THE STORY OF US – Chapter 11 by sana


We were all sitting together in the living room , i was middle of Rudra and Om facing Anika and Tia . They look like kind of friends now . It was complete silence and breaking it the one and only Rudra said ” Did anyone die ? Seriously we all are sitting here like it’s a funeral ” . The same thought which went through my mind .

Rudra looked at everyone like studying them and said with a wide grin ” Ladies and gentleman , why don’t we go to a party , have some fun and enjoy it to the fullest and I will teach you to how to behave…” He went on ranting until me and Om asked him to shut his good-for-nothing mouth , the only thing we had unison .

After all Rudra is the troublemaker and Heartbreaker he was still the apple of eye for everyone . No matter how grown up he was he is still our baby brother the one who always cries for his favourite protein shake .
He was a party boy so he continued ” C’mon guys , it will be really fun and..” before he could complete someone said ” I have the best idea for fun time , you know we can go to a amusement part ” . Our heads turned to Tia who was giggling now and that was an unexpected .

Rudra’s jaw dropped ” is that seriously our lady baba who only have interest for shopping and partying all day ” . This time Tia stole our line ” Shut up Rudy , who all are in ?” . Someone who was silent all the time raised her hand , Anika . I looked at Om who agreed and then with a hope turned to Rudra but he already have raised his hand as much as he could . I sighed and nodded . The group was dismissed so that girls can go change and boys can prepare everything . I miss prinku she would have liked to join too .

We reached the park and found a spot where there was little crowd . This is the first time I was seeing Anika , she was wearing a floral sundress with a little make up . She was beautiful and oh my god what am I saying ? Well I have to admit she is georgous but like every girls you know but she was different she never flaunt her beauty like others do .
I slapped my head when I saw that Om was nowhere to be seen , where did the hell he go ? Like reading my mind Anika replied ” he found a beautiful spot and left with his canvas and painting brush ” . Rudra got up from his seat and waved telling ” you will find me in the swimming pool , you know ” ugh , this boy .what am I supposed to do with two ladies but one I saw that Tia was leaving saying that she met a friend !

Now it was me and Anika alone . Let’s have some fun Anika Bansal .


I never expected Tia to leave but I understood that the friend was none other than Robin . He was hanging out with his friends somewhere and tia was not going to miss this chance , that is why she choose this place .

I looked around at place where there was family , friends , young couples having fun . I missed my dad now . I wished to go back to him and breaking my trance I was suddenly pulled by Shivaye . ” What the hell Shivaye you scared me off ” I frowned at him and he laughed and kept me dragging me infront of ride where people are hanging upside down .
Seriously he want me to ride one .

” We are next ” he said and i scoffed at him ” you think that I will ride in it , no way . I’m still young I need to live life….never I m going to ride this ” . He tilted his head with a smirk and said ” I m not asking you Anika , it’s decided “.

” Shivaye , what did I do that you have to kill me , I will be dead after this ! ” I demanded because I’m sure if i say yes to him then I’m sure I will die of heart attack .
Shivaye pouted and smiled sweetly ” I never knew the great Anika Bansal was scared of rides , don’t be a baby and come ” he pulled me again and this time I shouted ” Shivaye , seriously I will kill you bhagad Billa” .

“How will you kill me when you are already dead” he laughed and then next second , we were inside and he made me sit next to him against my will .

” All the best Anika ” he said with by raising his hand with a thumps-up and smirked . I felt the train started to move . I shut my eyes tightly and I could hear my heart beating .
I started shouting hysterically as I felt it speeding up . Shivaye was laughing hard and trust me if I m back in one-piece then I m gonna make him pay for sure .

“I will kill you Shivaye , if I am dead then my soul will hunt you ” I screamed on top of my voice repeatedly . I grabbed his hand like it will help me and prayed to save me from this ride and monster sitting beside me . My heart stopped when it came to a drop . I kept on screaming and shouting that I will kill him like it was a mantra . Then finally the train came to halt , I took a deep breath and looked at him ” can’t believe you made me do it ” .
He was walking again and I followed him but I stopped when I found myself standing before another ride and you know how the rest went .

The next four rides were same like me screaming that I will kill him and holding his hand like it was a lifeline to me and then saying no for another one but I have to admit that I was happy that I was able to do it . I was proud and all thanks to the blue-eyed monster .

We walked around for sometime until I saw a vendor selling aloo puri , my favourite . My mouth started watering and I starting towards without paying any attention to Shivaye who calling my name until he caught with me and asked ” Are you seriously gonna eat that ? It’s not healthy and is unhygienic . You will be sick and ….” He kept on saying that I had already finished already one . You should have seen his face like I was eating some raw fish . I offered him one and definitely he refused but being Anika I have to make him eat , I stuffed his mouth with it and hell I was laughing hard by cleching my stomach . He glared at me and said ” No so funny Anika , but it’s good ” . Yay , I won .

I never knew it was already evening by then . We all came together and Om has sketched a family picture , Tia and Robin are kind of friends now and Rudra was able to get the numbers of Two girls he met in the pool . We made our way back soon.

I had so many memories today with Shivaye . I was so blessed to have them and who thought Mr. Kanji Ankhowala Bhagad billa will be a fun person. I hit the bed as soon as possible and yeah my mind was fully occupied by him , Shivaye .


Here is the promised chapter . I hope you find it fun and I don’t think I m going to update soon because there only less comments . Seriously after all the time that I have put when you find not worth it . I understand that many of them are busy now . Please don’t forget to comment those you read it .A big thank you , hugs to people who love me and my ff . Love you guys , hope you had a awesome day .

Sana ?

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  1. Nice and it was fun reading it

    1. Thedreamsoul

      Thank you so much Nishi , happy to know you had fun . Keep reading πŸ™‚

  2. Awesome….. πŸ™‚

    1. Thedreamsoul

      Thank you Shivika dear πŸ™‚

  3. Gayathri.visu

    Awesome dear! This version of Shivaay…oh god! Loved this SSO… I enjoyed this part. Waiting for next part dear. Plz update asap!

    1. Thedreamsoul

      Hey Gayathri , how are you ? Long-time-no-see . Thank you so much and glad to know you liked it dear . I will try to post soon πŸ™‚
      Take care ?

      1. Gayathri.visu

        Yes dear, long time!
        I m fine…how about u?? U too take care dear.
        Keep smiling!

      2. Thedreamsoul

        I am good dear πŸ™‚

  4. Dhar

    Fantastic episode plzz post the next update ASAP

    1. Thedreamsoul

      Thank you so much dear , I will update soon . Keep reading πŸ™‚

  5. Pooja26

    haha πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
    awsm chappy………
    shivaaay is too good today πŸ˜‰
    loved it !!!!!!!
    post asap…… my jaan/………

    1. Thedreamsoul

      Hi Pooja ! How are you ? Happy to know you find it awesome . I will be updating soon and keep reading πŸ™‚
      Love you my darling , take care ?

  6. Awesome? loved it…

    1. Thedreamsoul

      Thanks Tina , glad to know you liked it .

  7. Niriha

    Fabulous….loved it

    1. Thedreamsoul

      Thank you so much Niriha , happy to know you liked it dear πŸ™‚

  8. Ahaana

    gud one sana and cute too??

    1. Thedreamsoul

      Thank you Ahaana dear , keep reading πŸ™‚

  9. AWESOME!!!??…
    Totally Loved it ?…..
    A khidkitod amazing update..

    Shivika were just awesome ?
    I really enjoyed the rides and aloo puri scene….
    You just nailed it sanu ?…
    Hope I can call you sanu?..

    Post the next chappy soon ?

    1. Thedreamsoul

      Hey Sofi , Thank you so much and super happy to know you loved it . Shivika will always be awesome ? . You can call me anything good and it’s so sweet . I will try to post soon , keep reading .
      Love you tons , take care ??❀

  10. Jerry_36

    Hey Sana.
    How can you say we don’t like your writings. Actually we love them and nowadays many have their exams so its kind of fine now.

    I really enjoyed Today’s update. Thank you for updating it super fast. I am in love with your writings. You are a fabulous writer. Cuteness overloaded?

    Rudra is always a party person and am glad that this quality of him make others enjoy. Anika and Shivaay moments were awesome too.

    The way anika was glaring and cursing Shivaay was fun to read. Tia and Robin, I think love is going to blossom soon. Do post the next one soon. Love you❀

    1. Thedreamsoul

      Hi Jerry , how are you ? Hope you are doing well so you will be writing my fav ff .
      Yeah I understand that all are kind of busy with their exams , school opening etc .
      Thank you so much , your comments alwyas cheers me up a lot .
      Happy to know you enjoyed it dear and so are you a fabulous writer . See we are praising each other but seriously I mean it .
      Yeah , Tia and Robin are gonna be in love soon and I will posting soon . Keep reading​ , love you ?❀?

  11. Kanfi

    Hey sana..,,
    I love ur writing skills,…
    N todays epi was really very funny…
    Enjoyed alot,…
    Just make shivika start falling for each other,..
    It wss ammazingg

    1. Thedreamsoul

      Hi Kanfi di , thank you so much , happy to know you enjoyed it . Yeah soon love will blossom between them but before that I want them to get know each other well .
      Love you di , take care ?❀?

  12. Superb epi

    1. Thedreamsoul

      Thank you so much Lilly di πŸ™‚

  13. Amazinggggg… Epi Sana…. It’s too funny… Luv it…

    1. Thedreamsoul

      Thank you Banita dear , glad to know you liked it πŸ™‚

  14. Nikita_jai29

    It is nice one dear…

    1. Thedreamsoul

      Thank you so much Nikkita , keep reading πŸ™‚

  15. Arthi

    Superb update dr……I just loved it… post next part soon dr…..

    1. Thedreamsoul

      Thank you so much Arthi , happy to know you liked it ?

  16. Haridhra

    Hey Sana I never thought that U will make the Great shri shri shri 108 bar Kanji Ankowale Bhagad Bills to ride in these n Our Anika di to be afraid of those rides my god.. Offu tis Om never changes..

    N Rudy never fails to get our attention heheee The lady killer n I missed something yaa hey dr I have a small request it would have been outstanding if u include Shivaay’s POV but trust me u slayed today’s epi man n u r truly an amazing writer dunn’t worry abt the comments I tnk may of them r preoccupied with there results, schools, college admissions .. N other stuffs n yaaay so Sana is back to track I hope u post next Asap for the sake of readers like us..

    Love yaa ??

    1. Thedreamsoul

      Hello Hari darling , how are you ? I hope you are doin great ! Sorry for the late reply .
      I’m super happy that you liked it , yeah I will be adding Shivaye as much as possible . Thank you so much , it means a lot to me . I will try to post soon and yeah love you ,take care ?

  17. it was aver interesting episode………..loved shivika moments

    1. Thedreamsoul

      Thank you so much Shruti , happy to know you liked it πŸ™‚ keep reading.

  18. Alekhika20

    Fabulous update

    1. Thedreamsoul

      Thank you dear , keep reading πŸ™‚

  19. Madhuani

    Hey Sana,it’s not at all boring.plz don’t say like this ‘coz i loved it.

    You make our sso ride the rides n that too by taking anika with him.Too good.

    1. Thedreamsoul

      Hi dear , thank you so much and glad to know you loved it . If you people did then I m sure it’s not boring ! Ty , keep reading ?

  20. Amazing update.. loved it..

    1. Thedreamsoul

      Thank you Ankita dear πŸ™‚

  21. Neha_Pheonix

    Heyyy, Sana darling
    When my cousins came we went to a Amusement park just I could totally relate to Shivika’s happiness
    Once your fear is conquered..then…we enjoyy the ride…same with Anika
    Rudra is Rudra…hahah..pool..
    Fascinating update
    Love ❀️ ya !

    1. Thedreamsoul

      Hello di , how are you doin !
      I am happy to know you had so much fun and amusement park are just awesome ! I went to one of them a few months back and I really didn’t want to get back home .
      Rudra will always be Rudra , haha nothing can happen of him.
      Thank you so much di , you really know how to make me happy πŸ™‚
      Love you , miss you , take care ❀???

  22. AMkideewani

    Superb my dear sister?

    1. Thedreamsoul

      Thank you my crazy sissy ! Love you lots ?

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