A Strangers Story (Part 2)

Sorry guys I know i can’t replace bhgi… Coz she was d beginner of this strangers… I just wrote what I felt and I cant think wht bhgi thinks bcoz after all I’m not bhgi…. So I’m just ending it here….

Scene freezes on divya’s face….
Everyone r waiting to see her next move…
Divya held kiran’s hand and says…
U Ve always been there as a friend for me in my most beautifull as well as stupid and most painful days… The luv and care u show me… I can never expect it from anybody else… So will u be with me forever…???

Kiran thinks for a while and says yes divya… I’ll be there with u forever and holds her hand in an assuring manner…

Arohi gets teary eyed…
Shraddha smiles..
Sam and sowrajyam also came to know about the whole thing… And they get tearfull and feel proud to have such friend… Sowrajyam goes to divya and hugs her and says…

I’m very very lucky to have a friend like u… Even though u had so much pain in ur heart u risked ur life and hid all ur pain for my sake…
Hatss off to u divya…
And she cries…

Even now rohit doesn’t feel guilty for his actions…. He was just staring at divya and kiran…
Niki came and put her hand on rahuls shoulder in a consoling manner…

By the time the jet landed in Hyderabad… And everyone got down…
And rohit saw divya… She didn’t look at him…

She just left with kiran…
While leaving divya observed nikitha’s face..
She had a sort of smirk on her face…

And divya thought there is something fishy… But still she just left bcoz she was already hurt a lot and she couldn’t bare anymore….

Arohi and Rahul left together….
Shraddha Niki and rohit went together…..
Sam sowrajyam divya and kiran went together….

Sam left to his friends house…

Divya took sourajyam to her home… Kiran dropped her home and went to his home…

Next day….. Sowrajyams marriage…

Divya called up kiran to temple…
Divya and kiran both got sowrajyam married to her love…
And they thanked them… And bid good bye…

Divya and kiran were left…
They started talking….
First divya spoke… Kiran… I wanted to say u something….
Before I start my life with u I shld get answers for many of the questions arising in my mind….
What is the reason behind rohit thinking about me like that…
I know he truly loved me and so I….
But now I’m broken, except hatred I don’t have anything else for him right now…
But still I want to know the reason behind his attitude towards me….

Sooooo they both thought and at a same time both came up with Niki’s name….

Yeah…. Its Niki…
Divi told kiran…
Kiran kiran… I remember few days ahead when I called rohit.. It used to be busy and Niki also… At the same time both of their numbers were busy…
So I feel she filled rohit ears against me…
Let me confirm it first….

And they go to get the bills… And they were shocked to see what they expected to be was damn true…

Rohit and Nikki spoke to hours…

And divya straight away went to Niki’s house… To find Niki and rohit there….
Niki was acting to console rohit and was sitting near him…
I know rohit from the day one divi didn’t have any feelings for u… She just fell for ur riches and now kiran is more richer than u so she left u for him… Y do u want to waste ur life for her… Move on with whom u deserve…

Just then they hear sum body clapping…
It’s divya and kiran…

Niki is shocked to see them and tries blabbering something… By then she already got a slap from divya…

Niki was like divi what’s this… Wht happened…

And divya told her… I don’t want anything more from u…. I want only the truth…. Tell me everything in front of rohit itself… Or else I’m gonna kill u here itself…
Common speak out…
Or I will have to speak now…

Rohit was like divi what’s happening…

Divya asks him to keep quite…

Then Niki again starts shedding fake tears… This time divi gave her even more tight slap… And Niki saw stars this time….

After sometime… Niki started yes it’s me… I only did each and everything to separate u and rohit… I want rohit in my life I love him… How would u expect I can let him to enjoy with u….
I deserve him more than u….
Thts y I filled his ears and made him get a bad impression on u…. And so on…

Rohit was shattered and left unconsolable…
He scolded and slapped Nikki….
So what all u told about my divi was not true…
I trusted u blindly and lost my love…
And he started crying. .
Then he held divyas hand and asked forgiveness and begged for a last chance…
But this time divya was not at all the same divya who used to forget and forgive all his mistakes… Bcoz its about a girls respect and self esteem… And if she gets a blackmark on it… She would never forgive that person even if it is her love…

That is what divi said to rohit…
Sorry rohit…
I may forgive u but definitely I can’t give another chance for u… Its all over… Even if I give u a chance that thing u did and spoke to me will haunt me all my life…and I just can’t act like being happy with u….

True love is based on trust understanding and respect…. They r the foundations of any relationship… If that is only not there then there is no place for love and life….

I don’t have any feelings for u now… The moment u doubted me… I lost all my love… U broke me into many pieces which u can never join together..

I’m moving on with kiran…
He is the one who understands me well and trusts me at any situation…. Sometimes to be loved will be greater than to love…

I’m forgiving u now but u don’t do this mistake again in ur life time…

And don’t hurt anybody’s feelings…. Feelings r like glass… Once u break u can’t repair it… Even if u repair the marks will be there…

U move on in ur life…

Good bye and she goes from there….

Rohit sits crying… And realises his mistake… And decides to change…
This time he changes for good… But he won’t have divya in his life…

On the way divya and kiran are walking holding each others hands…. Divya feels relieved and thinks… How times changes everything and heels everything… And smiles seeing kirans face and so kiran….
Scene ends here….

Guys I’m sorry if u don’t like it…. I just made a try… I won’t update anymore bcoz I saw ur comments and came to know that u r not interested by my writing…
According to my point of view its definitely wrong to patch up rohit and divya again… Its impossible for any girl to do so… After getting such a blackmark from her love itself…. So I separated them and made divya take a right decision….
U all wait for bhgi to continue it… I’m sorry if u don’t like it… Good bye ..
Have a nice day…

Credit to: neeharika

11 comments

  1. Diya

    Thnx yaar it was awesome …
    u should start ur own ff…and of course every ppl have different thinking way that’s y it’s not that easy to continue anyone’s ff, but at least u work on it & give it a try and end it nicely…take care..looking forward to c u coming up with a new ff.

  2. Harani

    Dnt feel bad dr..it will take time fr everyone …..to get adjusted to ur story ..but bfre that u finished it…really it was awesome..actually we were reading it frm beginning….so ro and divi was mostly liked by everyone dr…..I know u too wuld hv seen the luv and romance btwn….ro and divi…tats y sudden changes r nt immediately accepted dr….luv u bye …if u can pls write a new ff fr us we wuld luv to read frm u pls..only if you wish or else dnt feel like pressurized…bye take care…loads of lluv fr u ..
    Neeharika dr …ppls write a new ff on ur own .,.?

  3. Sweety

    I dnt wann kiran nd divi..i want ro nd divi..rohit did a big mistake but nw he knw His Mistakes..plz give a chance to rohit…

  4. krithika

    Neeharika. I loved it. I know u had to and the story fast and so kiran and divi got together soon. But ya. U r right. Rohit always had trust issue and he loved the looks of divi but not her in person as he always had issue with her dressing her friendship with boys and all. And the way he behaved-never should divi forget. So it was best for divi to leave the one whom she loved and be with the one who trusted her. Love can build up if we trust but having to give up what u r for the love of someone else. That’s a big compromise sure to end up with regrets alone. I liked the story line and ur thinking too. And don’t feel bad if there are difference in opinion. In serials too the tracks chosen by the writer are sometimes liked and sometimes not.there r all sorts of viewers with different opinions.
    And I think u can start a new story with ur thinking in it entirely. I would love to read a mature and yet romantic story 🙂

    • binny

      yes i agree as i donot like contd version of strangers but i really like ur thoughts so go for your own ff and please imform as in this post only please .i will surely read it.

  5. Roma

    Awesome episode, loved it very much. …totally agree with your decision for divi to choose Kiran n drop Rohit … it would be better if we could see some romantic scenes of divi n Kiran too… will miss you loads

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