SWARA and RAGINI- EK HI SIKKE KE DO PEHLU!!! (Episode 20)

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Sindhura dii : Thanks alot dii for your constant support……..Love you………..be happy……….
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Savi singh : thanks alot dear……….well My story is a bit different , to know how it completely is , you need to read my previous updates I suppose……..thanks alot again……..Love you……..be happy……….
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j. : thanks a lot dear , i am really sorry , have my schools and then the bunch of ffs I am handling , really sorry dear , recently I fell down from stairs , Leave it , I am fine now….lets talk about your guess later , Love you………be happy dear…….
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Blossom : thanks a lot dear , As I already told you my exams were superb……….got a good result as well……….My exams had got over just 1 day before yours……… what about your exams?? How were they?? No need for thanks for that dear , its my duty……….Love you………be happy………
Cutie (Sinzo) : don’t dare ask such questions like did you remember me from next time haan……..How can I forget my cutie……??? just tell me can you forget me even after 2 months of these delays??? No sorry’s allowed na……….friendship mein no sorry , thank you can work but no sorry haan……… thanks alot dear , Now updated dil kid or a few days ago , hopefully you read it……….I am really feeling bad to leave you waiting but what to do , My studies you know , a few days ago fell down from stairs and I hurt myself……..barely able to write now……but leave that…lets see if your guess is right………thanks alot dear , love you ………be happy……….
Lisa : yup our poor Ragini , well I haven’t disclosed it yet , it will come with the stories flow………..thanks a lot for your support……Love you………..be happy………
Meghu dido: I am to back but where are you now??? I am missing you…….thanks a lot for such a beautiful comment………….love you my dido……..come back soon na…………be happy………..
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Mallika dii : First of all to I am really sorry dii for making you cry by my Ragini analysis , really sorry………..I never intended that……just wrote my feelings , I have posted next part of Ragini analysis as well , do check it out but please don’t cry……………I feel sad when someone cries because of me so I am really sorry……….and di don’t worry your confusions will be solved soon…………you’ll know it soon…….thanks a lot for your soooooooooo soo soo much support……….Love you………be happy………

Alright , so before starting I am getting mad to write something which is really important :
After putting Simar on stake , Making Gopi a murderer and throwing her out of her own house just for doing good, Making Simar and Sarojini reach those bad type of places , trying to prove Santoshi a pr*******e , showing Meera’s CHEER HARAN , throwing Simar as well out of the house , Now RS production is ready to show Swara dancing in her OWN HOUSE , and I seriously mean it , in her own house , how many times have that durgprasad lost his property and everytime its swara who has got it back to him…….I mean , indirectly the whole property is her’s na……
I can’t speak more , you all can easily understand what I mean , thats the reason why I want swaragini to go off air.
Secondly , I don’t watch these shows , only through those high alert promos and sbs segments I got to know about these things so don’t think I watch them. This was just my frustration which I wanted to right somewhere and here it was , Now I want to say that In past days i wrote two analysis on change in Ragini’s character , you all can read them if you wish and also I have posted its next part.
Now another thing…hayee Piyali start the episode dude or have you all already scrolled down……… ;P what I was saying was that as today is the 20th episode and I had promised my special reader Blossom that I will write a quiz for the ff before 25th episode (I usually do it on 25th episode) so I will write it today but as I have spoken a lot till now so quiz will be after the episode….the episode would be as long as I can write , Lets start :

Ragini enters SM’S cabin, she stares at SM who was sitting , his back turned to her.
“ May I come in Sir ?” Ragini asked mustering up courage to say this one sentence of 5 words, with a smile.
“ Come in….” SM said without turning.
Ragini started walking towards him , fear rising in her body , she didn’t knew why but she was almost shivering due to fear.
She was walking slowly , the silence in the atmosphere seemed to be pierced by the noise of her sandles.
“ Can ‘t you walk faster..??” SM said a bit of anger in his voice.
Ragini’s smile vanished as she started almost running towards him.
She hurriedly came in front of him and in hurry her leg got twirled as she almost fell down when she handled herself taking the support of the desk.
She looked towards SM as her hand was still on table , he stared at her with his boiling eyes when she suddenly lifted her hand realizing the reason for his anger.
“ Alright , enough of non sense I suppose….”
Ragini bit her tongue and then nodded in a “ Yes”
SM stared at her and then shaked his head in a way he was dealing with a child.
Ragini had a small smile climb up her lips as she was looking at him.
“ So first of all , do you even know how to write? “
“ Yes Sir…………………….” Ragini said slowly lowering her eyelashes.
“I am gonna work on a new story from tomorrow……” Before he could complete he heard a “ Wow…..” from her mouth , he again stared at her and the smile which started to come again disappeared.
“ Sorry sir….”

“ Yes , so I was saying that I am gonna work on a new story from tomorrow and I want some information for that…. It is basically related to prison and all…so I need you to study about a jail and its working and some data’s of criminals and make notes……” SM was saying as Ragini was listening , her eyes pasted on him.
He turned up his eyes only to find her staring at her.
“ Alright Ms. Ragini…..this was your name….. Right??” SM said staring at her eyes.
She nodded in a “ Yes” Still staring at him and then started to walk.
“ Oh Hello , files….” SM said as he saw her going.
“ Which files sir…????” Ragini turned.
“ All the record files , here they are , you need to study THEM and make notes…” SM said picking up almost 20 thick files.
Ragini stared at the bundle from top to SM’s hand and blinked her eyes.
“ I have to read them by tomorrow sir???” She asked innocently while this time SM nodded in a “ Yes” in a similar way as Ragini was doing before.
He gives her the files in her hands and due to the load the files were about to fall from her hands when SM held her hand from below to handle them.
He was staring at the files while Ragini’s eyeballs were moved to his face due to this sudden movement.
SM tried to hold the files more comfortably while Ragini kept staring at him , a smile occupying her lips.
“ His face was like a maze to get lost into…” the phrase completed suited Ragini as everytime she looked into that face , she wished to forget the world and only stare at that face………..his face.

SM suddenly turned his face to her , her eyes lost the twinkle and lips lost the smile he minute he turned.
He looked at her with another rude of his looks and took up the files in his own hands.
He then indicated her to take the files , Ragini hurried to handle the files , this time with care but another time her gentle hands couldn’t handle the files.
“ Wait , I’ll take them……….” SM said as she was about to try again to hold them.
“ But sir………………………………………..” Before she could complete , he stared at her with his angry eyes and she nodded in “ OK” without speaking a word next.
She started moving behind him as he moved in front , “ By the way sir…….why to read files , I can search internet na……we will get much more information………” Ragini asked coming back to her Ragini form as they were walking.
SM stopped for a while and then turned to her , “ you’ll do the way I tell you to do ……….don’t question me….” Ragini nodded in a “ Yes” again , seeing his face while SM turned and continued walking.
As they reached an empty desk , SM kept the files , “ This is your desk for next 6 months of internship under me………………….and yaa , as soon as other interns arrive let me know……..” SM said in a go and started to walk back when Ragini suddenly asked from back “ Sir , don’t you smile……… I am sure you’ll look good while smiling????”
“ Arrey yaar Swara , why are you crying………….you know you look very good smiling………..” The words echoed in SM’s ear as he heard Ragini’s words.
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Alright , so here goes my quiz, please try to take a bit of time to answer it if you are reading:
WHAT DO YOU THINK ABOUT MY FF???
• VERY NICE
• GOOD
• AVERAGE
• YOU WANNA THROW EGGS ON ME FOR THIS PEICE OF WRITING
Please honest answer….
WHO DO YOU LIKE MORE AMONG MAIN LEADS???
A) SWARA
B) RAGINI
C) SANSKAR
D) SM
(though they both are same but characteristics are different na)
WHO DO YOU LIKE MOST AMONG THE SUPPORTING CHARACTERS??
ARE YOU A SWASAN FAN OR A RAGSAN FAN????
WHAT DO YOU LOVE IN MY FF???
WHAT DO YOU HATE IN MY FF???
GRADE MY STORY (O TO 5 , O BEING THE WORST , 5 BEING THE BEST)
AN HONEST SENTENCE FOR THE CHARACTER OF SM UFF SANSKAR?
A REVIEW OF SWARA’S CHARATER?
SOMETHING ABOUT RAGINI?
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So 10 questions, if you have time then please answer …………please….
Well another question (not a part of the quiz) Some words about the writer of the ff…………………….this is the biggest pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee………………………

11 comments

  1. lovely

    I like ragini character in your ff and loved to read ragsan scenes

    Ragini live for an is amazing the way she dreams about him and the way she can sense his pain is cute

  2. Ashmore

    Amazing
    I like ragini ‘ s character ☺
    I am a swasan fan but love ragsan too .
    It’s very nice 😊
    I love the way you portrait our main leads character .
    I don’t hate anything in your ff.
    And for me 5/5 yaar.
    SM is heartbroken that’s why he is this much rude otherwise he is good .

  3. Fairy

    |Registered Member

    Fabulous update dear!!!!!hehehehe ragini is cho chueeeet,bechara SM 😛 …..loved d update dr…keeep rockng n stay blesssed😄😄😄😄😄
    *ur ff is very nyc+good=very good😄
    *ofcourse i love ragini😄😄😄
    *m a ragini fan so directly or indirectly a ragsan fan😄
    *ur each update is worth readng….n i loved d wy u describe each n every charecter n d way u write reallly impressess me😄😄😄
    *ahh!!plz dere is nthng to hate yaaar!!
    *sry dr bt i really dnt rate ny stories!!!
    *ragini is such suchuch a cucute charecter!!!i loved way u have potrayed her!!!!loved her to d core!!!😄😄😄

    Hmmm!!about d writer😊😊😊 wt to say!!!u r such a finest writer..no doubt on ur writtng skill,,,coz v all know u r a fab. Writer😄😄 u reallly entertain us…ur all stories r worth readng….love u dr..keeep shinning rockng n stay blesssed😄😄😆😆😉😉😇😇😊😀tc

  4. lisa

    i like ur ff
    love ragini big fan of her
    dont hate any1 except u b/c itne dino k baad itna chota sa update kia

  5. Ragz_teju

    |Registered Member

    I read all the parts in a one go… it’s interesting dear… I like ragini character most not because i am her fan but because even after knowing that her love may not be hers she is loving him and wanted to bring back his happiness.. so I love ragini character for her selfless love…I like Swara and Sanskar cute love story… even sm is good he don’t want to hurt ragini because of loving him… overall it’s good to read this ff… I mostly read ragsan ff but if I like the story then I will read swasan too…
    5/5… I really like your writing style dear… I used to follow your dil ki dor…

  6. Blossom

    Hi Piya back after a looooooooooooooong time. my exams were also good. nice to read ur work after a long time.
    QUIZ
    1)very nice
    2)Ragini and I also like swara
    I am basically a ragini fan. so mostly raglak nd ragsan ff. But I also like swasan they r also cute.
    4) I love ur basic plot (swasan book love story nd ragsan present love story)
    5)I sometimes get irritated by ur irregularity (sry if u r hurt)
    6)4
    7)I feel SM character is a bit complicated
    8)Swara is bubbly nd cute
    9)Ragini ‘s love for ST is pure nd selfless
    Well the writer of the ff is soooooooo swwwwwwweeeeeet. I love the way u respect ur readers.And tq for preponing the quiz coz of me. Feeling so happy. And yaa what u told starting is correct. Not only these serials all the serials r irritating. These producers always show evil winning nd good losing. But Swaragini is better (note: better not good) . The serial KUMKUM BHAGYA needed to b given a grand prize for making evil win. AND sry I guess I spoke a bit too much. anyways Pls update often bye!!!!!

  7. Silent_writer

    |Registered Member

    Woooow finakly u r back loved it plz updateeee soon dear love ur ff

    This chappy was amazinggg n i love ragini in ur ff n i m ragsan but love swasan too n about story i loveee the way u starts in a story of swasan n lovee sm bcz he is living in memories of swara n love ragini bcz she loves SM its sooo pure whether he love her or not n i dnt hate it i love it n about rating so i will go for 10 not 5 cuz its outstanding n uniquee 😘😘😘😘

  8. Jazzy

    |Registered Member

    OK ur 10/questions i will answer
    1 u ff is excellent so very nice
    2 ragini of course
    3 hmm among them I like ragini’ s frnd and ragini’s small rabbit I think it was rabbit
    4 I m a ragini fan so ragsan and raglak fan (more ragsan)
    5 I like ragini’s craziness about sm in ur ff
    6 hmmm this one is tough everything is good but the updates r really toooooo laaateee
    7 I’ll give u 4 if u want 5 then update little faster heheheheh
    8 I think he is quite rude towards ragini she is solo sweet
    9 I don’t like her much soo no comments
    10 and about ragini she is such a cutiepie
    And about the last ques the out of syllabus ques hahahaha u r soooo sweet I just love u for ur amazing stories

  9. Akshata

    |Registered Member

    its awesome update.poor SM.
    coming to your questions
    i loved it so much. sometimes i never comment but i never missed ur update.
    i love ragini so much
    i like ragini’s frnd…. sorry i forgot her name.
    i love ragini so i am ragsan fan or related to ragini i love everything.
    everything…. this is really different concept, loved ragini’s dreams.
    nothing yaar, every writer has their own quality.
    i agree with fairy, i cant grade your story but i love it so much.
    i like him i mean sanskar. Sm is little snob but he will reform very soon.
    ragini is such a sweetheart.
    about write, very irregular, make me wait so long, i was missing this story. but to be honest you are the finest write and portrayed every character beautifully.

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