Swaragini- Ek Anokha Bandhan (Episode 15)

Recap: Lucky gets angry on Sanskar.

Precap: Sanskar………..

@ baadi
Rags was moving here nd there. Her mind was not in her control. Where as Swara was worried fr rags.
Swara: wat might hav happened there? I’m sure rags wud hav slapped him harder. He is such a rude person. Wat if he does something to her?
Swaragini were lost in their thghts. Rags went out to hav a fresh breeze.

Lucky arrived there, rags ignored him and started to move,
Lucky: I’m sorry Rags fr wat all bhaai had done today.
Rags didn’t look at him. Lucky kept on following her.
Lucky: Rags talk to me. Wat hav I done? Plz ragini, look at me.
Rags: wah, lucky, ur brthr comes and hurts us and u apaologize on behalf of him. Lucky, v shall not meet again. These all happened as ur bthtr misunderstood out closeness. If it continues wat shall he do then? I’m sorry lucky,itz better to end this all here.
Lucky: rags, I know he did wrong, I saw repentance in his eyes too.
Rags: don’t try to defend him. Swara’s life is now on a good track. I dnt want her to go back again to a hell bcoz of ur brthr. Frndshp shudnt harm anyone’s life. So v shall not continue this.
Rags went from there vthout looking back at him. Lucky was hurt. He didn’t know whom shall he talk in favour of. Both hav misunderstood each other. He kept on thinking the solution………..

@ Sanskar’s mansion
Sanskar cudnt stay in his office. It was too suffocating fr him. He sat down on sofa and started to recall everything from mrng.
Sanky: the first mistake was tht I spied on my brthr. I hav lost his trust fr this.
Later he thght abt Rags, her words, the slap. He felt he has hurt both of the girls.
Sanky: I cud have thght some other way to sort the matter. Wat was necessary to do all this? I think I’ve over reacted. May b they r just frndz.

Sanky was disturbed by all these. He went to kitchen to hav a coffee. He prepared it. Each sip he consumed reminded him swaraglak.
Sanky: wat she might hav felt wen I said all such things abt her parents? I scolded her, harmed her, simply vthout her mistake. I know how it feels just by the thght tht our parents r not vth us. I’ve gone through the same pain too. But at least I’ve enjoyed their love. But this girl hav lost her parents vn she was a baby yet. Wat was Lucky telling abt her? Sufferings and all? Whatever, I don’t need all those. I want my brthr back. I think I hav to apologize those girls. Sanskar Maheshwari!! and apology!!! Itz OK, it was my mistake. I can do anythng fr lucky. I need to gain his trust back. Till then I shall not hav peace….

He thght to call lucky, he picked his phn. He refused due to the fear to face him. He later convinced himself and dialled the nmbr. Uh… Uh it was of no use, he didn’t pick. Moreover they r brthrs they share some similarities in attitude.

Sanky: Lucky, plz pick my call. I’ve realized my mistake tht I over reacted. Yar, I need u now, plz pick it.

He kept on trying vch was of no use. He closed his eyes recallimg all their brotherly moments.

Sanky: U were always there fr me lucky. Vn our family, evn my parents rejected me, it was u and uttara who lend their hands to console me. U both r my world. But now it has becum empty. And the most sarcastic thing is tht I’m the reason of all these. I thght u to b safe, I didn’t distinguish right and wrong, and now due to this, I lost ur trust, for whom I did all these. No Lucky, I’ll get my brthr back at any cost.

He thght smethng vch gav him a sign of relief.

Precap: swaraglak patch up and Sanskar tries to meet Swaragini….

Guyz I’m sorry if u feel this dragging. But to complete my plot, these r required. I’ll not drag too much. Until then keep reading and sharing ur views and suggestions. Love u all.

Credit to: Aishu

48 comments

  1. I am sorry but plzz think about pairing again seriouly fed up with same pairing in serials and ff they are so many ff related to swasan loosing interest to read because you r giving importance to swasan only as untill now i read i thought if san and rags paired your ff will be out of world because story is different and u cant decide pairs on votting because you choose your story by yourself but not by voting.
    I think you said first it will be ragsan and i started reading it .
    Sry to say i didnt mean to hurt u all the best for your ff
    Take care

  2. I am really disappointed yar me to leaving
    Sry to say this but you dont miss us because you will have swasan comments naa then their is no need our comments for u sry if i hurt u but really i am very disappointed and feeling very hurt
    Bye dear

  3. Don’t feel bad if you r not getting comments due to pairs as your story is good and majority likes raglak and swasan so plz do keep up the good work…

  4. sry to say i m bored of reading swasan and raglak ur story is diff and pairs should u can check there is hardly one swalak ff plzzz chnge ur pairs don’t follow others its okk when there are less comments in starting days but after 2to3 days people will surely comment and like ur story but plz think about pairs as swalak and ragsan sometimes small chnge is gud
    plz announce ur pairs also in starting of next ff

  5. Shruthi

    Just a suggestion …. Ragsan pair was so good in ur ff coz of their attitudes.. Ragini is bold and sanskar is rude… Ragini had the courage to slap sanskar speak to him and she made him realise his mistake … She shattered his ego and I liked it so much it was different but where as raglak scenes are typical yar

    • Shruthi

      Aishu don’t take it seriously … And I just said I liked ragsan pair in ur ff … It doesn’t mean that I won’t read ur ff or comment if u pair swasan and raglak … I like the story how it goes … I just gave my suggestion and if u can make ragsan as besties yar

  6. sindhuja

    please friends, don’t emotionally blackmail the writers by saying ‘it’s my last comment… you had disappointed me…’ and like that… please enjoy the story… comment about her way of writing, the portrayal of characters and the plot… yeah, i knew, you have freedom to share your views and i shouldn’t interfere and comment about it… and… decision about the pairs also didn’t favorable for some of you… but.. please think from writers point of view… how would they feel while reading those type of comments?
    and, one request to writers, from my point of view, please don’t ask about the pairs to readers… you surely thought about pairs while shaping up your plot… please go with it…
    i knew, i poked my nose into your matters… may be my words hurt some of you… for that, please forgive me… i am sorry…

    regarding the plot, aishu, you are doing a good job!!! i loved it… swaragini’s bonding, everything!! way to go!!!

  7. I’m a silent reader but I want to comment now by seeing your comments
    Why you guys are hell bent towards pairs?
    Why can’t u see her beautiful storyline?
    And u guys r hurting by blackmail like “bye bye” “I won’t read ” etc
    There r many fans for both pairs but ultimately she have to select swasan or ragsan which is difficult for her too
    But as she is the writer let her decide the pairs.
    If possible encourage her or if u don’t like just leave the page but don’t hurt/ discourage her by your comments & blackmail
    By the way Aishu story is very nice & there r many fans & silent readers for your ff. So don’t take these blackmails to your heart..

  8. Lata

    Aishu I think u should just follow ur heart as the concept is all urs and plz. Don’t listen to those so called ‘last comment ‘ blackmailers….. It’s ur choice to select the pairs of ur choice according to the plot. And don’t u worry I will always support u for ur ff just stay happy by what u r upto nd sorry to say guys I’m really sad to read ur comment but u should just think about the writers feeling and next time don’t u dare to write such a blackmailling comment u just read and be happy for her progress in her ff….. πŸ™‚ ….(for u aishu) and … πŸ™ ..(for the last comment readers)

  9. vaishnavi

    Ur storyline is awesom aishu its gng well n just Don’t bother abt those who say dat I am disappointed I will not read etc just listen ur heart I know anyone will feel bad by listening dem but just keep it aside don’t think abt dem ……nd one request evryone if anyone don’t want to read den don’t read but pls don’t comment dat u will not read it anymore n all …srry if I hurt any1

  10. Meghs

    I have no complaint regarding pairs …
    Most important is stry n this stry is so good..
    So y a guys bothered of pairs.. Actually don’t fight for pairs seriously u should look strory…
    Can’t u know how difficult for her to decide pairs u all r hurted her n saying sry seriously ..
    U guys read only if ur fav pairs story right …
    Let me tell u one thing story is more important than pairs ….
    U guys think about it k…
    N ya aishu think about ur heart what u really whats to do not others

  11. manvi

    I m totally agreed with u guys hm ragsan fans ko aise comments nahi karne chahiye the …..but hmari bass ek point h ..agar unhe swasan hi choose karna tha toh pehle bata dete or phir hmse hmri opinion bhi nahi puchte toh sayad hame itna hurt feel nhi hota…..especially meine hmesa story choose ki h over pairs ………..but first time mein I mean hmne dil se iss pair ko choose kiya tha because for this story ….they r perfect couple ….because yaha lucky or rags friends h ….toh unme hm nok jhok kaise dekhenge …….but one more writers ……plsssss aap khud se apna pair choose karna meine aaj tak aise comments nahi ki thi ki like this is my last comment blah blah ……
    but iss ff mein aisa case isliye aaya because hmlog isse bahut attached ho chuke the …ur ff is really very nice mein iss padna nahi chod sakti isliye hmne aisa comments kiya ……..because yea ff hmlog ke favorite list me samil ho hya tha ……bus isliye apko aise comments …..I m really really really sry …………for this type of comment

  12. Sow

    Hi aishu dont take any messages personelly yar they just spoke their views but u dont stop writing ok .
    Its just by reading all episode even i thought it will be rags and san but u changed all of sudden that why they reacted in this way that it dont take personelly ok chill my dear frd when we write a ff then we should face both postive and negative messages from now u should work more on your ff to make them more attracted to ok.
    I am waiting for your response and your next episode love u dear

  13. sonu

    pls make ragsan .im silent readers of your ff .bcs their nature dfferns each other .love story look interesting pls pls ragsan

  14. sumi

    aishu just follow ur hrt.. and wanna rqust u frm nxt ff plz dont conduct so called pair choosing contest.. as it hurts u more than us.. and yeah plz blackmailers dont do this. aishu might feel bad and she may took stress. she has done lots for this ff. leaving her study just for us to entertain us.. I can understand u aishu as I am also a ff writer(on fb only). so plz follow ur own heart

  15. Tooba

    Pls guys given your views is really good thing that you share your heart talks with us but for my dissapoimtment you people are emotionally blackmaillimg the writer which is not at all good yaar i mean seriously for

    RAGSAN FANS
    Have you ever seen swasan fans commenting like this ” i am fed up. I’m leaving. I’m dissapoint etc”……i know there are a lots of swasan ffs and you all also want ragsan but if you feel bad then do tell your feelings but who gave you the rights to hurt writer by these cheap blackmailings. Even he/she have heart and her choice to decide.
    I’m really dissapoint to say this that i know there are a lots of swasan fans but i know one that they never blackmails swalak fan writers to make it swasan. I don’t know why but you are only concenterating on pairs but why don’t you see the ‘beauty of the storyline’. Pairs doesn’t matter is the story and the story in wonderful. I know that you are hurt but blackmailing is not a good thing you should respect the writer and her story . Have some manners and emotions to understand the others if you are not liking then just get lost.

    Dear aishu
    Please i have request don’t these emotional on your mind. It not because i don’t you to change the pairs its because its your ff only you have the rights to decide about it. I don’t know why they are only watching the pairs why they are not watching the beauty of your. Watever pair you will choose i don’t care because even if the pair is not the one i want so i will just imagine it as what i want but that doesn’t matter is the story and i must say that you story is really awesome. I didn’t like it, i just love it.
    Pls if the result us blackmailing so don’t ever ask the views of fans just do what your heart says ” your imagination is the best in all”

    and yes i am saying it once again don’t take tension just do what your heart says we all are there to support you…………..

    All the best for your next update sis and thanks for updating such a nice ff

    Love you sis….. may god bless you πŸ™‚

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