Sukor-My love Episode 11

Thanks who are all comment for me… it’s encouraging me lot to write… I will try post two ff in one week… I hope you all like this ff…
In agra
Rahul calls suraj….
Suraj: yes rahul….
Rahul: can you come outside?
Suraj: why?
Rahul: please come outside… if your father saw me he will kill me for supporting you… do you want me to die?
Suraj: okay…okay… I will come… give me 5 minutes…
Chakor: did you go anywhere?
suraj nodded….
Chakor: where?
Suraj: I don’t know… my friend ask me to come outside…
Chakor: okay… after meeting your friend… shall we go to shopping?
Suraj: shopping… no…
Chakor: please… see my dress it’s full of blood stain…
Suraj: no… (He went outside and saw his friends who were all waiting for him in car)
Suraj tries to get in the car… chakor holds his hand…
Suraj looks at her…and raise his eyebrows…
Can we go in bike instead of car? I had bad memories with car… it reminds my accident… chakor pleaded him…
Suraj: then don’t come… (Tries to remove his hand from her hold…. Chakor doesn’t leave him…
Rahul in driver seat ask him to get in… suraj tells him…no… You guys go… I will come with my bike…
Rahul: why?
Suraj: just nothing…
Rahul: then follow us…
Suraj nodded… and went to get his bike…
Chakor: thank you so much… said with smiles widely…
Suraj: don’t think I’m doing this for you… I want also…
Chakor: you want also ride your bike…
Suraj: hmmm…
(Suraj and chakor follows the car)
Chakor: where we are going now?
Suraj: I don’t know… but this is the way to tajmahal…
Chakor: taj mahal… oh my god…. Taj mahal… I’m going to see taj mahal….
Suraj; don’t get excited… but I want to ask you something?
Chakor: what?
Suraj: you said you lost your memories… but how do you know taj mahal…
Chakor laughs… and replies to him…. Losing memories and losing knowledge is different thing…
Suraj: how?
Chakor: even I lost my memories… did I forget that I’m girl… just like that… may be I didn’t get hurt that much to lost my knowledge…
Suraj: oh…
Chakor: focus on driving only…
Suraj: okay crazy dog…
Chakor: what…

Suraj and chakor went to taj mahal with his friends….
Suraj: why do we are here?
Rahul: we are planning this last time also… you said you won’t come … it’ll remember your past…. (Said that he bites his tongue) sorry… I said I didn’t mean to hurt you…. I’m really sorry…
Suraj: it’ okay leave it…
Chakor: shall we go? (Chakor saw the tajmahal… Yamuna River is reflect the sunrays as made taj mahal more beautiful) wow… it’s so beautiful… shall we go inside? (chakor holds suraj’s hand)
Suraj: what is this? (Points towards their hand)
What if I miss in this crowd? That’s why….
Rahul: whom are you talking to?
Suraj: no one…
Chakor: they will think you are crazy if you speak to me like that…
Suraj jerks his hand and goes inside… chakor follows him…
Chakor: don’t leave me… please wait for me… (chakor again holds suraj’s hand)
Suraj: leave my hand…
Chakor: no… I won’t … she laughs…. (He looks at her so angrily… she automatically leave his hand)
Chakor: don’t look at me like this… I’m scared when you are look at me….(chakor silently follows him…)
He thinks if I’m leaved her here… she won’t come to home to trouble me…
Suraj : I will be come in 10 minutes (whisper to his friends)… but chakor didn’t hear him… Chakor lost herself… saw the beauty of taj mahal
Chakor: it’s so beautiful… see…. (Turns towards where suraj stand in minute ago)
Chakor: rahul… where is suraj? (But rahul is not responding her back) why are you not answer me… please tell me… (chakor almost in cry state…) oh no… you can’t hear me…
Chakor cries… I’m here with you all but no see me and no can’t hear me… what can I do now? How can he leave me? He is so selfish… I have to find him… why this all happen to me only…
She tries to find him… but can’t see anywhere and thinks he must come to parking lot at least for his bike… and went there and saw a car going to hit suraj… she get shocked and shouts suraj…

Precap: suraj’s past memories

I’m sorry if I am bore you all….

15 comments

  1. Aanya

    I love every thig abaut udan also ffs and some readers like you komal j, ankur,angel,sia.i’m sory guys i’m very poor in english.i’m from punjab so i can speak hindi and punjabi.i hope you’ll read my comment guys.

  2. warisha

    plz write lengthly… its too short yaar… nd plz write regularly… um eagerly waiting for ur ff.. nd u know ur ff is mind blowing

  3. mehakk

    its nice but…
    I would prefer if chakor comes back to real life…
    coz now this is getting a little too imaginary
    so its better if chakor regains her memory soon\

  4. Saral

    When are u going to upload the next part yaar I waiting for ur ff and komal I am waiting for ur ff to and you are mine sukor too pls three of u post ur ff it had been weeks u didn’t post ur ff really I am missing ur ff… 😭😭😭

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