Strangers with memories S1 (Episode 12)

Kiran continued “Rohit gave a very hard time to me Divi, He kept on telling that I betrayed him as he loved Ankita and I had not told him that we were a couple. This went for long and slowly started feeling very guilty. Ankita tried avoiding Rohit as much as possible and as I was with him, she avoided me in college too. But Rohit like a hopeless romantic, started keeping letters, flowers, and messages that he loves her. She was quiet frustrated as her classmates started commenting the same and one day she was so frustrated and she really slapped Rohit and said to get out of her life as she is in love already. I was shocked what she did. I have never seen her like that and she walked away. I was not sure what I had to do, and I tried stopping her but she walked away and she turned back and I told her to go and I will come back later. I was with Rohit and I told him to understand the situation but he was pretty mad with what had happened and he pushed me and blamed me for everything. I was with him the whole day trying to convince him and then when I was about to leave, I saw my phone and I see several calls from Ankita and one message telling to meet her. I hurried back and then I told her that what she did was wrong and was about to hold her hand. She withdrew it very harshly and said that I was not with her when he abused her very bad in the first place and today when she was so angry and frustrated, I chose to stay with him, the guy who called her names instead of the girl I love. At the end of the day, she want to be with a guy who stands by her and not the one who leaves her at the time of need. She also said that she is also sure, if rohit keeps doing this, I will also sacrifice her and give her as charity to him. I was wrong that I didn’t support her but what she was telling was too much and I just shouted at her telling she was the one who created all this at first place. I said that I had told her million times that we will say about our relationship to all. She said that she doesn’t like all the pairing and likes her relationships to be private and I was really frustrated and I told her as she didn’t like me not standing for her, I also don’t like my girlfriend to hide relationship status with everyone and it clearly she shows that there are wrong intentions and she said, if that is the case then fine, and I also told her fine. And that’s it, we walked and never talked again, she decided to quit the college to pursue her studies in UK. It was all so sudden Divi, and before she left she met me and I didn’t even know that she is leaving and she told me, thanks for everything and wished me good luck and went breaking all the bonds we had.”
I was listening and thousands of things were pondering in my mind. If she had broken up, why did she come back, why was she behaving weird with me? The story was more of Kiran than Rohit but I got to know more about Kiran too. I asked me the same “Why is she back again, does she want to be together again?”
Kiran lifted up his head and smiled “Divi, you are more bothered about my story than what you wanted. Forget all this, so this was the reason I took Ankita’s name that day because he had behaved the same with her then”
I said him fine, I know at least a bit about him that he is always weird! But asked him “Kiran, do you think ankita has come back to get back to you? I mean, its nice to be reunited with your loved one and also why was she so weird with me yesterday?”
Kiran laughed and said “I do not know if I want to get back to her or no, several things happened after she left divi, but I do not know why she came back. I had also heard she had a boyfriend there, so I think she is here for the family and weird with you?? I didn’t see it, maybe it is jealousy as her best friend has a new best friend”
I smiled and said “Stop it Kiran, tell me the reason na and do you love her?”
Kiran was puzzled and asked me “Divi, why have to started your investigation on me? I did love her and she was my first love and it is tough to forget the times but I have moved on and I really do not know the reason, I mainly feel its jealousy”

I nodded angrily and said “I hope you are telling the truth”
He said “Yes Divi yes”
Kiran continued “So anything else, you want to know about Rohit?”
I said “This is enough for today and be ready, I will keep asking you the questions about him. I need to know more about him?”
Kiran with a puzzled face asked me “Divi, do you have any idea of getting back together with Rohit?”
I smiled and replied “ Kiran, Ro was my first love and like you said it is very tough to forget all the times but I am moving on”
Kira grunted and said “Copy Cat “and we both laughed. I felt something behind me. I turned around. Kiran asked “What is it”.
I replied “I just felt someone was here listening to us”
Kiran saw here and there and then with a frozen face said “divi, I think you are right. See there “and pointed to the exit.
I saw Nikki running towards the exit. I saw Kiran again who had stood up and asked me “Should we follow her and catch her??”
I shrugged and said “Let it be Kiran, I am tired of all these. She can do whatever she wants. I am not with Rohit anymore and nothing bothers me”
Kiran smiled and we started eating.

Credit to: Dippy

31 comments

  1. oh so u r new writer continue i thought post the nxt part of my ff but u took my responsibility frm nw on i wont updtae this story thnks bye

    • Prema

      Bhgi! You are back. I was a silent reader of your ff. I would be glad if you continue. Don’t leave dear please plzzzzzzzz………… Begging you….

      Don’t mind Dippy

      • Dippy

        No Prema, I wont mind. starnagers can be continued by bhgi from where she left and I love reading it her way!

    • Sara

      l totally agree with Bhagya ,
      bhgi > dear l guess U r not hurt n
      understand Dippy is also a big fan of urs just like us .
      u both should continue it on ur own way .
      Plz continue it give it a end,,it’s a humble request
      n of course Welcome back.thnx 4 coming back….take care

    • Anu

      @ Bhgi ,how r u? plz dear don’t get angry n hurt..it’s been so long u left, we fans were so eager to know d rest, don’t think we forgot u coz u crated this ff n we r here because of u,
      l really appreciate u coz u came back at d exact time u promised.plz dear don’t leave us again. continue it from where u left, in ur own way..plzzzz,,,thnak u 4 ur care n thank u 4 coming back.. really missed u, trust me.love u a ton.

    • Dippy

      Bhgi,
      Yes I am new and started writing it as I missed Starngers and there was no one to update it. I never wanted to replace you bhgi, I was just a substitute when you were not there. But why wont you continue? whats wrong?

  2. Bhagya

    Bhgi we were all missing strangers including dippy… That’s why she continued with the ff… I don’t think she had any intention of replacing you….. Why don’t you both continue with your ffs… So we can enjoy both of your writing skills

  3. Vivi

    Plz bhgi don’t do dat v wer really missing dis ff…
    As bhagya said plz u both continue dis ff…its really nice….i luv dippy’s version and i would luv to read ur way tooo…so plz don’t be mad at us or dippy….and v r really really glad to c u back…hope u would continue dis….don’t misundrstnd dippy she had only good intentions wid dis…

  4. Sara

    Nikki won’t mend her way,,
    n love d way u narrate d whole thing,keep it up..l want
    u to upd d next one soon,,
    thnx 4 d 2 upd in a day

    • Dippy

      Thanks Sara, But i have uploaded the next part but I am not sure if bhgi would like me to continue or no.

  5. Anu

    l wanna c Ankita n kiran together..hope divya will reunite em..nice upd yaar,l would like to say u ,continue d ff in ur own just like bhagya said if u don’t mind coz l’ll be waiting ..don’t leave it here..love ya
    #stay blessed

  6. Dippy

    Hello Bhgi,

    How are you?? OMG! I missed your ff so much!! You do continue writing, I will stop. I dont want to take over your ff. I was writing as there was no update and Strangers was one of my fav ff…
    Why are feeling bad btw? Strangers is all yours! And you sound rude bhgi, we all tried writing as we missed strangers and You!

  7. yea i sound rude i promised dz ppl dat by april i vl b back as i promised them them i came here but the sceneario is totally changed omg u wrote 15 parts n dz ppl lykd ur ff thats y i told u to continue u continue dz ff if u r in my place wat u vl do miss.dippy

    • Dippy

      bhgi, Starngers was your idea and as you were not there, I wrote it. You can continue if you want to. I will not write it anymore. I dont want to hurt you. It is not their mistake that they told they liked it. You can start from where you left and I am sure they will love you the same way.

      Cheers!

  8. Dippy

    Bhgi, If I was in your place. I wouldn’t have stopped writing. I would write agin to show what they really missed! You were the one who introduced us to Divi, and you think someone else can take over what you created. No bhgi, I couldnt. I am sure you have a different story to tell and I took it in a different way. so as i am telling, do continue. I will stop. I have no issues at all!

  9. Bhagya

    Bhgi we liked dippy s writing…. It was really good… But that doesn’t mean you have to stop writing…. Cos we also used to think that if bhgi was writing will the story be the same. We missed your ff so much and that is the reason why dippy took it forward….. That’s our love to your ff…. So pls try to understand…..

    Both of you continue your writing is what I want… But the decision is upto you…. Anyways we want the ff to be continued….

    Dippy they haven’t posted the next part …. Eagerly waiting

    • Dippy

      Hello Bhagya,
      I will surely continue! but I think I will start writing a new ff with the story. As I dont want to take bhgi’s story and come in between. I hope bhgi understands and starts writing again.

      • Bhagya

        Dippy next part is not yet uploaded… Have you done it in a different name?? If yes pls do inform us…. I actually want to read both your stories…..

      • rim

        Dippy l guess u should continue ur Version of strangers,don’t leave.Do continue in different Title, it’s d only solution left, don’t change d characters names..just a suggestion..tc

      • Dippy

        Thanks Bhagya and rim, I will continue. Bhavya, I have updates with same title. I think they have still not uploaded it and If bhgi doesnt write, I will continue as the same name if not then I will surely need your suggestion for a new name.
        Thanks 🙂

  10. Ani

    hey bhigi dear as u promised please do continue writing your FF from where u left
    I am sure that dippy started unknowingly that u would continue
    i was glad when i opened the link for strangers that u have come back but i was wrong it was not u but dippy i was disapponted and stopped reading as i was expecting u.
    but today i saw ur comment and was disappointed by u that we all are trying to say tht we are eagerly waiting for ur ff and u are not willing to continue it. its not that bhig that i know i am sorry for telling u all this but dear please understand my feelings i am happy that finally you came back and please dear continue YOUR STORY THE STRANGERS i am eagerly eaiting for u and for your answer

    one more thing that how were ur brothers marriage and how are u doing in life ?
    i know this is not correct time but i thought to ask u i was really missing u,,,,,,,……

    and u know that the strangers was my first Fan fiction story because i was new here thats why when u started with this i that i always used to read…

    i want to see u back bhigi dear waiting for the reply………………

    I THINK U ARE NOT TRYING TO FOOL US AS TODAY IS 1 APRIL “APRIL FOOL DAY “…PLEASE IF U ARE THEN IT WAS A WONDERFUL APRIL FOOL DAY

  11. Dippy

    Guys,

    If you remember bhgi had told if anyone wants to continue writing can do so, before she left few months ago and that was the only reason why I started writing. I didn’t know bhgi would feel this bad.
    I am really feeling guilty and bhgi sounded rude and disappointed as i am sure she didnt want me to continue. I do not want to hurt anybody. I feel bad that there are readers who do not want to read just cause it has my name like what Ani said. I really feel bad with this. I do not know what to do.
    I hope you all understand that I never wanted to replace bhgi, I was just writing and I loved her ff and after your encouraging words, I started writing more and I think I made a mistake. So I want all you readers a suggestion,: Should I continue writing or no.
    If yes, shall i continue in the same name if bhgi doesn want to write any more Or shall I have a new name?

    I look forward for your replies, bhgi please reply if you see this!

    Thanks!

  12. i decided nt to write my ff further thnx fr all ppl who supported me in starting it cn b rude but i cnt do anythmg thnx fr aaliya roma hayati liya aparna tanya and many more i forgot once sry frns gud bye

    • Dippy

      bhgi,
      Thats okay. I wished you write. If you do not write I will continue. I want to keep the character of Divi alive.

      Thanks!

      • Vivi

        Thanks a ton for continuing dis ff dippy…
        All r trying der maximum
        to tell bhgi to write….but she is not at all listening… Bhgi Plz listen to ur readers….
        We don’t wanna end dis in a bad way…everyone will be happy if u continue dis…
        Dippy…plz don’t feel sad wid these drama and all…..she don’t knw wot she’ll be missing…quiting is never d answer….u continue it!!!
        Hope everything will end in peace…!!!!!!

      • Dippy

        Thanks Vivi,

        I am continuing it but with different name! It is uploaded and let me know ur feedback 🙂

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