SWARAGINI (DIL KI DOR) Part 28

Hey guys, thanks a lot for your feedback but on a serious note , the comments have reduced drastically which is really demotivating me , i will continue writing till end but still i am really feeling low, if you are reading please comment , i am not forcing you but still if you can then please do and many of you are missing , don’t know maybe you left reading…..
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thanks a lot for those who always support me….
the episode starts with harsh taking out the chair for ragini to sit , ragini smiles and sits while harsh sits on the opposite seat.
Harsh nervous yet smiling : what will you eat??
Ragini smiling : whatever you make me eat…..
She laughs saying this to lessen harsh’s nervousness while he too laughs with her.
Its a really formal type conversation which they are doing.

Harsh : ok , so i will order sandwich , same for you???
Ragini nods smiling while harsh orders the waiter to bring sandwich.
Sanskar is eyeing them with full concentration and noting their every activity while he suddenly eyes the waiter getting the sandwich , he smells something and suddenly runs to the waiter.
Swara is standing like a statue totally tensed when suddenly she turns and the person keeps hand on her mouth to prevent her from shouting , swara eyes the person while the person is revealed to be raj , they both eye each other tensed while raj’s one hand is on swara’s mouth and other on her waist. It is followed by an eyelock.
aaniye.. heeriye..
Jaaniye heeriye
Mere man yeh bata de tu
Kis or chala hai tu

Kya paya nahi tune
Kya dhoond raha hai tu
raj suddenly gets out of the trance and leaves her while they both stare each other shocked.
Sanskar runs to the waiter from back and stops him in middle.
Sanskar slowly to the waiter : can you help me??
The waiter eyes him from top to bottom and then nods in a “no”
Sanskar takes out a 1000 rupees and says : now…..
He eyes then note and nods in yes.
Sanskar gives him the note and they go somewhere.
After some time:
They both come out while sanskar is in the waiter’s uniform and waiter is in sanskar’s cloth , sanskar has even wore specs , had beard and wore a turban over his head , he is not at all recognizable.

At the same time harsh comes while the waiter hides and harsh says : where ‘s the food, we ordered long ago…..
Sanskar tensed : so….so…sorry si…sir….actually it has….
He was saying when harsh eyes the plate in his hand and takes it and says: these waiters na……….
Sanskar is shocked and eyes harsh taking the plate , harsh reaches the seat and ragini was about to eat when suddenly sanskar comes and holds her hand.
She is shocked while she eyes him , her eyes met him , she can’t recognize him but how can she not recognize the eyes of sanskar, they both have an eyelock .
o hai ankahee

Jo hai ansuni
Woh baat kya hai bata
Mitwa..
Kahe dhadkan hai tujhse kya
Mitwa..
Yeh khudse toh na tu chhupa
ragini suddenly eye harsh and gets her hand freed and eyes sanskar angrily .
sanskar : sorry ma’am but our restaurant has a policy , we first tell you the ingredients of the recipe and then make you eat.
Harsh and ragini both eye him questionably while he says : we can’t let you eat like this….
Harsh : ok , then speak the recipe but do it fast..
Raj to swara tensed : what are you doing here???
Swara angrily : what are you doing here??
Raj lowering his head : i was just passing by….
Swara angrily : oh , i am not mad ok na……

Raj still lowering his head : vo actually , i want to propose someone so got to know about this place and came here to check this place but they told that th is is closed but i had to see so i sneaked in like this……………..
Swara eyes him angrily and thinks : that day he was actually saying right to ragini , he wanna propose someone???
She eyes him angrily while raj eyes her questionably .
Swara angrily: you love somebody???
Sanskar eyes her smiling and thinks : swara are you jealous??
He stares at swara smiling while swara stares at him angrily thinking : why am feeling bad??
Mere man yeh bata de tu
Kis or chala hai tu

Kya paya nahi tune
Kya dhoond raha hai tu
Jo hai ankahee
Jo hai ansuni
Woh baat kya hai bata
Mitwa..
Kahe dhadkan hai tujhse pyar
Mitwa..
Yeh khudse toh na tu chhupa
Sanskar starts speaking and says : mushroom……
He stops after saying mushroom while harsh eyes him questionably but suddenly ragini says : harsh , i am having an allergy with mushroom…
Sanskar smiles and thinks : thank god , i smelled mushroom……
Harsh nervous : sorry ragini, i don’t know how…..
Ragini keeps her hand on his hand and says : no problem…….

Harsh smiles while sanskar was about to go when ragini says : by the way thanks , i got saved because of you…………………or else, i can’t even imagine…..
Sanskar smiles at her while it is followed by another eyelock.
Ga ma pa ri ni sa..
Mitwa..
Sanskar goes from their smiling while harsh says : ok , till the time another food plate is coming , lets dance….
Ragini : dance???
Harsh nods while he takes ragini’s hand.
Raj says : yaa swara , i’ll propose her soon….
Swara eyes his bag and takes from his hand .

Raj tensed : swara….??
Swara opens the bag and finds a big card in which it is written : you know people admire stars at night but i have got that pleasure to admire one in the morning too , will my star always help me to admire stars in the moring too??
Swara smiles while reading card while raj smiles seeing her smiling face.
Jeevan dagar mein..
Prem nagar mein..
Jeevan dagar mein
Prem nagar mein
Aaya nazar mein
Jab se koi hain
Tu sochta hain
Tu puchata.. hain
Jiski kami thi
Kya yeh wohi hain
Haan yeh wohi hain
Haan yeh wohi hain..

Tu ek pyasa

Aur yeh nadi hain
Kaahe nahi, isko tu, khulke bataye

Ragini starts dancing with harsh while she is a little tensed at their closeness and is thinking continuously about the waiter.
Ragini thinks : why he looked familier??
She while dancing is eyeing the gate from where he came.
o hai ankahee
Jo hai ansuni
Woh baat kya hai bata
Mitwa..
Kahe dhadkan hai tujhse pyar
Mitwa..
Yeh khudse toh na tu chhupa
Sanskar suddenly comes and eyes raj and swara .
He thinks : raj ?? here??
They both are not moving while sanskar clears his throat.
Swara suddenly : what happened??
Sanskar smiling : don’t know , you would be knowing better….
He laughs as he too knows about raj’s feelings.
Raj shy’s and says : sorry , i guess i disturbed you both but what were you doing??
Sanskar shows him ragharsh from behind the bush while raj says : oh sanskar , what will happen yaar i don’t know….

Suddenly while dancing ragini’s slipper breaks and she was about to step on a thorn left there (from the roses ) but sanskar runs to her and pulls her from her waist while he looses balance and falls and ragini falls over him.
O.. teri nigaahen
Pa gayi rahe
Par tu yeh soche..
Jaaun na jaaun
Yeh zindagi jo
Hai naachti toh
Kyon bediyon mein
Hai tere paanv
Preet ki dhun par naach le paagal
Udta agar hai
Udne de aanchal
Kaahe nahi, isko tu, khulke bataye
Jo hai ankahee
Jo hai ansuni
Woh baat kya hai bata

Ragini gets up while sanskar says : th….there….wa…was…thorn….
Harsh eyes him angrily and nods while sanskar was about to go but gets pulled towards ragini due to his shirt button stick in ragini’s neck chain.
Mitwa..
Kahe dhadkan hai tujhse pyar
Mitwa..
Yeh khudse toh na tu chhupa
Mere man yeh bata de tu
Kis or chala hai tu
Kya paya nahi tune
Kya dhoond raha hai tu
Jaaniye.. heeriye..
Mitwa.. Mitwa..

The episode ends and swaraj (too close) spying on ragsanharsh while ragsan in that position.

No precap.

Guys how many of you like swaraj?? Guys , i guess some are liking them but please love raj but not swaraj because this is a pure swarlak ff…..

Credit to: Piyali

29 comments

    • Piyali

      yaa sindhu , he will be but you never know whats in destiny so lets wait……………….be happy dear and thanks a lot for always supporting me…………….

    • Piyali

      oh ,thanks a lot hayathi for constantly supporting me………………be happy dear……………

  1. Pls make the entry of laksh waiting for him since long. And yeah i like raj but i love swalak more. So pls let swara and laksh meet each other soon . Hope you will accept my request and bring laksh soon in the storyline

    • Piyali

      oh sparkle , he’s already in the storyline dear and his and swara’s meet , i guess its gonna happen soon ( i guess you know how badly i extend my scenes , his late entry is just the result of that) but yaa its gonna soon happen but till that time you’ll witness some swaralak missing each other scenes………………i hope you like them……………………………thanks a lot for supporting me……………..be happy dear……………….

    • Piyali

      oh , sorry jhanvi…………….i am so so so..so sooooooooooooooo sorry………………………………he’s gonna come soon……………………………….please just a little more time……………..pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee………………………………i hope your birthday was awesome and you enjoyed…………………i know its really late to ask but yet couldn’t ask before thats why……………………………be happy dear…………………thanks a lot for always supporting me…………………..

    • Piyali

      oh sara, first of all i have a big thanks for you………………………………..i saw how you supported me , shloka and eva on shloka’s page…………………really dear, i love you for that………………………….thanks a lot for such a lovely comment…………………………i will try my best to update regularly but what to do……………….studies and other ffs………………..sorry ………………be happy dear………………..

  2. Superb epi , even I want laksh entry ,but u said I previous epis that he will come after two years ….plz make his entry soon …

    • Piyali

      thanks a lot naimi and so….so…so…sorry dear………………i know i am very bad at pre-planning story but can’t help now…………………by the way right guess……but our ff is soon heeding towards a short leap…………………………………so his entry in swaragini life is soon…………………pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee just a little more wait……………..thanks a lot for your support…………..be happy dear………….

    • Piyali

      thanks a lot xyz , sorry dear , i was having a headache while writing thats why its short………….i’ll try my best to write large updates from next time……………..be happy dear…………..

  3. sinzo

    I AM VERY HAPPY….SWEETHEART….fantastic episode…..i loved sanskar concern for Ragini…..he loves her sooo much……u r amazing writer ….i loved today’s episode….it is super duper hit episode…..???

    I love raj…he will be heartbroken ? ……bring someone for Raj….because he is really sweet …..i cant see him hurt …..i knw you have decided already your story …but plzzzz sweety….bring someone special for Raj also….

    • Piyali

      thanks a lot cutie for this beautiful comment , thanks a lot lot dear………………………….coming to raj…………………..i i am now feeling that you are gonna hate me for my coming storyline……i am really feeling sad now…..really i don’t want you to hate me…….but you are surely gonna do……………………yaar…..what to do can’t even change my storyline now……………………….sooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy……………………………………..i am so….sos…so..so.so…so…so ….so sorry dear………………..please wait to see what happens and don’t hate me………………………………..i really hope you don’t ………………………………thanks a lot for always supporting me…………………be happy dear…………….

  4. nice but urr ff is full of only ragsan only .i think one or two line of swara vo bhi mushkil sai .noo swaraj scens .only sanskar and ragini if u don’t wanna show them then say clearly .naa ….i m reading this only becoz of swara ,and i always think that now this ff will include swarajlak but noo there is no scens of them …
    sry for rude msg but its just my feeling towards u and urs ff ..i m stll waiting for swarajlak scens ..i hope u will pay heed to my msg

    • Piyali

      oh aliya………………………………..sorry banned na……………………..and dear , first of all you know after reading your comment i read my part 4-5 times to check it , sorry dear but i found equal swaraj and ragsan scenes except for the last part……………………..that too i read and you would be knowing it was a little rushed, actually i was having a headache while writing it and thought to just end it anyhow and post , thats why i rushed the last scene…………………..dear i am really sorry but i really feeel that the importance of a character does not come from how many scenes we give to that character , it depends on how we shape the character….you know in actual swaragini , if we look , it wasn’t that ragini was not getting scenes, infact more scenes were shown of her planning and plotting rather then swara’s problem solving scenes but yet we said that give equal importance to ragini, it was because her charater wasn’t shaped well, i just want my story to be one which consists swara’s intelligent yet caring attitude, ragini innocent yet stubborn attitude, sanskar’s royal yet passionate attitude and laksh’s flirty yet helpul nature………………….i really don’t see the scenes i give…………….i check the charactar and dear , on my 25 episode , i specially gave swaralak meeting scenes without any ragsan scenes , i cn just say that please forgive me if you ever felt this, i am really sorry, you can critisize me as muchas you want but please don’t leave supporting me…………….you are 1 of those few people who read and commented on almost each part of my ff………………you are one among my best friends……………….please don’t leave reading my ff and dear i have a promise to you soon i’ll write an os or ts on swarlak named – SWARLAK -HUM HAI ISHAQZADE
      just for you…………………….really sorry and be happy dear………………

    • Piyali

      thanks a lot venni for your constant support……………………….be happy dear…………….

    • Piyali

      thanks a lot dhara for your constant support………………..be happy dear…………….

  5. Piyu,..dont get demotivated…many silent readers are there yaar,..so chill..n yaar actually iam not so well since last two-three days..so i cannot comment or read any ffs..but my cousin will read and say the story to me.. she said me about it..so i thought to comment ..N according to me u r giving equal importance to swaragini…alia pls don’t hurt piyu,i cannot tolerate it..She already said that laksh’s entry will be little late..swaraj r not the pairs,still she is giving importance to their bonding..so ofcourse when laksh come,piyu will surely give importance to both the pairs equally..
    piyu..todays episode was awesome..you choose correct songs according to the situation..hats off to you for that…Btwn Happy vishu.?????????

    • Piyali

      hey abhi , thanks a lot for such a motivating comment, same pinch , i also recovered from fever just 2 days ago…………………….i hope you are fine now……………………….and i must say , your cousins are really caring………. am happy that you felt that , but alia is also right at her place , i will try my best to reach up to her expectations………………i am really lucky to get friends like you………………….really dear thanks a lot……………………………………..love you………………..be happy dear…………….take care , get well soon and entertain us with your marvellous ffs…………………

    • Piyali

      thanks a lot lovely for your constant support……………….i hope you liked ragsan scenes……………………………….be happy dear…………

  6. Hi piyali…
    I can see that u r little upset.. dont worry…. comments dont describe ur talent… do u remember u told this to me.. so plz u dont do that…. we all love ur ff alot… and to the goodness u have no bashers..which can be seen on 80% ffs nowadays…so chill and keep entertaining us..m we all love u.
    ….
    Hope u read it… and this may make u relaxed.. ..like u have always supported me .. i will too keep in supporting u……
    Be happy always..

    • Piyali

      first of all i love you dear, seriously thanks a lot for reminding me my own wordings ………………….i forgot………………..i was sad but seeing a few comments here (like yours ) made my day……………………………you know your comment also makes me feel that you are sad about those bashers…………………..please don’t be ” why to care about those who don’t care about your feelings ” i know it sounds really wierd but at the end of the day……………….i am not some mahan hasti like those heroines of serial so i also don’t care about them , so you too don’t care…………………………please its my request as well as order…………….by the way i was about to say that come back with a bang but you already did that………………i am really happy…………………..thanks a lot for such a lovely comment………………love you……………be happy dear………………..

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