SWARA aur SANSKAR ki ek PREM KAHANI (one shot)

Hey guys , its just an idea that came and i thought to develop it into one shot , it is a swasan one shot where laksh, ragini just have a short role……………………
So here it goes:
In a school:
A girl is seen wearing a saree and training a few children in kathak.
Her moves are as if she’s a trained dancer.
Her face is revealed to be swara.
Suddenly she’s about to fall when someone holds her,she eyes the person and stands up and says angrily : yaar , this saree………………………i hate saree abhimanyu………………….
The boy’s face is revealed(you can imagine him to be mishkat verma) and he says : yaar swara , then who told you to wear this saree……………
Swara eyes him and says : who gave me this???

Abhimanyu bites his tongue and says : oh………………i know jeans under saree………………..
Swara laughs and says : you know………………….swara is always different……….
Abhimanyu smiles and says : yaa…………….
He too laughs………..

After some time :
Swara and abhimanyu are walking in corridor and swara says : yaar , you know how much tensed i am……………………..this is the girls first performance after being trained by me……………………i am really tensed yaar…………………
Abhimanyu stops and faces her and says : oh, your girls will surely rock…………………..
Swara replies : oh yaa, actually where’s your girl???? Ragini………………
Abhimanyu thinks : yaar swara , ragini is just my best friend but i love you…………………..
Swara eyes him lost in thinking and says : yaaar , where are you lost……………………where’s ragini???
Abhimanyu smiles and says : she’s coming…………………
Swara was about to say something but she sees someone and freezes………………
Abhimanyu eyes her , her face turned red , she is totally freezed ….
Abhimanyu : swara….swara………….
But she’s not responding, he tries shaking her but no use…
Swara suddenly runs somewhere crying.

Abhimanyu follows her to a room.
He sees her crying and says : swara……what happened ……………..why are you crying??
Swara says crying : abhimanyu…………………..sanskar………………….how can he come here……………………i am not able to understand…………………..how he’s able to come……………….does he know about me………………..i’ll not go out……………………….if he sees me……………………..
Abhimanyu hugs her and says : swara no…………………..you will have to come…………………swara……………….why to worry about that person who doesn’t care about you…………………..swara you have to come…………….
Swara breaks the hug and nods in no while crying .
Abhimanyu : swara………………………………we have to show him how happy you are………………………….you are so happy in life…………………………you have to show him……………
Swara eyes him questionably while he shows her a box of vermilion..
Abhimanyu : just for today,………………..act as my wife…………………………
Swara nods while trying to be confident.
They both then come out while on the way a girl calls swara.
Swara trying to smile : yaa speak……………..
The child : di, how to do that step.
she tries to show her but she’s not able to.
Swara smiles and shows her the step.
Sanskar sees her and is shocked .
He goes from there .
After some time:

Swara gets a chit to go to storeroom .
She goes there and sees sanskar.
She eyes him shocked with tears in her eyes which are not flowing down.
She tries to run but sanskar holds her hand from back.
He pulls her towards him and pins her to the wall.
Swara almost crying : leave me , who are you, leave me…..
Sanskar holds her waist and pulls her closer and says : if you even think to answer wrong , i don’t know what i’ll do………………….just tell me your name………………….
Swara shouts : swara…………………………..swara gadodia………………..
Sanskar is shocked and eyes her while swara eyes him crying , they both remember the flashback of 1 year back while humari adhuri kahani plays in background.
Flash back:
In a village type of place:
Swara to laksh smiling and laughing and cicking photographs of a building: laksh , you know swara, the reporter, this haveli is so beautiful , i’ll popularize it so much , you’ll see, seriously its so big…………………i just loved it……………………(they are in a village)
She laughs.

Laksh takes her camara from her hand and starts running.
Swara smiling : laksh….laksh..
She starts running behind him when suddenly she’s about to step on a nail..
Someone pulls her back and she sees the face , the person is sanskar, he is holding her by waist, they both eye each other nervously.
Paas aaye..
Dooriyaan phir bhi kam naa hui
Ek adhuri si hamari kahani rahi
Aasmaan ko zameen, ye zaroori nahi
Jaa mile.. jaa mile..
Ishq saccha wahi
Jisko milti nahi manzilein.. manzilein..

sanskar leaves her and says : sorry , there was a nail….
swara nods tensed while laksh calls her on terrace.
She runs up and sees the terrace decorated.
Swara confused : whats this laksh???
Laksh kneels down and says : swara…………………..you loved this haveli na………………………….so live here forever…………………………..will you marry me…………………….our studies are also over………………….
Swara eyes him confused and as he is about to put a ring in her hand , she pulls back her hand.
Swara angrily : what are you saying laksh…………………….we are just friends………………….how can you even think this………………….

She runs from there almost in crying state while sanskar who is hiding and listening their conversation cries .
Swara who is running down the stairs thinks : i don’t love you laksh because i love…………..
She suddenly feels someone trying to hold her wrist. She turns and is shocked to see sanskar
Rang thhe, noor tha
Jab kareeb tu tha
Ek jannat sa tha, yeh jahaan
Waqt ki ret pe kuch mere naam sa
Likh ke chhod gaya tu kahaan
Hamari adhuri kahani..
Hamari adhuri kahani.. (x2)
Swara angrily while almost crying : sanskar , leave my hand………………….i said leave……………
Sanskar drags her down the stairs and then to a room outside the haveli.
Swara angrily : sanskar, what are you doing………………leave me…………………
Sanskar closes the door and says holding her shoulder : marry laksh………………
Swara eyes him and says : just shut up……………….how can i marry laksh when…………………(she stops and then) i will never marry him……………….never…………………

Sanskar throws her on bed and puts a chloroform filled handkerchief on her mouth.
She dozes of while he eyes her crying.
Sanskar thinks : i am sorry swara……….
He tries to go from there when swara being unconscious holds his hand and he gets pulled on her.
Khushbuon se teri yunhi takra gaye
Chalte chalte dekho na hum kahaan aa gaye
Jannatein agar yahin
Tu dikhe kyon nahin
Chaand suraj sabhi hai yahaan
Intezar tera sadiyon se kar raha
Pyaasi baithi hai kab se yahaan
Humari adhoori kahaani

Humari adhoori kahaani.. (x2)
He gets up crying and leaves.
After few days :
Swara wakes up and finds herself in a place, she eyes the surrounding and then abhimanyu in front of her.
Swara tensed : where i am??
Abhimanyu hands her a coffee cup and says : i am a police officer , i found you in a ship that we raided and girls were being exported for human trafficking to dubai, we saved you but you were unconscious so i took you to my house……………
Swara remembers everything and thinks : sanskar………………….
She cries while sanskar says to his father : where she?? You told me that if i separate her from this haveli and laksh’s life then you’ll leave her , where ‘s she………………
His father , an influential politician : she’s safe , i am happy with you…………………now you go……………….
He goes and cries in his room.

Pyaas ka ye safar khatam ho jayega
Kuch adhura sa jo tha poora ho jayega
Jhuk gaya aasmaan
Mill gaye do jahaan
Har taraf hai milan ka samaa
Doliya hain saji, khushbuein har kahin
Padhne aaya Khuda khud yahaan..
Hamari adhuri kahani

Hamari adhuri kahani.. (x2)
They both come out of flashback while swara gives a big push to sanskar and says crying : you………………i loved you like a mad…………………..and you……………..you sold me……………………….
She cries and goes from there while sanskar was about to come but she locks the door from outside.
She was about to go but she sees laksh who is shocked to see her and says : swara………………….you left me………………………………………………you….you………………
He cries holding her while she tries to free herself, suddenly she sees the store room catching fire .
Swara sees that and angrily frees herself from laksh ‘clutches and runs towards the store room.
Laksh shouts : swara…………………….
As he sees her entering the almost burnt room.
The fire alarm had been on and abhimanyu runs to find swara.
He sees laksh standing there sweating and shouts : hello……………………….come out…………………………..
He runs to laksh and say : what are you doing??
Laksh stands there num and says : swara……………….

He breaks down crying.
Inside the store room :
Swara to sanskar : come out………………………
Sanskar nods in no and says : you go…………………
Swara nods in no and runs to him , sanskar feels dizzy and almost falls down due to smoke.
Swara holds him in her lap and says crying : why you did this , why …………………………………….???
She cries holding him while he says while coughing badly: swara , please go………………..go………..
Swara eyes him and says : i’ll go but just once……………..just once tell me everything or let me burn here with you……………

Sanskar keeps a hand on her mouth and says : swara , you know na bauji is a big politician , he is a corrupt person and i never helped him in his business , he always forced me but i never did………………………….then when i came to your collage to visit laksh , i saw you , i fell for you ,just you……………………papa came to know that through one of his man keeping eye on me………………….he forced me to join his corrupt business , i did it for your sake……………………………..when you came to our house with laksh and laksh proposed you , you refused …………………..but laksh………………….everyone knows that he would have convinced you anyhow and thats why papa forced me to show laksh that you and i are in an affair and i made you unconscious and clicked some pictures of ours………………you know i thought to make you run with laksh but you were not ready to marry laksh…………………………i showed them to laksh …………………he was heartbroken……………………. bauji promised me that he’ll send you back to your home safe but i didn’t knew that he sold you…………………………………..why he did this……………..just because he felt that you were not of our standards…………………i am sorry i spoiled your life because of me………………………………..i am sorry…………………………..swa…….swara……………….


He gets unconscious saying this while swara shouts crying : sanskar…………………………………………i didn’t wanted to marry you because i loved you , i started loving you when i first saw you with laksh………………sanskar .i’ll save you……………………i’ll save us…………………………
She tries to pick him but the door of the storeroom suddenly falls on them and they both come under it and die………………………
Swasan soul leave their bodies and move to heaven hand in hand………………………………
Abhimanyu and his team are not able to save them while abhimanyu marries ragini as he promised this to swara , though ragini understands his love for swara so she never forced him to give her wife rights .
Swara soul says to sanskar ‘s soul : sanskar, i couldn’t save us from dyeing but i am happy as i saved us from this world who would have separated us again………………
Sanskar’s soul smiles and cups her face and says : swara , we will born again to love each other and to be together this time………………….
The end .

I know guys , it wasn’t too good , actually worst , an idea just came in my mind and i wrote it, i thought it will be good but couldn’t reach my own expectations so i can’t even expect you to like it………………..i just posted it as i thought that if i have wrote it , i should surely post , sorry ……………………………………………..sorry again guys………………………….

Credit to: Piyali

30 comments

    • Piyali

      thanks a lot shreya , it was an honour to me………………………be happy dear…………………….

    • Piyali

      hey peggy , thanks a lot dear but sorry i can’t write an ff , i am already writing five ffs and one more……………………i can’t even imagine dear……………………….really sorry but thanks for encouraging me……………………………be happy dear

    • Piyali

      thanks a lot eva………………………i am really happy to get praises from such a great writer…………………thanks a lot dear……………………be happy……………………….

    • Piyali

      thanks a lot ridhima , by the way i replied to your comment on fanaah , i am its writer………………………..please do read and are you the writer of roses and thorns, i think so………………………..be happy dear…………………..

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