurt. Please stay tuned and do look the next episode. Hope you like it πŸ™‚

  5. sree

    Plssss don’t do this….already in serial its tragedy…..dont do this in ff…..try to make an happy ending….

    • Heer

      Dear sree..srt if i hurt you..please stay tuned and read the next chapter when it get published.
      Keep supporting dear πŸ™‚

    • Heer

      Dear jolly bembi..wait for next epispde..m sry if u r hurt ..stay tuned dear..and don’t kill me plz..haha

  6. heer

    dear meghs i will post next episode tomorrow .
    keep supporting and stay tuned your bcs your support means a lot

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