A Strangers Story (Part 1)

Hey guys…. This is neeharika… I was a fan of strangers… Since bhgi dear is busy and unable to update it further… I took a step to try my level best to make it up to it… Hope u like it…
I’m sorry if someone is not interested… Plz tell me if u don’t like me writing it…. I will stop it…

When ro comes near divi and tries holding her hand… Divi shouts at him and says… Don’t ever dare to touch me… Never ever…
Its all over… Over thts it…

And….
Divi started crying out loud hugging kiran…
Then rohit became all furious…
He again started abusing divi( this time he was not in a drunken state) with his dirty words…

Uhhh u all girls r d same….
Every now n then u need a different guy…
U like every single guys attention ha…
U r a b***h divi….

Every one stared at rohit with shock…
The words he said made him fall so low in everyone’s eyes…( except niki)

Ro was literally speaking disgustingly…
Kiran couldn’t control anymore n slapped ro very hard… Very hard that ro just fell on d floor….

He stood up and started at kiran shamelessly…

Mmmm very nice… My lover romancing my friend and shamelessely my friend also having fun with my lover even after knowing what all happened between us….. Wht sort of people u r ha… Disgusting…. Ro said… Pointing at divi and kiran…

All these while divi was silent… Arohi was sitting next to her… Niki was with ro … Shraddha Sam and sowrajyam were watching what was happening…

After hearing to everything that ro said…
Divi came near him and looked into his eyes…
She saw his eyes filled with disgusting thoughts and no where she could find d love for her…

She told ro … Yesterday night made u half dead in my view and today u r completely dead and rotten…. Never ever show ur face to me in life…
Just get lost…

Rohit was like wht d hell…. I will not spare u if u go away from me… Do u think I will let u live happily after this… I definitely won’t… I know what u r and wht u do…
I do have people who keep informing me about u…. Don’t take me for granted… I can do anything to make u mine and only I should have such a beautiful girl in my life… I will make u my slave or else… I’ll make ur life hell… Beware..!!

Divz lost her cool and gave him a tight slap… And one more and one more… Until she was tired…
U…. U…. Dirty creep how dare u warn me… Do u think I’m afraid of u or ur warnings…
See what I do now….
Ro was literally shocked…

What did divi do##what lesson would she teach ro##wait for the next update## hope u guys like it… Would u mind if I continue it?? Bhgi dear I’m waiting for ur permission… Plz comment friends…

Credit to: neeharika

11 comments

  1. aditi

    Nice update neeharika and plzzz don’t make rohit DAT cruel don’t change the pair I want rovya to be pair waiting fr next update

  2. Hayathi

    First of all thank u so much for writing this story dr….. i hate nikki yaar bhgi ne kitna kuch kiya uske liye par unhon ne hamesha rohit ko usse alag karna chahti hein idiot ladki…. rohit usko slap karna bahut jaroor hein

  3. Anu

    dear u wrote quite good but plz don’t make Rohit typical SERIAL type villain…actual Ro dat BHgi introduced to us is a weird guy not cruel …Of course Ro did a huge mistake but don’t make him apart from Divi…Sorry if l said anything wrong…best of luck..tc

  4. Harani

    Dr tanq fr continuing …I Lu thd pair by bhgi…ro and divi…dnt separate them …prblms r there but dnt separate them…..

  5. maya

    Important thing new writter ji don’t use short words like ro and divs please . try to use mix emotions like (care emotions love hate ❤) etc like bhgi use to do .your episode was only full of anger and hate nothing else and there shows no reaction of shrada and Rahul it was little weird so please improve such mistakes in next update

  6. jArin

    plz dear don’t spoil Rohit’s character,,,we know he gave divya worst pain but dats not mean he is a criminal ,,,,l don’t think “bhgi”s creation Rohit would do same..it seems like a New Rohit arrived…am sry if l hurt u but u r going opposite direction from Main Track…if it’d been a New ff l would say dat u wrote very well but being ”Strangers” fan my expectation level is too high…l know u can’t be same like BHGi but if u really gonna continue plz improve first (by d way it was just a suggestion or request),l hope u’ll understand ………………………………………………..
    BHGI ,,,hope u’ll come back soon …missing u

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