Swaragini An Angel is my love (Mystery In Disguise) Episode 11


The night has engulfed everything into an utter darkness. Her dwindling face is being seen only by the ray of moonlight. She can’t handle this darkness anymore. Her sincere endeavor is to enlighten the room. She lightens the candle to get rid of this darkness. But hey? Her inner soul asks her in curiosity.. Have you ever seen a glowing candle?? I am not elaborating its flickering light which overshadows the darkness for sometimes, but I am clarifying your thoughts that have you seen the lower parts of the candle? It remains only a puddle of wax after burning or you can even imagine after destroying its life for enlightening others. But the ultimate truth is darkness again engulfs it. Despite for certain time, it can pervade a ray of hope but eventually is confined in the whole black hole of darkness. Her life is like such. Till now she has sacrificed it for others. Never cried for her own happiness just like a candle. Now when she wants bliss; her life becomes a melancholy again. No.. No.. She is not doubting him even after viewing the caller ID, but cursing her fate as why is it such? Why after so much bearings, she remains like a puddle of wax of the base of candle. It’s just an agony which she has destined to face.

After completing his call, he comes inside & she looks at him with inquisitiveness to know with whom was he talking for so long? He avoids her questions & takes the plea of being sleepy & hurriedly rushes to bed. She is staggered, unable to know how to respond to the unseen future.

He is standing on a scary barren land of the cliff. He can notice her smiling face & bridal Bengali attire. The red shawl is blowing in the direction of wind pattern. The roaring, ghosty wind is saying something on his ear. He is running behind to catch her. All of a sudden, he hears some pebbles fall down of the cliff & she is unable to maintain her balance & … The scene becomes blur. He is unable to detect her facial expression & shouts ‘No Shona’… ‘Stop’…
And he wakes up & finds her shona next to him. It’s just a nightmare. He is watered with sweat & is breathing heavily. She wakes up due to the constant humming sound of his breathing & is worried to see him in a vulnerable state…
Swara: Sanskar…

He is so scared that he can’t even give her a chance to complete her statement & hugs her like a child hugs her mother when he sees a ghost.
Swara: I am right here sanskar.. What happened?
He can’t say anything.. He is motionless.. Only grabs her closely & rests on her lap..
Seeing his condition swara is worried & composes herself not to ask him any further questions. She interwinds her fingers on his hair & makes him sleep.

Next morning he wakes up by twinkling his eyes & finds him in the cocoon of swara’s lap. Swara’s head is resting on his shoulder. By looking at this very position, all the past night incidents illuminate on his mind. He feels frightened & pulls her closer towards him. Swara is disturbed by his sudden dragging action & wakes up from sleep. She encounters sanskar’s sudden action by a tight hug by pulling him further closer to give him a sense of being protected & secured.

All of a sudden, some one knocks their room door. Swara breaks the hug & moves from bed to open the door.
Swara: Parineeta bhabi, you are here? That too in this morning hour. Anything do you want from me bhabi?
Parineeta: No swara, actually your mom has come & she is waiting for you on downstairs. So get ready first & come soon.
Swara is happy. After so many days she is going to meet her mother. And this is the time when she needs her the most. She doesn’t know what is happening with sanskar now a days? At least by sharing with her mom she can get satisfaction.
Parineeta: what are you thinking swara? Go get ready first & don’t waste time here.
Swara hugs her happily & complies her that she is coming soon.

Hall of MM
Annapurna: sharmistha ji, you? You have come here in this morning hour? Is everything OK?
Sharmistha: sorry to bother you Annapurna ji at this hour of morning. But due to urgent matters, I have come.
Annapurna: Don’t embarrass us by saying so. You have given your daughters here. You have all the rights to come here as & when you want. By the way what is the urgent matter?
Sharmistha: oh!! Actually tomorrow is swara’s birthday. But I can’t stay here tomorrow as her dida & me are going to Mumbai to attain some relatives house due to medical urgency. So, I have come here today to bless her as till today she never has celebrated her birthday alone & without us.
Annapurna: Oh!! Swara has never uttered about her birthday. I am extremely sorry that I don’t know about my daughters in-laws’ birthday. But please sharmistha ji, dont worry as she is also our daughter & even if she can’t celebrate her birthday tomorrow with you, still we will try to make her birthday memorable. Though we can’t replace your position but I promise you to give her all motherly affection tomorrow.
Sharmistha:(being happy) don’t say sorry annapurna ji. I am happy & proud that my daughters are married in this house.
Sujata has heard all these conversations & jumps to take part in their communication.
Sujata: By the way how can we know swara’s birth day jiji? So much have happened in these few days that these happy moments can’t pop up.
As sharmistha doesn’t know about ragini’s confession, so she is unaware about their communication & utters,”what happened in these few days?”

Annapurna, being the defender of MM, indicates Sujata to keep quite as sharmistha has to deal with her relatives health concern & this is not the right time to reveal all the happenings.
Annapurna: No. No sharmistha ji, sujata is kidding(by pointing towards sujata)
Sharmistha finds their eye contact indicating something fishy. By that time swara has already reached the hall & she has listened all the conversations when she was coming down from stairs.
Swara:’Maa’ & runs to hug her.
Sharmistha: how are you beta & how is ragini? I haven’t seen her till now and shona tell me is everything fine? Just before you came, sujata ji was saying something.
Swara: ‘maa’ actually I have already heard your conversation & mom is teasing you only. As after sanskar
‘s accident, mom always cared for me & didn’t let me do any household activities. She is just trying to convey this.
Sharmistha is happy after hearing that sujata has accepted swara heartily. Annapurna is relieved & swara feels guilty as she told partial truth to her mother & not told ragini’s misdeeds, but she doesn’t want to give her further tension.
Swara: Maa, but where is dida? Why does not she come to meet me? Has she forgotten me?
Sharmistha: No beta, actually we got the relatives call yesterday only. Too much things are left for packing. So, your dida is busy with that stuff.
Swara: OK maa! I am not angry with dida now. But after returning from Mumbai she has to meet me for sure.

Just then ragini & sanskar have also reached there. They both take blessings of Sharmistha. Swara indicates ragini to keep quite & not utter a single word about prior incidents.
Sharmistha: how are both of you?
Sanskar: I am fine maa(with a bit doubtful tone) & ragini also conveys to be fine.
Sharmistha turns towards sanskar.
Sharmistha: beta, tomorrow is swara’s birthday. I know you love her a lot and also can take care of her. But she never has remained without me & dida in her birthday. As I am unable to stay here tomorrow, promise me that you will give her all the happiness she deserves.
Sanskar: yes maa!! Tomorrow is also a big day for me. I promise you to take care of shona.. I mean swara.
Everyone laughs by listening shona from sanskar’s mouth & swara gets shy. Sharmistha gets a call from dida & happily goes out from MM after meeting all the members.

Swara is in her room, thinking about sanskar’s words to her maa & suddenly door bell rings.
Swara(comes to door step & opens it): Yes
Courier boy: mam! Can you please call swara sanskar maheswari? There is a parcel in her name.
Swara: it’s me. But who has sent it?
Courier boy: that i don’t know mam! I am here only for delivery. You take it & check yourself. Saying this he hands over the parcel to swara & waves her good bye.
Swara takes the courier & is going to her room. In the mid way AP, Sujata & Parineeta meet her.

AP: swara, who was ringing the bell?
Swara: badi mlaa!! It’s the courier boy. Some one has sent a parcel for me.
Sujata(teasingly): oh!! Look who is it?? I think it must be sanskar.
Swara: but mom, why sanskar will send courier to me?
Sujata: because you fool! tomorrow is your birthday.
AP: shut up sujata!! Go to your room swara & check it. Swara complies & goes.
Swara is opening packets in her room & her phone rings. She picks up the call.
Swara: hello!!
Sanskar: oh! My god! You make me scared. Where are you? Have you checked your phone? How many times have I called you?
Swara: sorry sanskar! I was on downstairs. Just come to room & my phone was in the room.
Sanskar: Have you received the packets?
Swara: Yes, but why do you send parcels?
Sanskar: its your birthday gift.. By the way have you checked them? Do you like it?
Swara: No, I have just come to room & picked up your call.
Sanskar: then check them & be ready till 7PM. I will pick you up & will go somewhere.
Swara: where are we suppose to be going sanskar??
Sanskar: That’s a surprise for you. Be ready.
Swara: but have you taken permission from bade papa?
Sanskar: yes, I have asked him in office & he has no problem.

(Both of them know that DP’s permission is required & if he has granted then they can go out)
Swara: OK I will be ready.. Bye sanskar & hangs the call
Sanskar(on other side thinks): I know swara you have lots of questions twisted in your mind. Be patient shona!! I will clear all your doubts. But after that can you accept me with my flaws??
Swara(in their room): how many facets have you sanskar?? Your care, concern & love make me fall for you again & again. With each passing day I am loving you more & more. But what are you hiding from me? And again a surprise..please share with me sanskar.. If I have you, I can fight all the problems.. She grabs his photograph & indulges in deep thought..

“Cannot understand
Who’s behind this mask
You’re a mystery in disguise,
You’ve been telling me so many lies.
To be or not to be,
That’s the question now
Am I anything at all?”

Thanks for all of your supports.. Feel free to comment or criticize if this episode is worth of your time.

Credit to: Kashis

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  1. Seriously you give me goosebumps while reading…. loved the description of nightmare segment..
    Loved your ff…

    1. thanks kiara… happy to hear it..

  2. Awesome!!!!…JUST loved it…
    waiting for d next….plzz update soon!!!!!

    1. thanks muskaan.. will update next part soon.

  3. nice episode

    1. thanks lucky…

  4. Awesome episode…swasan rockxx…it was emotional and really heart touching yaar…sanskar and swara r made for each other
    …tanq kashis?

    1. thanks for ur likeness…

  5. Awesome yr……

    1. thank u rupsikha

  6. So cute and nice

    1. thank u hayathi..

  7. Excited to read next update..

    1. wait a bit dear… will upload soon..

  8. As usual such a cute episode!?! Still u know how much I luvv ur Raglak part! Missed tat one dear πŸ™

    1. thanks ramya… its swasan day… dont worry… u also find the raglak part soon.. just a bit wait, and u will get a positive update..

  9. Awwwww!!! For the swasan moment!! Specially candle’s dialogue! It’s perfectly described condition of swara! But alas! Mystery is still in the mist! Yar this is not fair! Is sanskar suffering from any disease? Or Dr call him? Or something of his bad past? Dear mystery of caller is still unrevealed! Not fair again! but your episode is awesome, specially their hug yar! It’ll really worth for specially when I read that night time, a sweet calmness is absorbed in my heart when I read this type of scene of your ff!
    Thanks again Kashis! And thanks to take my favor to reply (resembling of 50 shades of grey) thanks alot for everything dear! And waiting for next part! Which flaw is had by Sanskar! Actually I love the character, who has flaws as well as goodness! So im eagerly to know his new face…
    Good luck for your future dear and stay blessed

    1. thanks saba!! sanskar is getting the vibes of ur character.. so need to check the doctor soon.. otherwise it will turn into a havoc.. ha! ha! ha! nothing such dear… he is having some flaws with lots of goodness.. no evil like stuff… and I just said (50 shades of grey) what is truth…. I supported u as u deserve that. resemblance is something but u can’t take away the credit from the writer… coming to resemblance, so much novels are written that every other story is somewhat copy cat of any novel… that’s not a big deal???

    2. Yeah Kashis! You also right, I didn’t know that my story will has resemblance with any English novel! And yeah you’re right! Now I think I should visit the Dr also because he’s getting on my nerves(both your and my character of sanskar) but still I angry with you! Please yar reveal the mystery! Sooooooonnn! And stay blessed dear! Love you

      1. don’t angry with me dear.. I will reveal it today for sure… I love u too… don’t worry today also I give my comment in hate to love ff last.. ha!ha!! be irritated till then..

    3. Kashis dear im waiting for your comment on swasan

    4. Hahaha! Kashis!! Hate you but please update soon! And you know na I always wait for your comment! Well it’s ok!! I’ll make him more and more evil!! Hisab brabar!! Hahaha

      1. aannhhhh!!! then I will comment after 15 days… poor sanskar… I hate this girl for spoiling ur character… and I will create a twitter slogan #we love sanskar’s character.. hate Saba… ha! ha! nice na.

    5. Hahaha!! Then ill create slogan! I love Sanskar as an evil! Now you’re fulfilling the responsibility of evil to make me irritated!! Eyyyyeew!! Not fair ?

  10. Kashis I’m really upset with u!!! Coz i thought today mystery will open…!!!??
    Now,the way u starting ur ff is fabulous…compare of swara condition with candles is amazing…then flaws?? Pls open up in next part kashis I’m very impatient …!!!

    1. sorry leku dear!! I though to open up but u know prior to that u need to set plot for it… so the episode gets long and can’t open the surprise… the next episode surely u will get to know all the things…

      1. Its ok my friend!!! Will wait for ur ff …

    2. thanks leku for your understanding dear… happy to get a friend like u

  11. Amazing fiction

    1. thanks nidhi… being supportive to me…

  12. Each n evry tym ur ff juz kills me yaar especially swasan scenes n ya i hav gone crazy fr it so plz upload nxt epi soon as i juz cant handle my patience

    1. yup kirti… I will upload it soon…. thanks for such a praise dear…

  13. Hi kashis…how r u dear…and as always ur today’s episode is fab……keep going and update soon

    1. thanks ayesha I am fine.. do read next episode as it will be all about swasan.. and tell me ur demand gets fulfilled or not when I upload the next part. all the best for next paper.. and why for 3 months u r going to village.. is this winter vacation is so long?? I miss u

      1. Yes dear…actually i live in quetta (city of pakistan)which is a very hilly and cold place and so in many places of pakistan they give long winter and short summer vaccations….I will miss u too u know before I became very happy to hear that v r going to our village but now I am very sad bcz I had to leave u guys….u know the day I had started reading ff on telyupdates I am so attracted to it…

    2. ya ayesha I know the Quetta valley as this city is frequently occur in news as because of its location of pak-afghan border… also its very famous for orchard garden right….. yaar come to India one day and bring fruits for me…

      1. I can’t dear…but I promise I will stay connected with u…but plz u come to pakistan together we will visit my places and we will also visit many historic places and some beautiful sceneries…and u know quetta is really a nice place

  14. Hey kashis I enjoyed a lot….actually I missed the previous episode as I was out on a visit for my CLG project…but today I read both the episodes back to back n I just loved them….I know I would have said it many times but i’ll never get tired because u r worth it…I missed u r ff during that time but I m happy now after reading it..glad to have a friend n a wonderful writer like u…I m a very crazy reader n I have a huge collection …n trust me I m always touched by reading u r ff dear…be always happy

    1. thanks radhika..your words are such a honour for me. I m glad to have a reader like u. because without all of u I have no value of mine.. u are the guys who gave me so much love & praise for my ff.. thanks to me to have a friend like u…

  15. pls reveal mystry

    1. wait for the next part to know the mystery…

  16. swasan always rock… and u always made them tp rock.. tq again for this grand epi…. really nice…

    1. thanks sumi…. happy to hear from u…

      1. sry to*.. its nt tp..

    2. can u plz explain dear what ur statement means? unable to get u.

  17. No words.. Just wanna say is ff ne dil jeet liya☺

    1. thanks cheery… I think this must be ur first comment on my ff.. do support like this.

  18. Awww.. It was so good. Atleast in this we can see swasan together. LOL.

    1. thanks nik.. in my ff they are destined to be together.. so u can find them always supportive to each other..

  19. Wow… Amazing episode… Plz upload next episode soon… Am waiting..

    1. thanks bhuvi… I will update soon…

    1. Thanks surbhi..

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