Swabhimaan FF “I dare you will never become my lover” (part 1)

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Hi guys it’s me threemaimai ,
This is a bonus for long lasting lovers since I end it so quickly I thought to write a short story. This is the first part and there are another two parts will update tomorrow and day after that.
I really wanted to show my gratitude and love toward all of you because you guys showed so much love and affection to my ff and it really means a lot to me. So I hope all of you will accept my apology for ending long lasting love so quickly and enjoy this short story

Swabhimaan OS “I dare you will never become my lover”
(part 01)

Hi I am naina , Naina Sulonki .
Love can play with us in many ways but my love story had a different story line which came to me very rude way. At that time I was a finale year university student who followed art degree and I was only 23 years old. From my first year I had huge crush on this guy name Karan Chauhan. He is very talented and brainy one who follows mechanical engineering degree. First I saw him when I join to tennis team in our university even I was really bad at it his presence motivated me to continue the sport throughout all this years. I was just happy to see him and it really made my day. It became my little secret which I shared with my sister Meghana. It was the first time I was really serious about a guy and my sister wanted knows about this guy so she put an investigator to check on him. He was her loving boyfriend Kunal who happens to be Karans cousin brother.
And my secret got exposed which lead to a crazy story line in my life. So here is my story

Naina walked to the tennis court and saw karan and his friends smiling at her. Their gazing eyes irritated her and she felt something is going to happen. So she looks around but she couldn’t found single female player around.
“oh.. god why I feel like this.. where are the others …. With whom I am going to play with”
Then karan came close to her. Even Naina had a crush on him she never wanted to practice with him because he was pretty good at it and he easily get angry when others do mistakes. Especially his arrogant and manners less speeches made naina to ignore him more. Even she was very talkative she tends to stay silent during practices.
“ hey girl.. what’s your name again? Come practice with me”
“ HA…. Ok.. its naina…” she can’t reject him since he is the captain of the whole team and he is senior to her.
She took the racket from her shivering hands and she thought “I knew it today something bad will happen to me… aaa what should I do…”
They start to practice so the others but naina couldn’t focus on practicing. Since there is a saying for two reasons people avoid the others eyes when they lie and when they are in love with the person.
Naina was continuously missing all the balls and this made karan got really angry. He hit the ball which hits nainas hand and racket falls to the ground.
“aw..”
“What the hell are you doing? Are you coming here to play or just to waste your time?”
“ no.. I just…..’’ naina was rubbing her hand because it was really painful.
“ oh I forgot you coming here to see someone right if you done watching leave don’t waste our time too”
Naina got shocked she couldn’t utter a single word. She feels her self-respect torn in to thousand paces. She realized her secret has been exposed him and he looks like he wasn’t happy about it. Others also stop practicing and looked at her. She felt really embarrassing and moreover she was extremely angry . naina is someone who never easily get angry on others. She throws the racket to karan which she picked from ground.
This move made others including karan got surprised. Naina came close to him and hit his leg as much as hard she can from her leg.
“AAAA” Karan scream with pain and hold his leg
“Is it a crime to like someone…. Ooo yeas I had a crush which already turned in to ashes….”
Then naina left the place with tears.
“ooo man that was really harsh of you” Arun patted karans sholder.
Karan looked at naina who already left the ground. he can guarantee that she was crying on her way. For some reason he wanted to follow her so he ran after her.
Tears falling from her eyes now she was on the middle of the bridge. No one around because it’s almost pass six. She couldn’t hold the pain anymore. She looked at the river flowing under the bridge. She was crying harder. Then someone pulled her from the edge of the bridge. Naina got sceared and sream.
“AAAA are you crazy.. what are you doing????” naina was about to hit the person but she was shocked to see who was that.
“I guess that line supposed to be mine not your” it was karan who hold her tightly .
Naina pushed him away and start walk.
“woow.. madam where are you going?”
“ home why??? Now can’t I go home”
“Home I thought you were planning to go to heaven” karan gave curiouse smile to her
“why should I go there oooo… you thought I was going to jump over there. You are very wrong about that mister”
“then what were you doing”
“I was throwing you over their” karan was speechless what more he can say after that.
“so your crush ends here….”
“ooo Mister… you are just a one person I met when I roaming here and there….don’t take it too seriouse.. and thanks to your feedback my crush for you officially over”
Naina turns her back and about to leave.
“it mean you will never fall for me again”
“never ever…. No No NOOOOO” Naina’s stubborn reaction hits Karan’s heart
“then lets date”
“What??? Are you serious… that will never happen”
“No no I am saying lets date for one month like other couples”
“One month????’’ naina looked really confused
In her mind ‘what do you want karan.. I really don’t get it’
“Let me explain you and I will date for one month under one condition since you are so sure about I will never be your lover and I also so confident about that lets make a deal”
“What kind of deal?”
“End of the month person who falls in love first will be the looser and that person must grant whatever the other person ask”
“What kind of deal that is.. I am not buying it.. I am leaving..”
“Why??? Are you afraid that you will lose?”
Karan in his mind ‘common naina take the bite… you have to’
While naina also thinking the same ‘you want me to take the bite, should I take it or not’
“Ok deal”
Both shacked hand and walk opposite sides. Both “let’s see who will win”
To be continued.

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28 Comments
  1. Titli

    Before reading only i am commenting due to happiness of reading ur short story.. i love u yaar.. ❤️❤️❤️❤️
    Thank u so much for writing another one.. in your last epi of long lasting love i guess i dint comment.. actually i forgot to..?? but yeah am glad u r back.. and i can bet that this will be great story.. now am going to read..????❤️?

    1. Threemaimai

      awww…. you are really sooo sweet… dear… there is only 3 ep but hope you enjoy it …. 🙂

    2. Titli

      I already said.. it ll be great.. its indeed GREAT and UNIQUE.. loved it.. next epi soon.. pls..????

      1. Threemaimai

        it will be post soon and this os is for all of you to thank for being witg me all this time and waiting untill July for my next ff 🙂

  2. Its awesome

    1. Threemaimai

      thank you anaita 🙂

  3. Hey threemai !! Sry for not commenting on previous chps …but I read all and trust me they were fantastic !! Was sad that u ended the previous one very soon ….but this one is equally good !!??

    1. Threemaimai

      hi Nehal thank you for your sweet comment and as long as you enjoyed the story that’s enough for me and this little story to show my gratitude for your support. 🙂

  4. to be rank,whenever lread ur workzl don’t know y but l have a special feeling in my throat???can u imagine it…
    something like a cooling sensation…l seriously don’t know y….what afabulous writing,hatts off to u…

    1. Threemaimai

      hey seyal… i think i can imagine that feeling, trust me i had the exact feeling when i read thamis ff which inspired me to write my own 🙂
      when i saw your comment i truly felt happy and it’s a pleasure to write for you guys 🙂

  5. Amazing….. this is the first time I read this kind of love story
    it is really amazing…… plz post next part as soon as possible…..

    1. Threemaimai

      hey thank you so much Aishwarya.. 🙂 you will find next one soon 😀
      ( love story from reality 😉 )

  6. Threemaimai your are fabulous writer. Especially os was superb

    1. Threemaimai

      thank you.. 🙂 glad you like it

  7. Devihaa

    Hey hi yaar….. Omg…..It’s soooooooo awesome….. Mind blowing…. I mean… I was not able to imagine Karan as a cool guy..Or his change in behavior all of a sudden…..In most of FF… May be because he is kinda introverted…In the show…. But trust me yaar… In ur FF I could actually imagine Karan as u portrayed … I don’t know what magic u did… But seriously…It was soooooooo super…..
    Waiting for ur next part…

    1. Threemaimai

      hi devihaa soo you like the new image of karan 😀 i am soo happy. this is just a trial version of my next ff. right now i am super duper happy coz all of you seems to enjoy the story a lot just like i did while typing 😀
      thank you dear…………. 🙂

  8. Minerva

    This was just awesome. The usage of words and presentation of dialogues was supremely amazing. Its a truly great storyline and the banter between the NaiRan couple makes it even more interesting. The concept is just marvellous. All the dialogues and actions were plain perfect. There just cannot be any flaws in this type of a masterpiece..

    1. Threemaimai

      Hi Minerva i am truly touched how you describe about my ff and it’s really means a lot because i just collect random incidents and create stories but when i read your comments i feels my writings are really worthy.
      anyway i have a request for you , i think from your hand can create a masterpiece and i am waiting to read it 😀

  9. Superb superb superb…nice..you rocked it…you know how much iam happy after reading this…first thing is your title attracted me more..i can’t get words…beautiful ..fantastic..you are really superb writer dear

    1. Threemaimai

      hi dear…. thank you so much for your sweet comment…. me too love the title of this… 🙂
      it was just an idea flashed in my mind and I desperately wanted to share it with you all 🙂

  10. Tamihna0808

    Aaah! This is absolutely ? I can imagine Karan being so daring and a school jock! I really can’t wait for he future updates!
    Loads of love! ❤?

    1. Threemaimai

      thank you thami… glad you like the new version of karan… 🙂

  11. Nairanlove

    so beautiful i loved it so much! i can’t wait to read the rest! ?

    1. Threemaimai

      thank you dear…. 🙂

  12. Nila

    Amazing yaar so cuteeeeeee and unique concept and i am waiting eagerly for next one

    1. Threemaimai

      thank you nila…. try to update soon because of some technical issue i couldn’t finish as I promise

  13. Ur first part is just lovely!!!!1.Eagerly waiting for ur next part.Please update soon

    1. Threemaimai

      thank you dear. i already submitted the article you will find it soon

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