Sukor-My love Episode 08

Suraj: did you change my shoes?
Chakor: I don’t know….
Suraj: don’t lie to me… I don’t like who are lie at me…
Chakor feels bad ask him sorry I did this… I did this for fun….
Suraj: for fun….He smiled mysteriously…
Oh my god… he is so scary…. I think I did mistake again today…. What if he asks resume the fight….I’m really idiot…
Rahul: whom are you talking to?
Suraj: no one…. there is a crazy dog in home…. I think that crazy dog changed my shoes….
Chakor: what?….. Crazy dog… you better what watch you are say…
Suraj ignores her…. And says crazy dog…
Chakor: how dare you?
Rahul: okay… come have a seat…..
Suraj other friends also laugh because of his shoes
Suraj: don’t make fun of me…. are you all okay?
His friends: we are all fine… why you are asking suddenly?
Suraj explains about his restless feeling in yesterday …. That’s why I want to meet you all…
Rahul: don’t worry… we are all fine…
Suraj: I’m feeling awkward right now… I want to go home…
Rahul: it does already past 1.00PM… have your lunch and go
Suraj: no…. next time

suraj and chakor comes home… chakor silently follows him….
When he enters the room…he suddenly turns towards chakor and pinned her to wall…
Chakor gets shocked because of suraj’s sudden action…. And asking him to leave me…
Suraj: how dare you make fun of me?
I said leave my hand otherwise I will kill you…. But her eyes are full of fear…. what you said…. You will kill me…. okay… then… Try to kill me said with smiles in his lips
Chakor: what?
Suraj: are you deaf? I said try to kill me…
Chakor shivers in fear… but she didn’t let him to know and said to him leave my hand it’s paining… but suraj tighten his grip…
Suraj: if you do one more time like this… I don’t know… what I will do (suddenly raises his voice)
Chakor suddenly smiles
Suraj: are you smiling just now?
Chakor: what you will do? Did you kill me? Mr. Sun
Suraj: yes… correct… you are already dead…. You… Crazy dog…
Chakor pushes him away… how dare you call me like this?
Suraj smiles and said crazy dog…. Crazy dog….
I’m already said sorry so please don’t call me like that
Suraj: I don’t accept your apology…
Chakor : sorry… I know I did wrong… so please… what can I do for accepting my apology….
Suraj smiles and ask her did you do whatever I ask?
Chakor: if you accept my sorry then I will do whatever you ask…
Suraj thinks what will I ask? And sees things scatter around the room… and ask her clean the room
Chakor: what? I won’t….
Suraj: then okay… I won’t accept your apology
Chakor thinks what if ask me to leave…. And said okay… I will do…
Suraj: that’s good… crazy dog….
Chakor: please don’t call me like that…
Chakor started her work… but suraj smiled at her and thinks this is your punishment for wrong doing…
Chakor: I’m finished Mr. Sun
Suraj: what? Sun
Chakor: you said your name is suraj that means sun… right?
Suraj: that’s correct… crazy dog…
Chakor feels disappointed… please don’t call me like that…asked him cutely
Suraj thinks she is so cute…. When she speaks like that….
Chakor looks around the room and ask him are you photographer?
Suraj: why are you asking like that?
Chakor: your room is full of photos…
Suraj: it’s my passion… I’m a cricketer playing for india
Chakor laughs, earlier you said you don’t like someone who are lie at you…. Then why are you lying to me?
Suraj: I said I’m a cricketer…..
Chakor: okay… I believe you….
Chakor sees the photos and ask him I want to go there… (Points towards photos of Taj mahal and red fort…)
Chakor: shall we go there?
Suraj: no… I won’t come… what if my fans see me…
Chakor bursts with laugh.
Chakor: I think you are not cricketer… but comedian?
Suraj: what did you say? You…. Crazy dog….

I am deeply sorry…… if I am bore you all
Thanks for reading my ff
I hope you all like this ff
Please comment for me if you want to change anything
Guys I’m not good at English… I am learning lot for writing this story….
So sorry if there is any mistake in ff….

11 comments

  1. Liya

    |Registered Member

    OMG your ff is awesome dear😍😍 ….the concept is really fresh & pretty much interesting! Hey your from TN,then we are neighbours I am from kerela. I am an irregular reader sorry for that!

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