Sukor-My love Episode 12

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for reading my story….

I know my story didn’t recognize in telly updates…. But I write this same story in wattpad with some changes in the name of My love-Sukor….

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It’s the sample story part..
Chakor caught suraj’s ear and squeezed it….

You did so wrong  today…. So you have to punish for that… chakor snapped him…

What? Leave me… pleaded chakor…

(Exorcist runaway from room)

Raghav: are you okay? Please tell me whom are you talking to? Is there anyone in room other than us?

Suraj nodded… bro…there is a ghost in my room…

What? Raghav tries to runaway….

While chakor run towards door and closes it…

Oh my god… how can this door suddenly locked… he stammered…

I’m not dead yet… don’t say like that… chakor snapped suraj…

Hey suraj tell your friend don’t try to runaway… I won’t harm him… if he is friend of yours then he my friend also…

Bro… just calm down… nothing going to happen… suraj soothing raghav

Raghav: Is it male or female?

Suraj: What?

Raghav: The sprit…

Suraj:Ohhh… her name is chakor…

After sometime

Chakor and angel sits in one side…. Suraj and Raghav sits in opposite side…

Suraj take the paper and pen in your hand and write whatever I tell… she ordered suraj

What? I won’t do anything you ask… Suraj tells her…

Chakor hits his head…. Do what I say… she commended
              
                   Contract

I, Suraj do whatever chakor ask… and make chakor always happy…. And never ask chakor to leave me… and never talks about chakor to anyone…

and sign it…

What? I won’t sign it…

Chakor closes her fist and shows to him….

Suraj signed it…

Give this paper to your friend… and ask him to write…what I tell…

what’s your friend name?

Suraj: his name is Raghav…

ask him to write… I, Raghav do always whatever chakor ask… and helps suraj in the matter of chakor… and never talks about chakor to anyone… and Raghav also signed it….

Angel you are the witness of this contract… please sign here…

Angel signed as white…(Raghav sees only pen moving and get scared…and holds suraj’s hand)
Chakor: Is your name white?

No… it’s a code word… Angel replies to her…

Hey chakor… whom are you talking to? Suraj asked chakor…

Angel… wait… what? She sits beside me… is angel not visible to your eyes?

Suraj nodded…

I’m only visible to only your eyes like you only visible to suraj’s eyes….

Don’t even try to violate the contract? Chakor ordered him…

What if we are abiding the contract…?

It’s the contract drawn by me in front of angel… it’s equal to heaven promise

If you are violating it… you will die in next moment… and directly go to hell…

What? Suraj get shocked

Don’t get tension… chakor laughed

Devil… Suraj mumbled…

What? I don’t hear anything… can you please say it in little more loud?

Heee….heee… I said you are look like an angel… lied to her…

Oh… really… thank you… chakor smiles

Don’t scare them… Angel told chakor…

Otherwise he won’t help me… chakor whispered to angel…

SURAJ: I have a doubt…

What… my sun

how can you feel paining?

I don’t know… may be angel knows it… I will ask her…

Hey angel, why am I feeling pain when something hit me?

Because you are not dead yet… when something hits you….surely you will feel pain…

Oh… I will try not to get hurt again…

Oh my god… how can I forget that? Chakor shouted…

What?

Your punishment… chakor replies to him…

What? Why do have I to punish?

Because you are doing mean thing to me

First clean the room with your friend raghav…

I won’t do anything… Suraj shakes his head in no…

Chakor blows her hair… and waves the contract

Are you threatening me? Suraj tries to snatch contact from her hand… chakor take the contract above her head…

Are you again tries to fight with me? Chakor asks him…

Chakor hits his leg with her knee…

Suraj screams… you devil…

Suraj rubs where chakor hits…

Are you going to clean the room or not?

Raghav saw all this… and think himself… oh my god… this is hell… in this young age what I going through….

Bro… that devil ask us to clean my room…

Why do we have to? Call maid to clean room… Raghav asked Suraj…

Chakor hits raghav in head… why? don’t you have hand

I’m going to stop writing here…

I know my story didn’t get fan to read there…. Sorry you all guys…

My story part didn’t read by 10people but in there in some part more than 70 people read…

Sorry guys to trouble you

16 comments

  1. Liya

    |Registered Member

    I love your story😍😍😍its really different 😘plzz don’t stop writing🙏🙏🙏…today’s epi was really awesome …chakor making Surat work😉…update soon

    • Mala

      |Author

      Thanks Liya…. from onwards I will write here too…. Please follow my story from this episode…. I will update… I changed the character of karthik and black and white angel… I will make sure the upcoming parts for understand the story… but I am comfortable with wattpad… But it’s okay… I try to change as per it is…

      • Liya

        |Registered Member

        I am following your story from epi 1 …plzz post in telly updates too😘😘😘 don’t worry dear you have readers…plzz don’t get dishearten💓…I know how much efforts you are putting to write ff and if you are not getting good response it hurts…at least for the readers who are following ..keep posting😘 take care

  2. Mitha

    Hi Liya,

    Thank u for the update.
    I was waiting for it since long time.
    Don’t stop write yaar!
    It’s really different and amusing. Plus continue!

    Waiting for next part!

  3. priya

    Superb mala and plz don’t stop writing, when ever I used to come to this page first i would search for your ff. I was sad as it became so many weeks.plz plz continue dear🙏🙏🙏

  4. Sia

    Mala it is very n dear I was missing ur ff from long time….n happy to see ur ff again n plz always continue writing OK…..

  5. KUDRAT

    |Registered Member

    Sab se peh le l want slap on ur face
    Keha chali gae thi aap
    Pta h pagel ke trah…….
    Sorry di for talking like this
    Par such m muje aap ka ff behut pesand h
    I m silent reader
    But first time i mcmt for any ff
    Plz plz plz don’t stop writing
    Aap k e story sab s alag h
    Aap k paas behut saare content h
    Aap ka episode to 200se bhi jyda ho sakta h
    Plz don’t stop writing

    Aur ek special aur jeruri baat
    KI
    Hemesha unke baare m sochna cha hi e ya phir unki feekar karni cha hi jo aap s pyaar kar te ho
    To aap y ff hanare lea lik e a plz di
    Don’t think to stop writing
    Agar aap y cmt pade to reply jerur kere
    Plz plz plz
    Lu lu lu so much
    Take care
    Good night

    Aur ha ek or ff ata tha
    I m always with u
    Plz unh bhi kehia ff cntinue kar n k lea plz plz plz plz plz

    Sorry if I hurt u

  6. Cutie..

    No no no no no u r not stopping here..n its nt a rqst its an order..don’t u dare u stop dis..u r writing n v r waiting.. I don’t no any thing..u r writing n dats final no excuses…dis is d 1st ff of telly update on which I m commenting.. U have 2 written its my fav ff..I m waiting..

  7. Shibil

    |Registered Member

    dont stop writing yar…i love ur writing ….ur ff is awesome …i was reading ur ff frm epi 1 ….do continuing ..

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