Swabhimaan: The Proposal~ A Nairan OS

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Hi Guys! This is my first os! I love Nairan and that’s why I planned to write an os in Nairan. Please do support me.

Naina entered the restaurant looking around cautiously. Karan had invited her to The Tasting Room. He hadn’t given her any explanation or any hint as to why he had called her here. The restaurant was deserted. Other than the person who had held open the door for her and informed her about Karan coming in another fifteen minutes there wasn’t a single person in sight. That was strange! And then the restaurant was decorated so romantically that Naina was confused. It had been just 6 months to her wedding to Karan. Oh! That was why he called her here. Naina couldn’t believe she had forgotten the date. It was their 6 month anniversary!

Naina looked around. The restaurant had been decorated very romantically with red heart-shaped balloons. She sat down on a couch nearby and got lost in her thoughts. She had been married to Karan for 6 months! Those 6 months had changed her life forever! She had gotten married to Karan unwillingly but now she felt that was the best decision she had ever taken in her life. At first, Karan had been rude and insensitive. He spoke to her harshly and didn’t believe in their marriage. But then, things slowly started falling into place and Karan became her knight in shining armour! Someone she would admire and respect for life.

Karan was someone very unique! He had many shades to him. But however much he tried to prove to the world that he was a rude and harsh person, Naina knew the soft-hearted and emotional person in him. She had seen him teach the poor children music and had seen the extent to which the children loved and respected Karan. She knew the extent to which Karan would go for someone’s happiness. She had found a very good friend in him and hoped to be friends with him the rest of her life if not husband and wife.

A voice from behind startled her, “I’m so sorry for being late!”

Naina immediately recognized the voice to be Karan’s and turned to look at him. He was wearing a tuxedo and was holding a present in his hands. She immediately got up and walked to him.

Naina: Hi!

Karan: Hi! This is for you!

He handed over the present to her and said, “Happy 6 month Anniversary!”

Naina smiled.

Naina: Happy 6 month Anniversary!

Karan: Shall we have dinner?

Naina nodded.

Karan lead her to a table and once they were seated a waiter came up.

Karan ordered Naina’s favourite food and they had their dinner.

After dinner, Karan excused himself and went out of the restaurant. He soon came back with a guitar. Suddenly, the lights went off and the spotlight fell on Naina and Karan. Karan started singing and Naina was lost in Karan and his voice.

Pal, do pal, ki hi kyun hai zindagi

Iss, pyar, ko hai sadiyaan kaafi nahi

Toh khuda se maang lun

Mohalat main ik nayi

Rehna hai bas yahaan

Ab door tujhse jaana nahi

Jo tu mera humdard hai

Jo tu mera humdard hai

Suhaana har dard hai

Jo tu mera humdard hai

Teri muskurahatein hain taaqat meri

Mujhko inhi se ummeed mili

Chaahe kare koi sitam ye jahaan

Inme hi hai sadaa hifaazat meri

Zindagani badi khoobsurat hui

Jannat ab aur kya hogi kahin

Jo tu mera Humdard hai

Jo tu mera Humdard hai

Suhaana har dard hai

Jo tu mera Humdard hai

Woooo…

Teri dhadkano se hai zindagi meri

Khwahishein teri ab duaaein meri

Kitna anokha bandhan hai ye

Teri meri jaan jo ek hui

Lotunga yahaan tere paas main haan

Waada hai mera mar bhi jaaun kahin

Jo tu mera humdard hai

Jo tu mera humdard hai

Suhaana har dard hai

Jo tu mera humdard hai

hmmm.. humdard hai

hmmm.. humdard hai

hmmm.. humdard hai

hmmm.. humdard hai…

Karan kept his guitar aside, picked up a rose and went to Naina. He got down on one knee.

Karan: Naina, I’ve been thinking of saying this to you since many days par kabhi himmat nahi hui Before you came into my life, I was living but without a purpose

Tum meri zindagi mein aayi aur mere zindagi ki mayne hi badal gaye

Tumhare aane ke baad meri zindagi mein khushiyaan hi khushiyaan bhar gayi

Tum meri muskurane ki wajah ban gaye

Jo Karan kabhi muskurata nahi tha bo dil kholkar hansne laga

Tum ban gayi meri muskurane ki wajah, mere jeene ki wajah

I love you Naina!

You’re one of the most beautiful people I’ve ever seen

Bahar se hi nahi, andar se bhi

I love you very much Naina!

Naina was in tears. In that one minute she realized how much she loved Karan!

Naina: I love you too Karan

Karan was one of the most happiest people on Earth at that time. He lifted Naina and spun her in the air.

Naina: I love you

Karan: I love you too!

Naina had found her knight in shining armour and Karan had found love in his best friend!

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20 Comments
  1. Aafiya

    Nice.. Please write a ff on nairan…

    1. Naina0411

      Thank You!
      I’m planning to write an ff on Nairan and Meghnal…
      I’m sorry but it won’t be possible now as I have my assessments starting this week…but I will definetly try to post a part of my ff before the third week of November
      Hope you understand.
      Thank you for commenting! 😊

  2. Hi I think it was really good and sweet. You should write more! 😊 I would definitely read if you wrote more .

    1. Naina0411

      Thank you!
      I will be writing an ff on Meghnal and Nairan…it should be up by the third week of November…
      Thank you for commenting! 😊

  3. Minakhi

    Nice ,romantic strting …so i love it…n plz updt sn ur nxt epsd bcoz im waiting…so loads of love naina😘😘😘😘😘😘

    1. Naina0411

      Thank you!
      I’m so sorry dear but this is an OS not a ff so there won’t be a next part…
      But I will definitely post an ff on FF on Meghnal and Nairan in a few weeks.
      Thank you for commenting! 😊

  4. Fenil

    Hey Naina sissy…finally i got your OS.
    superb job…aflatoon OS for NaiRan.such a lovely proposal and those lines just perfect icing on whole OS then my favourite song Hamdard yeh song roj sunta hun din mein kitni baar pata nahi. totally loved it the core.hope to read MeghNal OS then your FF as u alredy told me.keep smiling.πŸ˜—πŸ˜—πŸ˜—πŸ˜—πŸ˜Š

    1. Naina0411

      Thank you Bhaiya!
      I can’t tell you how much this means to me!
      Haan, Humdard is one of my favourite songs!
      I will write an ff on Meghnal and Nairan for sure! Not sure about a MeghNal os but will try…
      Happy Bhai Dooj Bhaiya!
      Thank you so much for commenting! 😊

  5. Jiya09

    Hi Naina!! This os is really sweet.. How I wish the serial would also go like ur os!! The words which Karan said to Naina was beautiful.. 6 month anniversary !! And I’m missing them badly now.. I loved it.. U should write more like this. I will be really happy reading them. Loads of love.❀❀

    1. Naina0411

      Thank you so much!
      It really means a lot to me!
      I miss Swabhimaan so badly! I keep watching Nairan moments from the previous episodes of Swabhimaan.
      I will surely write more.
      Thank you for commenting! 😊

  6. Pavithra1616

    Hey di, found it.. Really good , romantic.. You write well.. It was really sweet.. Write more di… Well done and all the best for the examsss… Love you lots😘

    1. Naina0411

      Thank you!
      Will sure write more…
      I’m thinking of writing one on AvNeil after my 15 marks…
      Don’t know what will happen as a month after my 15 marks, I have my 50 marks…
      Love you too sis! 😘
      Thanks for commenting! 😊

  7. Niyati

    Hey my sweetie pie….u nailed it….romantic, sweet Os….amazing…,u make me speechless….everything is beautifully described ….I love the song hamdard …..one of my favourite song dear….u should continue it …..I mean u write ft on nairan when u got time ….lots of love & a very big hug to u..,

    1. Naina0411

      Thank you!
      Aap kitna praise kar rahe ho! Means a lot to me!
      Even I love Humdard!
      I will be writing an ff on Nairan and Meghnal soon…
      Love you too! 😘
      Thank you so much for commenting! 😊

  8. WOW!!!This was really cool…..and I loved it😍😍😍 keep updating many os’ s like this

    1. Naina0411

      Thank you!
      I will surely try to write more OS’
      Thank you for commenting! 😊

  9. #nairanlover:-)

    Hi.I loved your os.It was superb.I would love to read more of your works.And 6th month anniversary nice idea.Unique proposal.Loads of love.Slrry for late comment I read it earlier only and liked too but because I was having less time I couldn’t manage.

  10. #nairanlover:-)

    Hi.I am sorry for commenting this late actually I read it before only but as I was busy I was not able to comment.I loved it.It was awesome.Sixth month anniversary nice idea.Wow the way Karan proposed and Naina’s simple thoughts of their entire journey upto now.I just loved it.I don’t know when we will get to see them together again.Hope it will be sooner that season 2 will come.Continue writing such os.Try to write a ff if you can because this one was so nice.Loads of love.

    1. #nairanlover:-)

      Sorry for double comments as it earlier showed that the comment was not shown.

    2. Naina0411

      Thank you!
      I will be writing an ff on Nairan and Meghnal soon…
      I agree! I really hope there will be a Season 2 of Swabhimaan!
      Thank you for commenting! 😊

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