SWALAK: HUM HAI ISHAQZDDE… few shots (2nd Chapter)

The back of a boy is seen in a majestic look , he is guiding something to someone, a curve on his lips can easily be seen while he is speaking something.

A painter is seen drawing something………maybe what the prince is describing.

Suddenly a person dressed in normal clothes runs in .

“ maharaj……………………..rajmata is gonna come……………………..” saying this he leaves the place while the boy turns in tension and then his face is revealed to be lakshraj………………………..prince lakshraj…………………………..he is wearing a usual attire of an emperor having a majestic different types of stone studded crown on his head………………………………………he hurriedly says to the painter : keep this behind that and go from the back door……………..come tomorrow………

The painter nods and goes while lakshraj turns and eyes a lady standing…………….he smiles while the lady (Annapurna ) smiles and says : beta…………….raja shekhar has send a marriage proposal for you…………………………………….

He was shocked…………..marriage proposal for him……………..how can he marry somebody……………………..if he loves somebody else…………………………………………….

“ maa…………..marriage……………..i don’t wanna marry anybody…………..please……………….” he said all nervous.

“ till when lakshraj………………………………they themselves send this proposal……………..i don’t know why but i am so happy……………………you are a king……………..you need to think about your people…………they need a queen…………this time i won’t listen……………………………………………i want you to marry her…………………………………………………….” rajmata Annapurna ordered him.

Laksh was tensed………………………he eyed her and was about to reply when a voice came from back : no rajmata…………………………..now he doesn’t need to marry her………..

Both were shocked while rajmata eyed the person shocked.

Rajkumar vikram……………………step brother of raja lakshraj was standing behind…………..the same man who eyed rajkumari swara.

“ but why are you saying this……………..i send you with shagun right………then…………….??” Annapurna asked him shocked.

“ that princess……………she refused to marry laksh bhai………………………she told that she doesn’t want to marry a cruel prince like bhaiyaa………….she considers him an animal……………………………i don’t even wanna speak what else she spoke about bhai…………………………………………..if it wasn’t your upbringing and the name of our kingdom , i would have killed her there and then…………………….” he spoke up angrily.

“ what…………….they themselves send this proposal to us……….how could they…………i heard so many good things about them…………” anaapurna was saying this when laksh stopped her in middle with his hand and said : maa……………………………..they didn’t insult me……….they insulted you and i ………………….i won’t leave such people……………vikram…………………………start the preparation………….soon we are gonna have a battle with them………………i also wanna know about those people……………”

Vikram nodded and went out, at the gate he smirked and thought : rajkumari swara……………from the time i saw you , i decided you are mine and when i decide something…………..nobody can stop me from accomplishing my dreams……………………

He goes while Annapurna eyes lakshraj and was about to say something but goes out without saying.

Lakshraj sits on his bed angrily and then his eyes go behind the bed to the place where he made the painter to keep the portrait…………………………a smile appears on his face and he takes out the portrait…………..its an incomplete portrait of two eyes……………………………..two deep eyes filled with love, truthfulness and care………………….he caresses the eyes on the portrait and says : ragini………………..i met you just once and i don’t realized when i fell for you……………………………………………i was late in realizing my feelings and thats why i lost you but still……………still i am searching for you…………….i wish i get you soon………..atleast before another proposal comes for me…………………

He hugs the portrait and a tear escapes his eyelids.

In rajkumari swara’s room:

Swara comes inside running while tears are continuously flowing down her eyes…………….she sits near and idle of lord Krishna and joins her hands…………………………” what wrong did i do ……………………..i just refused to marry him…………….is it wrong to hear what your heart says……………………………am i wrong ……………………………..” swara cries while she suddenly feels the presence of someone…………..she turns and finds the same boy behind her……………” yaa speak up kushiraj……………” swara says trying to smile.

He is the son of swara’s brother.

“ you again started crying………………please don’t cry na………………sing bhajan………..you only say na that it gives you mental peace………………….” the boy says smiling.

Swara smiles at this and nods.

she takes the prayer plate and starts:

Mann mohana aa aa… mann mohana aa aa…

Kanha suno na aa aa…

Tum bin paau kaise chain, tarsu tumhi ko din rain

Chhodake apani kaashi mathura -2, aake baso more nain

Tum bin paau kaise chain, kaanha aa… tarsu tumhi ko din rain

she remembers about the proposal…………………tears start flowing down her cheeks……….

Ek pal ujiyaara aaye, ek pal andhiyaara chhaaye

Mann kyun na ghabraaye, kaise na ghabraaye

Mann jo koyi doraaha apani rahon mein paaye, kaun disha jaaye

Tum bin kaun samjhaaye – (2)

she remembers how she refused the proposal.

Raas rachaiya brindawan ke gokul ke baasi

Raadha tumhri daasi, darshan ko hai pyaasi

Shyaam salone nand lala krishna banwaari, tumhri chhab hai nyaari

Main toh hu tan mann haari – (2)

Mann mohana aa aa… mann mohana aa aa…. mann mohana….

Kaanha suno na aa aa….

Tum bin paau kaise chain, tarsu tumhi ko din rain

She remembers what rani sharmishta told her now.

Swara was running when suddenly rani sharmishta came to her .

“ ma……………………..i know you would scold me but i don’t think i have done anything wrong……………..” Swara says with full eye contact.

“ correct swara………..maybe you haven’t done anything wrong but i want to say something………………..” Rani sharmishta says holding her shoulder.

Swara eyes her confused while she says : everyone is prepared swara……………………………………..everyone is prepared for war now……………………………..your father , your brother…………………your mother…………your bhabhi………………

Swara is still confused and says : but , you and bhabhi…………….why ma………..

Sharmishta say : remember……………………..if anything happens to my husband……………………….you will be responsible…………….only and only you swara………………i and your bhabhi will do suicide and only you will be responsible for everything…………………

Shramishta leaves swara’s arm and goes while swara is shocked and runs inside crying.

Jivan ek nadiya hai lehro lehro behti jaaye

Isame mann ki naiya dube kabhi tar jaye

Tum na khewaiya ho toh koyi tat kaise paaye, majdhaar rehlaaye

Toh tumhri sharan aaye, hum tumri sharan aaye

She cries while the diya in front of her is about to blow off when she saves it keeping her hands on both sides…………………she eyes the idle of krishna and says : what wrong will happen now……………

Suddenly she feels something on her head and touches it…………….she finds a flower fallen from krishna’s garland………………..a faded smile appears on her face seeing it and she touches it to her forehead and sings:

Main hu tumhaari, hai tumhaara yeh mere jivan

Tumko hi dekhu main, dekhu koyi darpan

Bansi ban jaaungi, in hoton ki ho jaaungi

Inn sapno se jalthal, hai mera mann agan

Hain mera mann hmm hmm…

She takes the plate kept in front of idle and gives prasad to kushiraj…………..he smiles and takes it while she eyes the flower in her hand and thinks : i know your message…………….though with problems………….but everything will be fine soon………………thanks krishna…………..thanks a lot…………

The episode ends at smiling face of swara eyeing the flower.

So here i end todays episode………..anyone around shocked…………..whats lakshraj??? Swara’s description or what we saw???

By the way guys…………need someone in the role of vikram , as you can see he wants swara so he is bad………….who would suit……………..please tell me i would go with majority……….thought they don’t have much scenes yet you can imagine adarsh and parineta of swaragini to be swara’s brother and bhabhi and kushiraj’s character would be played by young naksh of yeh rishta kya kehlata hai………………..

And yup here are links to previous episode…………replied to your comment so do read and new readers can read from that episode:
http://www.tellyupdates.com/swalak-hum-hai-ishaqzdde-shots-1st-chapter/

and guys forgot to tell , this ff is slightly based on jodha akbar but with my own twists………………………..so will come with next chapter soon…………………love you guys………………be happy…………………………..

Credit to: Piyali

20 comments

    • Piyali

      thanks a lot emz fasa……………………………..ragini…..lets wait haan………….thanks for the suggesstion…………………i liked it………………………lets see what others think……………love you dear………………..be happy………………

    • Piyali

      thanks a lot dear for your constant support……………..love you……………be happy…………

    • Piyali

      thanks a lot shirin for your constant support…………………………..i will try to upload soon……………..love you dear……………be happy………….

    • Piyali

      thanks a lot dear for your constant support……………..are you writing any ff???
      if yes do tell its name………………..love you dear…………….be happy……..

    • Piyali

      thanks a lot masthi for your constant support……………..love you dear……………be happy…………….

    • Piyali

      thanks a lot alia for yur constant support……………..love you dear………………be happy……………..

  1. MM( Menaz)

    I am little bit confused & seriously shocked that laksh loves ragini. Pls don’t do this only swara & laksh love each other pls its my request dear. But the overall episode is amazing nice.keep going on. & for vikrum role rajat uutera’s fiancée is good I think so. but as ur wish u can choose anything else.

    • Piyali

      thanks a lot dear……………………….lets seee whom laksh actually loves………………………………….don’t worry i won’t disappoint you…………nicee suggesstion, i like it a lot……..lets see what the majority thinks…………………………..and your last comments reply, dear i feeel if you yourself write an ff on it na then it will be more good as it is your own idea na…………………..you know better how to execute it………………………..would love to read if you even write an ff…….do tell me if you do…………………..love you a lot dear……………..be happy……………

  2. Wow amazing update. you know after reading your update I also thought that it is somehow similar to Jodha Akbar, but you already cleared in the end.
    I think Zain imam aka yuvraj of tashan-e-ishq will be perfect for vikram’ character.
    Nice story, keep it up and update next soonish.

    • Piyali

      thanks a lot sparkle……………..i am sooooo happy that you liked it………i wanted to tell this jodha akbar thing yesterday only but forgot thats why…………………………………….and zain………….even i had him in mind………………lets see what the majority supports………………………….thanks a lot again dear…………………..love you……………be happy…………….

    • Piyali

      yup………………..nice idea………………lets see what the majority votes for…………………………..thanks a lot for your constant support………..love you dear……………be happy…………………

    • Piyali

      thanks a lot mini dear…………waiting for your ff………………………love you dear………………be happy…………….

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