Suhani Si Ek Ladki: Tuesday 27th July 2016

Suhani Si Ek Ladki: Tuesday 27th July 2016 (My one Shot take/Dark Destiny)

Its Aqsaah again, Im just going to rewrite what I think should’ve happened in todays episode, its going to be quick, and no YuvAni are not going to be together because that is going to be too long to write as this legal marriage is going to be hard to break in an episode, so after I start you can finish it in the comments, and also comment what the acc serial should’ve done instead of this mess! 😀 Enjoy..

The episode starts with Dadi saying they need to all move on, as they can do nothing now. They all walk off except Suhani, she flunks herself on the bed and punches the bed in frustration, anger and guilt…
Suh: COULDN’T I HAVE WAITED 5 MORE MINUTES! JUST 5 MORE! See now I have lost… I lost the person I can’t get out of my head because of a stupid misunderstanding! WHY! I’M ALWAYS TOO GUILLIBLE!
She breathes heavily… and the clip of the video “I used to Love you but not anymore” runs through her head!
Suh: GAH! IM GLAD I DIDN’T MARRY HIM! IT WOULD’VE BEEN WORTHLESS ANYWAY! HE DOESN’T LOVE ME! HE NEVER WILL!
She gets up and walks towards the broken mirror… and runs her hands on the board of the peices that were once there…

Dadi walks into the children’s room…
Dadi: Yuvaan you ready?
Yuvaan gets up from the bed…
Yuvaan: Yes, I want to start this new life afresh with my dad… but..
Dadi: But what beta…
Yuvaan: I will miss my family, but i knew my dad will always bring me here…
Dadi: how about you stay here for one more day…
Yuvani: Yes Yuvaan, Ma won’t mind…
Yuvaan nods in agreement, and they carry on playing and dadi walks off smirking.

Suhani is left there staring and the plain brown board, multiple thoughts racing through her mind, past memories, the marriage and her eyes wander off to the sindoor pot, she throws it to the floor…
It lands near Yuvraaj’s feet and he picks it up… He knocks the door, which shakes suhani in surprise…
Suh: Can you go away whoever it is. I need to get ready to go…
Yuv: So are you that eager to leave?
Suhani in shock turns around and gets up fiddling with her scarf…
Suh: Oh.. umm.. I… I think I have to move on in life…
Yuv: Suhani I need to talk to you…
He turns around and closes the door.
Suh: w…w…why did you close it for…
Yuv: I don’t want any interruptions. Here (he passes her the sindoor pot)
Yuv: well I didn’t have the courage to tell you all the truth… About why i came late… I was scared you all wont believe me…
Suhani quickly puts his finger on his lips… but moves it when she realises what she has done and turns away…
suh: About that Dadi showed us a video of you confessing what happened… I’m sorry.. I should’ve waiting 5 more minutes… I wouldn’t have hurt.. But that video! That video about you telling me that you don’t love me hurt Yuvraaj!
Yuv: KYAA!
suh: yes! Don’t act dumb.. that video..
Yuv: I know what video your talking about… THAT WAS SUPPOSED TO BE FOR SOMU! I DIDN’T GET A HANCE TO TALK TO HER BEFORE THE WEDDING! THAT VIDEO WAS SUPPOSED TO BE FOR HER!
Suh: … wat… (She turns around to look at his eyes, she sees no sign of lying, but pain)
Yuv: I can’t believe she used it on you!
Suh: don’t jump to conclusions! Somu is too broken to devise something that well put together…She is scared…
Yuv: EXACTLY SHE IS SCARED!
Suh: It’s too late now… (She looks down at the sindoor pot)
Yuv: I know… Good luck with life… I am glad that you brought our son… You also got to know about your daughter…
Suh: Yes Yuvraaj… Thank you… Thank you for this journey that you have taken me on…
He gets teary eyed…
Someone knocks at the door…
Bhav: SUHANI, SAMBHAV IS HERE!
Suh: I’m coming! Well… Take care of yourself Yuvraaj, I’m sorry it had to end like this…
She starts to walk off but Yuvraaj grabs her arm…
She turns around to him…
Yuv: I love you suhani… I loved you then, I loved you though-out the past 6 years we were apart, I love you now… The six years we were apart, I went into a turmoil of depression, I couldn’t let go my thoughts of you no matter how hard I tried! In my wallet, in my pocket, under my bed, I have kept memories of you… I had banned Samosa from the house, as it would bring back memories of you- it broke me… I was the happiest person alive when we were going to get married- but i lost… I love everything, my son and most importantly you…
He looks away and lets go of her arm
Yuv: Suhani, I’m sorry, I’m sorry for taking soo long, I’m sorry for all my mistakes, my anger, my ego, my existence, just stay the same strong self… I want my son to follow a strong example of you not that man ok… I’m ever soo sorry, but thank you for the amazing life you had given me… I know you don’t feel the same…
Suhani is in tears which she wipes and she walks out the room with the sindoor still in her hand but the mangalstra left on the desk… Yuvraaj eying it…

Dadi: Suhani, finally, come on…
Suhani just nods and the leaving ceremony starts, Yuvraaj comes there…
When everyone is giving their final good byes, suhani speaks…
Suh: Ma, whatever you do always give the children y=the best, and forgive Yuvraaj… It wasn’t his fault…
Prat: Anything for you beta… (she hugs Yuvraaj and sighs, Suhani somes and hugs them not realising her arm is wrapped around Yuv’s back, when she realises she quickly however relunctantly steps back, Sam boiling with anger)
Sam: Come on Suhani we have to go, the driver is waiting, I booked a hotel for tonight as Yuvaan wants to stay so I let him for the night…Suhani nods and starts to walk away…
Yuv: Suhani (Suhani quickly whips her body around and sees Yuv walking to her)
Yuv: You forgot this (He gives her the mangalstra) Best of luck… (He walks away)
Suhani starts to cry and quickly walks out the house, whimpers escaping her broken soul…

Yuvraaj also went to his room and slams the door bitter tears flowing down his cheeks, his body shaking…Sharad knocks on the door and Yuv lets him in and hugs him tightly…
Yuv: I have lost… Haven’t I?
Sharad starts crying on his shoulder: I think we have….

Well that is it guys, I might write episode two if I do I will write this under (Dark Destiny) Comment your opinions of what should happen next and what the serial has done wrong to get them in this mess..

Hope you enjoyed a not so happy ending, Ly all Peace!
~ Aqsaah

22 comments

  1. Ruksy

    |Registered Member

    this is a million times better than the current track plz carry on and it was Wednesday the 27th. i think next yuvraj should try to contact suhani but sambav should have her phone then sambav should get angry and go try to kill yuvraj.

  2. v p ramnath

    Suhasini ek ladki is one lousiest serials I had the misfortune to see. I am glad it ended for ever.

    • Aqsxxh

      |Author

      Hehe so ur glad with this ending… Ty for commenting, I don’t think the same thooough, the show is repetivite and can become and annoyance, the writers are just ost and lost the meaning of the show- its the writers that are lousy not the serial 🙂

  3. Sanaa

    The directors r nuts…your one shot was 1000 times better than the current track Aqsaah… I have stopped reading the written updates of ssel..i found something much interesting than ssel, rishton ka saudagar-bazigar on life ok is amazing… it is revenge and romantic drama. If u also want to know more about it di, then go to home and scroll down to life ok channel and click baazigar…. I’m sure u will love it…

    • Aqsxxh

      |Author

      Ty Sanaa Di, I will try to read whenever I can, but I think I will just hope for SSEL to change, ik its useless but miracles do happen 🙂 I think my mum watches that serial, she isn’t into it though… But I will try to read it whenever I am free! Ty di x

  4. Nithu

    |Registered Member

    Infinite times best than the original track aqsaah…i just loved it dr…its awsmm…its lovely to the heights

  5. ?????????

    I loved it Aqsaah! Please do carry on! It’s what i wanted to see in SSEL. Way better than the current track. I have stopped watching and reading the written updates. I’m happy that i found this. I can’t wait till you carry on

    By the way, i like your name Aqsaah.

    • Aqsxxh

      |Author

      Omg thank you for your beautiful compliments! 😀 im glad u live it! I also write another SSEL OS Its called SSEL OS XD Hope you would like that too x ty for reading it means wonders

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