Sufferings (swasan ts) by mars – shot 2

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Hello guys!Thank you so much for your comments. So here is next shot of ts.Hope u will like it.

SUFFERINGS (swasan ts)
SHOT 2
XYZ Hospital:(1am)
Swara entered inside the hospital breathing heavily as she came running. She ask reception about recent heart attract case and she was informed that the patient is in ICU. She went to waiting area where she saw her baba sitting on chair beside him was Mr sharma(gododia’s neighbour) and Mrs sharma was carrying the baby and moving here and there as trying to make baby sleep and the baby is avni.
Swara came to her baba

Swara:how is di now?
Shekar:u came swara.she is critical, doctors are trying.
Swara’s eyes were filled with tears.
Swara: how all of sudden this happened yesterday she was fine.
Shekar: she was fine in morning then she said that she was feeling pain in her chest then at night I saw her lying in kitchen.With the help of sharma Ji we came to hospital and doctors told its major heart attract. (Crying).
Swara consoled him and then looked at avni.she went to mrs sharma and said
Swara: let me have her aunty.
Mrs sharma: sure beta.

Swara took avni and she slept.
After sometimes doctor came.
Shekar: how is she now?
Doctor: I m sorry we can’t save her.she is no more.
Shekar sat on chair and cried bcoz he lost her daughter.swara was also crying.She looked at avni who was sleeping peacefully in swara’s lap totally unaware that she is orphan now.
Swara (thinks): what is the fault of this innocent soul who became orphan at the tender age of 4 months.No no I can’t let avni’s life to be ruined if di is not there then what happen I m there na.

Later all came to gododia house and it was almost morning.swara made avni sleep on room whereas shekar arranged for death ceremony.

Maheshwari house:
Sanskar came down in hall shouting Swara’s name
Sanskar: swara Swara. (Frustrated).
Sujata: what happen Sanskar?

Sanskar: mom where is Swara.?
Sujata: I don’t know I had not seen her since morning.
Then Sanskar remembered about last night when she asked him to come to hospital.
Sanskar: I think she went to hospital she was saying.
Sujata: let her go whereever she wants to go at last she have to come here only.
Sanskar: yea leave it I m going to office.
Sanskar left for office.

Gododia house(afternoon):
After the death ceremony of kamla everyone left.Only swara,shekar and avni was there.shekar had many questions about sanskar so he asked to swara
Shekar: swara tell me truth is something wrong between u and Sanskar.
Swara(cover): no baba nothing like that.
Shekar: do u think I don’t understand I m your father.I had observed he had not even called u once since u r here and who send his wife alone at mid night.
Swara: he is busy..

Shekar (cut her): don’t give lame excuses I m not child.
Swara’ s eyes were filled with tears.she can’t hide her pain more.she hugged shekar tightly and started crying.
Shekar(worried): what happen swara?
Swara: I don’t want to go to that house baba.

Shekar make her normal and console her.then she told how Sanskar and sujata had misbehaved with her.Even she told how they wrongly blame her for not conceiving.
Shekar’s turn red in anger.He slapped swara tightly.
Swara got shocked and looked at him.
Shekar: this is for hiding all this from me and acting as coward. This is what I taught u that don’t take stand for yourself.

Swara: baba..
Shekar: u know as much is Sanskar wrong that much is you.He did wrong but what u did just sit and bear.U can’t be my swara who can’t even protect herself.
Swara(crying ): I m sorry baba I thought u will worry and I don’t know why I m afraid from them.
Shekar hugged and consoled her.After crying for long time she became normal.
Shekar: u will never go to that house again.
Swara nodded.

Shekar(making swara understand): do u remembered swara when u was in college a boy misbehaved with you and what u did, beat him in front of whole college. Where is that swara how can she turn like this.
Swara: I don’t know baba why I m afraid of them.
Shekar: its OK. Swara if u will get afraid then they will scare u more.so u have to act strongly.and trust me they will not do anything I m there na.
Swara gained courage to fight for herself.
Swara: u r right baba I won’t let them rule over me.I m not that coward and I promise I will act strongly.
Shekar: that’s like my daughter so now when u will confront sanskar he should be shocked to see new bold swara.

Swara(smiles): yes baba even I will also show them what I can do.
Shekar: good.
Swara: baba I had decided something.
Shekar: what beta.

Swara: (looking at avni): I want to adopt avni.
Shekar: really.
Swara: yes baba I can’t leave her alone and how much u can take care of her.even she needs a mother.
Shekar: I m proud of u swara and happly also.
Swara smiles. Then they spend time with each other.

Evening (6pm)
Maheshwari house:
Sanskar came inside and saw sujata in hall.
Sanskar: mom swara came?
Sujata: no Sanskar this girl has no shame at all.
Sanskar (angry):I will bring her.
Sujata: but where u will find her?
Sanskar:mom she will be at her father’s house where else she will go.
Sanskar left and sujata curses swara.

Gododia house:
The door bell of the house rang and shekar went to open the door. Swara is in room with avni.
Shekar opened the door and saw Sanskar standing there with annoyed face.
Shekar: yes what you want?
Sanskar : (straight forwardly)where is my wife?
Shekar: she is not here find wherever u can.
Sanskar(angrily): I know she is here so stop hiding.
Shekar: I said she is not….

Swara: (cut shekar): I m here only.
She said standing in hall.sanskar find something change in but what? ofcouse her attitude.
Sanskar entered inside taking side from shekar.
Sanskar (angry): what the hell is this swara.how can u stay here without informing. Don’t u Have sense that u should be at your house.
Shekar: this is her house and don’t shout at her.
Sanskar: I m talking to my wife so don’t interfere.
Shekar was about to speak but swara said

Swara: baba plz go ,avni is alone.
Shekar:but beta
Swara: plz baba unfortunately he is my husband so let me talk.
Sanskar shocked listening her.
Shekar left.

Sanskar: come let’s go to our house.
Swara: I m not coming(full of attitude tone) (said crossing her arms near her chest).
Sanskar: what? And how u r speaking to me. Change your tone.
Swara: I will speak like this only if u want to listen then ok otherwise door is open.
Sanskar: u know what will be the consequence of what u r going.
Swara(carelessly): I don’t care.
Sanskar (held her wrist): I will tell you first let’s go.(angry).
Swara: leave my hand Sanskar.
But sanskar didn’t left her hand.

Swara(angrily jerked his hand): don’t u listen I said I will not come then why r u forcing me.
Sanskar: for how much time your father will bear you.? At last u will have to come to me only.
Swara: u don’t worry about me think about yourself how u and your mother is going to manage without servant of your house .
Sanskar: shut up Swara
Swara: u have to listen Mr maheshwari bcoz this is only truth.
Sanskar: ok fine I m asking last time u r coming or not?

Swara: no(sternly)
Sanskar: then ok even I don’t want you but remember one thing if u will not come now then never come to my house.
Swara: don’t worry I will never come to that living hell.
Sanskar angrily left.
Swara went to room and hugged Shekar. She was shivering and crying .
Shekar knew this will happen as she first time spoke like this as he was also listening to them.he consoled her
Shekar: swara beta nothing happened.
Swara: baba I did right?

Shekar: yes dear u have to be brave like this only.
After talking for sometimes they slept.

Maheshwari house:
Sanskar entered angrily inside.sujata saw him and ran to him
Sujata: what happen where is swara I won’t leave her today.
Sanskar: she didn’t came.
Sujata: what but why?
Sanskar: ask from her only why r u asking me(said angrily).
Sanskar left to his room whereas sujata stood confused.

Swasan room:
Sanskar entered inside and opened the cupboard to take clothes when swara’s pillow and blanket fall.He got angry seeing it as he know that he did wrong but don’t want to accept so he throw them angrily on floor.He was feeling restless but was not understanding why bcoz according to him swara’s presence or absence never effect but it do but he will not accept it.

Next morning:
Gododia house:
Swara was boiling milk for avni in kitchen when door bell rang.Shekar who was reading newspaper opened the door and saw a beautiful girl standing on door.
Shekar: come kavya beta.
Kavya: how r u uncle?
Shekar: I m fine .have seat.

Swara came with milk bottle and put the bottle in avni’s mouth who was in cradle.
Swara looked at kavya and got confused. Shekar saw swara confused.
Shekar: swara come here.(she came) meet her she is kavya khanna, my friends daughter and kavya she is my daughter swara whose case u have to handle.
Swara: hello
Kavya: hi
Swara sit there and asked

Swara: baba which case?
Shekar: your and sanskar’s divorce. Kavya is well known lawyer who mostly take cases of girls whose who r suffering after marriage.
Kavya smiles
Swara was shocked listening about divorce.
Swara: but baba u didn’t told me
Shekar: I know beta u need time but I don’t want your any relation with that man.trust me everything will be fine.
Swara: I trust u baba.

Kavya: so swara it means u r ready for divorce.
Swara remembered her worst 3 years in that house.Her eyes got filled with tears.
Swara: yes.
Kavya: ok then do tell me reasons why u want divorce u know we will show in court so it will help you.
Swara don’t said anything.kavya understand her hesitation and said
Kavya: see swara u should tell me ok i will ask you u somethings just answer me in yes or no
Swara nodded
Kavya: did your in laws do domestic violence?

Swara:yes to some extend.
Shekar closed his fist angrily.
Kavya: your husband force you ?
Swara really don’t know whether to say yes or no but she gathered courage and said
Swara: yes.
Kavya: ok I will put these points in court but is there any other reason which may be helpful to u.

Swara thought it is right time to tell that sanskar can’t be father.
Swara: my husband can’t be father but my in laws put the Blame on me.
Shekar got shocked bcoz even he thinks that Swara can’t be mother.
Shekar: Swara?
Swara:yes baba.
Kavya: that’s really good point but tell me about doctor who can give me proof.
Swara told her about hospital.
Kavya: ok fine Swara don’t worry I will send notice to Sanskar today only.and all the best .
Swara: thank you.

Shekar left her till door.

To be continued…

Precap: swasan divorce.

Hey ! I want to know whether u want happy ending with swasan Union or u want them to be separated and move on in their life ?plz tell me soon then only I can write further.
Sorry as swasan scenes were not there but it was needed for story.
Thank you
Bye
Take care.

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63 Comments
  1. happy ending with reunion

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  2. Neptune

    hey my small sister he he he don’t get confused u r mars i am neptune so u r my small sis right ok so coming to this part i loved the way swara answered sanskaar and did not return with him.
    hmm coming to your question its really tough for swara to accept sanskaar back so i think that they should be divorced and swara should move on in her life and focus on her career and if sanskaar really loves swara then he should gain her love and trust they should atleast be seperated for 1 or 2 years where swara advances in her career and ya please show sanskaar’s jealousy and possessiveness pleash..

    1. Mars

      Thank you big sister hehe and yes it will not be easy for swara to accept him and I wiIl not join then easily. Even I was thinking of taking leap and then happy ending and I will show sanskar’s jealousy dear for sure.

  3. Nahh..i dnt want swasan seperation..let sanskar to realise his mistake and apologise to swara..
    And some punishment for sanky

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear and sanskar will surely regret and will get punishment also.

  4. Rosey

    Wow yaar just superbbb
    I can’t even express..I like this cold swara….now it will be fin to see how Swara will manage all these…lol…I’m laughing imaging Sanskaar and Sujhata condition
    ..

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  5. Nikhila

    Happy ending with reunion…. bt with strong swara and sanskar should repent his mistakes…. loved the chappy dear ? ❤

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  6. Sus

    to be truth, althought divorse is last solution when relationships are not amendable.
    But in your case Swara is wrong for not standing for herself, i think you
    ‘log usi ko order karte hai jo mante hai or can say log usi ko dabate hai jo dabne ko tayar ho.
    After divorse life is not easy for common girls, they have to face alot.
    According to me best option is swara should rule over Sanskar and Sujata she should show them she is not weak and Swara is having a good weakness of Sanskar and can use it properly untill they will become good and understand everyones pains.

    Its not guarantee that in future Swara will get a nice partner becoz in front everyone behave good but behind thay have different faces

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear.
      Really I want to say u had given very good advice that I m thinking to change the storyline.I will surely think over it and thanks for telling.

    2. Simi

      I agree with Sus

    3. Tamil

      I agree with you

  7. Jiyana

    Nice one..
    Plz upload nxt part soon..

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear and I will post next part soon.

  8. Shreeyu

    Good one dear ..and I would prefer Swara moving on in her life rather than swasan union…

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

    2. Manasvi

      Agree!!

  9. Sumayyah

    awesome
    show Sanskar feeling guilt and units SwaSan plz

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  10. Nithinice

    superb waiting for next episode. i want swasan separation, sanskar jealously, sanskar realization, sanskar acceptance, and then swasan union. and also want swasan baby boy.

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  11. I think saskar realized his mistake than win her trust

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  12. its really fabulous…
    n swara make them realized their mistakes…
    SwaSan union

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  13. hmm…i’m so satisfied with this chapter as swara stood for herself…loved shekar’s character….to be honest…sanskar don’t deserve swara…but if swasan seperation means…they will move on in life…but sanskar will never realise his mistake…so i want sanskar to realise his mistake how much wrong he did with his wife…and truth that he can’t be father should out in front of world…then show his guilt pain thinking how he tortured swara…it should make him feel like hell and finally he should apologize swara infront of whole world…at that point he may start loving her….but he should not force his love on swara…and decusion is upto swara(*actually author*)that she will unite with him or not…uff…continue soon

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear and I will post soon and will try to fulfill your wishes.

  14. Simi

    Awesome dear.. Love this bold Swara… Happy to know she take a stand against sanskar

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  15. Loved it..loved swara and shekar..Finally Swara took a stand for herself..well frankly speaking I don’t want them together..bt I want sanskar to realise his mistake..continue soon..tc..

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear and I will post next part soon.

  16. Scooby

    Amazing.. She stood for hersElf…
    Hmm idea… Lemme think….
    Let them get divorce…. part away and move on in life…may b in that period sanskar realise his mistake and asking for forgiveness from swara…

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  17. Gayathri.visu

    Loved this part. Finally Swara stood for herself. For the first time I like shekhar’s character. To be honest I don’t want their separation. Bcz in ur TS both are wrong. Now Swara corrects her mistake. So make Sanskaar realise his mistake n ask forgiveness to Swara then happy reunion! Waiting for next part dear…..

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear and I will post next part soon.

  18. Aarushi_99

    I loved the chapter to the core!??

    This is maybe the first time I liked Shekhar this much and I’m soo happy that Swara stood for herself but just like Sus said, somewhere even I was expecting Swara to go back and rule over.. maybe not rule over but like, control and give a muh-tod jawab to Sanskar and Sujata instead of divorcing him..?
    It’s not like I don’t like your story or anything, I love it, but I think it would be better if Swara actually showed to them how a woman is capable to stand for herself without anyone’s help..??

    And coming to if SwaSan should be together or not.. being a diehard SwaSan fan, I want them to end up together but looking through Swara’s perspective, I don’t think a woman would be happy being together with a man who did those things like Sanskar did to Swara.. maybe you can show seperation and Sanskar being guilty and then he rectifies his mistakes..?

    In the end it’s your decision.. and I’m sure you’ll give a great ending to it!??
    Waiting to read more.. Update soon, take care!!?

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear and I m also thinking to change the concept and don’t worry I won’t let girl power to fall and will post soon dear.

  19. awesome loved this bold swara standi9ng for herself.. show some leap and swara securing her future and avni bonding with swara as now swara adopted her. and show sanskaar guilty and try to get forgiveness from swara and show her his true love , and want some punishment to sujju also she to know abt it.. and atlast want both sanskar and sujju accepting avni as their daughter and granddaughter whole heartedly and happy reunion…
    if you show like this it will be good want happy ending..
    sorry for my long comment.. update next part soon

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear and will post soon.
      And long comments are always welcomed bcoz I love to read them .thanks for giving your views.

  20. Manasvi

    Dii, I seriously want Swara to divorce Sanskar.. Sanskar don’t deserve her.. Getting tortured for freaking three years is not a short span of time..

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear and u r right. it will not be easy for swara to accept.

  21. Tamil

    Amazing dear….want happy ending….but sanskar should gain swara’s love and trust

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  22. IME

    Amazing!!
    Loved it!!
    Superbb!!
    Amazinggg!!
    i am happy with any of endings
    you can even give both endings
    love u
    take care
    byee

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  23. Pramudi

    Well-done swara. Amazing part dear.
    I want sanskaar & suju to suffer. Sanskaar should realize his mistakes & her importance in his life.
    As a swasan fan want a happy ending but as a girl don’t want swasan together.

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  24. Arshaanya

    Loved it…
    N comin to dere seperation or union…
    Luk d way u showed sanskar it cant b justified… he forced her,domestic violence, not even lettin her sleep on bed n dat blame thing… here seperation is needed…
    Bt as swasan fan we all want dere union bt for dat u hve to show somethin vry gud which can justify dere union…
    Show aftr sprtn sanskar rlsnf her importance n how he n al othrs blmd her bt in actual he dsrved dat….
    N to justify his chrctr u can show in flashback dat sanskar was good wid her for one year of dere mrg n for some reason he bcme lyk dis( he can bcme father or add some more things) atleast dis wil hlp us to acpt him aftr dere sprtn n his rlztn…

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear and your pov is absolutely right and I will surely do something for their union.

  25. Seebu_s

    this is y i can’t imagine this story on swasan…ur concept is really very good…i just can’t decide what to say..!it’s upto u…as everyone are suggesting their views…personally sanskar don’t deserve swara…and same goes to swara…she didn’t try to change him..instead beared ecery thing..but today i loved it..and will wait for next…not able to give any suggestions..

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear and I can understand that this concept doesn’t suit our swasan but I thought this story so wrote as I can’t write on any other couple. And don’t worry I will post soon.

  26. Soujanya

    Awesome

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  27. loved it

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear

  28. Fenil

    Superb
    SwaSan reunion.
    Pls send links to me in PM if u have time.
    Here is so many ffs u know what is my prob.

  29. loved it dear

  30. Meera_s

    i loved shekar’s character…hope swara will teach gud lesson to them

  31. first time ever i liked shekar’s character…now waiting to see how swara will give back to sanskar and sujatha

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