Swaragini – A dream for 2 hearts ( OS)

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Hi everyone this is Aditi.Ayansh so this is my first OS ..as i am writing this as a part of as OS writing competition…i knw its a bit very long…put i have worked hard on this..pls don’t quit reading it becoz of the pairs… if u lyk my concept then let me knw through ur comments well –ve comments are also welcomed
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Adi 
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Character sketch
Ragini Raghuvendrapratap Rathore 27 yrs
Swara Shekhar Gadodia 28yrs
Laksh Durgapasad Maheshwari 28 yrs
Sanskar Ram Kapoor 26yrs
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A dark room is shown ..it is a big room someone is lying on the bed..he is turning to two sides..
He is not able to sleep..He wakes up…screaming..NO…..
Sweat is all over his face..his eyes express his fear……he has grown a beard..which shows he has not shaven for a couple of weeks
He takes out his mobile….he calls someone.
He: everything is fine there..yh no nothing..i just called..yh i’ll tk rest….yh ok..i’ll reach there at 5 in the morning..wat…ok i’ll reach by 7 am..ok bye..
He ends the call.
He covers his face with his hands and wipes off the sweat frm his face..he takes the alaram clock kept at the side table..He checks the time it shows 2 am…he keeps alarm at 5 am..and keeps the alarm clock back on the side table…
He leans back to the wall and takes a pillow..and hugs it.
He takes his mobile phone and opens Gallery…he sees some pictures..and a small painful smile appear on his lips…he closes his eyes….

FB Starts
2 years back.
The same person is shown…he is coming out of his room..he is wearing a light blue formal shirt a pair of black pants and a black blazer. He stands infront of the mirror and runs his hand on his cheek..
Clean shave suits u (He says to himself)
He wears his watch and takes his mobile
Sonu..come down for breakfast…(a voice is heard frm downstairs..)
The person puts up a irritated face and goes down with his bag..
He: mom i hv told u not to call me tht ..u knw i hate tht name..
A elderly couple is sitting there…
Lady: then wat should i call my sweet son…awee my Sonu…
He: mom!!
Man: oh come on Swetha don’t call him tht call him Sanskar Ram Kapoor..the new Managing director of InfoTech Networks…ri8 son.
The person is revealed as Sanskar Ram Kapoor and the elderly couple is revealed as Swetha Ram Kapoor and Ram Kapoor
Sanskar: better dad..
Sanskar sits down.
Servents serve them breakfast.
After breakfast…
Ram: good luck son..
Swetha: may u get all the happiness.
Sanskar: dad i’m just a managing director and u r still the CEO ..
Swetha; nw tht u r settled i cn look a beautiful girl for u ri8.
Sanskar: u r impossible mom..
Swetha: after all u r our only son..

He goes in his car to his office.

The moment he reached his office ..his staff welcomed him in a very grand way.
A young man comes forward..
Young man: Welcome sir..
He takes Sanskar into his cabin.
Young man: Sir i’m Laksh Drgaprasad Maheswari i’m the manager of this office..
The young man is revealed as Laksh
Sanskar shakes hand with and Sanskar introduces himself.
A young woman comes into his cabin. She greets Sanskar.
Laksh: Sir she is Swara Gadodia she is our project manger
Sanskar: ok so u r the manager and u r the project manager ..well i hv met all the people but where is my P.A?
Laksh looks a bit tensed.
Sanskar: Laksh where is my pa..haven’t reached yet?
Laksh: no sir..i mean she will b here ..
Sanskar: look Laksh i don’t lyk being late to work ..tell this all the employees..i cant tolerate imperfect things..
Laksh nodes…
Sanskar: now u both can leave..
Laksh and Swara comes out..
Laksh: where is this girl..today she will get herself killed by my hands..
Swara laughs..
Swara; try her mobile…
Laksh: no use as usual it will b switch off.

A girl is shown running..to the office..she hits some people..
She: Sorry kaka..
She runs..and collides with Laksh…she was about to fall but Laksh holds her.
Laksh: Ragini!!!…finally u r here..where were u our new managing director is already here u knw na this office is his dad’s he can throw u out if u r not showing up for work ..hw can u b so irresponsible?
Laksh is scolding her in the same holding position and the girl closed her eyes…
Laksh notices this later.
Laksh: Ragu…

The girl is revealed as Ragini Rathore.
Ragini: Khadoos Maheshwari…
Laksh laughs,,
Laksh: oh u chipkali Rathore.
Swara comes there..
Swara: u both can continue ur romance later see Sanskar sir is watching us..
Laksh and Ragini looks up..where they see Sanskar looking at them.
Laksh and Ragini composes themselves..
Laksh: go and meet him…
Ragini goes to his cabin.
Sanskar: come in..
Ragini: sir my name is..
Sanskar(at the top of his voice): did i ask u damn it?
Ragini gets scared.
Sanskar: 1st tell me who gave u permission to come late to my office..
Ragini:” sry sir actually..
Sanskar: stop it i don’t want to hear any excuses get out frm my office ri8..nw
Ragini: but sir..
Sanskar: enough of ur blabbering get out ..and haan tomorrow come here at tym otherwise search a new job for urself..nw out of my office.
Ragini: ok sir hv a great day ahead..
Ragini goes out..
Sanskar(to himself): i scolded her so badly and she is wishing me a gud day…seriously i don’t understand girls lyk her…

Ragini goes down.
Laksh: Ragu wat happened.
Ragini narrates everything happened up there.
Laksh: hw dare he to shout at u..dont wry wait outside i’ll take leave today ..ok..
Ragini: no Laksh thts ..
Laksh: finger on ur lips..
Ragini: ok
Laksh goes upstairs.
Sanskar: Yes Laksh
Laksh: sir actually i needed off today..
Sanskar: any emergency?
Laksh: actually no sir…but its a kind of personal..
Sanskar: ok if its more important to u then yh..but don’t make this ur habit.
Laksh; yh ..thank u sir.

Laksh goes.
Swara brings some file..
Swara: sir ur signature.
Sanskar takes the files and move towards the window he sees Laksh and Ragini walking out..
Swara comes and stand near the window..both of them looks at RagLak.
Laksh comes with his bike Ragini sits behind him they drives off
Sanskar sees Swara looking at them
Sanskar: Swara.
Swara: yh yes sir..(coming out of her thoughts)
Sanskar: r they lovers?
Swara: no body knws sir…they r just lyk this all the tym ..together..but they hv told everyone tht they r good friends and nothing else.
Sanskar: ok i hv signed it..u may take the file ..
Swara goes..
Sanskar slips into his thoughts.
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Raglak Reach beach.
Laksh: Ragu first tell me why were u late?
Ragini: Laksh today Shakti tai didnt come..and i had to drop Adu at Meenu aunty’s house
Laksh: wat happened today no school?
Ragini: yh some exams r there thts why..
Laksh: u could have dropped him to my house then.
Ragini: no ..yaar he is becoming very naughty now a days..
Laksh: akhir beta kiska hain..
Ragini hugs him.
They both see the beauty of the waves in the sea.
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Nxt day.
Ragini reaches office at tym
Ragini: gud mrning sir.
Sanskar: yh..
everyone r busy in there work….
Lunch tym.
Ragini and Laksh sits away from all..
Sanskar sees this.
Sanskar have his lunch with Swara and other staff.
Employee 1: Ragini and Laksh r looking so cute together ri8.
They see Ragini feeding Laksh. And Laksh feeding Ragini.
Employee 2: haan u r ri8..they r always together….
Employee 1: but Ragini is a very nice girl…honest trational..beautiful wat else does any boy want?
Employee 3: Poor Swara.
Sanskar: Swara ..hw r u involved in it?
Employee 2: yes Swara propsed Laksh a few months ago…but
Sanskar: he is already in love with my PA ri8.
Swara: no they r not in love..its just..
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Days pass on
Sanskar and Swara becomes good friends..but were rumoured to b dating each other
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One day.
Sanskar is discussing smthing very important with Ragini and her mobile is constantly ringing..
It was Laksh who was calling ..Sanskar gets irritated by this.
Sanskar: if its tht important then talk to him..
Ragini: its ok sirt i’ll talk later.
Sanskar: look u and Lkash r my employes and i don’t care wat u r to the outside world once u r inside my office..behave urself. Got it
Ragini: yes sir.
Sanskar nw tk it and ask him not to call u again.
Ragini attents the call.
Ragini(slowly): Laksh wat happened..wat!…no no i’m coming..which hospital…yh i’m coming..
Ragini face becomes tense. She burst out crying..
Sanskar: wat happened..hey

He makes her sit on the chair..
Ragini: pls i need to go..hospital..he is admitted in the hospital.
Sanskar: who Laksh?
Ragini: no..Adu..sir pls i need to go..
Seeing Ragini’s state he lets her go..
Ragini quickly goes..
Sanskar(in mind): wat if its her acting to go out with Laksh..
Sanskar goes behind Ragini..
Ragini gets and auto..and Sanskar follows her in his car.
Ragini gets down at city hospital..
Sanskar(in mind): let me see who is in the hospital..
Sanskar follows Ragini.
Ragini goes to receptionist
Ragini: Advit ..
Recptionist: room no 307
Ragini goes Sanskar follows her.
Sanskar sees Laksh standing there..
Ragini goes to Laksh and hugs him..and cries..
Laksh: Ragini just calm down…he is fine..

A lady comes out..
Lady hugs Ragini
Ragini: maa my son…
Laksh: maa tk her in..
The lady is revealed as AP Laksh’s mother.
Sanskar hides..and some how managed to peep into the room.
Sanskar sees a boy of 7 yrs on the hospital bed..
Dr comes and sees Sanskar there he mistakens him as Laksh.
Dr: Dont wry Laksh ur son is alri8 ..
Sanskar: thank u dr.
DR goes Sanskar(in mind): Dr thought i’m Laksh so..this boy is Ragini and Laksh’s son..
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Nxt day @ office
RagLak come together.
They see all the employees standing there. Raglak looks puzzled
Sanskar: pls everyone our sweet couple..
Ragini and Laksh looks at each other.
Sanskar: everyone knws tht they love each other but anyone knw tht they hv a son..ri8..both of u..
RagLak r shocked to hear this.
Sanskar: yday is a them with their son..and i don’t think tht u have married each other also.
Employees start talking..
Laksh was about to say smthing..but Ragini holds him.
Sanskar taunts them and so does the employees and Swara.
Employee 1: i never thought Ragini to b so characterless.
Ragini hears this..
Ragini goes to Sanskar’s cabin
Sanskar: welcome..
Ragini : sir this is my resignation..
Ragini keeps it on the table and goes..
Sanskar: hey ..i just..
She goes ignoring him.

@ Lunch tym.
AP comes to office.
Laksh: maa u here..
AP: Woh i made Ragu’s favourite dish so i thought to bring it here…where is Ragu?
Laksh tells her about the morning incidents..
AP: Kya Ragini gave resignation..
Laksh: haan ma.
AP: its ok i’ll go to her then..ok..
AP goes and Sanskar sees her. Sanskar greets her.
Sanskar: u r Laksh’s mother ri8..’m Sanskar
AP: Oh the new managing director ri8…so becoz u my Ragu gave resignation.
Sanskar: no u r mistaken…
AP: No i am not ..wat u knw abt my kids..wat do u knw abt Ragini.
Sanskar: but aunty i haven’t said anything wrong.
AP: whatever u said was wrong..Ragini and Laksh doesn’t have any relation lyk u think and Advik is not their biological son

Sanskar is shocked to hear this.
AP: Ragini is the great business man Raghuvendrapratap Rathore’s 2nd child..he was one on the powerful business man theirs was a veryhappy family..Raghuvendra his father Deendayal his mother Parvathy hs wife Janki his elder son Rithwik and younger daughter Ragini…Rithwik is 5 years elder to Ragini…but 10 yrs ago Ritwik went to join in army..but after 1 year he went missing..Rathore gave everything to find him but couldn’t and 1 yr later in a car accident all of the family member except Ragu got killed and all their property were snatched by Rathore’s business partners and Ragu who was just18 years old…we took care of her after tht we were Rathores family friend..and Laksh and Ragini studied together frm lower classes..after 1 year Ragini got a job and Lkash too applied for the same job leaving our family business just to support Ragu and later she bought a flat ..and then one day she found in her neighbouring flat the whole family committed suicide due to some financial problem leaving their new born baby to live..Ragini happily adopted the baby and she took care of him as her own..and tht baby is Advik…and he calls Ragini mumma..also Laksh papa..she is very strong person..and u accused her lyk this tht too infront of the whole employee..very bad Sanskar..

AP goes..
Sanskar: wat she is a pure soul i becoz me…Sanskar hw can u be so heartless..?
He takes Ragini’s biodata…and finds her address.
Her goes there.He knocks the door.. Ragini opens the door..
Ragini: u..
Ragini tries to close the door..but Sanskar resists he opens the door and come inside..
Sanskar: look ..i’m really sry i dint knw abt u..and Advik..
Ragini: nw u knw ri8..nw pls go out…
Sanskar: pls just listen to me once…..he holds her hand
Ragini : leave my hand.
Sanskar pulls her closer.

Sanskar: u hv to listen to me …u knw i first day wen i saw u…running ..to the office hitting Laksh u closing ur eyes to escape frm mayb his scolding..u coming to my cabin i firing u then..then u wished me “ hv a great day ahead” I was surprised by this …frm tht second i started falling for u ..each and every employee in the office told me tht u and Laksh are more thn friends..everyone believed but i couldn’t ..or i didnt want to believe in it..becoz i wanted to make u mine i searched for 101 reasons to avoid u but i could’nt..and in the hospital wen i saw u with Advik and wen the dr addressed me as Laksh father of Advik i was literally broken frm inside ..i could nt just move ..the only way left to hatre u was to..create a image of u Laksh and Advik as a family..and sry i over reacted..i made u low infront of the whole office..i’m really sry for tht…but i want u to knw smthing which is in my heart
Sanskar took his pen and takes a paper which ws on the table..he writes I love you…
Ragini looks at it..tears come frm her eyes.
Sanskar: i want u to just write too…after the u…pls can u..
Ragini turns her face.
Sanskar sits on his knees and hugs her legs..
Sanskar(in tears): i’m really sry ..for wat i did i’m ready to do anything for u and Advik..pls b with me..u don’t knw how much i was hurt wen everyone said u and Laksh were…..he cries bitterly.
Ragini sits down and hugs him..Sanskar gets happy he too hugs her.
Ragini: nobody hv never said these 3 words to me..and i knw wen u say it ..it is really coming frm ur heart.
Sanskar: yes…so will u b my life…my wife?
Ragini smiles.
Sanskar: i got my answer.
He kisses Ragini on her lips…Ragini is shocked by this..Sanskar hugs her ti8..they both fall on the floor..
Ragini :sry..i
Ragini tries to get up but Sanskar pulls her back.
Sanskar: just rest ur head on my chest i love it ..
Ragini does it. Sanskar cares her hair.
Sanskar: where is Advik?
Ragini: he is sleeping.
Sanskar: so tomorrow come to office with him i hv a surprise for u both ok..
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Nxt day
Sanskar introduces Ragini as his fiancée and Advik as his son to all the employees ..everyone is shocked including Laksh and Swara..also Ragini and Advik…
Happy days were happening in Ragini and advik’s life..Laksh was also very happy about this..
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After 1 year
Everything changes with tym…Even though Sanskar loved Ragini ..his family was not able to agree his decision which upset Ragini Laksh and Laksh’s family…
Sanskar Family started taunting Ragini for trapping Sanskar in her love..
Sanskar also changed in an year…
One day.
Sanskar: Ragu r u even listening to me?
Ragini: Sanskar we hv talked about it…
Sanskar: but i want to knw ur desicion.
Ragini: i hv already told u ..Laksh is just a gud friend.
Sanskar: i knw tht but Advik should call me papa..and calls me uncle..and Laksh papa
Ragini: frm young age he is calling Laksh papa..hw can he change immediately?
Sanskar: its been 1 year Ragini.
Ragini: i don’t want Adu to make any quick decision. Give him some tym..he is a kid Sanskar
Sanskar: see Ragini he is not my son still i’m giving him all care and see he calls tht Laksh papa.
Ragini: stop it Sanskar i hv told u Adu is my son..
Sanskar: he is Ragini i knw but the thing is my family..they cant
Ragini: i understand.its ur family..Sanskar i knw but u hv to..
Sanskar: i don’t think it will work out…u just bother about u Advik and Lkash and his family nothing else
Ragini: Sanskar Laksh is in a relationship with Swara nw..
Sanskar: yh he hv the habit of snatching everything frm me 1st u nw Swara..and u don’t hv to wry abt my status..
Ragini: enough Sanskar i hv heard enough frm u not a word frm u..we r breaking up and thts it u hv changed a lot in this year…u r not the Sanskar who propsed me
Sanskar: oh nw the blame is on me..the truth is u cant bear ur Laksh with smone else…
Ragini goes
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For nxt 2 days Ragini didnt come to office..Sanskar was also bit worried..
Tht day afternoon.
Swara: listen everyone today u all r invited for a party….ok so Ragini have arranged a party..all r invited ok.
Sanskar calls Swara
(actually Ragini hv nt told anyone abut her and Sanskar’s breakup not even Laksh)
Swara: wat u don’t why she is giving party..hee..ee even i don’t knw she hv told Laksh but he is not telling me. But don’t wry we will find it out..

[email protected] Ragini’s flat.
Lkahs: hlo everyone thank u for coming here..so the reason behind this party is..
Ragini and Advik walks with a young man
Sanskar is shocked to see her with smone else.
Sanskar: hw much u will fall down Ragini..we just broke up 2 days ago and u ..u moved on with smone else ..bravo Ragini..
Laksh: Ragini u broke up with him then y didnt u tell me..
Sanskar: wat happened Ragini u didnt said anything to Laksh
Ragini: Sanskar u r mistaken
Sanskar: yh its me always ri8..
Tears come frm Ragini’s eyes..
Swara: wat r u saying Sanskar
Sanskar: haan Swara ur Laksh was never urs..
Swara: Lkash is tht so..no ri8
Laksh: so u don’t trust me
Swara: its not about trust but..i don’t want to loose u
Man: Ragu is he the guy u wanted me to meet..
Ragini nodes her head.
Man: so u r Sanskar..Ragu told me abut u..well i am her elder brother Ritwik.
Sanskar is in utter shock.
Ritwik played by Shakti Arora
Ritwik: i was in comma for all these years and nw finally i am back my sister was prasing about u a lot..but nw listen to me Sanskar if i see even ur shadow near her..i’ll kill u…i thought u r nice man but u r doubting my sister….nw enjoy the party and don’t ever come back in her life…
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After tht day Ragini quited her job..She and her Brother started their own company..Rathore industries..Laksh also resigned and joined his family business..Swara broke up with Laksh..
One year later.
Swara was still working for Sanskar.
Employee 1:RagLak are getting married to each other..have u heard
Sanskar who comes there hears this.
Sanskar: who told u about this?
Employee 1: frm my relative ..
Sanskar: where is the wedding taking place and wen is it?
Employee 1: Delhi tomorrow
Sanskar tries to call Swara but her phone ws switched off
Sanskar: perfect time for Swara to go on a vacation.
Sanskar gets the flight ticket
Sanskar travels to Delhi..after a lot of searching he finds the place where wedding ws going to tk place. He sees Bride and Groom sitting in the mandap. Bride has covered her face..he sees Laksh sitting in groom’s place.
Pandit: nw groom may apply sindoor on brides’s forehead
Sanskar: NO!! Pls don’t do this with me Ragini..i love u it was all my fault..pls don’t marry him i knw u don’t love him but…u love u..pls don’t go away..

All r surprised to see him.
Bride unveils her face
Sanskar: Swara!
Swara: hi Sanskar
Swara: Sanskar we both were blind we couldn’t see their friend..yday Ragini called me and told me everything..tht hw much Laksh loves me..and here i am..i tried to call u but ur phone ws switched off.
Sanskar: where is Ragini then.
Ritwik: i hv not forgiven u ….
Sanskar: pls sir..just once i’ll meet her just once pls sir pls
Laksh: Riku bhai ..let him ..
Riku agrees
Sanskar goes to the other exit she sees Ragini standing there…she was wearing a light blue saree.
Sanskar: Ragini i’m sry..i hv realised my love
Ragini: After 2 years …
Sanskar: i’m sry my love
Ragini: go away frm me Sanskar my brother wont agree for this and i’ll not do anything aganist him
Sanskar: oh come on Ragini i love u
Ragini: but i don’t Sanskar..just go
Sanskar: no i wont believe..
Ragini: i don’t care..Sanskar just go
Sanskar: ok if tht gives u happiness then ok..but Ragini i promise i’ll never have another girl in my life..it will b u and only u always..i’ll wait for u Ragini coz honestly i don’t want anyone else
He shows her the paper in which he wrote i love u for the first tym
He throws it and goes..
Laksh: Ragini!!!
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@Present
Sanskar wakes up hearing the sound of Alarm.
He turns it off quickly and goes to the nxt room where Advik is sleeping he cares his hair.
He takes out his mobile phone..which has Ragini’s smiling pic as his wallpaper.
Sanskar cares his mobile screen..
Sanskar: pls come back to me Ragini.
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FB Starts
Laksh: Ragini!!
Sanskar turns back. He sees Ragini in a pool of blood..
They bring Ragini to hospital.
Ritwik: wat have u done to my sister…
Laksh seperates Ritwik and Sanskar.
DR: Who is Laksh patient wants to see him.
Laksh goes in..
Ritwik: hw is my sister dr?
DR: She is very critical
Swara consoles Sanskar
After sometym Laksh comes out.
Ritwik: hw is she?

Laksh: she told me tht Sanskar is not responsible for her condition..she tried to tk her lyf…
Ritwik: but why will she..Ritwik breaks down Ap consoles Ritwik and Advik
Sanskar holds Laksh’s collar
Sanskar: don’t lie Laksh..she didnt say tht ri8..wat did she say..i knw she will never try to kill herself..
Swara tries to calm him..
Laksh: Sanskar come with me.
Laksh takes Sanskar away frm there.
Sanskar: wat else u want Laksh?
Laksh slaps him hard
Laksh this is for doubting about me and her
He slaps him again
Laksh: this is for falling in love with her
He slaps him again
Laksh: this is for hurting her
Laksh slaps him again
Laksh: this is for coming back today

And Laksh slaps him again
Laksh: and this is not for u its for Ragini….for loving u lyk this..
Sanskar: slap me more Laksh but pls…i cant let her go
Laksh: actually she is so stupid she chased tht piece of paper tht u threw and met with this accident.
Sanskar: no it cant be..
Laksh forwards his tht paper…it was crumbled and had blood on it.
Sanskar kisses it.
Laksh: Sanskar all these tym she loved only u…she wanted to convince Ritwik bhai..but ..u came today she never expected u..yes she was angry bt she thought u’ll hold her and never leave her
Sanskar beats himself
Sanskar: its all my fault…
Laksh: one more thing she called me ..becoz she didnt want anyone else to see her die.
Sanskar: no i’ll not let her die..never…
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2 days later
Ragini’s condition is not getting better..and Sanskar never left frm the hospital.
Ritwik feels gud after seeing his concern for his sister.
Ritwik: Sanskar i think i was wrong about u…
Sanskar hugs him.
Ritwik: my sister’s choice cant b wrong afterall..
Swara: Sanskar u should go home and take rest u r staying for 2 days continuously.
Sanskar: no Swara u and Laksh are newly married u both go..
Riku: Haan Sanskar they r saying ri8..u go home today..we will manage here.
Sanskar: ok i’ll tk Adu along with me..
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FB Ends
@ Present
Adu wake up sunshine…
Adu and Sanskar goes to hospital.
Adu: Papa..mumma will b alri8 ..haina
Tears come in Sanskar’s eyes after hearing papa frm Adu.
Sanskar hugs him
Sanskar: haan bacha..
They reach hospital..Riku Maheshwaris Laksh and Swara are standing there with no expression …
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10 Years later
Sanskar is sleeping in his room.
He hugs someone….The person is none other than Ragini
Ragini’s head is resting on Sanskar’s chest.
Sanskar: Ragu wake up its morning..today is my son’s birthday
Ragini: oh is it 12 o clock?.
Sanskar cares her hair..
Ragini kisses his forehead
Sanskar: Ragini: u r driving me crazy..
Ragini: chee…u r father of a 19 yr old boy..and u r behaving lyk u r 19 yrs old
Sanskar: wat to do..
Someone knocks the door
Ragini: get ready..or else u’ll b late for Adu’s birthday party
Sanskar opens the door.
Sanskar: Riku bhai.
Riku: come on brother in law..we r getting late..
Sanskar and Ritwik enters a room..
They both shout..
“Happy birthday Advik”
Advit: thank u papa..and mamu
They hugs

Advik: i wish mumma was also here with us…
A tear escapes frm Riku’s eyes.
Sanskar: no tears today
Where is this Laksh.
Laksh and Swara bring cake..and also their son Sparsh
Advik looks at Ragini’s photo which is hunged on the wall with a flower garland on it.
He cuts the cake..Party on..
Sanskar goes to his room.
Ragini hugs frm behind.
Sanskar: I knw u r just my imagination…but i lyk it Ragini..i love u..
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Wen Adu and Sanskar reaches the hospital they r informed tht Ragini is no more…but before her body is burned Sanskar applies sindoor on her hairscrap.
Sanskar cares Ragini’s face
My love for u has no depth..its boundaries are ever-expanding..my love and my life will be a never ending story

THE END
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Love is not just a touch or happiness..its just a feeling which lasts forever…Aditi Ayansh

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49 Comments
  1. AMkideewani

    Aww, very heart touching and yet emotional❤

    1. Aditi.Ayansh

      Thank u so much CrazygirlS.P ?
      Thank u for reading it 🙂

      1. AMkideewani

        I love your stories, because you are a fantabulous writer❤❤

      2. Aditi.Ayansh

        Thank u yaar love u lots ?

  2. fantabulous no words to say but yaar y r u killing rags dr poor sanky. all the best

    1. Aditi.Ayansh

      Thank u soo much mk yaar ? Thanx a lot 🙂

  3. Its just awesome

    1. Aditi.Ayansh

      Thank u so much di ? love u lots 🙂

  4. Follybraverl

    Thousand hugs and kisses ????????????????

    1. Aditi.Ayansh

      Thank u soooooooooooooooooooooo much di..it really means a lot to me love u lots and lots ????????????

  5. Dharani

    awesome… loved it to the core… heart touching

    1. Aditi.Ayansh

      Thank u so much di 🙂 really it means a lot to me ?

  6. amazing.All the best for competition

    1. Aditi.Ayansh

      Thank u Thank u sooo much yaar Ammy.. 🙂 ?

  7. mindblowing aditi u nailed it love u

    1. Aditi.Ayansh

      Thank u so much yaar Aditi ? love u lots and lots yaar 🙂

  8. Amazing and very emotional

    1. Aditi.Ayansh

      Thank u so much Ashnoor di 🙂 ?

  9. Adreen18

    Fabulous ???

    1. Aditi.Ayansh

      Thank u sooo much Adreen18..? di thanks a ton 🙂

  10. Asw

    Amazing yaar keep going

    1. Aditi.Ayansh

      Thank u so much Asw di 🙂 love u?

  11. Unexpected climax
    Emotional and sad OS
    It’s heart touching awesome OS dear
    “Love is not just a touch or happiness..its just a feeling which lasts forever”?these line is amazing and wonderful

    1. Aditi.Ayansh

      Hi abi..thank u sooo much yaar ..i’m glad tht u liked my concept and ofcourse my quote…love u ..tk care … ?????

  12. Awesome n heart touching

    1. Aditi.Ayansh

      Thank u soo much aleeza di 🙂 ..thank u for accepting my concept ?

  13. Richa19

    Mind blowing!!!!!!!!! So emotional and heart touching!!!! ?? loved it yaar!!! ???

    1. Aditi.Ayansh

      Thank u Thank u Thank u soooo much Richa di ??

  14. superb emotional one dear

    1. Aditi.Ayansh

      Thank u so much di 🙂 ?

  15. Asra

    heart touching os dear….i didn’t expect ragu vll die….osam dear…loved it…but am little sad….and ur last line superbbb dear….
    All the best for ur competition…tkcr dear….

    1. Aditi.Ayansh

      Thank u Asra ..ur choti is very happy by seeing ur comment i’m glad u liked my concept…and thank u for loving my quote ..Thanks a lot di love u lots and lots tk cr ??????

      1. Aditi.Ayansh

        sry sry Asra di………
        * Asra di

  16. Lovely7

    Wow ❤❤❤

    1. Aditi.Ayansh

      Thank u so much yaar Lovely7 🙂 ?

  17. Lovely7

    I wish to read this story with happy ending but no prob it’s amazing

    1. Aditi.Ayansh

      Thank u yaar love u lotss 🙂 🙂

  18. Jayanti

    awesome yaar…I can’t express in words…but seriously its so amazing but really unexpected ending……fabulous..and keep it up

    1. Aditi.Ayansh

      Thank u so much Jayanti di thank u di ..love u lots thank u for ur fabulous comment ??????

  19. That was so emotional ?

    1. Aditi.Ayansh

      Thank u so much Vk 🙂 ?

  20. its awsome dear very very emotional

    1. Aditi.Ayansh

      Thank u so much ANKITA di 🙂 Thank u 4 reading ?

  21. A12345

    Awesome

    1. Aditi.Ayansh

      Thank u so much di 🙂 ?

  22. Aasthu

    emotional and heart touching….

    1. Aditi.Ayansh

      Thank u so much Aasthu di 🙂 ?

  23. Inu

    superb os sisy. I am having tears after reading it. Good job

    1. Aditi.Ayansh

      Thank u so soo much Inu di 🙂 …it really means a lot to me love u?

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