SWARAGINI (DIL KI DOR) Part 26

Hey guys , replied to your comments , misha dear i asked you something in promo , please reply i am really confused……….
Guys i am seeing that from last two episode , many new readers are commenting but many older readers are not , guys i want to tell you something that is that it doesn’t hurt when people don’t read your story from very start because its clear that they don’t like your concept but it does hurt guys when you leave the story in the middle because it shows that there’s some problem in the storyline which is so bad that it can’t be improven , guys i don’t wanna loose my old readers so please if you are there just comment , even one word but please do……………………..just to tell that you are reading and if you don’t like anything , just speak up because i wanna improve myself and that will help me…………………………….
Links to previous episodes:
http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=DIL+KI+DOR

the episode starts with swaralak being shocked seeing the place.
Its a shed type of place in the middle of forest , totally decorated with lights and flowers.
Aliya is in the middle and rose petals are falling on her.
She smiles and hugs a boy , his face is shown and it is revealed to be zain.
Aliya while hugging : wow zain , i loved the surprise , thats amazing……………….
She now breaks the hug and beats him lightly on his chest and says : why you kidnapped me???
Zain holds her shoulder and smiles and says : so what , i kidnapped my wife only na……………………
He laughs saying this while aliya says : oh god , zain you are impossible.
Swaralak eye each other confused while swara suddenly speaks : its your mistake….
Laksh eyes her shocked and says : excuse me………………….how is it my mistake…………………its your mistake…………………….you took me here…………………….
Swara trying to put blame on him : no..no..no………..its your mistake…..
Laksh shows her his finger and says : oh hello , just shut up ok na…………………its your mistake……………
Zain and aliya hear them fighting and are shocked to see them
Zain confused : who are you both ?? and why are you here??
Swara was saying when laksh holds her hand and says : wo, actually we are lovers(swara eyes him with a ”what” look while he tries to avoid her) we didn’t knew that you were here……………..sorry………………………our car got broken so…………………..

Its already evening.
Aliya smiles and says : no problem………………..you can stay with us……………
Swara shouts : what???
Zaya eye her confused while laksh fakely smiles and says : oh god, baby………………….i love you…………….(to zaya) she tells me to say ‘i love you” to her every minute and if i don’t do , she acts weird……………………….
Swara eyes him angrily while laksh tries to control his laughter.
Aliya : see , this shed is divided into two parts , you take one part, we’ll be in other……………… we will leave you to your home tomorrow morning……………
Laksh nods while he makes swara too to do this.
Zaya leave them to other side while swara shouts : what is this????????????
Laksh keeps a hand on her mouth and zaya return.
Zain : is everything fine……???
Laksh nods in yes while after they go swara frees herself and says : what are you doing??
Laksh eyes her angrily and says : so , what should i tell them , we thought him as kidnapper……………you broke my car…………….we can’t even go back so you will have to stay here with me this night miss…………….yaar what is your name..???
Swara angrily : why should i tell you………………………….ma will be worried for me……………huh…………..
Laksh eyes her and then says : ok , miss billi(cat)
Swara eyes him and says : what you said??
Laksh smiles while adjusting himself on a mat laid on floor and says : your new name………….
Swara too tries to sit on the same mat and says : ok , mister Bandar(monkey)
They both pass each other fake smile and in swara’s mind : maa , will be worried , where i am caught with this monkey………..
Laksh thinks : yaar , where i am caught with this cat…………..??? huh…….
Ragini asks swara laughing : oh swara , you were caught with him, so sad………………..but his character sketch , i would love to meet that laksh , seriously……………..
She laughs.
Sanskar on phone cuts laksh and says : oh………………..she is just like swara you know………………………angry bird(this name is given by my reader maghs to swara and i just loved it so used it here for swara)
He too laughs while ragsan ask to swaralak : what next??
Swaralak together : nothing else……………………..signal was not there but we both played on our phones the whole evening and then we slept at night……………next morning home……………nothing else……………………….
Ragini to swara suspiciously : paaka , nothing else…………….
Swara eyes her smiling and says : no mata………………nothing else……………but i just hate that monkey…………………i wish i never meet him again……………………….
Ragini laughs and says : i wish you meet him soon…………
Swara :ragini……………….
She runs behind ragini while ragini laughs.
Sanskar to laksh : i don’t think my laksh was with some girl alone and he did nothing………….
Laksh angrily : bhai……………..what are you speaking……………..i with that billi…………..huh…………..
Sanskar smiling : oh , my cute laksh…………..
He laughs while laksh cuts the call in anger.
Sanskar laughs.
In swaragini room :
Ragini is sleeping while swara is not getting sleep , she wakes up and starts seeing the moon smiling while remembering that night………………………..
Laksh is eyeing the moon smiling and thinks : after meeting her , i love cats too………………..
Flash back starts:
Swarlak are fighting for the mat and sleeping together, swara has kept a cushion between them.

Suddenly laksh wakes up and his eyes go on swara who is sleeping peaceful , automatically a smile comes on his face…….
Kabhi gardishon ka maara
Kabhi khwahishon se haara
Roothe chaand ka hai chakor
Zara se bhi samjhote se
Yeh parhez rakhta hai kyun
Maane na kabhi koi zor
Duniya jahaan ki bandishon ki
Yeh kahaan parwaah kare
Jab kheenche teri dor
Kheenche teri dor…

she tries to turn in sleep and a strand of hair comes on her face , he smiles and then tucks it behind her ear………..
he thinks : sote hue billi bhi cute lagti hai(she also looks cute while sleeping)
he smiles and then lays down again smiling………………
Manchala.. mann chala teri ore
Manchala.. mann chala teri ore

after some time :
swara wakes up as she was not able to sleep and eyes laksh, seeing him a smile comes on her face and she thinks : this monkey looks so cute when he starts his bak..bak , (and now analysing) not to cute while speeping.
Khamoshiyon ki sooraton mein
Dhoondhe tera shor
Dhoondhe tera shor
Manchala.. mann chala teri ore
Manchala.. mann chala teri ore

she smiles and then tries to stand up but she falls on laksh by mistake.
Laksh wakes up and eyes her on himself.
They both have a passionate eyelock.
Rookhi-sookhi dil ki hai zameen
Jaane kahaan gum hui nami
Meri ummeed hai teri baarishein
Ye sahe kayi baar pyaar ke
Tujhe har baar haar ke
Seekhe phir bhi kabhi nahi saazishein

laksh suddenly breaks the eyelock and says in a dramatic tone : oh ,seeing yuvraj laksh alone , you are trying to take advantage…???
swara eyes him and then beats him on his chest and says : just shut up ok na………………..
laksh stops her while they both again have an eyelock.
Ho.. tere liye aaj khud se hi bhaage hain
Himmat ke tukde bator
Ho bhaage zamaane se
Chhup ke dabe paanv jaise koi chor
Jaise koi chor…

laksh : bache ki jaan loge(will you kill me)
swara smiles and stands up and says: you are not that bad…………….
laksh too sits up with her and says : i know , i let you take my advantage na, thats why i am good………….
swara angrily: you……………..
she again starts beating him.
Manchala.. mann chala teri ore
Manchala.. mann chala teri ore
Khamoshiyon ki sooraton mein
Dhoondhe tera shor
Dhoondhe tera shor
Manchala.. mann chala teri ore.. (repeats)
They both spend the night like this(fighting and patching up) while the next morning zaya leave them to swara’s house.

In swara’s house:
Swara runs inside and hugs sumi.
Sumi normally : where were you??
Swara eyes her shocked : you don’t care na ma………………if something would have happened to me???
Sumi smiles and says : my shona is not so weak………………..i trust you…………….
Laksh comes from back and says :oh shona………………
Swara angrily stares him and says : just shut up ………………..ok na………………
She says to sumi : maa, tell him to go………….
Sumi angrily : shona very bad……………..he helped you na…………………..
Swara eyes her like a child and then hides behind sumi and stares at laksh..
Laksh stares at her smiling while she sticks out her tongue.
Laksh laughs and says : ok , aunty , i’ll go now…………………by the way thanks for understanding that i helped her…………………..
The episode ends on swara-laksh coming out of fb and smile seeing the moon, the screen is split up into the two.

So guys , i end this episode here…….

Credit to: Piyali

51 comments

    • Piyali

      thanks a lot renu , but why are you saying thank you…………………..i couldn’t get it and here on this page only i have right to say sorry and thank you , no one else so if you consider me your friend , please don’t say these words to me……………………………..thanks a lot dear………………….be happy dear……………….

    • Piyali

      thanks a lot abhi , sorry , you know it was swarlak first meet so it should be special na thats why……………………..don’t worry from tomorrow we start with our ragsan scenes so don’t worry ……………………..be happy dear………………………

    • Piyali

      sorry hayathi dear , had to give equal importance na thats why…………………….from tomorrow you’ll find…………………thanks for reading…………………..be happy dear…………………

    • Piyali

      hey shloka , thanks a lot dear and when are you uploading kya hua tera vada………………i am checking the page from morning……………………….please upload soon……………………………be happy dear…………………………….

      • Piyali

        hey shloka dear replied to your comment on kya hua tera vada………………..i hope you read it…………….be happy……………

    • Piyali

      thanks a lot s priya , another silent reader……………………..be happy dear………………..

    • Piyali

      sorry lovely had to give swarlak scenes to na, it is ragsan as well as swarlak story so thats why…………………………..i am really sorry dear………thanks for reading……………………..be happy dear……………………..

    • Piyali

      oh vinni , thanks a lot dear and sorry dear , you know its a ragsan as well as swasan story so had to give equal importance to all na…………………..from next episode we start back…………………..so be happy dear……………….

  1. sinzo

    wow sweety…..sooo nice episode……..and song is perfect for Swalak…….. sooooo cute……SWALAK……and their fight was more cute ?….
    very nice…..update soon sweetheart waiting for next…..update…….
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    • Piyali

      oh my cute friend , thanks a lot for the compliments , my next update will be late ………………sorry but schools begin so need to study hard thats why………………..sorry again but i’ll try my best to update soon……………………be happy dear……………..

      • sinzo

        its ok sweety……concentrate on your studies……when you will be free then update ok…….i will always be waiting for you and your story,…… ???

      • Piyali

        thanks a lot my cute friend for understanding , by the way which couple’s fan are you, i mean swasan-raglak or swarlak-ragsan………………do answer dear……………………..be happy…………….

    • Piyali

      thanks a lot sparkle for the compliments , i’ll try to update soon but can’t promise , you know schools…………………………………….be happy dear………………….

    • Piyali

      hey harshu , dear are you naimi, i guess you by mistake commented twice so problem i am replying here thanks a lot dear…………………………i’ll try to update soon but can’t promise……………my schools are beginning thats why………….sorry dear…………………..and is your real name harshu or naimi??
      be happy dear……………

  2. nice episode.and sorry for not commenting earlier actually i was stuck up with my studies but i red all ur episodes and all of them were brilliant.and the way u connected swara and laksh was mindblowing but now i think song phela nasha would suit better in this situation sorry if i hurt ur feelings this is only what i felt while reading. and i am once again saying sorry and also sorry if i could not comment in future but dont worry the story going so far is just brilliant.

    • Piyali

      hey janvi , dear just check yaar how many times you spoke sorry in a single comment , dear i banned sorry on my site so pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee don’t say sorry na……………….we are friends and there should be no sorry between friends so please no sorry………………………and i also understand about studies ,after all i am also a school student……………………. and dear i can”t help it you know majority of votes were for manchala thats why………………………i am sorry for the fact that you didn’t like the song for the situation……………………..and thanks a lot for your lovely comment ,be happy my friend ………………………..

      • shloka

        Piyali may i give u a suggestion..its just that when they properly meet in present u can use pehla nasha so…everyone will be happy…. just a suggestion……

      • Piyali

        thanks a lot for the suggestion shloka , i liked it a lot ………would surely use it………………thanks again………………..be happy dear………..

    • Piyali

      thanks a lot aarti , was waiting for you……………………be happy dear………………..

      • Piyali

        thanks a lot abhi , by the way did you got my real name after checking it………………i guess it was there……………saw it agter posting but did you got it???
        please do answer……………………be happy dear…………..

      • Piyali

        yaa dear correct , actually when i was new to this site then i was not knowing much so kept this fake name and now people recognize me by that only so thought not to change it………………….what’s in a name…………ha …ha …………………..i forgot to ask , do you know hindi?? i thought you are malayali………………..please do answer………………be happy ……………………

      • Piyali

        thanks a lot my cute friend……………….by the was , i asked something……………………please do tell………………………be happy dear……………

  3. khusubu

    your story is always my favourite. and don’t think I stop reading your story I always read it.

    • Piyali

      thanks a lot khusubu , dear this comment means a lot afterall i am getting such good friends here…………………….love you dear…………………..be happy………………

  4. awesome episode i loved swalak scens and yaa don’t feel bad when people don’t comments actually i tried to do comments on ur ff and other also but every time i failed i don’t know why it never posted on telly updates .i think its problems in my phone.
    i don’t know whether this comment will posted on it or not…

    • Piyali

      oh alia , dear you don’t need to say that , you are one among those few who comment on every part of my ff, and dear its not at all about comments , its about my friends which i made on this site like you………….thats why i said that , i hope the problem is rectified because this comment of yours is posted ………………..thanks a lot for being my friend…………….be happy dear……………..

  5. Meghs(megha)

    Hi piyali… I am glad feeling in cloud 9.. I used angry bird for sanky but its suits swara n i happy u used it for swara…
    One more thing i want to say ur 13 still ur imagination superb…
    About zain my guess crt i said he gonna surprise alia…
    Ur ff too good… N ya swalak first meet fabulous ..
    I am speechless … N ya never feel sad for less comments or comments …

    N i want to ask if u would be my frnd .. N ya one morething i will call u kiddo if u won’t mind…

    • Piyali

      oh dear , i am sorry for the mistake but you liked it then no problem……………………and dear its not about less comments , i just don’t wanna loose my friends and you are also one among them………………..we are already friends dear……………..by the way the name(kiddo) is so so so cute , i loved it………………seriously i did…………………….by the way , your age ………………………..if you don’t mind only then……………………………….i would searh for a name for you soon………………..be happy dear………….

      • Meghs(megha)

        Of course we r frnds… N one thing I elder to u ….. My age is 20 in this 28 … 28 is my birthday … Ur so sweet u liked kiddo name na… I don’t mind whatever u cl me …

      • Piyali

        oh dear , you are much elder than me so i thought for a name for you and that is meghu di, did you like it…………………….please do telll……………..be happy my meghu dii…………….

    • Piyali

      thanks a lot dimple , sorry dear i’ll update it late , i am sorry but dear , hardly now a days i get any time to open my laptop and updating is really getting difficult , i’lll try to update as soon as possible……………be happy dear…………….

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