SWALAK: HUM HAI ISHAQZDDE… few shots (3rd Chapter)

Hello guys……….i know i am late, had some guests at home so couldn’t write…….so sorry guys and guys i have got these options for vikram’s role……..please vote……i’ll like to go with majority…….

1 vineet kumar(suraj in yeh hai mohobattein){suggestion of emz fasa}

2 mohit abrol(rajat in swaragini){ suggestion on MM (Menaz}

3 zain imam (yuvraj in tashan e ishq){ suggestion of sparkle}

4 chetan hansraj (adham khan of jodha –akbar ){ suggestion of jenisha }

And yup guys forgot to say……..vikram is younger to laksh……….

Lets begin with episode:

THE BATTLE OF FATE- Swara sits back on the floor and thinks : god , please………….do the thing that is best for everyone……….

She suddenly remembers someone say : don’t worry………..good always does everything god only………….that is best for us………..

Her lips curved into a smile……….” sanskar……… you were always the best………………………..i miss you so much………..if you would have been here………you would have solved everything………………………i wish you were here………really…………..i miss you so much……………………..but why i do i miss you…………….seriously never a day in my life has passed when i didn’t missed him………….is this LOVE ???” swara asked herself realizing that the words which she spoke were actually sasnkar’s.

She leaned back on the bed sitting in deep thinking.

A few days passed , everyone was preparing for war……………………………..swara was tensed………………she never wanted any war to take place due to her but it was happening now……………………………she didn’t knew anything else but only one thing………..that she can’t back off now…………………..laksh was indifferent…………he had fought many wars in his life………….though most were started by other kingdoms ……………he never liked wars yet being a king he had to fight…………………………… as he was getting ready he saw a picture behind the bed………..yeh it was the same incomplete portrait……………………………he smiled as he held it……….it was still incomplete…………….” i love you ragini and i would love you even if i die today………….” he said as he kissed the the eyes……………

He kept the portrait at its place and went outside…………….there he saw his mother.

Lakshraj spoke : maa…….don’t worry …………i won’t let anything happen to any of us……………..(though he is her step son yet anapurna loves vikram a lot)

Annapurna : i trust you beta……………………….may god bless you………….

She hugs him and then does his aarti…………….he smiles and leaves………….

Sharmishta is doing shekhar’s aarti when suddenly swara comes running and hugs shekhar :i am sorry bauji………….i am so sorry…………i know everything is happening because of me…………………………….i am sorry………….

Shekhar breaks the hug and caresses her face: no beta………………..don’t ever consider it your fault…….you are my daughter ……my pride……………………..i told you that day too that the decision is only yours so don’t worry…………….even o=if anything happens to me………

Swara keeps a hand on his mouth to prevent him from speaking and hugs him again.

She then hugs her brother who caresses her hair and then leaves.

Sharmishta eyes swara with tears while swara remembers her words: maa………….god never does wrong to good people…………….

Swara said as she went back running and sat near the Krishna idle joining her hands and closing her eyes just praying for the safety of her loved ones………..

The battle started…………………the whole ground was filled with soldiers fighting for their respective kings…………………laksh and shekhar too were fighting at different places even without seeing the person against whom they were fighting the battle…………………………………the ground was getting filled with blood……………blood stained dead bodies on the ground………………………….seeing them laksh had tears “ i am so unlucky……….because of me so many people die just to protect me and my so called respect………why god………….why you made me so unlucky …………………ragini loved to play holi and had she ever seen me playing this holi of blood………….she wouldn’t even have been my friend…………..my life is just a curse………………adorned in these jewels i am just a dummy from inside having no emotions of my own………………….” laksh thought as he was fighting mindlessly remembering some beautiful sounds on anklets………………………….which gave some peace to his mind……………………on the other hand vikram was fighting like an animal……..killed anyone that came his way…………..no matter that person was his own…………….” rajkumari swara…………you are mine and i only planned all this for you and now i will get you at any cost……………….” he said as he killed someone from his sharp sword……………………

Swara was sitting near the idle when the sound of wind opened her eyes……………………..winds were blowing in full speed blowing the curtains of her room………..her eyes fell on the diya that was about to blow off………………………….her heart beat sank …………the fear of losing someone close occupied her mind…………………………………..she tried protecting the diya ……………………………………….the best she could do………………….laksh was fighting when someone’s sword reached his arm and made a deep cut ……………………………….he couldn’t help but shouted “ ah…………………….” the person stared at him ready to give another blow but some strength came inside him suddenly……………………………he held his sword in other hand and returned the attack…………………..he was relieved………………..it seemed like someone’s prayers gave him strength……………………he again started fighting with his other hand trying his level best just to defend himself and not to kill anyone…………………………..the battle lasted for 2 days………………………………the continuous fighting led to many people’s death and soon the soldiers of both the armies were dead……………..now only a few soldiers of lakshraj and a few of shekhar were left……………luckily no one close to swara or laksh died yet the pain of losing so many people was quite big for laksh…………he was just blaming himself while on the other side from 2 days swara was in the same position just praying in front of god………………..both had same feelings but were they destined to be together?????

So i end this part here……………………………………..please vote for vikram’s role and do comment……………….love you all a lot…………….be happy guys…………….

Credit to: Piyali

29 comments

    • Piyali

      ok dear……..so i take your vote for both of them……………thanks a lot for reading and voting…………keep reading……………….love you…………be happy dear……….

  1. Wow… it was awesome…. u know while reading it …. i was surprised that how can u write like this.. so nicely..u have beautifully potraied the story piyu….. love u dear….

    • Piyali

      thanks a lot for these complements mini………seriously they mean a lot…….i am sooooooooooooooo happy that you liked it……….love you a lot dear……………..be happy………….

  2. As you have said, vikram is younger to laksh so zain suits the role well. I am saying this not because i suggested hin but all ither are quite older than laksh, dont you think??. Well i have given my suggestion, next is up to you.
    Now coming to the story, it was really nice, laksh is not the way as swara think he is. Waiting for the next part. Update soon.

    • Piyali

      hey sparkle…………..you know actually while i was thinking about a villian , my first choice too was zain only but i kept aside my thoughts and asked you all………………really my vote too goes for zain only but need to go with majority………….so lets see what the majority decides…………………………thanks a lot for the compleiment…………and true , he isn’t the way swara rhinks……………………..i will try to upoad as soon as possible………….love you dear…………be happy,…………………..

  3. MM( Menaz)

    Wow amazing episode dear. As u said vikram is younger than laksh so I chose 3 option. Update next one asap .

    • Piyali

      thanks a lot dear………………..ok so most people want zain…………………………..lets see the results……………..i will try to upload as soon as possible…………….love you …………..be happy dear…………..

    • Piyali

      thanks a lot dear…………..yup he would be an awesome villian so lets see what the majority decides…………..by the way will you become my friend??? please……………….do reply………..love you dear……………..be happy……………

    • Piyali

      thanks a lot dear…………….most votes for zain…….he is winning………….lets see………love you dear……………..be happy………….

    • Piyali

      abhi……………abhi…………..abhi…………abhi…………….you are back………..you know how muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh i missed you???
      hows your health now………….??
      you know shloka also would be sooooooooo happy seeing you……………….now i can’t see her on the page……………………………..but seriously where were you………..missed you badly……….please do reply……………………………….thanks a lot for reading this…………………………………………………………………love you a lot……………….be happy dear……………………

      • Iam fine yaar..My 10th classes are started…Thats why i am so busy..so couldn’t connect with you people,.Me too missed you alot…Actually iam commenting on one serial of Sony…3-4 days before shloka came there seeing my comment….Then she told me that you,she n all miss me alot…You guys remember me now also??I thought you all might have forgot me…Iam so happy yaar…how are you?????????????

      • Piyali

        oh i see , 10 th class seems horrible……….really happy to know that you are fine……………….sony tv……………….by the way which shows???
        i am currently watching kuch rang pyaar ke aise bhi and ek duje ke vaste on sony……………..thats why asking…………………..oh so you met shloka…………..her comment is down only………….but yup how can i forget my friend…………………i won’t ever forget you………i am totally fine…………………………but yup………….keep talking dear……..seriously missed you badly…………..by the way any other way i can talk to you………..if you are active on any page where i can talk ……..do tell………………..love you lot………….be happy……….

      • Iam active in sony’s ek duje ke vaaste page
        ….pls come to that page ….i really miss u guys…@piyu n @shloka…

  4. Wow piyali….u really rocked it again.
    .. actually vacations r going on so i am a little busy.. guests… and then lots of hw…
    Abhi we all missed u a lot….. thank god u r back….. after a long time.. really missed u and piyali a lot these days….

      • Ofcourse i am perfect…. when someone has friends like u how can that person be ill…..
        I am surely gonna converse with u on ek duje ke vaste page… for sure and i think piyali too will be joining right…. and piyali me too will do all projects at last…. after all who will take tensions for hw when vacations r going on….. and abhi class 10 th right… its really tough one…. but i wanted to ask that what was ur result in class 9…
        U wanted to join isro right… i am 100%sure u will do it….. best of luck..

      • Piyali

        oh abhi………….i never knew you wanted to go to isro…….i know you will surely do it…………….and yup i will come on ek duje ke vaste page……………….and yup shloka……..at the end we’ll take all the tension………………………rest talks on ek duje ke vaste…………..love you both a lot…………..be happy guys……….

    • Piyali

      hey , you are reading thius……………….so happy knowing this……..seriously , it seems like vacations are enjoyable but actually vacations pass with this hw only…………i also had guests……………………haven’t started my hw…….will take tension at last…………………i also miss you sooooooooo much …………. yup guests and hw both are important………. but please take out a little time to talk to us…………………please…………..love you a lot…………be happy dear……..

  5. ..Happy…come there soon…piyu ,where r u?…
    Good to know that u r fine…i have much things to talk to you guys…
    9th final exam’s mark ,we will only get after 10th only…Now,they will just say…pass or failed..
    Thanks for your wishes yaar,…?

    • Piyali

      no problem dear…..it sometimes happen but you read it and liked it……..thats the best thing……………………………….love you dear……………be happy……………….

  6. sss

    awesome superb episode…..first i thought swara as weak bt no her character is strong here n i like it waiting to swalak first meet though it won’t be romantic i think…update next part soon plz

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