SWALAK: HUM HAI ISHAQZDDE… few shots (11th Chapter)

Hello guys..links to previous episodes..no links…..well i am bored of repeating the same line everyday so thought why not talk to you all today , before starting as maximum 5 chapters more are only left……so guys…..wanna share something with me..??? well i want to ask something from you.your aim in life…??? like a crazy dream of yours which never left you and is turning out to be your aim.well i know if i am asking something , i should start first with….i don’t know how i will sound but yup.thats actually my dream…and it is….that i want to help all people in the world…and thats my dream….whenever i see someone sad….i don’t know but i just get back to this dream of mine…my heart says… “ when i will grow up na then i will help all the people.i am sorry i can’t help now……” means i am feeling weird sharing it here but couldn’t help myself .and now i want to know about your aim…like the aim for which you are crazy (well , i am seriously crazy about doing what i said above….) so do share..links to previous episodes:
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chapter:
YOU CAN’T WIN FROM LOVE-Laksh entered his room….he eyed himself in the mirror…..his red still moist eyes reflected his pain….. “ what i did…..i went there to ask for my answers but ….but i told her that how much i love her…how can i do it..i love her but i am a prince..” he thought rubbing his hair……he was confused as to what he did..he loved her..she loved him….yet they weren’t destined to be together….. her words… “ i hate lakshraj…” echoed in his ears…..he felt depressed with even the mention of these words…… “ but you love sanskar swara…you love laksh..i know you love laksh….” a person just the same as laksh spoke from inside the mirror…..laksh eyed the mirror…..his own reflection stated his words. he sat on his bed tired of his life.. “i love swara..but i can never be with her..” he thought as he remembered all the events that took place till now…. “ laksh…what you spoke in front of her….thats the truth….the truth of your life…don’t deny it….both of you deserve each other…..” the mirror again spoke….laksh eyed it and took a vase..he smashed the mirror with the vase and sat on the floor crying… “ we both deserve each other but…..but still we can’t be together……” he cried…suddenly voice came from outside…. “ lakshraj…..open the door beta……” laksh wiped his tears and opened the door to see Annapurna standing outside…. “ ji maa….” he said lowering his red puffy eyes so that Annapurna doesn’t discover what he was doing… “ beta , why were you crying….??” she asked holding his face….. “ maa…” laksh stared at her shocked. “ beta , i am your mother….i know you well..tell me…..” laksh turned his face…. “ nothing happened maa..why you came here..???” he asked sternly…… “ i know my son wants to become strong infront of the world but you can’t do that in front of me…..i know you won’t agree today but beta , whenever you feel like telling me…..do tell…and i just came to tell you that jallodaghar (imaginary kingdom) rajya is planning to attack us…..i got to know this from some secret informer….we need to be prepared….” Annapurna left saying it…laksh stood there. “ i need to get out of this…..this feeling of love….this feeling of betrayal…this feeling of hate….this feeling of friendship.i need to get out of this LIFE…this fight will help me to stay away from palace for some time.” laksh thinks as he plans to go to the war ….vikram enters a dark place and smirks …he gives a bag of gold coins to someone…. “ so you betrayed rajmata for me…you told her na that jolladaghar is going to attack….” the man nods.vikram hands another bag of gold coins to him and says “ now king lakshraj will think that a small kingdom like jolladagarh is going to ataack but he doesn’t know that my army along with one of the most powerful kings of the world am gonna attack that bunch of people whom lakshraj will bring with himself….and then , he can’t win from me…..” he smiles evily and the man goes….. “ rajkumari swara…you didn’t agree to me thats why i will have to get what is mine from you by force and i will get it and any cost…..” he leaves the place thinking this while swara is seen sitting in her cell…… “ i hate lakshraj.i hate lakshraj…i hate lakshraj….” she keeps murmuring sitting still there when a voice from the corner of her heart says” you love sanskar.you LOVE …” she stands up to avoid what her heart wants to convey to her….that she loves lakshraj..laksh is prepared with his small army to defend his kingdom ,as a valiant warrior….and warrior who wants to fight for his country..a warrior who doesn’t care about his own life but only about his country…..he leaves from the palace on his bheem…to fight.not only with the world but with himself too.

NOTE:-
Vikram has joined with some powerful kingdom to destroy lakshraj secretly (over some benefits to that kingdom) and jolladagarh is a small kingdom so laksh doesn’t take huge army(they take army maintaining balance with the enemy as life of his soldiers are precious for lakshraj) as he feels to fight jolladagarh he doesn’t need a huge army….
Do answer my question.

19 comments

  1. sss

    hey piyali how are dr??
    this chapter awesome as nicely…oh poor swalak they are together but not actually together moreover laksh going for battle..that cipku psycho vikram i want to kick him thinking footboll like mesi or ronaldo..bat boll also can be used…i will give sites like gayl think him as boll vikram you just wait from the beginning you are just getting on my nurve….injection also a better weapon one i got than I’ll see you you will never go to the hospital…
    laksh carefully and you the hero so no tension my wish with you.. waiting for next part…

    my aim of life still don’t know but i love to know the software thing…i like your choise at this even i like to help the poor but can’t

    • Piyali

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      awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww……….vikram badly needs to save himself from you dear…………………..reading it only i am tensed.if you do it with vikram……………………………please don’t do it…..you know i love zain…………so pleaseee…….leave him but yup if you sooo wish to do then you can do for sure…………………….and yup truly said laksh is our hero, so why to worry………………?????
      i am tooo totally fine……what about you and our edkv friends haan………………..i will tyr to update soon but schools begin from tomorrow so can’t promise………………………….and softwares……….amazing choice………….and dont think you cant help poor people……………you can do it for sure…………..just keep up the good spirit ………………..i really wish god fulfills all your wishes……………….i love you alot…….you are a great friend you know…….love you…………..be happy………..

      • sss

        hey I’m fine dr even ekdv all member..if zain your favorite then I’ll leave him atlest i cab do this for my lovly friend well you said I’m being good frnd so have maintain it na…dr i know the school n all bcz of that you are busy so update when you can love you to a lot..

      • Piyali

        |Author

        aww…….thanks a lot dear for leaving zain…………………..and yaa don’t worry our swalak will punish vikram………………………………..thanks a lot for understanding………….ekdv is all ging superb nowadays……….preekar marriage…………..i am excited …………love you……….be happy………

    • Piyali

      |Author

      thanks a lot dear………………………………………love you for your continous support……….be happy……..

  2. Shloka

    |Registered Member

    Pihu …. u know what…. this was an awesome episode…… and this vikram is getting on my nerves day by day……
    Btw… u have a beautiful and a kind heart dear… nowadays…. who thinks about people….. but u know i have got a gold hearted friend…. and thats u….
    Coming to my aim….. vaise toh i wanted to become an enginner….software engineer…. but my real dream is to become the president of india…..
    I know its a little strange… but for me its my goal….. i dont know whether will my this dream turn true or not……. as it is not so easy… still i feel this is very special for me…

    • Piyali

      |Author

      aww………………..thanks a lot darling…………….i know vikram really bad na……….he is getting on my nerves too but what to do, we’ll have to bear him……………………and dear………..i too have no one but soooooooooooo many kind hearted friends which include you for sure as you know reading an ff…………following it………..and commenting to motivate the writer is also not a small thing……………you know even this is a help to other after all your comments always bring a smile on my face and making someone smile in the biggest gift anybody can give someone……………………..and yup for my profession i too have a similar dream…….i want to become a scientist……………………………and you want to become president of india………..woww……………..in future when you will become na…….i will point towards the tv and say that see megha…….she used to read my ff and i used to read her ffs in our childhood……….she is my friend………the president is my friend………..wow……..it would be sooooooooooooooooooo good na……………….and yup, no one’s goal is strange…………………you want to do something so just work towards doing it………..achieving it and you’ll get your goal for sure……………….i know that you are hard working ……………………………love you a lot…………you know you were my second friend on this site……………………………………….and of my age………..i love you a lot…….be happy………..

  3. alia

    Awesome yrrfrr i don’t have any words to decribe how gud ur writing skills are. But i Really hate u becoz u Always make me speechless by ur writing skills..
    Now also i have nooo words to decribe thiss ff
    Hate uuuuuuuuuuuuu i Really hate uuuuuu
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    But wat to dooooo
    I luv u tooooi
    Hate uuu

  4. alia

    Andd i m sry if in any of ur episode i didn’t comment i may be becoz it didn’t get punished . Tbe comment which ihve done also was not getting published but i try many time then it get punished …

    And rember that i hate uu for making me speechless every time…
    …… Hate uuu

    ….

    … Just kidding
    Luv u yrrr
    And yr upload next chapter early as possible becoz u know na how much i luv ur ff

    • Piyali

      |Author

      hey alia……….yaar thanks a lot lot lot lot lot lot…….you hate me but i love you…………..well you also made me speechless ……..i mean i was like what………..your comment made me smile sooooooooooooooooooo big na that i can’t tell you…..wish i could show you………………….and yaa……………..no sorry…….i understand………….i don’t write it for comments now……….i write it because i enjoy writing it………………………i love you……………………….even if you hate me……………………..love you…………be happy………

  5. Abdul hafiz(uma).

    Piyali dear,meri bhi tumari tarah sapna hein,but thoda hatke hein.Actually, mein orphan and oldage logo keliye kuch karna chahti hu.It’s the biggest aim in my life. About chappy, awsm.Love u loads.

    #Spread Smile

    • Piyali

      |Author

      uma dear………….i loved your dream and i really wish you fulfill it……i am being selfish as that would help me too……………………..i wish you fulfill all your dreams……………i love you so much………………….and your dream is amazing……………….thanks a lot…………..be happy…………..

  6. Meghs

    Hey kiddo.. Ur nw no more kiddo such awesome aim on ur life i am glad to get such a cute sis who think help others as aim… I am proud of u ..
    Well my aim is actually before something i want to be myself good i mean to say anything n correct mistake of others i want to be good na.. I first be myself n teach others yup ur guess crt i want to be teacher cum lecturer .. U think hw wiered my choice but its my childhood dream to become teacher .. I know many will opt doctor or engineer profession but i opt teacher as i likes to teach …
    But i don’t think i can become teacher or lecture but i am giving tuitions now to kids its enough for me ..

    • Piyali

      |Author

      meghu dii……………you know your dream is not at all weired……………its a great dream………………..everyone acquires knowledge from some or the other place but sharing with others……….doctors , engineer’s can do it………only a teacher can do……………………..and i loved to know that my dii is having such an amazing aim………………..i don’t know if ever in futture i would be able to fulfill my dream but you are already doing it by teaching children……you are sharing knowledge which is the biggest and easiest thing anybody can share but nobody does so……………..you know i too am proud to have you as my elder sis………………….and i am always your kiddo………….please don’t say like that haan…………………….you will become a teacher for sure…infact you are already one………..love you……………..and yaa just and just be happy……………..

    • Piyali

      |Author

      hello sidhi…….dear it isn’t an os………………..was busy in loads of homework from school…….will post it today…..sorry for the delay……….love you………be happy………..

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