Swabhiman: Mile Ho Tum Humko Episode 5

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Scene 1: Meghna and Naina’s room

Meghna was sitting in her room.

Kunal came and sat next to Meghna.

Kunal: Show me your hands.

Meghna showed him her hands.

Kunal: Let me try and find my initial in your hands.

Meghna: But Kunal…

Kunal: Let me try first. Don’t give me any hints.

Meghna: Listen to me…

Kunal: Shhhh!

Kunal scanned Meghna’s hand for ten minutes but did not find any trace of a K.

Kunal: I can’t find it! Where is it?

Meghna: I’ve tried to tell you that your initial wasn’t in my Mehendi but you weren’t listening!

Kunal: Oh, but why?

Meghna: Because I want you to write a K in my Mehendi!

Kunal smiled.

He picked up a Mehendi cone lying nearby and wrote a K in Meghna’s Mehendi. He then wrote an M in his hand with the cone and showed it to Meghna.

Meghna smiled.

Meghna: I need some help!

Kunal: What?

Meghna: I am thirsty and I can’t drink water due to my Mehendi. Could you please help?

Kunal: Why not?

Kunal picked up a glass of water and helped Meghna when Khyati entered!

Khyati: Awww! How cute!

Kunal: Khyati! Why are you here?

Khyati: Why can’t I be here? Because my Bhaiya is romancing with my Bhabhi?

Kunal: Khyati!!!

Kunal picked up a pillow and threw it at Khyati while Khyati dodged it. Khyati couldn’t throw a pillow back as she had Mehendi on her hands so she kept quiet.

Khyati: Chillax Bhaiya! I’m going!

Kunal: Bye!

Scene 2: Naina and Meghna’s home

Nand Kishore entered the house. He had gone for a meeting and just returned. He took Sandhya to a corner.

Nand Kishore: Where is Kunal?

Sandhya: Bhai Sahab, he’s with Meghna!

Nand Kishore: What has happened to Kunal? This girl is snatching away my son from me! Ever since I agreed to get Kunal married to Meghna, he is always with her!

Sandhya: Chodo na Bhai Saheb. They’re a young couple and they are going to get married. They’re just a bit excited that’s it!

Nand Kishore: Yes, whatever I say, you will always support Meghna. Where is Karan?

Sandhya: Karan is with Pavitra.

Nand Kishore: Is he helping with the preparations? No? Why did I even expect anything from him?

He leaves.

He comes to the living room and tells Sharda to called Meghnal.

Nand Kishore takes Kunal and Karan to a room.

Nand Kishore: What are both of you doing? Kunal, I didn’t expect this from you!

Kunal: What did we do, Dad?

Nand Kishore: What did you do? Why are you with Meghna all the time? The girl is driving you crazy, Kunal. She is snatching you away from us.

Kunal: I am sorry, Dad, but I won’t hear anything against Meghna.

Kunal walks away.

Nand Kishore turns to Karan.

Nand Kishore: Dekha? This is the result of your mom’s upbringing! You were already useless, tumse kya umeed rakhna but Kunal! He used to follow every instruction of mine! Now, he is going against me for that Bundi girl!

Karan: Why are you telling me this?

Nand Kishore: Good question! Why am I telling you all of this, it’s like speaking to a rock. Kitna bhi samjhau tum nikame ke nikame rahoge! Don’t know what sin, I did in my previous birth that I got a son like you! I feel so ashamed that you are my son!

Scene 3: Garden

Karan was sitting near the fountain outside Meghna and Naina’s home. He was saddened by the way Nand Kishore scolded him. He had felt much better after talking to Naina. But now, everything was back to “normal”! Nand Kishore had started to criticize him again, he felt like he was losing all his self confidence! Back to Square 1!

Someone offered him a cup of coffee. He turned back and saw Naina. He accepted it and Naina came and sat beside him.

Naina: Upset?

Karan: Hmmm

Naina: Uncle said something?

Karan: Said? Criticized me like always!

Naina: Hmmm. What if we do something to cheer you up?

Karan: What do you mean?

Naina: I have a guitar, do you want to sing something?

Karan: Are you serious?

Naina: Yes!

Karan: Can I sing now? Singing always cheers me up!

Naina: I’ll go and get the guitar!

She went inside to get the guitar.

Karan started singing.

Mujhe Yu Hi Karke Khwabo Se Juda

Jane Kaha Chhupke Baitha Hai Khuda

Janu Na Mai Kab Hua Khud Se Gumshuda

Kaise Jiyu Rooh Bhi Mujhse Hai Juda

Kyun, Meri Raahein,

Mujhse Poochhen Ghar Kahan Hai

Kyun Mujhse Aake

Dastak Pooche Dar Kahan Hai

Raahein Aise Inki Manzil Hi Nahin

Dhoondho Mujhe Ab Main Rehta Hoon Wahin

Dil Hai Kahin Aur Dhadkan Hai Kahin

Saansen Hai Magar Kyun Zinda Main Nahin

Ret Bani Haathon Se Yoon Beh Gayi

Takdeer Meri Bikhri Har Jagah

Kaise Likhoon Phir Se Nayi Daastan

Gham Ki Syahi Dikhti Hai Kahan

Aahen Jo Chuni Hain Meri Thi Raza

Rehta Hoon Kyun Phir Khud Se Hi Khafa

Aisi Bhi Hui Thi Mujhse Kya Khata

Tune Jo Mujhe Di Jeene Ki Saza

Kyun…….. Bande Tere Mathe Pe Hain Jo Khinche

Bas Chand Lakeeron Jitna Hai Jahan

Aansoo Mere Mujhko Mita De Rahe

Rab Ka Hukum Na Mit-Ta Hai Yahan

Raahein Aise Inki Manzil Hi Nahin

Dhoondho Mujhe Ab Main Rehta Hoon Wahin

Dil Hai Kahin Aur Dhadkan Hai Kahin

Saansen Hai Magar Kyun Zinda Main Nahin

Kyun Main Jaagoon,

Aur Wo Sapne Bo Raha Hai

Kyun Mera Rab Yoon,

Aankhen Khole So Raha Hai..

Kyun Main Jaagoon,

Karan put in all his feelings into the song. The song showcased his emotions. Naina was in tears listening to his song.

Naina started clapping with tears rolling down her eyes.

Naina: You have a very powerful voice!

Karan: Ro kyu rahi ho?

Naina: Kuch nahi! Just got a bit emotional listening to your song!

Karan: Shall we go inside?

Naina: Yes!

Kunal and Meghna passed by.

Kunal: They look cute together, don’t they?

Meghna: Yes!

Kunal: Just like us!

Meghna: Don’t get wrong ideas into your head. Cheeku won’t keep anything a secret from me. They are just friends!

Kunal: Ok. Relax!

Meghna: I can’t believe it! Humari shaadi! One month and I will be Mrs. Kunal Singh Chauhan!

Kunal: Yes! We’ll be one soon! I can’t wait!

Meghna: I love you!

Kunal: I love you too!

Kunal looked at Meghna’s hand. It had been four hours already!

Kunal: Your Mehendi’s colour is dark! Looks like you’re going to get a lot of love!

Meghna laughed.

Precap: Sangeet ceremony

Thank you so much for the comments and positive responses! I will post my next chapter on either Tuesday or Wednesday.

I had a question to ask all my readers, I was in a dilemma about it…

Do you want Kunal to know about Karan’s disease, support him and have sibling moments with him or do you want Kunal to be oblivious to Karan’s disease and get to know about it later? Please do answer this question in your comments. I’ll go with the majority.

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23 Comments
  1. Fenil

    Superb !!

    1. Naina0411

      Thank you Bhaiya!

  2. Naina0411

    *asked Sharda to call Meghnal

  3. It’s incredible update dear…..loved it….soo beautiful…….I want that Kunal want to know about Karan’s disease & he support him as I really miss their brother bond in serial……Thank you for updating fast…..Do update soon….love u ….Now, I am going tomorrow I have exam .Gn & Bye….tc

    1. Naina0411

      Thank you so much Niyu!!! 😍
      I’ll update on either Tuesday or Wednesday…
      Good Luck for your exam! I know you’ll do well.
      Love you too! 😘

  4. Please make Kunal know about Karan’s disease. Loved the update

  5. #nairanlover:-)

    Hi Naina.I loved this one too.Both meghnal and nairan were equally good or say cute in this chapter.I don’t know why there is a need for NK to always underestimate karan but thanks to Naina she managed it really well.The song you have chosen was really a nice one.It was emotional and correctly portrayed karan’s feelings.Aww the moment you created was so cute and sweet.Coming to your question I would relly love to see what will be kunals reaction if he gets to know now as we have seen already in serial what happened when kunal got to know about karan’s illness after the marriage.Do see if you can help Meghna to get to know about it.And if you don’t mind I wanted to share that a gift segment of the foursome is gonna come soon by glitzvision.Really excited for it and also their selfies are their on insta and twitter.Do see and if you have seen then sorry out of excitement I told you.Ok enough of blah blah.Post ASAP.Loads of love❤❤❤

    1. Naina0411

      Thank you so much!
      Ohk…so you want Kunal to get to know about Karan’s disease later…I’ll wait for a few more comments and then go with the majority!
      I’ll surely try to let Meghna know about it…maybe in a few more chapters…
      Thank you for informing me about the segment…I had no clue!
      I will watch it as soon as I can!
      Loads of love to you too! ❤️
      😘😊😍

  6. Yeah it was vry nice epsd…i jst love it…😘

  7. Di! I loved it!
    I’m a silent reader but I just had to comment today!
    This chapter was amazing.
    I fell in love with it!
    Di, I would prefer it if Kunal got to know about Karan’s disease later…I want to see what he goes through!
    Congratulations on completing 5 chapters!
    Love you Di!
    PS: I’m Sagarika. What is your name?

    1. Naina0411

      Thank you!
      Yes…completing 5 chapters is a milestone!
      I’m so happy you commented!
      My name is Mansi.
      Love you too! ❤️❤️
      😍😊😘

  8. Very nice updt
    And ya u asked whether kunal should know about karan s disease ao i think he should
    Love ur today s episode
    Keep updating soon
    With loads of love 😘😘😘

    1. Naina0411

      Thank you!
      Ok…until now 3 readers want Kunal to already know about Karan’s disease and 2 readers want Kunal to get to know about Karan’s disease later…I’ll wait until Wednesday and then decide, going with the majority…
      Loads of love to you too! ❤️❤️❤️
      😘😊😍

  9. Pavithra1616

    Wow di!!! It was just superb… Love it so much… Update soon pls…. U write well😍😍

    1. Naina0411

      Thank you Devu!
      Waiting for your next update as well!
      Love you too! ❤️
      😍😊😘

      1. Pavithra1616

        Actually I had no time to update… I haven’t updated since October I think… But thanks for reminding me for updating!!! Wish u a early good night… By the way, I liked ur dp…

      2. Naina0411

        Oh ok!
        Thank you! I fell in love with the pic at first sight so it became my dp! 😂
        Good Night!

  10. Wow! 😍 I love this chapter Di. I’m another one of your silent readers. I never comment usually but this chapter was fantastic. Your song choice was very nice. The song was apt, it showed Karan’s emotions very well. I love your ff so much di, even though you started writing an ff very late, it is very good. Your chapters are long and you have a balance between Meghnal and Nairan moments. Please write an ff on SwaSan or AvNeil! I love both couples and I know you write very well so you will be able to write an ff on them nicely. It’s okay if you can’t, it’s just a request not an order. Coming to your question, I would prefer Kunal getting to know about Karan’s disease later as I want to see how you describe his emotions. You describe Karan’s emotions very well so I would like to see how you describe Kunal’s emotions when he comes to know about Karan’s disease. Last but not the least, I would like to appreciate your writing skills Di. You write so well that I can imagine the whole chapter in front of me, just as if it was an episode. That is truly a sign of a great writer. Loads of love to you Di!! Please do update your next chapter soon. Keep writing and inspiring! 💛💚💙💜❤️

    1. Naina0411

      Awww! Thank you!
      I’ve never received so much praise!
      I’m so happy you commented today!
      4 readers want Kunal to get to know about Karan’s disease later and 3 readers want Kunal to have already known about Karan’s disease…most probably
      I will go ahead with the former one…
      I will try to write an ff on Swasan or Avneil…my exams are nearing so
      I might not be able to write one right now but I will surely write an ff on them…
      Loads of love to you too! ❤️
      😘😊😍

  11. SRK-Meri Jaan

    😛 post next part..

    1. Naina0411

      Yes! I’ll post it soon…

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