swaragini would it better for me (Episode 13)

hi guys my ff name is swaragini :would it be better for me. thanks for ur comment guys so srry i cann’t type big its my sisters wedding first wedding in my family . guys i will raveal a truth my character was like ragini’s character because my mom and dad left me when i was in ukg due to accident . i am living with brother and two sisters and my gradmother
then i changed due to….. i will reaveal the incident which happened to me in the end of the episode
srry i can post only after my tuesday if possible tuesday
thank u abi rghul is played by shaurya from ek hasina thi

guys my previous link http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-better-episode-12/
@ night
swara comes from her tent for some reason.swara sees dhurv and ragini talking
swara:dhurv my dear from now onwards i will tease

swara move from there . she has a paper in her hand
swara:ok i came then where should i go. move 10 steps. laksh am comming
swara saw a lake a boat was there
swara went near that
swara: laksh r u there am so scared

some one came from back

i need some suggestion hw can change ragini character . i changed due to guess it
srry for small one
plz sugest i want ideas from u

Credit to: anamika

7 comments

  1. next make it longer plzz…..mingle ragini with swalaksandhruv by which rags remember her old time n starts to live her life as she did before

  2. Abhi

    Thankyou so much dear for taking my suggestion.
    And you asked for a girl’s name na,..i suggest Krithi.
    And for changing Ragini’s character,.i think you can show swalaksandruv doing some surprises for her and then slowing making her happy…mingling with her…something like that.
    Your ff is superb dr.

  3. Bisha

    Well!! Nice update..post the longer one asap..we obv can wait.. I am so sorry.. I mean u had to go through so much since childhood.. I hope u r happy with the shape of ur life now.. stay happy dear.. oh ya..i think swasanragdhruv all of their friendship love and care for ragini will def change her..

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