Sukor un faded love… Episode 1

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Hi guyz..I am greatest fan of sukor..I lv them alot..so thought a fiction on them..hope u all will support me nd enjy Tis…

Tis fiction starts from suraj becoming banduva…

Kamal narayan’s men ties suraj in the cowshed.
Kn: (laughs) see suraj wat fate has done for u…now u are my banduva…ur death nd life is in my hands…u will know the consequences of cheating me…let me see now wat u and ur banduva wife will do against me…
Kn leaves…suraj trying to remove the chains…

Chakor comes there crying…suraj sees her coming…she stands before him crying…he wipes her tears…

Chakor: how all this happened suraj…i cant see u in this state..( Chakor sees the banduva symbol in his hand)
Suraj: I too dono how all this happened…bt be happy Chakor tat i am still alive before u…so dont cry…
Chakor: bt suraj…( suraj stops her by keeping finger in her lip from saying anything)
Suraj: do u know Chakor…till now i made many people banduva on my kn’s saying… i hadnt understood their pain.. Bt today i understood their pain…
On seeing Tis symbol in my hand itself gives me more pain..they are living Tis banduva life for long time…

Chakor:suraj y are u talking Tis now…dont feel bad i am with u suraj…i had been fighting wit kn since long … Now my fight is for u…
Suraj: how we will come out of this chakor..i dono wat my father is thinking to do wit me…
Chakor: I will go and meet kamal narayan and talk with him…
( she leaves…suraj holds her hand)
Suraj: dont go chakor…i feel more strength when u r with me…be wit me for come time…
( they have an eyelock…both sukor sat down in the cowshed holding hands)

Tats all guyz…hope u all like it…give ur feedback…if u people dont like anything…tell those also..

Precap: kamal’s condition and suraj’s anger

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9 Comments
  1. Awesome start. Waiting for the next.

  2. Great start, loved their dialogue. Looking forward to know what’s KN’s conditions.

  3. Itresting keep itup.waiting for next update.

  4. Sukorlover

    Interesting start

  5. Sai

    Thank you guyz for ur feedback.. I am so happy…i will try to post next soon…

  6. Very good ff

  7. Love ur ff. Jeep going Dr. Waiting for KN condition. Will he torture them as much as he did in the serial?

  8. ShanayaKhan

    Interesting. Waiting for the next update soon.

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