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Surprise Gift {OS} By Mrunal

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helloo guys.. & girls…

i know… i know… u all must be surprised by seeing my name as a author for OS..
but yep it’s true… and this is a gift for my sweet friend kuhu…. (kehkasha author of IB FF ” O SAATHIYA “)

bcoz today is her day…
it’s her birthday guys….
& i wanted to make it special… so i am writing this OS… which is filled with lots of interesting things…. including some IB characters…
i was so engrossed in my thoughts thinking about what to gift her…
i can’t meet her personally hence i thought to take her to the dreamland with the help of my writing skills…

link to her profile – Click here {plzzzz post ur B’day wishes on her wall…}

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16th January

AT SOME CAFE

[one cute girl is looking at her watch.. and her face is clearly showing the anger…. she is checking her phone again & again… she took one tissue & fetched one pen from the waiter… and started sketching something on it… half hour passed like this… now she was tired of waiting finally she determined something and got up from her seat…]

POV OF THAT GIRL

what’s this yaar… these two always do like this with me… i’m waiting here from past half an hour still these two late latifs r nowhere to be seen… enough is enough… now i am going from here…

[she was ready to leave the cafe when suddenly one girl in jeans & T-shirt came running & panting in the cafe…. & directly went to that girl and started doing sit-ups holding her both ears.. making a really cute puppy face…]

girl – (while doing sit-ups) sorry… sorry… sorry… really sorry kuhu….. i know i am super duper late this time… & before u tell me my punishment… I myself started with it u just tell me the count.. i’ll not stop till u don’t forgive me (the girl said all in one breath… panting) {so it’s reveled that the girl who was waiting in cafe was none another than our b’day girl kuhu}
kuhu – Nooooo…. i’ll not forgive u this time… u always do this Mrunal di…. I’m not gonna speak with u both… (and turned her face away…)
mrunal – sorry na dea… u know na.. i’m late latif… see i came 15 min early than last time… u should admire me…
kuhu – what…??? u know i’m leaving…bye (saying this she started walking towards the door)

[before both the girls reach the door…. dhammmm… one girl stumbled at the entrance and directly landed on them… all 3 girls fell down..]

mrunal – ouuuchhhhh…..!!!! what r u doing yaar… do u want to kill us…..????
kuhu – annika di…..!!!!!! really where is ur attention… do want all of us to visit hospital….
annika – (smiles sheepishly) sorry…. firse raita failaya… tum logo ko lagi to nahi….
mrunal – (in taunting tone) nahi hum toh bade khush hai… itani khubsurat ladki hamse takrai.. par kya yaar bahot zor se takrai tum eyelock bhi nahi hone diya…
annika – kya… tum thik to ho na kahi sir pe chot to nahi na lagi….(she checked for any wounds on her head)
kuhu – kya annika di… itna bhi nahi samajhate… dii taunt kar rahi hai aap ko… abhi utho varna yehi pe kam tamam ho jayega mera…
annika – sorry bola na yaar abhi tuant kyu kar rahe ho…
mrunal – okay okay… chalo maaf kiya… ab utho… bacchiyon ki jaan logi kya…
annika – oops…. (she got up and gave a helping hand to her both friends) waise ek baat samajh nahi aa rahi.. tum dono ja kaha rahi thi…

mrunal – wohh… kuhu gussa ho gai… aur yaha se ja rahi thi…
annika – kyu..??? kya hua…???
kuhu – (making her eyes big in disbelief) kya hua… aap muz se puch rahe ho… time dekha hai aapane… 2 ghante se yaha pe baithi hu… ab muze aap dono se bhi baat nahi karani…(and frowned)

[Mrunika were thinking a lot where.. smart annika winked at mrunal and started mission kuhu ko manao]

annika – (eyeing kuhu) mrunal tumhe pata hai mai late kyu ho gai…
mrunal – hum bina baat ke late nahi hote jarur kuch important kam aa gaya hoga….
annika – pata hai aaj tum dono ka animation ka 1st project pura ho gaya isiliye maine socha ke kahi bahar jayenge… aur pata hai muze kya mila aaj….
mrunal – kya… kya.. (faking excitement)
annika – wo OSO ke art exhibition ke passes mile hai.. lekin khair chodo… kuhu toh naraj hai baat bhi nahi karegi.. toh chalo ghar chalate hai…

[kuhu who was pretending to be angry turned towards her friends & hugged them both in excitement….]

kuhu – what…???? OSO ke art exhibition ke passes…. wow di u r great….. aap kitane acche ho… u r best….Aaj mera OSO ko milane ka dream pura hoga..
mrunal – ooo hello… idea mera tha… par passes mile kaise kyoki mai khud waha pe jake ayi thi toh tickets khatam ho gaye the…
annika – (admiring herself) woh agar subah subah jati toh jarur milate… par as usual late latif tu gayi nahi hogi time pe… (mrunal maid puppy face)
kuhu – wo chodo na di… passes kaha pe hai…(annika showed her passes.. but as soon as she saw them) ohhh nooooo…. di aap na impossible ho…. apane timing nahi dekha kya… hame 7 baje waha hona chahiye tha… ab 7:30 baj chuke hai….

mrunal – (she snatched passes from kuhu & confirmed time) aur agar adhe ghante me waha nahi gaye to…. omkara singh oberoi ko milana impossible ho jayega….
annika – PHAIL GAYA RAITA…

[kuhu literally dragged mrunika with her in jiffy… champa{annika ki bike yaad hai na} was ill.. hence mrunal took her bike… three of them managed themselves on that bike and rushed to venue of art exhibition … praying that they will get a chance to meet OSO.. specially for kuhu.. bcoz she is biggest fan of him…. she herself is an rising artist whose inspiration is OSO… it’s her dream to meet OSO.. & each time they missed opportunity to meet him..]

@ ART EXHIBITION

[after trying their best to reach on time also they missed it again… now kuhu was so sad.. seeing her sad annika & mrunal also felt sad..]

kuhu – hamne firse chance miss kar diya..
annika – sorry meri vajah se ho gaya..
mrunal – nahi galati meri hai… muze timing yaad rakhana chahiye tha after all sari info maine nikali thi…
annika – par mai time pe nahi na aayi.. isiliye meri galati…
mrunal – maine kaha na time pe jana meri responsibility thi… so it’s my mistake.. (both started taking blame on themselves..)
kuhu – okay guys now leave it… let’s go to home..

[finally they reached home…. mrunal & kuhu lives as a paying guest at annika’s house.. they both r here for animation course.. their hometowns r different…]

kuhu – i’m tired.. i’ll sleep.. (saying this kuhu went to her bed sadly..)
mrunal – ohh god hum har baar chance kaise miss kar dete hai… ab dekho ye do din mai kuhu ka bday hai aur wo sad hai…(she sat their on sofa disappointed)
annika – haan na hamne kitane plan banaye the sab pe pani fir jayega… (she also rested beside mrunal but suddenly her eyes brightened and she blinked at mrunal)
mrunal – kya…??? (in a frightened tone… bcoz whenever annika sees mrunal like this.. she makes her bali ka bakra for her ajib ideas..)
annika – mere pass ek idea hai kuhu ka mood thik karane ke liye… aur usame tum meri help karogi..
mrunal – nahi nahi pehale plan batao fir help karungi… varana fir se meri band bajwaogi har bar ki tarah..
annika – kya tum bhi friends ke liye itna bhi nahi kar sakati….(as usual emotional blackmail shuru..) karegi na itna.. pinky promise
mrunal – (emotinal atyachar ke vajah se senti hogai) okay pinky promise… batao kya karna hai..
annika – suno… {kya sun rahe ho.. secret hai aage padho… abhi to woh mute mai plan bata rahi hai..} aya plan samajh mai…
mrunal – ab toh muze pakka yakin ho gaya tu dost nahi dushman hai meri… bacchi ki jaan legi kya…
annika – tune promise kiya hai… tuze karna padega… so abb mission surprise gift start karate hai…

[from that night both mrunal & annika got busy in their mission.. it was surprise for kuhu hence they were trying their best to hide it from her… they stayed busy.. or pretended to be busy bcoz of which kuhu didn’t got to know anything… they pretended to forget about her bday… and whenever she gave them hint.. they guessed wrong intentionally….. it was 11:59 in watch… and kuhu was waiting for her friends sitting on bed.. but to her surprise none of them appeared to wish her… the clock showed 12:10 hence wondering about there absence she went in hall to check on her lovely di’s… as soon as she reached in room she found them sleeping.. annika was sleeping on sofa.. and mrunal was sleeping on table..

it seemed like that she was working on her laptop… but suddenly her phone ranged it was her parents call.. so she went to attend it.. and fall asleep after talking with her family.. Next morning she got up with hope that at least now her di’s will wish her.. but she got text on their common grp that bcoz of some work both went to pune… so kuhu is alone.. they asked her to take rest and don’t go out of the house.. a very disappointed kuhu replied with “okay”… on other hand these two were busy with planning surprise.. they were feeling bad for making her sad on her special day….]

18 January @ 6 PM in the evening…

POV OF KUHU

i’m surprised… i thought they will make this day memorable for me…. but no they didn’t even remember it… first of all they left for pune leaving me alone & now had called me here to enjoy the concert of mrunal di’s fav singer… ohh god i can’t even remember his name….hmm let it be… i’ll think as it is a party for me… at least i’ll spend my remaining day with both… its better than being alone… but where r they… even this place is not that much crowded.. this ground is soo small… it doesn’t even look like any concert ground at all…suddenly my phone started ringing…
name flashed as ‘mrunal di’

ON PHONE

mrunal – hellooo kuhu.. kaha reh gayi tu..
kuhu – (pretending to be normal) ground ke pass hi hu.. abhi andar aane wali hu….
mrunal – okay jaldi aa…

KUHU’S POV

as soon as i entered opening the gate i felt like i’ll fall down… it was a huge shock for me… i was like plzzz someone pinch me hard.. is it really happening or i am dreaming… the whole ground was decorated with most beautiful flowers of world.. in the middle one table was decorated with ribbons,flowers, balloons.. and what not… that ground was not that much big so it was clearly visible to me that both mrunal di & annika di were standing near the table… i turned around and took a look of the whole place.. and one thing made me happiest.. the whole place was full with my different art works… my drawings.. my sketches… now the both didi’s was eyeing me as if they saw alien.. but soon it struck my brain that why they r eyeing me like this… i was standing there for past 15 min and both my friends was waiting for me near table… so i went near them…. as soon as i reached their… they both squeezed me in a bone crushing hug… & shouted on the top of their voice… ” HAPPY BIRTHDAY KUHU…..”

mrunika – (in a singing tone..)
baar baar din ye aayee…
baar baar dil ye gaye….
tu jiye hajaron saal….
ye meri hai arazu…
happy b’day to u..
happy b’day to u…
happy b’day dear kuhu….
happy b’day 2 u

kuhu – awwww… ohh both di’s such lovely surprise… and all this for me… I can’t express my feelings… i’m jumping in happiness… feeling so special… no words to describe… {these r really kuhu’s words she replied me like this when i wished her on her wall in special way…}
mrunika – (in unison) our pleasure dear… par ye toh sirf trailer tha picture abhi bhi baki hai mere dost…
kuhu – wow.. aur bhi surprise hai..
mrunal – haan hai… piche dekho….(and pointed at something behind kuhu)
kuhu – (turning in excitement ) kya hai.. kya hai….

KUHU’S POV

as soon as i turned around… i got the most awesome surprise of my life… there he was standing with some gift in his hand… the great & one and only… fantastic artist and my role model… omkara singh oberoi…. my jaw dropped down in utter shock… but how come he is present here… i turned to look at my friends.. and they showed their teeth grinning from ear to ear… when i again turned to look at him.. i found him near me with his hand in front of me {for handshake i guessed}

om – (with his dazzling smile) Hi.. kehkasha.. omkara here…
kuhu – (in shock hence bit stammering..) h.. hi.. kuhu… i mean kehkasha..
om – many many happy returns of the day… may god bless u with lot of happiness…
kuhu – (now i was bit composed) thank u so much….
mrunal – thank u Mr. omkara u took ur precious time and came here to wish her..
annika – (smiling and coming forward) haan haan… thank u so much…. aap baithiye na abhi sab log ate hi honge..(om complied and sat their on one chair.. which was arranged for guests..)

[soon some more friends joined at the celebration.. now kuhu was standing in middle.. and annika & mrunal was standing beside her…]

mrunal – thank so much all of u for joining us in b’day celebration of our dear friend….(everyone clapped at this..)
annika – ab itna accha mauka hai to ek special shayari kuhu ke liye…

Tera janam din mai manau…
phoolon se bahaaron se,
har ek khubsurati..
duniya se mai le aaoon,
sajaau yeh mehfil mai…
har haseen nazaron se.

kuhu – thank u so much di…
mrunal – abhi surprise baki hai..

[suddenly all lights got switched off.. and one projector started… there was one beautiful video playing on it.. yes it was collection of our friends pictures… from starting.. there were many pictures it…and on top of that the song was playing in background was more beautiful & suitable to situation.. “hum rahe ya na rahe kal… kal yaad ayenge ye pal”.. it finished showing the journey of our friendship..]

mrunal – so kaisa laga mera gift…???
kuhu – (hugging tightly) thank u so much….. toh ye sab kar rahe the aap dono do din se… isiliye busy the.. Aur muz se baat bhi nahi kar rahe the… par ek baat samaz nahi aai ye sab toh thik hai par OSO ko kaise leke aye aap dono…
annika – oho wo sab chodo cake cut karate hai sab wait kar rahe hai.. baad mai ghar jake baat karenge…

[then everyone gathered around table for cake cutting… cake was so beautiful.. {kuhu tumhe jo cake ka pic insta pe send kiya wo imagine kar lena… aur baki log ko jo koi bhi apka dream cake hai imagine kar lo} then with everyone singing the b’day song.. kuhu cuts her b’day cake.. then everyone feed her the cake.. she also feed them back… everyone was busy partying.. when omkara again came near them..]

om – i’ll take ur leave now.. i have to attend one exhibition… once again happy bday..(he said shaking hand with kuhu)
kuhu – thank u so much omkara ji… i am ur fan.. u r my role model… i always follow ur creations…

om – yes i know ur friends told me that.. that’s why i agreed to come here.. if u don’t mind i would like to offer u guidance in art.. bcoz u r a really good rising artist.. & i would like to give u a platform…
kuhu – (she was on cloud nine.. who will say no to such a golden opportunity) thank u so much… it’ll be the most amazing thing of my life.. I am really happy.. i was trying for this only but opportunity came to me on it’s own..
om – okay then i’ll meet u tomorrow.. this my card.. there is address of my art gallery so u can come there directly… be on time…
kuhu – (in full excitement) yes.. yes… i’ll be there.

[after that everyone partied till late.. after some time we wrapped up everything and came home.. kuhu was so happy bcoz her dream was going to fulfill.. but suddenly she remembered that she has to ask her friends that how they planned all this]

kuhu – ek baat batao muze aap dono ye sab kiya kaise..??
mrunal – kya..?
kuhu – yehi planning…
annika – accha planning.. (all three of them rested on sofa) wo idea mera tha…

~~~~~ FLASHBACK ~~~~~~

annika – (she is narrating flashback) woh jab hum log exhibition se vapas aye.. to tu udas hokar chali gayi.. fir hum dono ko bura laga tuze udas dekh kar… phir mee dimag mai kidaki tod idea aaya.. maine mrunal ko bataya toh isane pehale nur jahan ke nakhare dikhaye phir maan gayi… hamare plan ke mutabik mrunal ne pehale OSO ki sari information nikal li.. fir hame ye pata chala ki har roj subah wo joging karane jata hai… fir hum bhi waha parr pahuch gaye.. mrunal chor ban gayi aur apana muh dhak kar usane OSO ka side bag baghaya… phir mai annika the saviour banake waha par pahoch gayi.. aur chor ko pakadane na natak karake bag vapas le liya.. aur OSO ji ko de diya.. phir kya tha vo ekdam khush ho gaye aur thank u bolane lage.. toh maine bhi unase kaha thank u bolane ki wajah teri b’day party attend kare..

humne unhe bata diya ke tu bhi ek artist hai aur unki badi fan ho toh woh bhi maan gaye… aur baki ka party planning to mere daye haat ka khel hai.. tu to janati hi hai.. aur mrunal ne bhi woh video banaya hamari memories ka bas itna sa hi…
mrunal – kya bas itna sa hi… zhut muth ke chori mai.. sach much mai pita muz ko… abhi bhi dard kar raha hai…(sniffed making angry face)
annika – sorry na baba.. woh thoda sa real lagne ke liye karna pada..(they continued their cute nok zok..)
kuhu – (becoming hugged both) thank u so much… u made this b’day very special for me..
mrunika – (hugging her back) ab special friend ke liye itna to banta hi hai….

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finally ended with this… i am sorry if i bored u to the core… i don’t know how this stupid idea came in my silly brain…
it was specially for kuhu… i hope she’ll enjoy it…
baki jo bhi ye padhega plzzz muze maaf kar dena..

NOTE FOR KUHU…

hey dear.. agar tum mere saath hoti toh jo jo iss ff mai maine likha hai wo sab mai apane iss special se cute aur muzase chote friend ke liye jarur karati..{except the OSO wala.. bcoz om se milwana mere bas ki baat nahi.. LOLzz..} i was continuously bothering u from past two days for this only… i asked u many questions… and assuming ur ans i guessed ur likes & tried to write this… i hope u will not mind it… i tried my best.. i hope i’ll become successful to take u to the dreamland to imagine this celebration which came in my idiotic brain…

A BIG WALA SORRY FOR THIS STUPID THING…
AGAR ACCHA NA LAGE TO JO BHI HAATH MAI HO FEK KE MARO…

PAR PLEASE KEHKASHA KE PAGE PE JAKE USE APANE GOOD WISHES DE DO

3 Comments
  1. Mrunal

    Finally it’s uploaded..
    But it’s too late now…
    Why TU why…😐😐
    Why u didn’t uploaded it faster…😞😞

  2. Kehkasha

    Hello..diii……..ok now I really don’t know what to say……but I am now on cloud nine….coz I wasn’t able to even think that u r gonna to give me such a wonderful gift…….as soon as I checked my insta…..and found ur message…… I immediately read it…….abhi party khatam hi hui thi……ki aapne ek amazing gift……no…..most amazing dreamland tour karwa Diya……

    U have really made me feel sooo special……i really don’t have words to express…….and frankly speaking you exactly presented me in the starting…….u know what I could have done the same…….if not fully then partially…….
    😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ love u my dear….cute sweet…..lovely and amazing sister…..luv u di….

    1. Mrunal

      Ohhhooo my cute little sisso…
      Me tooo love u a lot….πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–
      And i am so happy that u liked it…
      I’m really feeling to good…

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