SWALAK: HUM HAI ISHAQZDDE… few shots (7th Chapter)

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episode:
THE ESSENCE OF FIRST LOVE………- Both the hearts were smiling remembering their loves…..they thought that they will forget their love but their love itself paved its way from the crowd of people…………………as swara stood in front of laksh eyeing his smile……………her anklets stopped ringing pulling him back from his dream world that was his life………his eyes automatically turned to gaze at his minister who indifferent of the thought that was laksh listening??? was continuously telling laksh about swara’s arrival and her deeds……….swara’s eyes suddenly lost the view of that serene smile……………….laksh turned his face and so swara too was snapped back from her world……..the most beautiful world , the world of love………………………..realizing what she was doing in a full assembly of people she lowered her eyes…………. “ how can i think of sanskar here……..in such a brutual land but who was the one who remindid me of sanskar………..” swara wondered ………………… “ raja laksh…………….she insulted you and refused to marry you………………..” laksh just heard this as he missed the initial lines due to his thoughts……….laksh ‘s gaze shifted back to swara who was standing in the middle of the room…………….her eyes were lowered and so she didn’t see him ……………….. “is she princess swara……….???” he asked eyeing the girl standing in front of him……….the minister was quite confused at the question as he himself told the thing to laksh a few seconds ago but let go off the matter………the man standing behind swara , one of vikram’s trusted soldier nodded and said “ she didn’t let us get hold of the rest family……………” swara heard the thing and realized her family was not yet caught……..she thanked god hundred times for the thing………………………. “ so can i know why you made them run away…………????” laksh asked eyeing the girl standing in front of him……………… “ i don’t think after knowing about your brutuality anybody who loves their family will wish to make them meet you…………..” swara replied from under her pallu without showing even a single ray of tension in her voice……….laksh was angry yet impressed with her reply……………….. “ i feel you are very daring and more than that misunder…………….” laksh couldn’t complete as suddenly the winds started blowing in the full strength causing all the curtains of the palace to move………the wind hit every corner of the mostly open palace of lakshraj………………….and with it even gave a thud to the pallu swara had on herself……….it flew away from her face exposing the most beautiful eyes laksh had seen………………..he was left shocked eyeing the eyes nt able to speak a word further………………the eyes seemed to be his life……..his gaze suddenly went down the eyes and to the face…………the same face ……………………….the same sound of anklet……………………………………swara lifted her eyes due to this sudden change in the winds……………….she eyed her pallu falling back but in the middle her eyes struck to ……….to the man sitting on throne in front of her…………………………….her eyes were locked into his ……………they didn’t spoke a word but their eyes did a lot much………………………intensely they stared each other and then their eyes widened………………………………………….into the eyes …………………………………………….a girl is walking ………..her beautiful lehenga of green and red colour with shining stars glittering in the sunlight…………………….her lips are curved into a smile…………………only her lips are shown………..she is walking at the edge of a mountain holding a pot filled with water…………………..on the other side of the same mountain a boy is riding his horse………………his eyes shining in the sunlight……………….suddenly as they both are moving lost in their own thoughts there ‘s clash between the horse and the girl………..the girl is about to fall down but gets saved as someone holds her waist in the right moment to save her from falling………………………the sun light directly hits the girls eyelid and to protect herself she keeps her hand on her face……….the boy is eyeing her face hidden from his sight due to the hand and suddenly the horse kicks him from back making him fall from the small mountain not alone but taking the girl…………….thye both fell smoothly into the muddy puddle down…………..the boy on the girl and so his face was pushed in the muddy water…………………….this time the sun didn’t disturb her gaze and so she opened her eyes eying the boy who was on her……….both the faces were covered in mud yet it wasn’t a bad sight for them because it was their first meet with their LOVE…………….

Their eyes were locked into each other……………………..like two rivers which come from different directions but become each others…………
Inn lamho ke daaman mein, pakija se riste hain
Koyi kalma mohabbat ka dohrate farishtein hain
Khaamosh si hai jamin, hairan sa phalak hai
Ek noor hi noor sa abb aasmaan talak hai
(Nagme hi nagme hai jaagati soti fijao mein
Husn hai sari adao mein, ishq hai jaise hawao mein) � (2)

Their eyes were locked for quite some time till the horse didn’t shouted from above in his usual tone……..they both were brought back to reality……………..the girl eyed him like ana angry monster but she couldn’t resist looking cute even if angry……….the boy eyed her with embarrassed eyes……………………he stood up immediately……………..” listen , it wasn’t my fault……i never did anything……i saved you……………….this bheem………..he na is a real bheem , he pushed me so badly i fell down……….i never intended to hurt you or to smudge mud on you…………….it was a mistake not even mine , HIS “ the boy said pointing to the horse above whom he happily named bheem………………………the girl eyed him talking for all the time he talked angrily and suddenly burst out laughing seeing his childish reaction, the way he pointed at the horse like a small child actually stole her heart………………. “ ok, i spare you this time and am ready to this forever if you speak in such a tone everytime…………….” she said pulling his cheeks sweetly while he eyed her like an innocent child while she did this…………….
Tanana dom ta dom tanana dom ta dom……….
Doom doom tana nana doom doom tana… doom doom….. tananana
Dom tom tana nana dom tom tana
(Kaisa yeh ishq hai, kaisa yeh khwab hai
Kaise jasbat ka umda sailaab hai) – (2)

She suddenly realized what she was doing and left his cheek………….. “ i am sorry……………” she said lowering her eyes and smiling mischievously at her own actions………………………..he smiled and touched his muddy cheeks eyeing her ………the first touch of his first and forever love………………………
Din badale raate badali, bate badali
Jine ke andaaz hi badale hain
Inn lamho ke daaman mein, pakija se riste hain
Koyi kalma mohabbat ka dohrate farishtein hain

“ by the way , there’s a river nearby we can wash our faces there……………” she said eyeing his face laughily…………he nodded and eyed her brocken pot lying there……. “ i am sorry………..” he said…………… “ no problem……….” she said smiling…………………………….her sweet smile attracted him but her innocent eyes stole his heart………………………..he could eye those eyes forever………………….she waved her hands in front of him………..he got out of his thoughts…………..” to chale…….(lets go)” she said smiling………..he nodded and they both moved up from the place……………….while walking their hands brushed by mistake causing a spark their bodies………..they eyed each other embarrassed yet confused about the spark……………………
Samay ne yeh kya kiya, badal di hai kaaya
Tumhe maine pa liya, mujhe tumne paaya
Mile dekho aise hai hum, ke do sur ho jaise madhdham
Koyi saadhana koyi kam kisi raag mein
Ke prem aag mein, jalte dono hi the
Tan bhi hai mann bhi, mann bhi hai tan bhi – (2)
Hmmm hmmm hmmm………

They both turned their faces back again embarrassed and then again started moving………..soon they reached the river………………………………..the girl ran to the water and picked up and little in her hands………….she splashed it on her face………………..her face again caught his attention……………………..it looked more attractive with the water droplets on it…………………………she eyed him lost and too some water and splashed on his face………she laughed eyeing him suddenly shocked and ran to prevent herself from him…………..
Mere khwaabo ke iss gulistaan mein, tumse hi tum bahaar chhayi hai
Phulo mein rang mere the lekin, iname khusbu tumhi se aaye hain
(Kyun hai yeh aarjoo, kyun hai yeh justju
Kyun dil bechain hai, kyun dil betaab hai) � (2)
Din badale raate badali, bate badali
Jine ke andaaz hi badale hain

He ran behind her realizing her playful mood and in the way took a little water and splashed it on her from back…………she turned and eyed him from a distance……………..their eyes again met…….this time both the eyes looked more passionate due to the water droplets…..
Inn lamho ke daaman mein, pakija se riste hain
Koyi kalma mohabbat ka dohrate farishtein hain
Khaamosh si hai jamin, hairan sa phalak hai
Ek noor hi noor sa abb aasmaan talak hai
Nagme hi nagme hai jaagati soti fijao mein
Husn hai sari adao mein, ishq hai jaise hawao mein
Ishq hai jaise hawao mein

Soon the boy caught the girl…………………………they both played this water splashing game for quite some time and after being exhaust sat on the sand…………” waise apka naam kya hai ji……..(by the way whats you name……..)…………” she girl asked smiling…………the boy thought for some time and then replied smiling…………” sanskar aur appka……….???(and yours….???)” she thought and said “ ragini……………….” “ bohut hi pyaara naam hai………(really beautiful name………….)” the boy said smiling…………………..” haan………aur aur bhi pyaar hai kyunki sanskar aur ragini hota hai sangini…………….(yaa, its more beautiful because sanskar and ragini form sangini…………) “ she smiled and in a flash stood……..” if destiny wishes we will meet again for sure………….” she said as she ran like a storm……………… he kept eyeing her going with a huge smile………………………………….

So hows the chappy guys…………i am quite satisfied……….by the way i need something from you all today……………guess……………………………….off course you know……….comments……guys i wanna share that my laptop is damaged but still i am using it somehow just to update my ffs……i am not sure when will i write next chapter of this ff as well as my other ffs as i have to give it for repair……………guys today i just wanna how many of you are READING it………..no matter guys you like it or not just tell me how many of you are reading it………..please guys……..just two words………..if you like then “ nc” for nice and if you don’t find it good then “bd” for bad………..i don’t think its difficult……….i am writing it sometimes cutting some family moments of mine………sometimes cutting something else or sometimes something else………………..i am writing these chapters…..don’t i deserve just two letters too in the comment………….???? i feel every writer deserves it so please guys…………….please comment not only on mine but on all the ffs you read………….please………….

42 comments

    • Piyali

      |Author

      hey dear….they aren’t ragsan , please don’t misunderstand them as ragsan………..please……….thanks alot lot lot for the beautiful comment…………….love you………….be happy……………

    • Piyali

      |Author

      first of all tell me WHICH SOMEONE told this to you haan????
      and dear secondly……….comments don’t really matter but i just wanna know how many are reading it,………like till how many people my story is reaching……………….just want to know that………………………………thanks a lot for the comment……………………..yup non updating………….i am still getting scoldings for using my laptop even after it is damaged………….but i can’t stay away from you all , what to do…………………thanks again my dear……………………..i have a name for you……..shloka darling…………hows it……….????please tell…..love you………….be happy…….

      • Shloka

        |Registered Member

        I know someone who told me… forget it… shloka darling … ofcourse u can call me by this…..
        Piyali can i call u pihu… i know its little strange yet… only if u like

  1. Shloka

    |Registered Member

    U know piyali.. someone told me that comments dont define ur talent……
    So plz dont worry about it….

    • Piyali

      |Author

      hey , pihu..its such a sweet name and on the top of it i will feel like divyanka’s tripathi’s daughter…………………….lol…just joking………i really loved the name but darling i am angry and crying at this moment………you forgot our conversation and who is this someone too…………………….

      • Shloka

        |Registered Member

        No i can never forget any conversation wid u… i remember it ..it was u who told me that and that is the reason i wrote about comments…… and dont cry plz… i cant bear my frnds crying.. that too because of me… i am sorry….
        Even i too love this name pihu

      • Piyali

        |Author

        oh dear……..i thought you forgot thats why i was really sad but now i am happy …you remember na…………………………………by the way , upload true love is immortal soon and dear can i know if you wrote any other ff other than khtv and this one………………….if yes do name………..love you………..be happy…….

    • Piyali

      |Author

      yup, they did…………lets see what happens next………..thanks a lot for the comment…………love you………….be happy……..

    • Piyali

      |Author

      thanks a lot dear…………………………………nice and cute dp………love you……….be happy…….

  2. Ritu

    awesome episode. Please clear misunderstanding of swara regarding laksh.Waiting for next episode.

    • Piyali

      |Author

      thanks a lot ritu…………dear why to worry….it will be cleared soon….till that enjoy their first meet……….love you…………be happy………..

  3. sss

    firstly thanx for coming early with update…
    awesome fabolus episode…well I’m quite satisfied with this amazing episode….really it was written very well…there meet n emotion oh i miss swalak so much n but reading ur ff i miss them even more….enjoyed much reading it…..update even u can btw how are u? didn’t see ur comment this days….hopefully healthy n happy

    • Piyali

      |Author

      thanks a lot lot dear….this comment means a lot to me…..seriously thanks a lot for liking it………………………….i am sooooooooo happy that you liked it and not commenting on edkv page………..its because i am really sad with the ongoing track…………………like our sharman who too are sooooooooooooooooooooooo sad……..and yesterday’s episode………seeing sumo i felt soooooooooooooooooooooooooooobad yaar…..thats why trying to resist commenting……….even sometimes i skip watching it………………….i am totally fine but as i said this lappy is in really bad condition…………i am worried about my sweety(like laksh named his horse as bheem,,i named my laptop as sweety………..) haha………………………thanks a lot again………….love you………be happy……

  4. Shona/Laado

    Awww!! So sorry for not commenting. This story is really beautifull and I know how hard is to write ffs I tried but hardly written4 chs I tried to continue but then I left it well my exams are going to start and school too so I can’t concertrate on both but I decided that I will continue someday. I want to thank you for this king-queen story actually these are one of my fav story types. And when a ff of this type is being written on my fav swaragini………………….tqqqqq.

    • Piyali

      |Author

      first of all shona/laado…such a beautiful name dear..is it reference to our swaragini……??? do reply and thanks a lot for comemnting today………………………….don’t say sorry dear…….everyone has their own reasons but today i really wanted to know how many are reading thats why asked in such a tone……………i am srry for that…………….oh, by the way please name your ff and if you wish to continue then please for sure do it after your exams….i am sure everyone will surely love it as it would be amazing for sure……………i too love this type of drama, by the where there’s an ff on swalak-ragsan , here are the links , its too based on royal medieveal drama..you may like it:
      http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=royal
      the once upon time royal and new one started…………..i love once upon a time royal and really hope that the writer continues……………………………thanks a lot lot for the comment dear…..do comment on other ffs you like…………love you………..be happy………..

  5. Abdul hafiz(uma).

    Outstanding. You nailed it dear.Loved it.No problem, take your time.Love you ☺☺☺☺☺.

    • Piyali

      |Author

      thanks a lot dear for your constant support……………………thanks a lot dear……………………..thanks for understanding………love you……….be happy………

    • Piyali

      |Author

      helllllllllllooooooooooooo………….you know how much i missed you……………..you were not even on edkv page…………????

  6. Meghs

    Hey kiddo … So sry for not be regular commentor … I am in native so busy i hope u understand … If i not comment that not mean i don’t read i usually regularly check ur ff.. In some case i not able comment hope u understand

    • Piyali

      |Author

      no problem dii……..i know ……………i was talking about the silent readers but you comment on most parts……………and again sorry………i am not gonna talk to you if you say so many sorry every time………….you are my elder sister , why you always keep saying sorry to me……….??
      i just wish you a lot happy days………………..i know you read daily…………love you a lot lot lot dii……………………..be happy……………..

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