Swara ka Sanskar!!Mind it!(swasan os) Beginning by Mars

Hellooooo guys!!! This is mars again to disturb u all.Here I m with one shot on (yarr meri story mai couple btane ki zarutat hai?nahi na) Ofcouse SWASAN
actually I was going through my posts and realized that it has been one month since I joined telly updates.I m really blessed to have such lovely friends here.lovvvvvve yoooouuuuu all and thanks for your support. So celebrating my one month on telly updates here I present an story for all my friends and lovely readers as a token of thanks.
Coming to story, this is something different type of story and just for fun.
I tried to show horror first time now if it comes out to be funny then sorry.
Plzzz darr Jana as it is horror story hehe.

Haye meri bak bak ok moving on
Let’s begin

Swara ka Sanskar!!Mind it!(swasan os)
SHIMLA(Himachal Pradesh):
It is dusty evening with dark clouds spread all above the blue moon hotel indicating that soon it’s going to rain.The place seems to be lonely as this hotel is located on the outskirt of shimla in the lap of the hills.Then only a luxurious car stops in front of the hotel.
Driver comes out and opened the door
A young handsome man comes out and moves towards other side of the car and opened the door extending his hand.There comes beautiful Angel out keeping her palm on the man’s hand.The heavenly couple moves toward the entrance of the hotel hand in hand. The couple is swasan (aur heavenly couple kaun hoga???)
Swasan went to reception and Sanskar said” Mr and Mrs Sanskar Maheshwari booking is done” he smiles at his gorgeous wife swara “let me check sir”replied receptionist.”sure” said sanskar looking around the hall.”Hotel is marvelous” Sanskar whispers in swara’s ear. “After all choice is mine”she replied ” so what! u r also mine” said Sanskar making swara blush.”Sir Room no. 405 honeymoon suit” told receptionist breaking their lovely moments.” Thank you” said Sanskar taking keys from her ” hope u like our hospitality” said receptionist while swasan just smiled back.
Swasan left to lift and then went to fourth floor.

Room No. 405:
Sanskar opened the lock and swasan entered inside.Sanskar closed the door while swara looked at the room which is beautifully decorated as it is honeymoon suit.Then only she felt two strong hands around her bare belly under her saree. Swara closed her eyes feeling his touch. A shiver went through her body listening Sanskar’s word ” finally we are here on our honeymoon sweetheart all alone” Sanskar whispers nuzzling his face in her neck.Swara is breathing heavily while Sanskar got busy in kissing her milky neck.But then only there was knock on the door. Sanskar made irritated face while swara giggles.So Sanskar went to open the door and swara sit on the bed.When Sanskar opened the door he saw staff boy standing with two bags ” sir your luggage” said the boy pointing to the bags.” keep there” Sanskar replied showing him to put near couch.The boy kept the luggage and left.Sanskar closed the door and saw swara sitting on bed busy in her phone.Sanskar came and sit beside her.

“firstly let’s fresh up then we will have our dinner” said sanskar keeping his arm around her shoulder.Swara looked at him” first u fresh up” Sanskar nodded and after taking clothes from bag left to washroom. Swara heard thundering sound from outside so she went to balcony to see the rainfall.She stood at the railing and was enjoying the beauty of nature.The surrounding was very calm and peaceful without any hustle bustle.It had already started raining.She was not getting wet as the balcony has roof.Looking around her sight caught the dim light coming from the woods in front of hotel.As it was all dark except few lights which were on in hotel.She felt like few rays of light were coming penetrating the pitch dark forest which was in front of hotel.The curiosity to know from where the light is coming increases in her.When the light flashes in the dark sky due to thunderstorm swara was successful in seeing the small cottage in which that light was there.” who must be living here??” she mumble looking at the cottage. Brushing away her thoughts she took deep breathe and saw the garden view of hotel which was brightened with multiple coloured artificial lights. Seeing this decoration she remembered her proposal day when Sanskar proposed her. A smile creapt on her lips reminiscencing that day.

Swara’s POV
Today I m here with my soulmate cum best friend on our honeymoon (slightly blushes). It has been almost 5 years since we were in relation but we were knowing each other from school time.We were in same class and used to fight alot.As the time passes we become mature so our fights decreased and even we talk less with each other may be bcoz of awkwardness due to being teenagers.Our parents are family friends and they do all things together of us and we got admitted in same college.Slowing we became friends and our closeness increases bcoz when my parents were not at home they leave me at sanskar’s house and same goes with him.We realized our love in third year of graduation but due hesitation none of us confessed.But when at last year of our graduation we were going to leave each other then we confessed our love since then we were in relation.Our happiness has no bound when last year our parents decided that gododia and maheshwari companies will merge and they want us to get married.Finally after six months we got married with all rituals.After marriage I and sanskar got busy in companies work as they were recently merged and even didn’t consummated our marriage bcoz we want to become one in special way. But our parents asked us to spend some time alone.

Now after six month of our marriage we are here on our honeymoon. All family members suggested that we should go out of India but I and sanskar firstly want to explore India then other countries.It was Sanskar’s choice to come to shimla while hotel I choosed. Life is soo beautiful with him.

Swara’s POV ends
Sanskar came from washroom and saw swara lost in thoughts so he went near her and back hugged her.Swara came to senses.” where are u lost” asked Sanskar pulling her closer. Swara shook her head in no.” I will get fresh up” she told coming out of his grip” okay” said Sanskar.Both moved towards room.Swara went to washroom while Sanskar got busy in ordering dinner.
After dinner Swasan are sitting on bed with Sanskar lying with the support of bed back and swara on his chest. They were talking normal things.Later Sanskar realized swara is not responding and when he saw her she was asleep.Sanskar smiles and made her lie properly on bed, kissed her forehead and took her in his embrace and slept.

Swara is sleeping but then only she felt like someone jerked her so she opened her eyes and looked at Sanskar but to her surprise he was not there. She thought where he went at this time. But then only one paper caught her attention which was lying on the bed where Sanskar was sleeping.She picked it up and saw that something was written with red colour.She held it properly and read ” Swara come to the cottage in front of hotel I m waiting….Sanskar” she got confused reading it as why Sanskar would call her at that place and that too at midnight.She stepped down from bed and saw through window that it was raining heavily with huge thunderstorm. She was scared only to look at it then how she will go out.She went to balcony and saw the cottage where again light was there but now it is brighter.” may be Sanskar wants to surprise me” she thought looking at cottage behind the woods.She started pacing here and there in dilemma whether to go or not.Then she remembered about Sanskar and got courage” Sanskar will be there only I should go when he had called me” she mumble and left that paper in balcony and went inside.Due to rain water falling,the paper got wet and all red colour From paper spread in balcony.

Inside the room Swara took shawl, umbrella and torch and left the room.
Swara came down and saw few people of the hotel are there may be those who have night duty.But she didn’t pay attention to them and move out.She covered shawl around her and opened the umbrella and onn the torch. She reached at the gate of the hotel.Watchman was not there as it’s heavily raining.She stood at the gate thinking once again whether to go or not. then she thought I have to bring Sanskar also back so she decided to go and mumble” let me meet him once then I will take his class who do all these things at midnight” blabbering all this she crossed the road and enter inside the forest.It was pitch dark only some light of her torch was showing her path.The flattering sound of leaves and rain was accelerating her heart beat.she was hell scared to see this horrible view but for her Sanskar she has to go.She keep on moving towards the cottage. Her throat was dried though it was raining out.

She was shivering bcoz of fear.Her heart was saying that sanskar can never do something like this as he knew she is scared but her mind overpower heart and said may be he want to do something special for her. Fighting with her thoughts she keep on moving.There was animal’s voice echoing in the forest.She only knew how much frightened she is.After waking for some time she spotted the cottage.The light inside the cottage was decreasing.

She signed in relief that finally after horrible journey she reached her destination. She Went to the door of the small cottage and find it fully open.She directed the torch inside as the light was feebly glowing. Gulping her saliva and wetting her throat she spoke” sanss….kar” hardly any voice was coming out from her vocal cord.She entered inside and took deep breathe and once again said but little loudly” Sanskar u r there?” Getting no response she scanned the torch in the whole cottage.She saw that there were nothing much inside it, some blood spots on the floor and walls.At a corner there was hay spread on which white skeleton was kept.She got scared seeing this view.she was breathing heavily. She saw properly that there were certain things present infront of skeleton like as if someone was worshiping it.

The next sight which her eyes caught was a figure standing near the small window of cottage.The back of the humanly figure was visible to her. In seeing all these she forgot that she was here for Sanskar. Gaining little courage she asked” who are u?” It doesn’t took time for Swara to know that the figure in front of her is the lady of probably her age.The lady was wrapped in pure white saree with her long hairs floating in the air due to wind.

Swara on getting no response again said” excuse me” The lady turned showing her fair face blue eyes towards her.Swara give horrified look seeing her, only one word escaped from her mouth
“KAVITA”. The torch fell from her hand in shock. Kavita went close to her but Swara moved back.” So still u recognized me ….good” there comes kavita’s heavy voice.”u di…ed in acc…ident na” Swara asked stammering don’t want to accept what her eyes were seeing.kavita stood in front of swara and trace her long pointed nail from her forehead to chin” then who said I m alive” her sentence horrified Swara” matlab” Swara said with great difficulty.” I m dead only” registerering her words swara spoke” u are chudail??”

(Think whomever u want to give this title of chudail like I m thinking. hehe)
” not chudail but female ghost” kavita said getting annoyed.” It’s same only” Swara replied.” Just shut up” kavita roared while Swara jumped in fear.
” don’t u want to know where is Sanskar?” Kavita continued.It was then when swara remembered that why she came here.” U know where is my sanskar” swara asked with hope.Kavita started laughing confusing Swara.
” he is no more yours” said kavita controlling her horrible laugh.” What are u saying” swara asked being scared.

” what u listened” kavita replied with smirk on her face.” Plzz tell where is Sanskar” swara pleaded.” Okay fine see him for the last time” kavita said feeling pity.Just the thought of meeting Sanskar last time took swara’s life several times. ” come with me” kavita said moving towards door.Swara blankly followed her.After walking swara and kavita reached near a small shed where a man is lying on the floor in the pool of blood.Getting the clear view of the person swara started sweating.She don’t know how to react as the sight she never want to see is in front of her.she shouted” sanskarrr” and ran to him.she started jerking him hardly but he was lifeless.

she started crying bitterly and speak in between her cries” sanskar plzz get up see I came u called me.” But Alas! no response from him.Swara looked at kavita who was standing like as if she care.swara shouts”what u have done to my sanskar” again jerk him and pleading” plzz open your eyes”.Kavita comes near in her and said dangerously” she is no more yours but I will make him mine soon. Now I killed him then we will meet in heaven” she started laughing.” He is mine and why u want him” swara asked pointing her finger at kavita.” Bcoz I love him since college time” replied kavita shocking Swara.” I came to shimla for some work and after going from here I was going to confess my love but unfortunately I died and since then my soul is wandering here in search of my love.Finally u both came here and soon I will get him” said kavita.Swara give disgusted look to her and said” but u were knowing we love each other” kavita said carelessly” I don’t care. Now move aside.”she pushed swara aside. Swara’s eyes were getting heavy and she was feeling dizzy.But with great difficulty she saw kavita going with Sanskar’s soul away from her. Her head start spinning. She looked at the place where sanskar’s body was laying but didn’t find that too.Now it became difficult for her to remain conscious. She closed her eyes and mumble” u r mine Sanskar” and finally fainted.


If u want to know further then wait for climax but will only give if u all want.
Tell me whether u liked it or not.
I know it’s unrealistic and I don’t was to hurt anyone its just for entertainment.
Plzzzz leave your feedback if u really want climax.
Thank you
Take care.


  1. Sumayyah


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    Marsuu k bachhi kya suspense hey yaar climax shilamix Jan nikal dii tum ne meri ab wait kerna pare ga
    jldi se next part
    it was so horrible but you described it flawlessly
    amazing COME soon

  2. Mannu

    Bhootiya story πŸ‘»πŸ‘»πŸ‘»πŸ‘»πŸ‘»πŸ‘»πŸ‘»πŸ˜±πŸ˜±πŸ˜±πŸ˜±πŸ˜±πŸ˜±πŸ˜±at last😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒but it is😊😊😊😊😊

  3. Khusb002309


    |Registered Member

    This is not fair Mars……. Kaha latka dia yaaar……. But 1 thing I must say day by day I am falling in love with your stories……. Do continue soon……

  4. Vidhi

    First when in the intro u told that u may find funny I thought that maybe I can really find it funny… Bt trust me it was not….
    Like that scene when she was going through forest…. OMG… Bcoz of ur writing… It was scary….
    N ya I wanna knw the climax….
    Plz update soon dear…
    Waiting ❀❀❀

  5. neeti

    HI something different, I love to read your stories,,pls always make sure to have you name beside the story.

    R u writing a story for the competition

  6. Lovely reethi

    Wow… Awesome…. Shocking….scary… Interesting… Everything… I think it’s all Swaras dream…. Hope so😯😯😯😯…will be waiting for climax…. Plz post soon

  7. Scooby


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    Superb… Dont tell me it was nightmareπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
    U left in cliffhanger 😞😞
    Chudail πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ i know who is she and whom i want her as😜 hifi mars😜

    Post nxt part soon😊😊

    • Mars



      Thank you so much dear and yup only one person is perfect for chudail in swasan life and she is………tujhe pta hai yaarrrr HiFi.
      I will give climax soon.

  8. Pramudi


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    I want to know the climax dear. This is amazing & scary. For me not much funny as you mentioned. πŸ˜₯
    And about chudail, i know someone more suitable in it & imagine that person as chudail.😜
    Waiting for the nxt part.

    • Mars



      Thank you so much dear and I know for chudail other person is perfect rather than cavity but then I don’t want to even include her in my story and spoil it.vase tho hamme pta hi hai original chudail kaun hai haha
      I will post climax soon

  9. ashwini

    Superb awesome yrr… & chudel Kavita πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ #SwaSan honeymoon πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆye to show me bhi nhi mila tha …. I want to know ki aage k hota h.. Plz next part post soon… Nd Ya ur all SwaSan ff os r outstanding I love ur writing skills yrr 😘😘😘😘😘

  10. Gayathri.visu


    |Registered Member

    Firstly congratulations dear for completing one month in TU.

    Hey, in which angle this story is funny for u? Its scary dear! Plzzzz tell me that this is Swara’s dream!! Mars, I m also know one person who is perfect to be called as Chudail….u also know that person’s name right? Eagerly waiting for climax dear… PLZ UPDATE ASAP. And mention ur name on the title of ur all stories.

    • Mars



      Thank you so much dear and chudail is nagini only for mee ever.I try to mention my name with my story dear and I will post climax soon.

  11. Neptune


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    marsuuuuuuuuuuuuu yaar cheater i hate you ahhaahhhhaahhh mummy you left it in cliffhanger now please please please post the next one soon pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee..

    and chuldail [hmm evil grin] you know who suits best for it.. huh don’t need to tell further well lets not speak any thing low about her as they are doing for helly don’t know why they are bashing her and telling her award as charity. do you know something about this topic if so then please tell me, they are bashing helly n her fans soooooooo badly i was really shocked seeing their hatred for her.

    • Mars



      Awwww baby don’t cry I will post soon.
      Yup they are jealous souls can’t tolerate our helly baby’s success. Let them console themself by bashing but we know our helly Darling is best and well deserving.And these people are saying helly got award bcoz of charity but it’s on the basis of voting. And their favourite ko tho kuch charity ka b nahi mila lol…….just ignore them and make them Mr India haha and love helly bcoz she was, is and will always be the bestesttt.
      Thank you Neptune dear.

      • Neptune


        |Registered Member

        thanks mars for the explanation but i guess even tejaswi has got an award of shining eyes i don’t know the reason of their bashing but never mind..

        and ha i will post wurmudrm soon till then you can read her pain i have posted it…

  12. Vyshu10


    |Registered Member

    😭😭😭😭😩😩😩 U know i m scared of horror stories…but still somehow i managed to read. And u left wid cliffhanger😫😫😫 cheating

  13. Arshaanya


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    Wat u let it wid cliffhanger πŸ˜’πŸ˜’…
    Post next part ASAP
    πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ u also knw whuz chudail for swasan fanz πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

  14. Divyarani

    y do I feel it is swara’s any horror dreamπŸ‘»πŸ˜ˆ
    it’s just my guessπŸ˜›πŸ™ˆ
    BTW i loved it marrsβ€πŸ’ƒ

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