Sujata’s OS: Unspoken Love

Hii guys frst OS if bad then plx spare me… lil nervous for ur reaction….
Starts :
Life is unpredictable…..
Sometimes our mistakes leads to be our biggest boon..
Same way I met him… by my mistake I met the most correct person in my life…
He is nobody to me but has become everything of mine….
I love him…. I never told him…. may b I will be never ever be able to tell him….
How can I tell his importance in my life because he has become my life….
I have never seen him only felt him… his care, his protection, his nature….
His name is only enough to make me smile even in the worst situation… like now… I am smiling thinking of him even in this situation….
I am waiting for him waiting for my SANSKAR to take me out of it…. I have full faith on him but not full faith on my fate because it has always deceived me…
Sorry sanskar I am taking this big step but I am still waiting…. I know you will come soon…. n this situation will be gone soon….
But it’s necessary sorry…..
If anything happens to me then forgive me…. I don’t know you love me or not but I love you a lot… n will love you forever even after death….
Being a stranger u have become more than a family to me but my family being a family has become worst than enemies…
She wiped her tears from her cheeks which was not stopping…
She took a knife which she had hide in her dress n took a deep breath….
N thn cut her wrist… blood started to flow… she just staring at the door so that it opens n he come n rescues her….
She is waiting for him…..
~ guys… its not film… so people don’t die just after the second they cut there wrist… they die because of blood loss n atleast it takes half an hour to make a certain blood loss so that we can declare person is dead.. so she has cut her wrist but waiting for him till her last breath~

So let’s c how it all started…..

~ GIRL’S POV~
Hi… I am swara bose… you can say I am an orphan because the family which resides doesn’t consider me as there member….
I live with my di swati gadodia… bcoz she is married so her title is changed… she is my sweet elder sister only possession I have now….
She is married to my jeeju… His name is adarsh gadodia… He doesn’t concider me his family but always a burden…
Di loves me a lot but can’t go against jeeju… He is the head of the family…
I have lost my parents when I was 18… now I am 23… I only know how l lived with jeeju’s taunts in these 5 years in this house….
Di is also helpless… sometimes I think why god is so cruel to me that he took my parents n abruptly changed my life from heaven to hell…
I was a so pampering child of my parents even much more than di… bt everything changed after there death… I had to come to di as I had no one…
So I want to be independent in life… I want to earn my own money…. so that I can be free from this hell… I have done Bcom wanted to study further but money is needed for everything…. jeeju even took my parents all money which they saved for me…. I am leaving a helpless life….

This is the reason I went to delhi for getting a job and so that I can come out of hell… from agra…. from jeeju’s torture…. but again came the same result…. I gave interviews in 4-5 companies…. bt things didn’t go well… I had to return to the hell again….

Thinking all these things in my mind. I sat on the bus to go to agra again…. I was crying deep inside my mind but don’t want to show to people… I hate sympathy faces people give to me… I had enough of sympathy faces during my parents death…. people show sympathy not to show that how much they care for you but to show how much you have fallen weak in ur life….
I was thinking of the results of my return to agra again and again empty handed… his taunts are filling my mind… This time it was di who gave her money to go to delhi in search of job…. bt next time she will not be able to do so… I will always be a bird in a cage trying to fly but every time someone cuts my wings n again make me fall down… life have been so unpredictable and unfaithful to me….

These thoughts were so occupied in my mind that when bus reached agra was like a minute of distance…. I closed my eyes n took a deep breath n stepped out of the bus to head towards my… oh sorry jeeju’s house…..

I entered n welcomed by di’s bright face… bt her face again fell down by seeing my face… Some times ppl don’t need words…. a look is enough to state close ones condition… she of course understood again I got the same result…

Di : koe nhi shona… next time all will be good…

She said taking my bag from me but before going to room I had to pass lion’s den who is sitting in dinning table n reading newspaper….

Jeeju : ohh… u came back… got the job (taunting way) how much salary haan one lakh or one crore….

This was coming for me… his taunts after a bad day this is only left….. but now don’t even feel bad because I have become used to it…. I not giving any heeds to him went to room n locked it n just stood there with the support of the door…. n I can hear the argument he is having with my di for me….

Jeeju : see again she went and wasted my money…

Di : she went to try na adarsh… why u r so harsh to her… its her money too…

Jeeju : swati u just stay out of it ok… its my money only mine… what she thinks she will go and every one will welcome her with a garland for job… I tell you I have many business clients let her go of with them… means marry her with them… she has always been a burden to me atleast it will give a profit to my business….

Di : adarsh u are speaking nonsense… abhi age hi kya hai uski… she is just 23… n let her try she is trying to be independent… n she is not a thing to be thrown out from family….

Jeeju : what’s the need of it… she can marry off n go… stay with her husband’s money… like this she tries again and again I am sure I will be bankrupt…

This is the daily routine… There fights because of me… This fight also went for 2-3 hours… I feel bad for di she has to fight with jeeju for me….
Thinking these all things I went to washroom n come by freshening up…
Then went to unpack my things….. I started to find my certificates… but was not able to find them… I started to panic…. as it was my last hope…
I went to di and asked about it… she was also blank about it…. di told her that this should not be known to her jeeju or he will start finding marriage proposal or better can be said business deals…

I searched everywhere atlast I concluded a that I have left them in bus… n now it was like impossible to find them now….
I cried all day and night thinking about my carelessness that will lead to my demises…. but I had never thought that carelessness will be the best mistake I had done life long….

~pov ends~

^NEXT DAY^
~BUS STAND~
~DELHI~

Bus stand was crowded like always… people moving here and there… vendors , passenger, busses all around….
As it was cleaning time busses was being cleaned…. A bus conductor by cleaning a bus throws a file out which is caught in nick time by a guy…
He is wearing a sky blue and white double collar shirt… With a black jeans and shades on…

Guy : Arre bhaiya…. sambhal ke….

Conductor : sorry bhaiya…. didn’t see you are coming…

Guy : next time be careful…. (looked at papers) whose file is this….

Conductor : don’t know bhaiya it was kept in the bus… so in cleaning the bus I thought to throw it….

Guy : Arre bhaiya thank god… u didn’t throw it… its very important paper…. (conductor look puzzled ) Arre don’t worry… I am not saying anything to you… I will send it to the right destination…

Conductor nodded and went to do the work…
Guy looked at the certificates
Guy : ummm… name… swara bose… so careless of you swara bose ji…. choro let’s c where this manik is…

After sometimes a other guy tapped at the first guys shoulder….

New guy : sanskar…. After a long time dude… Thanks for helping yâar….

Sanskar : ( hugging ) indeed long time… bt u are forgetting something…. Dosti mai no sorry no thank you…

Manik : haan haan… no sorry no thank you… waise what’s in ur hand…

Sanskar : someone’s life…

Manik : huh..

Sanskar : Arre some ppl are so careless… Some swara bose… forgot her certificates in the bus… wo toh thank god I took it…. or else conductor was going to throw it… I will post it too her address…

Manik : ( sigh ) Again ur charity work started here too… yaar it’s been only 2 days for you to shift to delhi and you started ur charity work….

Sanskar : ( keeping his hand in manik’s shoulder ) yâar. .. u know na I am orphan… If I can give happiness to others thn why not… n it’s about her life…

Manik : Acha Acha ok.. now ur lecture ended… Sanskari baba ki jai…

Sanskar : hahaha… chal av.. I have to post this too…

Manik : I am suggesting you yâar. .. u leave ur job n start a helping centre…

Sanskar : shut up manik….

And they went outside the bus stand….

~sanskar’s pov~

Hi.. I m sanskar maheshwari… I am a orphan… my earliest memories are also of orphanage only… yup I have grown up in an orphanage…. my mother used to work there bt she died when I was 2 years old so no memories of her…
No knowledge of my father… bt just I know my father’s title is maheshwari as sister’s of orphanage told me…

But i have never felt sad of the fact I never met my parents… bcoz that of no use… they will never come back….. so why to shed tear…. so instead of shedding tears I try to make others smile… by my small actions if anyone smiles then it’s my pleasure….
I have only few friends in which manik and laksh are my best friends… and rakhi sister ragini ( meher this is for u… tune ragsan os likha maine apne os mai usse sister banadiya) …. This is my life sweet and simple… I always believed in true love…. waiting for my soul mate… never imagined how she must be…. I don’t care about her looks but she must have a golden heart….
Now according to my frnd manik I have to do free service…. send this file to ms. Swara bose…

Never I thought this small help will change my life…. will make it so beautiful….

~agra~
~swara’s pov~
It’s been two says I have lost my certificates my last hope of good has gone…. till now jeeju doesn’t know it… but until when… This morning is also dull for me like yesterday’s…. but still I have hope that everything will be fine… its kinda funny I still have hope….

Then I heard di calling me… she was standing on door and talking to someone….

Di : shona a parcel came for you…

Me : me.. no it must be of someone else….

Di : no shona…. It has ur name n our address too…

Me : let me… who send parcel to an orphan….

Di : shona!!.

Me : Acha sorry sorry I am nt orphan….

I opened the parcel and I was so so so much happy that I can’t explain…. It was like I got my life back…. I immediately hugged my di… and started rotating her….

Di : Arre Arre shona. .. shant… what is it that you are soo happy….

Me : di it has my certificates….

Di : oh thank god… u got it… that person will be really good who send it to you… ab from next time don’t be careless ok… now go to ur room n freshen up…. wo toh thanks god adarsh is not here… or he would have know that it was missing…

Me : I know di…. ( I pecked her checks n when to my room)

I went to my room and immediately locked my room… n opened file again to see all things are correct or not…. then I found a envelope in it.. I opened it n found a letter…. I was first shocked but then read it….

{ hello miss swara boss,

This is ur saviour talking…. I am only the one who returned it to you… I know you will be shocked to see the letter but don’t be it’s my hobby to give shocks to people…. waise I am sanskar maheshwari…. I know kabhi naam nhi sunna hoga… unique u know… sorry for the blabbering I always talks bakwas like this…. hope u will not mind….
But be careful miss… certificates are really important I guess you know…. n ms. Topper is showing carelessness is like awkward… yup sorry but I saw ur marks…. u are really good at studies… ok keep it carefully now…
Now I am ending the letter or I will talk nonsense whole day…

Care
Sanskar }

This letter was a thunderstorm to me…. like how can a person can talk so frankly to a stranger…. but soon a curve formed in my lips a inner happiness took the place of shock…. I read the letter approx 100 times…. There was nothing special in it but then also it become so special to me… After thinking long… I thought to write a thank you letter back to him… to the address he has written…. n finally I wrote one after crushing many letters… n I posted them… waiting for the reply or may be no reply…

~delhi~
~sanskar’s pov~

I was in bathroom taking a bath when I heard manik and laksh calling me…. actually we share a flat… I immediately ran outside thinking it to emergency….

I saw both of them looking curiously at an envelope…. I was not able to thinking what it was…

Me : what’s it… why u shouted….

Manik : letter for you….

Sanskar : haan toh… may be office one…. why u are creating a scene….

Laksh : letter from a girl….

Sanskar : are you mad…

Laksh : Bhai I am angry u didn’t told me… u have a girlfriend omg… N love letters n all haan… so romantic…..

Sanskar : shut up lucky… what’s her name…

Manik : swara boss I guess…

I was like what… I never expected her to write a reply to my letter…. I just ran to them to get it…. they came to know about my excitement n was passing it to each other so that I can’t take it….

Me : now enough give it dammit…

Laksh : frst tell who is she….

I told him everything….

Manik : Ohhh. .. Ms. Certificates… bt then why you are so excited to read it… something something….

Me : shut up… nothing nothing….

Laksh : give it manik… Our sanskari sanskar is not sanskari anymore…. swara ne apne surro k jaal me phasa liya….

They both burst out laughing at me… I just gave them an angry look… n snatched the letter from them…. n ran to my room…. locked it n took a deep breath n finally opened it… I also don’t know why I was hell excited about it but I was…

{ hii.. Mr. Sanskar maheshwari….

Nyc to know about you… Thank you for your great help by returning my certificate…. I will always be grateful of your help…. u don’t know how much great thing you did to me….

Let me introduce myself I am swara bose….. same like you apne b naam nhi suna hoga… unique…. sorry for copying your line… but I also wanted to ask sorry as because of me u had to take lots of trouble…
I can’t talk like whole day as I am an introvert and reserved person…. so I am ending the letter…. nyc to meet you… n thank you….

Care
Swara…}

I was smiling idiotically after reading the letter… The letter was formal types but it was giving so different feelings…. and I was not able to control my self to write another letter…

~agra~
~SWARA’S POV~

Few days passed but letter didn’t came…. so I thought it’s the end… don’t know why but I was feeling sad for it…. but I used to ask di about any letter for me daily. … n then the day arrived…. He again send me a letter…. I was so happy seeing it….

{ hii swara….

Me sanskar again…. n yâar u r so so so much formal… We can be friends right…. n if u accept my friend request then haan I have rules in friendship n the biggest rule is friendship mai no sorry no thank you… ok hope so you will learn it and fit in ur brain….

So from next time no thank you no sorry… n as now u r my friend so you can call me sanky…. All friends call me that…. n about you being introvert and reserved thn talk to me for few days you will be bindass like me…. but I like reserved people…. ok… bye my new friend…

Care
Sanky }

This letter was like butterflies in my stomach…. I always wanted to talk to him long and long…. n he is giving me a friendship request…. n in this way our relationship started….
Even I accepted his friendship with great happiness n said him to call me shona…. n he agreed to me as well…
He told me he is an orphan…. n had suffered a lot…. It was so odd after suffering too much then also he is so optimistic…. always happy and positive….
Then even I said I am also the same like him…n told about jeeju… bt to my happiness in the next letter he didn’t show any sympathy but rather encouraged me to stand on my own…..
After every 3 days I used to wait for his letters…. n this has become a routine of my life now. .. its been 4 months of our friendship and we now have become life bestest friends… I was never so frank with anybody as I am with him…
Only my di knows about these letters and she is ok about it…. but now my conversation’s most part used to be about sanskar….
One day di said to invite him for lunch and all with his family…. n told di he is orphan…. she told she was talking about his wife….
I felt so bad listening that…. He must have a wife… but of course he has his own life he can do anything n I wrote a letter….

~DELHI~
~Sanky’s pov~

Now it has become my routine to wait for shona’s letter… After every 3 day I become desperate from morning for her letter n my both friends take advantage of it….
That day too as I heard the door bell… I was hell happy…. I went and took the letter n as I was signing the register…. laksh snatched the letter from me…. n obviously I ran after him….

Laksh : oh ho ho… bhabhi ka letter….

Me : lucky stop it…. frst of all she is just my friend n secnd no masti with her letters….

Laksh : no no no…. Manik catch….

Manik took it…. n started to open it….

Me : no….. I will kill you don’t even dare to open it…

Manik : then accept she is our bhabhi….

Me : no yâar…

Manik : ohoo then I have a chance right…. This lucky is fixed with ragini but I am free… mera kuch karwa de yâar…. how is she hot or not…..

They know that I can’t hear a word against her and also know that I have not seen her….

Me : ( sighed ) ok what do you want….

Laksh : ohh.. sanky u r so intelligent….. I want ur bike wanna take rags for long drive…

Manik : ummm.. I want you to talk to natasha to go for a date with me….

Me : lucky ur done take the keys…n manik I will try bt if her boyfriend will break ur bones then I will not do anything…. u know how he much possessive he is….

Manik : I will manage that….

And then they gave me the letter… This has also been my routine everytime they get hold of my letter they black mail me to do things… bt I too take revenge… let time come….

I took the letter n read it….

{ hii sanky…

As you know no formality with you now… so can you come to agra to meet my family… don’t be nervous yà…. u r not coming for any proposal just as my friend…. actually di wanted to meet you and jeeju is also out… so it will be good right….

Ummm.. sanky even di told you to bring ur family… I mean I never asked you… are you married…. thn bring your wife too…. We will enjoy…

Care
Shona…. }

I burst out of laughter after reading it… she thinks I am married… ohh my god….
But I was happy too… she knows me too well even that when I will be nervous….
Ohh… god shona but truth is I have started to fall for you… I feel very bad for ur condition but what to do… bt I have to clear this misunderstanding…. even if I will never will be able to tell my feelings bt atleast she should think I am single….
Uff shona u r impossible….

~AGRA~
~ SWARA’S POV~

These days were so restless waiting for his letter to know he is married or not… I came to know I have started to fall for him… bt it will be too awkward to fall for a married man… ohh… god… I only know how much I prayed to god that he must be single… n then the letter arrived… my heart was beating in abnormal rate like it will just pop out…

Atlast with much courage I opened it…

{Hey shona….

U r mad or what… I am only 25 yâar…. In my enjoying age you want me to change diapers of baby…
Now I am at a age to play n u thought I will play with my child… uff shona u r impossible….
But sorry yaar can’t come… I have just shifted to this office few months ago… n I don’t wanna meet you just as a day…. bt wanna enjoy with my friend for whole week…. ok… will surely come in ur bday week…. bt we have time right now…. so chill….
N haan that time u should prepare food for me haan… how many paneer dishes u know? ?.. Make them all ok… I love paneer…

Love
Sanky… }

I was jumping with happiness after hearing he is single bt he is not coming gave a sad sigh too… bt atlast I was so so happy…
He is the only person after my parents who make me feel so happy so contend… so good… so complete…
Most loving sight was the word care was replaced by love… bt ofcourse it was friendly love…. bt don’t worry it will turn to true love soon…
All girls dont want there birthdays to come fast as they will get a year old… but I am eagarly waiting for it… like hope it should have been tomorrow… bt nevertheless it’s on 14th February… ( actually my bday is on 14th Feb ) n I have decided as it’s week of love… I will confess my love to him on that day only…. days where passing like this…

☆Sanskar’s pov☆
Kaun mera, mera kya tu laage
Kyun tu baandhe, man ke man se dhaage
Bas chale naa kyun mera tere aage
Kaun mera, mera kya tu laage
Kyun tu baandhe, man ke man se dhaage

Dhoond hi loge mujhe tum har jagah ab to
Mujhko khabar hai
Ho gaya hun tera jab se Main hawa mein hoon
Tera asar hai
Tere paas hoon, ehsaas mein, main yaad mein teri
Tera thikana ban gaya ab saans mein meri

Kaun mera, mera kya tu laage
Kyun tu baandhe, man ke man se dhaage
Bas chale naa kyun mera tere aage
Kaun mera, mera kya tu laage
Kyun tu baandhe, man ke man se dhaage

( sanskar infront of mirror thinks how to meet her… does some rehearsal but smiles at his stupidity….. even takes out a SS bracelet she gifted him on his birthday…. He smiles thinking about her n falls on the bed dreamingly thinking about her )

☆swara’s pov☆
Kaun mera, mera kya tu laage
Kyun tu baandhe, man ke man se dhaage
Bas chale naa kyun mera tere aage
Kaun mera, mera kya tu laage
Kyun tu baandhe, man ke man se dhaage

Chhod kar na tu kahin bhi door ab jaana
Tujhko kasam hai
Saath rehna jo bhi hai tu
Jhooth ya sach hai, ya bharam hai
Apna banaane ka jatan kar hi chuke ab to
Baiyan pakad kar aaj chal
Main du bata sabko

Kaun mera, mera kya tu laage
Kyun tu baandhe, man ke man se dhaage
Bas chale naa kyun mera tere aage
Kaun mera, mera kya tu laage
Kyun tu baandhe, man ke man se dhaage

( swara is on the bed my keeping her face on her palm n elbow on bed… Thinking about him and letters and her new found feeling she blushes… then she takes out every letter and reads it again )

~DELHI~
~ SANKY’S POV ~

I am eagarly waiting for her birthday more than her…. I am gonna propose her at that time….. just can’t wait… when I next went to post the letter I came to know that post office is going to have a strike for next few weeks… It was a shocking news… how will I live without talking to her n our communication is just about letters… yup it’s true it’s hard to live without her letters… I have kept each and every letter as a possession…. n safely so that those two empty head can’t find it….

Then an idea stricked me… I just borrowed a pen there… n scribbled something on the paper n posted… After scribbling that I was nervous and happy… It can be the end or a total new start… I always wanted this… let’s see she trusts me or not… n I am sure she does n I love the fact…. now no more waiting for three days…. I am hell excited for her response….

~ AGRA ~
~SWARA’S POV ~
Yayyy…. today is the letter day… I am always excited about his letter….. di also knows my excitement… n hiding letter from jeeju is a difficult task but di is na to take care….
As always I ran to di to get the letter…
N then ran with it to my room.. Every time I read every letter with same excitement…
I have kept all his letters with me safely… its a very important for me…. its even more valuable for me than the money; diamond n jewelleries…. its sounds stupid n like love stuck teenage stuff but it’s true…..

{ Hey shona…

Bad news yâar I came to post office today n came to know that people are going on strike there… my face also fell down like ur face is now… n the saddest of all part is that this strike can be continued for weeks… so sad na…
Bt don’t worry sweets… I am here then don’t fear… I have solutions for every problm…. so have the solution for this problm too…. bt the question is do you trust me that you can communicate with me rather than letters…. so I giving you my number – 99********0…. hope I will get ur call…
Love
Sanky }

Frst question that stricked me was do I trust him… n the question was quickly answered yes I do… bt the thing is till now it was ok letter letter thing… bt now call… I was hell nervous… but then I thought directly meeting will be awkward atleast we should be comfortable by phone calls….
Then another 2 hours I was thinking what to say what not to say… actually even I was rehearsing… stupid of me I know but it’s ovios…
Then after taking more 1 hour to gather courage I called him bitting my nails I atlast called….

~DELHI ~
~ SANKY’S POV ~

I was in my room sitting in couch making presentation for a meeting… uff hell office… then I heard my phone ringing n was in dinning room…

Me : yâar manik pick up the phone n keep in loudspeaker na…

Manik : ah.. wait a sec… bhai unknown number…

#PHN#

Manik : hello…

Speaker : umm.. mm.. is this sanskar speaking….

At that time I looked up from laptop as I felt is this shona…

Manik : no its his friends manik… may I know who are you..?

Speaker : ok.. tell sanskar to call me when he is free… n tell shona called…

Manik : ohho. .. bhabhi u called…

Shona : bh…bhabhi…
Shit…This bastard will end everything today… I literally jumped from couch to bed n then ran to manik…

Me : manik give the phone….

Manik : ohho.. bhabhi ur hero came…

Me : give the phn…

Manik : no…

Me : plz yâar plz….

Manik : Omg sanskar maheshwari saying plz… bhabhi what a effect u have on him… hats off… lucky catch…

I heard shona giggling… that sounds so sweet…. bt it’s not the time to think that… its time to take my phn from these devils…

Now phn was in lucky’s hand…

Lucky : bhabhi namaste… ur boyfriend is jumping like monkey to take the phn..

Me : ok.. what’s the deal lucky…

Lucky : no deal u will not get it… last time we also did the deal for the letter n u gave me the bike with so less petrol that it ended at mid way… u know how much rags cursed me…

Manik : even I can’t forget…. u convinced natasha for date with me and then u called her over possessive boyfriend n u know na he is so possessive about her… I had to escape from him by the washroom window…

Now shona was laughing loudly…
As they were telling there miseries which were actually my revenge as they blackmailed me at that time I snatched phone from laksh n went to room n said : ur bad luck never ever again black mail me…

Before they can enter I closed the door n received the call…

Me : sorry shona.. wo mere dost…. I hope you can understand…

Shona : ya ya.. no problm…. actually I loved it… u have so good friends….

Me : actually friends cum brothers….

Shona : ya I can c… bt they are really good they helped me… frst I was so nervous to talk to you but now it’s ok….

Me : ya they made the moment light…

Shona : Acha what was that u trust me or not exam….. ofcourse I trust you that’s why I was writing letters to you….

Me : sorry yâar…..

Shona : Acha u really did those things to them bt why….

Me : ya I did…. mai dikhta hu jitna swami type ka utna hu harami type ka…

Shona : varun ki line mat maro suit nhi karta…. (lol talking abt varun to varun… means abt varun dhawan to varun kapoor ) now tell why u did that….

Me : Arre one day ur letter came…. they were not giving n blackmail me to do things….. so I took my revenge by backfiring their plan…

Shona laughed by listening the whole story…..

Like this they talked for hours not realising the time…..
Now after months it became there daily routine to talk on phone for hours….

They have not seen each other but deeply fell in love with each other…. as per the plan they were waiting for 14th Feb to come to confess their feelings…
Bt sanskar was very keen to see swara as he was being desperate to see her…..

Me : Arre yâar…. only one picture yâar…. don’t you trust me….

Shona : no… u will not get it…. n I trust you ok… that’s why I am talking to you….

Me : but yâar what’s the problm….

Shona : I have also not seen u na then why u are being so impatient…..

Me : I guess…. u look like dayan(lol..
Nats can only understand here is two meaning of dayan) so you are not giving me…. as after that I will not meet you….

Shona : don’t provoke me…. u will be disappointed only…. I know u are not prsn who choose frnds from outer appearance…. I know….

Me : u know me so well….

Shona : more than you know urself….

Me : shona plz…

Shona : no…

Me : ok… then I will not come to see you….

Shona : ohh… hello I know… If I will not allow na then also u will come to see me….

Me : yâar u know me too well… that’s bad….

Shona : I told you…..

Me : jao… now I am angry I will not talk to you…

Shona : Acha. .. thn for how much time….

Me : ummm… 12hrs….

Shona : pakka…

Me : means 5 no.. no.. no.. 2 hrs pakka…

Shona : sanky… u r so Sweet. .. Acha listen I don’t wanna show you bcoz… If we see our birthday present before birthday then it’s spoils our surprise… so its my birthday gift u will not again ask for pic… n I want to see you in real not in artificial photos….

Me : Acha baba… ok… bt haan listen shona.. sometimes we always wait for the right time… bcoz we are not able to decide that every going time is a right time… n we miss the chance for life time…

Shona : nothing will happen like the sanky…

Me : Acha bye shona I have to go to natasha’s house… bye…

Shona : wait wait… whose house…

Me : (naughty smile ) natasha…

Shona : who is she…

Me : my.. very. .. very close friend Acha. ..

Shona : ohh… hmm… u r going alone…

Me : ya… why shona? ?..

Shona : no nothing u go na to her…. who am I u are talking to… n excuse who are you??.. bye I don’t talk to strangers…

Me : Arre aree sorry… I was just joking… she is a colleague of mine… We work together… I am going alone in bike… bt there will be manik ; laksh and ragini will be present… n most importantly her boyfriend will also be there… no now cool lady bheem… n u know ragini is my rakhi sister actually manik has got his lady love nandini so it’s a treat from him…. now also u wanna say bye… ok.. even I don’t talk to strangers….

Shona : no no sanky…

Me : but… Acha shona u were jealous… I am ur friend right…

Shona : um… sanky di is calling… n bye enjoy…

She cuts the call…

Me : pagal… bt I love you… n now I am sure you love me too….

N he went for the get together….

~agra ~
~ SWARA’S POV ~

Days have become so nice n life has become so beautiful after sanskar entered into it… He filled my colourless life with colours again… bt not only by one colour but adding all colours to it…. making it multicoloured….
Today again I got a parcel… I thought who it can be as sanskar n I talk on phone now a days…. nevertheless not thinking more I opened n it has bundle of money…. I was hell shocked… then I saw the address it was of sanskar… now I was hell angry…. what he think of himself….

I called him…

Me : what the hell u think of ur self sanskar…. Ambani ho ya TATA ho.. ya phir Birla…. what do you think of urself. .. that you are doing a great thing by giving me this money…. Sanskar u know I hate sympathy…. even I hate people who give sympathy…. I told you my problems thinking that I am sharing it with my friends…. It doesn’t mean u will do this….

Now I was exhausted by giving him a 15 mins lecture…. n I stopped then I heard him…

Sanskar : ho gaya…

Me : hmm…

Sanskar : frst of all… na mai tata na Birla na Ambani. .. I think so you know my name sanskar maheshwari…. software engineer…. I think of myself as an human n friend of shona… u are forgetting I too hate sympathy….

Me : then what was it…

Sanskar : let me continue…

Me : hmm…

Sanskar : I know u wanna study further n ur jeeju the great is not giving you money… I have seen ur result. .. u are a brilliant student… so according to ur now qualifications u will not get job… bt if u pursue more u may get it… its a sure short deal… n I have profit….

Me : deal…

Sanskar : don’t give that confused look… now listen…. u will study… then will get job… then I will take money from you with interest… It was my extra money… I was going to keep it in bank… who will also give me interest…. then why don’t I take this interest from you…. so I am at profit… plus I don’t have the need of money now…

Me : thnk u sanskar…

Sanskar : aa.aa…. This is bad… friendship mai no sorry no thank you…

Me : hmm.. no sorry no thank you…

Sanskar : now smile n stop crying….

Me : how u know I am crying….

Sanskar : bcoz I know you better than u know urself…. Acha bye shona talk to you later…

Me : bye…

He hanged up the call… This is the person who is fixing my life n biggest irony I have not even seen him…. I went to change so that I can go to college for admission…..

February came….

Huh… atlast Feb came I was waiting for it for so long… n today it’s special day bcoz… of wait a call is coming…

Sanskar : hello shona…. happy 10 months…

Me : happy 10 months… u know… these 10 months were best 10 months of my life…

Sanskar : mine too…

Me : I have a special return gift for you sanskar on my birthday…..

Sanskar : n I have a special gift for you…

Me : I am really excited…

Sanskar : me too…

Me : Arre it’s my birthday then how u are excited…

Sanskar : Arre ur gift will give me profit too… n I am sure u will like it…

Me : let’s c…

Sanskar : what’s that background sound from ur house…

Me : huh… now it has been a daily seen.. jeeju is facing loss in business so he comes by drinking alcohol… n break things…

Sanskar : ( worried ) plz u be careful…

Me : no worries di handles him…. but I am only worried now I will be 24… He just don’t bring alliance for me…

Sanskar : no it will not happen…. never… ok.. bye shona have to go for dinner…

Me : bye…

Today I felt so strongly that he loves me…. but I will tell my feelings on the correct time on my birthday…. I am so happy…

~DELHI ~
~ SANKY’S POV ~

I am so much excited… I will meet shona tomorrow…. uff I can’t wait… tomorrow is her birthday…. so I am assembling all my office works… its even hard to work when shona is in mind… don’t know how she looks… or how I will confess… but tomorrow is the right time…. now its 7 at evening…. I should go to house I have to wake up early…

I was in thoughts when my phone rang…. n guess what…. queen of my thoughts was calling…

Me : hey shona… will meet you tomorrow…

Shona : sanky sanky plz help me…. plz.. sanky…

She was crying badly… n I was hell worried for her….

Me : what happened shona… say…

Shona : San.nnky..woo…

Me : shona stop panicking say me clearly… take deep breath and say…

Shona : I told you na jeeju’s business is in loss…

Me : Hmm…. so..

Shona : today I heard him saying as my di has gone for her friends wedding he is going to sell me to any whore’s staying place… n make me a whore or I can say a slu..ut… so that he can get money for business… sanky plz save me…

It was like hundred arrows peered my heart… but I have to stay strong for her… n anyhow will have to save her from that heartless monster…

Me : shona… don’t worry… i am there nothing will happen to u… I am coming just now. ..n will take you… frst u take a knife with you… If he tries to harm u… then u keep urself safe… even if murder happens dont hesitate… It will be a defense case… n swara…. I will not let anything happen to you.. ok… u have faith in me…

Shona : more than my self…

Me : then wait for me… I am coming… n I lo…

Shona : sanky… leave me… jeeju plz leave me… plz… sanky plx help…

Me : swara wait I am coming
Then phn hanged up… I threw it in anger…

( Paas aaye..
Dooriyaan phir bhi kam naa hui
Ek adhuri si hamari kahani rahi
Aasmaan ko zameen, ye zaroori nahi
Jaa mile.. jaa mile..
Ishq saccha wahi
Jisko milti nahi manzilein.. manzilein..

Rang thhe, noor tha
Jab kareeb tu tha
Ek jannat sa tha, yeh jahaan
Waqt ki ret pe kuch mere naam sa
Likh ke chhod gaya tu kahaan

Hamari adhuri kahani..
Hamari adhuri kahani.. (x2)

Khushbuon se teri yunhi takra gaye
Chalte chalte dekho na hum kahaan aa gaye

Jannatein agar yahin
Tu dikhe kyon nahin
Chaand suraj sabhi hai yahaan
Intezar tera sadiyon se kar raha
Pyaasi baithi hai kab se yahaan

Humari adhoori kahaani
Humari adhoori kahaani.. (x2)

Pyaas ka ye safar khatam ho jayega
Kuch adhura sa jo tha poora ho jayega

Jhuk gaya aasmaan
Mill gaye do jahaan
Har taraf hai milan ka samaa
Doliya hain saji, khushbuein har kahin
Padhne aaya Khuda khud yahaan..

Hamari adhuri kahani
Hamari adhuri kahani.. )

I ran to catch a cab… atlast I got one… I was heading towards her… heading towards my life to save it…. now I was thinking how wrong I was… Every time it was the right time… I always waited for the right time n see what happened…

Cab suddenly halted… I asked the driver to move but he showed me a big jam.. It was already late… now its too late… I can’t spare a second….. I opened the cab n started to clear off the jam…

~AGRA ~
~ SWARA’S POV ~

Sanky was going to say me something… but jeeju grabbed me from back to take Me… I pleaded him… didn’t every possible thing to escape but was not able to…
He grabbed my hand so I was not able to even take the knife to threatened him…
He then took my mobile n crushed them into pieces…

Jeeju : ohho… u have made one Majnu… to save you… It will not be possible…. u will not be saved… I want money n I will get it by anyways… even swati is not here. .. come with me….

Me : plz jeeju leave me what I gave done to you… I will leave this house… I will go to sanskar… I will not be a burden any more plz…. I love him a lot…

Jeeju : n till date u have eaten free of cost food… who will pay for it…. ur parents died bt left you to eat my head n money… now u will give me some profit…

Me : please jeeju…

Then he kept a cloth in my mouth and I fainted….

When I opened my eyes… my head was feeling heavy… bt listened 2 people’s talk who were in front of the door… they were talking that they will keep me at job from tomorrow… means he atlast sold me… n then they closed the door and went away… even I dont have phone so that I can contact sanky…..
I sat on floor on the corner n started to sob…
Now a Sanky’s one line came to my mind : sometimes we always wait for the right time… bcoz we are not able to decide that every going time is a right time… n we miss the chance for life time…

His words felt so true now… If possible I would have once seen him… once…. bt then I remembered the knife which I had hidden in my dress… sanky told me too keep it for self safety…

So I have to take this step for my self safety…. n I cut my wrist…

~present~

I am till now waiting for him watching the door…. I have full faith on him… blood has flown much… I am having problm in having breathing but I have to keep hope he will come…

~present~
~delhi – agra road~
~ sanskar’s pov ~
Huh…. its 11:55 now… Shona’s birthday… now atlast I have made the traffic clean… just I hope I have not been too late to save her… what a fate… now I would have been in phn with swara wishing her happy birthday… but don’t worry shona I am coming…

By thinking this he was crossing the road… but a truck came n hit him…. as it ws night truck driver was drunk he didn’t see much n passed it…

<<<<<>>>>>

Here sanky and shona took there last breath… n they last sentence that came into there mouth was…

Sanky : I love you swara….

Shona : I love you sanskar….

N they closed there eyes forever n ever… they were not able to meet in this world but will meet in other world…
There unspoken love was so eternal that they had never seen each other but then also fell in love… There love was far from external beauty but all about internal beauty….

What an irony guys… the day when many lovers meet means valentines day its their end…. sorry not end but a new beginning of their love story in heaven…
So guys every time is the right time… plz don’t waste ur time by thinking it’s not the right time…

Wanna know what happened next…
duniya mein kitni hain nafratein,
phir bi dilo mein hai chahtein
duniya mein kitni hain nafratein
, phir bi dilo mein hai chahtein
mar bi jaye pyaar wale,
mit bi jaayen yaar wale
zinda rehtin hain unki mohabattein
zinda rehtin hain unki mohabattein

( swara and sanskar’s soul decended to heaven hand in hand)

Now wanna know what happened to adarsh… then swati came to know about his doings…. she demanded divorce with an great alimony and parent’s property…. now she is an independent women but till now regrets that she would have taken this step earlier then swara would have been alive…
N other side sanskar’s friends manik, laksh, ragini, nandini n natasha all started a NGO to help orphans as it was a dream of sanskar…..
This was my frst OS…. It’s very very long bt I didn’t wanted to spoil it by making it short… hope it was not bad..??… next time I will make it short….

Credit to: Sujata

80 comments

  1. It’s wonderful… Marvelous di…. I can’t find words to appreciate you …. I loved it very much….. Mmuuaahh…… Plz come again with a new ff……

    • sujata

      Awww… thanX jenisha….
      Glad you loved it ya…
      Will come again if a new good idea stricks me….
      Love you ?

  2. Natasha

    Thanxxxx a lot sissy.. though u told me about putting my name.. but I was sooooooo happy to see my name.. thanxxxx a lot.. U r really my soul sister.. love u loads behna.. uuummmmmmmmmmmaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh… I want to come delhi r8 now nd give u lots f kisses nd big big big bone crushing hug..????? love u siso..

    nd I understood Dayan.. ???? mera creation hai Dayan.. so I can understand it very easily.. lol..lol.. ????

    Nd again thanxxx for putting the songs as I requested u.. nd u deserve another thanxxx.. for what I won’t tell u here.. I will tell u in fb..

    Its sooooo emotional baby.. Wn u told the concept that time also I cried..nd today also I cried.. its an awesome amazing fabulous outstanding marvellous fantabulous brilliant OS..???

    Thanxxxx for writing this story.. thanxxxx for keeping my request to write down a sad story..aadhuri kahani type..thanxx a lot baby..?????

    Nd thanxx for giving me a chance with VK..??? The love of my life .. hehe..love u baby.. ?? u kept my request.. hehe..next os me mere sath thoda romance bhi dikha de haa??? ???

    • Natasha

      Nd I told u that I won’t comment here.. but u HV kept my request to write a aadhuri kahani.. so here I am keeping your request..am commenting here one nd only for u sissy.. cz I love u a lotttt.. u asked me to comment here.. so I HV decided that I will only comment on ur ff.. ONE ND ONLY ON UR FF..just for u.. I am here..very near to u.. but I have exam.. Yukkkkkk.. nd about my profile pic..just ssssssshhhhh..its a secret between u nd me only..ok baby??? ???? nd its soooo heart-touching story.. ????I told u about this earlier also.. ?? hehe..so am not repeating Here..ok??? ????

    • Anjali

      Arre…. aap donk Behnenein h….

      Aur me???

      You forgot me…???
      Jk.. lol…

      Ik u won’t do that…???

      • Natasha

        Anjuu.. baby.. Plzzz close ur mouth..otherwise Flies nd mosquitoes will do picnic in ur mouth.. ????? Nd I will comment on ur ff baby.. don’t worry..u are also my behna.. I was buttering sujju.. ???sssssshhhhhhh.. its a secret…????

      • Anjali

        Lol…. jaanti hoon behna….

        I don’t even care about you not commenting in my ff. .. as long as I’m included in the grp, Kuch bhi chalega ????

        ???? u both

      • sujata

        Hawww…. Both conspiring in my back….
        Hawww nats buttering….
        Yaar I am youngest among you… kuch toh rehem karo…. n thanks nats for so so sweet words of yours…
        U r too sweet….
        Ofcourse u demanded anything how can I not give it to you…
        U r sissy no… so…

        Lol next time I will make you vk’s girlfriend ok…. or what say… or I can change the couple from swasan to natsan ???

  3. tani

    m literally crying… d moment they both died tears came out….u made me emotional yaar…. I cannot explain wat I m feeling right now…What a intense love!!!! u nailed it… best os I have ever read…

    • sujata

      Awww… sorry tani for making you cry yâar…
      Glad you liked it. …
      Awww… really best os… its an honour dr

  4. krysty

    omg!!!!!!!!!1 its fabulous..fantabulous…out of the world!! I JUST LOVED IT!!! ITS SO TRUE AND HEART TOUCHING… AND DONT U DARE SHORTEN UR OS…. its very nyc this way…long and practical and heart touching…

    • sujata

      Thnx krysty ?
      Thnx for your great words yâar. …
      Ok… I will not shorten my os… I am so happy that you all liked it so much ??

  5. pooja

    omg!!!!! suju it is just superb……..
    amazing concept……..really mind blowing…..
    just loved it………. 🙂 🙂

    ya post stay away frm me…. m not ur husband…….. 😉 😉 😉
    love u……….. 😉 😉 😉

    • sujata

      Thnx pooja. ..?
      Glad you liked this
      I am so happy by ur words. …
      Will upload SAIMNUH soon….

  6. Ashu

    Hey sujata!! Its awesome…
    Such a sweet story…of course its emotional at the end!
    In short I loved it…
    You have written everything so well…
    And its not lengthy, as long as the story is good…length doesn’t matter!!

    • sujata

      Thnx Ashu ?
      Glad you loved it….
      Yup length doesn’t matters … I thought to make it short but short wouldn’t have looked good….
      Thanks for ur precious words dr

  7. Sree

    What a os di. Truly it was more than awesome. U showed that true love doesnt always happens by heart not by seeing someones external beauty. I cant explain how happy i am after reading this. This is amazing ,marvellous, superb, etc. I dont have words to explain. I am not just simply praising u i am saying this from my heart cuz i loved this os. But still i have one complain. Why did u kill them at the end. Even Meher di did the same thing and now u too di. Still its ok cuz atleast they r together in heaven. Love u di 🙂

    • sujata

      Thnx sree ?
      Thnx for your sweet words dr.. It literally made my day….
      I an so happy by ur words…
      Sorry dr for a sad ending but it was necessary….
      Will write more os

  8. It is an awesome one…I cant explain in words…It is just awesome…I loved it to the core..hatts off to you…keep it up nd soon come up with so many others for our heavenly couple SWASAN…love uhh dear.. 🙂

    • sujata

      Thnx Ashu ?
      It’s an honour dr to hear these words from a fan… thnx a lot Ashu. ..
      Will try to write more os… If I get a good idea again

  9. Priya tripathi

    Awesome sujata ur story is emotinal touch my heart i m speechless n update ur ff asap

  10. Rini

    O God.. what a talent sujatha!!! It made me cry.. I am expecting more OS from you.. And keep writing..

    • Thnx a lot rini for reading n the compliment….
      Sorry for making u cry yâar….
      Will try to write more if something good comes in mind ?

  11. HarryPotter

    I m usually a silent reader but this OS of urs has forced me to comment..i m just speecless aftr reading it.I was literally on the verge of crying towards the end & I would hv loved it even more if SwaSan havn’t died. Jst one word in the end for u- marvellous

  12. IREENA

    oh God! it was too emotional. u have written it very beautifully. I can imagine each n every scenes. Superb Sujata.

  13. L Khan

    Superb but it’s from an old movie nd ending is changed….am I right????…….but ur os was simply mind-blowing…..loved it……nd that line I will always remember

    • No khan… I gave not seen any movie on this topic… If you know the movie plz say me… I will surely c…
      Thnx for reading ?

  14. sneha

    Omg!!omg!!omg!!! Whole sunday i was waiting fr ur os nd when i found that u hvnt posted it i was damn angry with u…but guess what…now i jst cant get ovr this beutiful os…gussa toh dur ki baat h…sachiii u hv written very well…lovd it…

    • Sorry sneha to make you wait…
      Actually I didn’t want it to write it in a hurry…. So I took whole Saturday n Sunday in it…. thnx for understanding dr….
      Glad you liked it ??. ..

  15. AKhila

    It was awesome and emotional.Nice story dear. 🙂 🙂 Hope u will write many more like this.

  16. shan

    its awesome suju r u tamilian bcoz swara missing her certificates and sanky taking it s same as kathal kotai movie but u changed d concept…..its really nice but u made swasan died k no pblm…..

    • No dr I am nt tamalian…. n I dint know about any movie in this topic…
      Sorry for making them dead but story needed it…

  17. Divyarani

    Actually…i ws literally crying reading dis ff…but it ws outstanding marvellous…ur such a grt writer…cntinue ur writing skill…lov u loads giving such a pure pious lov stry of such heavenly couple swasann…imagine dat am giving u a bone crush hug…luv u dr fr a grt ff….

  18. mere pass words ni hai kese apni feelings share kru jo abhi m feel kr rahi hu tumhara os padhne k baad yr
    bs itna hi kahungi thank u nd lv u very very much for this story or thank u k tumne srk ka song use kiya becoz i lv him nd varun as well yr
    or sorry bhi kyoki kafi time ho gya tumne apne ff ka new epi upload nahi kiya tha to m bhut gussa pr aab nahi kyuki mujhe padne mai hi 15-20 min to lage hi honge to tumhe likhne m kitna time laga hoga to sorry or plz ff ka new chapter bhi jaldi upload krdena plzzzzzzz
    lv u

  19. Neha

    Sujataa what you did I’m just lack of words its so emotional and so spiritual shona and sanky….. Really I liked your words everytime is the correct time never wait for right time…… Just one mistake of swara met her the rightest person of her life….. Letters a unique way to contact which isn’t used now …..
    And adarsh really a crap for his selfish motives always wanted to sell swara and at last he did also…..

    What an irony na sujata adarsh was having a relation with swara yet he did that to her and friends of sanky they weren’t related to him such but still fulfilling his dream…. Ppl say noone can care for you like your family does but some knows family is one created through heart….
    And you involved Natasha here…. Wah but what’s that Dayan double meaning yaar I’m thinking about that….. And Natasha’s bf I wish she get one just like him… Haha ?

    • Natasha

      Neha baby.. don’t give so much stress on ur lil brainy.. ok?? otherwise it wont remain intact..???u wont understand about Dayan.. ?? bachhi log nhi samjhte baby.. ??? tu meri dushman kabse ban gayi?? ??? tu pray kar rahi hai taki mujhe aisa bf mile.. hawwwwww.. ???? mujhe nahi chaihye aisi bf.. I will love to be single instead f gttng this type bf… ?? I am praying u should get this type bf… hehehe.. ????

      • Neha

        Lol I don’t want either and see I didn’t gave first sujata gave me the idea Natasha…. And who’s pic is there in your emblem pretty enough….. OK I won’t stress my brainy as I need it for my exams otherwise from where will I get answers so relax mumma I’m not giving load to my brain…. Happy no!!! ???

      • Natasha

        Super happy darling… nd hawwwwwwww ????mumma.. meri bachchi.. ???ye kab hua??? mujhe pata bhi nhi chala.. ???hayyyeeeee.. ???? nd its only me dear.. how am I looking??? ???

  20. Zuha Fatima

    Mind blowing….When it started I thought it will be a happy ending but the way you ended it , it touched my heart , seriously I enjoyed it a lot , hope to see more OS with lovely stories like this 1!

  21. Neha

    Hii sujata…I am a silent plus regular reader of your ff…but never thought to comment..but your this os forced me to comment..last part is really emotional…and the whole part is marvelous..I am very talkative girl but today I don’t have words to appreciate you…and all I can say that ki aisa pyaar blessed logo ko hi milta hai…

  22. Anjali

    Suuuuu…. I saw ur os in the morning itself…. but decided not to read it until I finished with the exam…..

    Dude…. first os aur so pyaaariii…..????

    I loved each and every scene…??
    Such a heart touching story….

    Behna… only u could write something like that…. ?????

    Love you behna… ??????

    write more and more os….

  23. Shipra

    Mindblowing,Fantastic,Superb, Excellent, Nice no words to say Di. It is really good Di. Really Di Please Keep writing OS . Love U Di☺☺☺

  24. Jaf

    Suju???
    Where is the next part of ‘ZINDAGI BAN GAYE HO TUM’???
    Pls post asap
    BTW this part was amazing I read it on FB!

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