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SUSPECT – CHAPTER 1 (SwaSan) by Marsuu

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Hello!! I’m here with a suspenseful story. I was not able to stop my self to write this one so plz read πŸ˜…πŸ˜…. While reading this you will get the feeling of watching CID😜😜😜 but there will be love story and romance alsoπŸ™ŠπŸ™Š.
Let’s begin:

SUSPECT(SwaSan)
CHAPTER 1:

A man in black suit enter inside the huge well flourished mansion. There were few men who are following him. His one hand is in his pocket and with other he removed his goggles moving close to the dead body.
A boy in early twenties is lying dead in the poll of blood. One knife is near him covered with blood. It can be clearly seen that boy is stabbed ruthlessly in his heart eventually which leads to his death.
Two young girls who also seems to be in early twenties are crying looking at the lifeless body. One girl is crying badly and other is consoling her.
” Swara plz don’t cry” the other girl said though tears are flowing from her eyes also.
” how all this happened ragini” swara said sniffing.
” don’t worry” ragini side hugged her trying to sooth her pain.

That man who came in black suit after examining the dead body moves towards the girls.
” hey I’m ACP Sanskar Maheshwari. I will be looking after this case as it is crystal clear that this is intensional murder so we need to find the person who committed it” sanskar said professionally.
ACP Sanskar Maheshwari, a man of 29, His motive in life is to serve the people. He hardly live his personal life as most of the time he gives to his duty. He is orphan and after struggling a lot he reached this position.

Ragini nodded listening to sanskar. They trio move towards drawing room.
Swara and ragini sit on the sofa and sanskar on the chair in front of them.
” who was he??” Sanskar asked pointing towards the dead body in the hall.
” Nikil Raheja” Ragini mummers.
” what was he doing here??” He again asked.
Swara was just staring at her lap as she was shocked with the sudden death of nikil.
” he was swara’s boyfriend so came to meet her” ragini said when swara didn’t responded.
” what relation you both have??” Sanskar asked them.
” she is my sister” swara said still looking down.
” Daughters of late Shekar Gododia Right???” Sanskar said
Swara and ragini nodded.
” As far as I had the information you are step sisters?” Sanskar again said.
” yes” swara accepted.

” how’s is your bonding??” Sanskar asked.
” very good” ragini give a small smile looking at swara.
” yeah sweet and lovely” swara smile back.
” exactly what happened yesterday night?” Sanskar asked.
” nikil came to meet me as in the morning I return from USA. He came in the evening and we three spend time with each other then ragini left to her room and we too mine. We ordered dinner from restaurant and then later after having it we slept” Swara explained.
” what he talked with you for the last time??” Sanskar asked.
” nothing much” swara tried to ignore the topic.
” I think they have arguments” ragini said hesitately.
” how can you say?” Sanskar asked.
” actually I listened they were shouting” ragini told.
” so you fought with him Miss Swara Gododia??” Sanskar interrogated.
” yeah it was small one” swara said.
” how much you were close to each other ?” Sanskar asked swara.
” means??” Swara was confused with his question
” how much you love him?” he said.
” i don’t love him it’s just I like him as a friend. He was proposing me from last two years so I accepted” swara cleared.
” since when you were in relationship” sanskar asked.
” from last three months” swara told.

” sir we got this bracelet near dead body” a man from team came near them.
Sanskar took the bracelet and saw it.
” whose bracelet is this??” He asked.
” Swara its your” ragini said observing it.
” yeah its mine nikil gifted me on my birthday” swara said.
That man left and sanskar got up from his chair.
” Miss Swara Gododia, your bracelet is found near dead body, you had fight with him and after arguing with you he was murdered” Sanskar said with a smirk.
” what you mean??” Swara asked standing
” First suspect of this murder goes on you miss swara” Sanskar said.
” no sir you are mistaken” ragini tried to prevent swara.
” how can you say like this Mr Maheshwari?” swara asked furiously.
” may be you killed him to get rid of your unwanted relation” Smirk again came on his lips.
” ohh really!!! I can do break up also what will I get by his death??” Swara was losing her temper.
“What ever but first suspect is you” sanskar concluded.
” he was very good friend of our and swara can’t do this” ragini supported swara.
Sanskar ignored them and went to call his head.

After few mins, sanskar came back and said
” you have to be kept in our custody Miss swara”
” and why?? You can’t blame me without proof” swara protested.
” see we will not keep you behind bars just you will be safe with us so that you should not run away” Sanskar said reading some file.
Swara was at the verge of crying not knowing what to do.
” swara I’m there with you” ragini tried to make her feel better.
” you are coming to my house” sanskar said.
” why your house??” Swara questioned.
” its order from our head as it is the most safe place for you as from our previous records we get to know you are being attacked my times” Sanskar explained.
Swara nodded in anticipation as she don’t have any other option.
” get your needed things” he ordered.
” and Miss Ragini Gododia you also can’t go out of the city one man will always keep eye on you” he further added.

Swara packed her few things.
” swara I will come and meet you there” ragini said helping her.
” take care” Swara whisper.
” u too” ragini hugged him.
Swara went near sanskar’s car when he open the passenger seat door for her.
” thanks” she said before sitting.
He went to driver seat. Swara bid bye to ragini and left to sanskar’s house.

Sanskar opened the lock of simple flat. Swara felt little weird as she is born billionaire and always live in huge mansion.They enter inside the small Hall. Joined to it was two bedrooms and open kitchen.
” try to adjust here though its difficult for you” sanskar said looking at swara’s expressions.
Swara nodded.
” this is your room” he said pointing to one room and she assumed that the other room is his.
Swara silently went to the room.

Later, swara came out and saw sanskar in kitchen.
” any help needed??” She asked.
” no take this” he give him one parcel.
” what this??” She asked looking at the packet.
” your food” he said cutting vegetables.
” from where you bought??” She asked.
” our office will provide you all the facilities not to worry” he said and again got busy with his work.
To be continued….

Hey if you guys are interested to read then leave your comments plzzz
Thank you.

58 Comments
  1. Loved it dear. Waiting for the next episode. Plzz continue

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear will post next part soon tc😊

  2. Shreny

    Awesome…. interesting…plzzz post next part soon.

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear will post next part soon tc😊😊

  3. Abirsha

    Interesting

    1. Mars

      Thank you dii tc😊😊

  4. Soujanya

    Awesome…

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear tc😊😊

  5. nice continue

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear tc😊😊

  6. Rekha

    Awesome as always dr……….😊😊😊
    Again a new Concept Good……..
    Waiting for ur next update πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear will continue soon tc😊😊

  7. Amazing

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear tc😊

  8. Awesome 😊😊😊😊😊

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear tc😊😊

  9. Neha_01

    Interesting & different..continue dear

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear will continue soon tc😊😊

  10. Bush1122

    Another different concept….
    How only you can think like this???
    Are you a super girl???? Or you have a super brain????????
    What ever it is im gonna enjoy alot….!!!
    I think this will have lotz of suspenses and thrills…..
    Ufffff can’t wait to read

    1. Mars

      Hihi I’m crazy girl not super girlπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜œπŸ˜œπŸ˜œπŸ˜œπŸ˜œ yuppp this is full of suspenseπŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡ thank you dear will post next part soon tc😘😘😊😊

  11. Interesting dear waiting for next part

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear will continue soon tc😊😊

  12. Very nice dear.loved it.

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear tc😊

  13. Interesting start..
    Super excited for this storyπŸ’ƒπŸ’ƒ
    Tc..

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear will continue soon tc😊😊😘

  14. Tamil

    It’s amazing dear……interesting……

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear tc😊😊

  15. Loved it di. Waiting for the next part.

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear will post next part soon tc😊😊

  16. I think it’s ragini… As after killing the blame will go to swara.. N swara will be jailed… So all the property will go to her name….
    N I really liked the concept…… I love CID types of serial… N with swasan… Is something which was unexpected…. Would love to read it….
    Update soon dear ❀❀❀❀❀

    1. Mars

      Let’s see who is the killerπŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡ thank you dear glad you liked it will post next part soon tc😊😊😘

  17. AnuAnn

    Marssu u Nd your stories are✌✌✌✌✌✌

    1. Mars

      Thank you anu dear tc😊😊😘😘😘

  18. NDSG

    It was nice, but I’m getting feeling that Ragini Gadodia may be the murderer or may me Sanskaar also. But may be Swara Oh God I’m totally confused πŸ˜°πŸ˜°πŸ˜°πŸ˜°πŸ˜“πŸ˜“πŸ˜“πŸ˜“πŸ˜“πŸ˜‘ . my little mind is not getting the suspect uff this means I have to read full to get to know who is the real culprit. But Nikhil is chipku boy huh. He irretated Swara so she has to accept his proposal. But the thing to whom I am waiting is Swara’s and Sanskaar’s love story, in Hi s little flat waiting more to come.

    1. Mars

      Let’s see who killed nikilπŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡
      So much will happen in that single flatπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ŠπŸ™ŠπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
      Swasan love story will start and that too intense oneπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’ž
      Thank you depuuu dear tc😘😘😊😊

  19. Interesting

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear tc😊😊😘😘

  20. Interesting….

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear tc😊😊😘😘

  21. Wow loved it 😍😍😍😍❀️❀️❀️❀️

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear tc😊😊😘😘

  22. Chaitu

    Super suspens thriller movie but u know they left in interval so buying popcorn to enjoy further waiting for your next part after interval loved it dear I really involved in this like I was watching movie so I gave comments as movie effect waiting dear tc

    1. Mars

      Awww that’s so sweet of you I loved your commentπŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’ž thank you dear will post next part soon tc😘😘😊😊

  23. Awesome and interesting….

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear tc😘😘😊😊

  24. Interesting

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear tc😘😘😊😊

  25. Ithink ragini is the murder because she only told their fight and the parcalite it swara so confirm our all time favorite villain ragini is doing this for swara for property or jealous. Sorry iam able comment on other story of yours sorry marsuu.

    1. Mars

      So the first finger goes on our all time favourite villainπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜ let’s see who is the culprit πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡
      Thank you dear and it’s okay tc😘😘😘😊😊

  26. Gayathri.visu

    Oh My Maata….from the beginning itself this Ragini’s presence gives me michmichi feeling(Ishqbaaz effect dear….hehehe)!!!
    Why do I m feeling that she is the murderer….?! Anyways really it’s interesting yaar. Waiting for next part n Swasan’s love story…

    1. Mars

      Then ignore ragini’s presenceπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜œπŸ˜œπŸ˜œπŸ˜œ let’s see who is the culprit.
      Thank you gayuu dear will post soon tc😘😘😊😊

  27. Tweety_SwaSan

    Wow Mars.. new story.. 😊😊 I am sorry I am late.. But this just amazing.. crime and thriller theme.. I loved it.. Everything is different.. So nikhil is murdered and suspect is Swara.. But I sense something more.. someone who want Swara to be blamed and punished so they can enjoy everything alone.. 😏 So Sanskaar will rescue his future life partner..his Soulmate 😍😍 and prove her innocent.. I am so excited for this.. Update soon dear.. Thank you.. Tc.. β€πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜πŸ˜˜πŸ€—

    1. Mars

      Yuppp right someone else should be blamed not SwaraπŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
      Ofcourse sanskar will save his swaraπŸ’• don’t be sorry its okay
      Thank you dear will post next part soon tc😘😘😊😊😊

  28. Awesome starting dear

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear tc😊😊😘😘

  29. Vyshu10

    superb….huhh that stupid ragini killed nikhil

    1. Mars

      Let’s seeπŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡ thank you so much dear tc😊😊😘😘

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