OUR STORY-Twinj (Five shots)

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OUR STORY-TWINJ(Five shots)

Helloooooooooo guys!!! God!! I am sooo excited!!😍😍 I have come up with my very first piece of writing and i am soo nervous to be presenting this to you. It has been a really long journey with TU n my tashan-e-ishq family…actually this was supposed to be my birthday treat to u guys but the 20th is too far…so here it is….pls be nice to me…i am not the best writer but maine koshish kiπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰ sooo pls be kind to me.
Love ya all loads❀️❀️❀️

Maine zyada bak-bak kar liya na?? Anyways…mera os hai…bak bak to hogi….see ya at the end😘

❀️_______ready set go_________❀️

A mansion is shown with a beautiful garden. A spacious room is shown…filled with beautiful pictures of a cute couple. A girl is seated comfortably on the couch, munching a bowl of popcorn. She has straight hairs and has applied very little make up.(are yaar camera ghoomao na! Kaun hai ye ladki??)

Girl’s POV
Aaj nahin…isse kya lagta hai?? Main nahin jaanti ki ye choron ki tarah mujhe pichle aadhe ghante se mujhe ghoore jaa raha hai. Lekin aaj mein aski nahin sunne wali hoon. Agar ye MR KUNJ SARNA hai toh mein bhi MRS TWINKLE SARNA hoon. Itni jaldi haath nahin aane wali…mujhse panga liya tha na?? Ab dekhna….main bhi dekhoonye mujhs kaise manata hai…😌

She is twinki aka twinkle aka Kunj ki siyappa queen…

On the opposite side of the room our handsome hunk..Kunj is sitting on the bed with his laptop on his lap…his face is hidden behind the screen but he is stealthily catching glances of his lady love.

Kunj looked at his screen which flashed all the pretty pictures of his siyappa queen…
K-tu na kitne nakhre karti hai!! Pata hai tujhe? Babaji maine aisa kaunsa paap kar diya jo isse mujhe parcel kar diya? Sach batao…(raising his one eyebrow) aapse bhi sambhali nahin gayi naa? Par meri kya galti thi? Sirf twinkle ko bhejna chahiye tha na…usse saare siyappe nikalke!!!
But what shall i do? I love her…her cute smile..her sweet talks…baat baat par uske tantrums throw karna…inhi sab pe to mein fida ho gaya😍😍 She makes me go crazy when she blushes!! Oh god! She makes me go weak in my knees. Love you siyappa queen.

He glanced at Twinkle who was weirdly staring at him(agar insaan akele khud se baat karega to aisa hi hoga…) He closed his laptop and moved towards Twinkle who was now sweating…
He slowly bent down and moved towards twinkle. He pulled her by the waist. Her eyes popped open..

T-kuuunnjj tum…
K-shhh…kitna bolti ho??
He started playing with her hair and was still on twinkle’s neck…he was breathing heavily and each of his breath on twinkle’s shoulder made her go even more crazy on her husband.

K-tumne akele saara popcorn kha liya….ab mein kya khaounja? I am very hungry na!!

He said this with a naughty smile and twinkle had already turned red.
K-mann karta hai ki tumhe utha kar, bed pe laitakar, tums..

Twinkle put her hands on kunj’s mouth. He smiled at her gesture and removed her hand…

K-par agar itna khaogi to uthana to door…tumhe hila bhi nahin paounga!! Vaise bhi itni moti ho gayi hai…
N kunj burst out laughing.

T-haawww kunj! Tum bahut kharab ho!! Idiot duffer! Main Miss Amritsar hoon. Lakhon marte hai mujh par. Aaj bhi instagram par lakhon followers hai mere jo meri khoobsurati pe shayari likhte hai..aur tum…tumse accha toh YUVI hi t….

All that while kunj was admiring his lady love and smiling at her childishness and was just mesmerised by the way she could speak so much in only one breath…but now his eyes were red with pain and anger. His fists were tightly closed as if he wanted to punch someone…

Twinkle bit her tongue…

Twinkle’s POV
Damn twinkle. Tujhe ho kya gaya hai?? Apni baaton ko control nahin kar sakti?? Kuch bhi bakti hai! Kunj ko kitna bura lag gaya…usse Yuvi se related koi bhi baat nahin pasand hai…ab kya hoga??

Twinkle looked up and started moving towards kunj. But the latter stormed out of the room…Twinkle rushed behind him but he took the car…leaving behind a sobbing twinkle….
Twinkle lifelessly walked into the room…n all of that shit flashed into her mind..

Precap:ab mujhe kya pata? Saath mein dekhenge😝

Ab mera time…means bak bak time…ab jab upload kar liya hai to criticism bhi accept karungi…comments jaise bhi ho…par ho to sahi….it will be very encouraging….and if you have any suggestions please drop it down in the comments…

Now, i have started by being a silent reader,commentor n now hopefully…writer..if this is posted…n i would like to know all of you more…so please in the comments…drop down
1.ur name
2.where u live
3.your age/class (sorry ladies jaanti hoon ki unar nahin puchte hai par insaan dil se hamesha jawan hota hai…age can go to hell!)
4.your wildest fantasy

You are not obliged to but i would feel nice if you did it….

P.S: to all the ff n os writers…
As from now i will be commenting with the name ‘Ayu’ only….

Love ya all…keep smiling…n keep enjoying life….❀️❀️😘😘

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64 Comments
  1. Sameera

    Omg I am so happy to see u ayu ….
    Wah wah kya amzing epi tha yaar
    So cute twinj 😍😍😍😍
    N yeah my name sameera
    17 years πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
    And yaar do cont soon
    Precap amazing hahahah πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

    1. Ayu

      Aww thank you soooo much Sam. It means a lot😘

  2. Baby

    hey well luvd it seems so intresting post nxt asap
    n welcome to tu family sissy
    soo hey i m baby
    i m gonna b 16 soon infct very soon
    n i m in 11th class commerce wid legal studies
    n also i m from delhi noida
    n also my wildest fantasy actually dont no dere r many
    n all d wildest fantasies r related to twinj aka sidmin
    basically sidmin only
    n 1 is to meet sid n hug him tyt heheeee which is never psbl n yeah mch more dats y its my wildest fantasy
    luvd it continue soon n post soon

    1. Ayu

      Thank you baby. Guess what? We have the same fantasyπŸ˜‚

      1. Baby

        hehe thts cool wts ur age n frm where r u dear? if u dont mind n i hv mch more in my fantasy bt shayad i cnt tell more…….hehhehe w8ing fr ur fs dear

  3. Kritika14

    I really loved the start! Seems great! Well, you know my name .. i live in Bangkok (Thailand). I study in 11.I also write a fan fiction of my own named – The Enticing Little Incident (Twinj). You can read it if you want πŸ™‚ Continue with this for sure cuz its amazing x

    1. Ayu

      Thank you…its not much…only 5 epi….πŸ˜‰

  4. Sanjanaagrawal

    Awesome. …
    So my name …. u can ur self read it …. of course my name is sanjana waise u can call ne sanju ….
    Hmmmm so my age …. 13 years , 1 month , and 10 days ….. {approx} if u want I can give seconds n minutes also … 😝😝 and I am not a lady I am a girl so I can tell u the age 😝😝
    Hmmm and my class 8th …. if u want can give u school name and address also … 😝😝

    1. Ayu

      Amazing Sanju!! N thank u sooooo much.

  5. Mitali

    It was fantastic. Your epi was Mind blowing.
    My name is Mitali
    I’m from Pune (Maharashtra).
    I’m 14 years old.

    1. Ayu

      Thank u mitali😘

  6. Thanmy

    Hey ayu its amazing I just loved it and I’m thanmy can call me Navya n I’m in 10th class and I’m from Hyderabad n not lady I’m still a small kid!!!! N pls cont soon wildest fantasy ke baare mein baad mei bataunga!! Cont soon

    1. Ayu

      Hi Navya! Really glad to meet you. Thank you for your lovely comment😘
      I will try to post the next soon. N ya wildest fantasy ka wait karungi😝

  7. Amazingggg episode….☺☺….. a very beautiful start…..πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ plz post next asap….i love it.πŸ’“

    1. Ayu

      Thank you apoorva. The next will be up soon😘

  8. I have became a great fan of u.lam a keralite studying in 10th.my fantasy is…………….to create a show of sidmin…
    I know it’s something impossible but phir no

    1. Ayu

      Hey samshipta! Thank you for your comments. N haan koi sapna impossible nahin hota hai…if u want…u will

  9. Purnima.agrawal30

    awesome amazing fabulous cute interesting….eagerly waiting for next part….& name is purnima you can cll me punnu also…& me 18 yrs ki hu…..BBA 1st sem…..

    1. Ayu

      Hi purnima! Thank u soo much😘

  10. Aamu

    oh my god!!….koi to roklooo….
    it was such a cute one…..
    now as u had started shot….den start a ff toooo….
    my name:kisiko bataana nahi….waise to sabko pta hi hai…heehee..AAMENA u can call me AAMU it my petname
    age:hmm bataoo??….no?….yes?…ok no bhav i will tell u…m 15 yrs old cute sweet girl in 10 std…hmm khud ki taarif karti hu lekin sachchi waali…..
    n my wildest fantasy is…is…….many things….
    but 2-3 thing is here which make me go more crazy..
    1.only n only sidmin…..want to meet dem once..
    2………………………chalo batahideti hu….want to visit a place…cant tell its name…but m crazy of it
    3.reading ke bina me ji nahi sakti….ff read karne bina mera leg bed parse utarta nahi…n ff write karne bina muje cmnt milnahi sakti so…..always want to write something n read….read?….i love reading…write?….love to read beautifull long cmnt…n for dat hav to write…but now m busy with exams so m not regular..
    k bahbye…
    do cont….
    or haa ff likhne ke baare me sochna zarur….

    1. Ayu

      Soo sweet aamu. Thank u😘
      N yes i will definitely think about it n maybe pretty soon u’ll get one to read…

      1. Aamu

        n i willl wait……
        d time starts noww…
        tick tock…..tick tock
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        post jarur karna

  11. Awesome start Ayu.. really loved it.. well my name is Yashvee.. I am 18 soon to be 19.. I m from Africa.. and my fantasy is to meet sid one day and talk with him n hug him tight at least once in my life😍😍😍.. do cont soon πŸ’•

    1. Ayu

      Hey Yashvee! Thank u soo much for ur comments!! N its strange but we share the same fantasy with babyπŸ˜‚

  12. Was an it’s amazing

    1. Ayu

      Thank you Anshika😘

  13. omg ayu amazing loved it in core. …. my age 16 yr fab …fan
    twing ki Nok…jhow. ….supreb

  14. omg ayu amazing loved it in core. …. my age 16 yr fab …fan
    twing ki Nok…jhok……supreb

    1. Ayu

      Thank u tahu! Glad u liked it😘

  15. Cuteeeee couples. Very interesting. It seems u r a good writer. My name is Sindhuja. Age-14+ . class-9. I am from Odisha

    1. Ayu

      Hey Sundhuja…good writer ka to pata nahin par good fan to zaroor hoon😘

  16. Suni

    Hey Ayu!!!
    It was superb epiπŸ’–πŸ‘πŸ‘.. looking forward to next episode.. πŸ™‚
    I’m Sunaina…my friends call me Suni
    Im 16…
    I’m Highschooler and im from Italy.
    Post next epi soon…. πŸ‘

    1. Ayu

      Hey Suni thank u soo much!! It means a lot!!

  17. Rashiverma2199

    Wow….ayu concept was fab….waiting for next part….

    1. Ayu

      Thank you😘

  18. This is not fair . Tumne khud k bare mein kuch bhi nehi kaha . Agli epi pe bata dena . Excited for the next update . Oh . My name is Chayonika Chakrborty Chandra . I am from Bangladesh . I am 16 years old . I m in class 10 . Mujhe lag raha hain ki mein my self paragraph likh rahi hoon . Bye

    1. Ayu

      Hi Chandra…u r right to pakka next epi mein main tumhari complain door kar dungi!! 😘

  19. Hi ayu… Nice start.. Loved it… Nd i’m sidhanshi,,, u can call me atushi or atu… I’m from Bangladesh.. I’m 15 years old sweet girl nd i’m in 10th std… I have sooo many wild fantasys,,, i’m a die hearted fan of sidhant gupta, so my wildest fantasy is ummmm… To meet with sid, hug him & to go on a romantic date with him nd blah blah blah (actly all abt sid only)… Btw lovely start. waiting for the next part.. Nd nd nd friends???

    1. Ayu

      Hehe…many of us have the same fantasyπŸ˜‚ Thank u soo much for ur lovely comments. N FRIENDS😘😘

  20. SanamMel

    Ayu it was mwaaahhh β™₯β™₯β™₯
    1.My name is sanam
    2.from karnataka
    3.age = 7teen

    1. Ayu

      Hey sanam. Thank u😘

    2. Jiya_Ani

      Heyyy …sanam di..is that you??..
      Kahaan thi yaar…Missed my inspiration like helll..
      Not even a single contact..
      Love you di😘😘😘😘
      I am waiting for your ff like anything..
      Please post soon..
      (Vaise I am Shreya..cutie writer of Yehi hai Ishq ..you remember..??..)
      You only taught me how to upload ffs..

      I hope you remember me..
      😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

      1. SanamMel

        Ya shreya how can I 4gt u yr
        Missed u too . Luv u loads β™₯β™₯β™₯

    3. Jiya_Ani

      Oh thank goodness you still remember me..I don’t know if you still read my ff or not but I can assure ab aap padh sakti ho..main ab pehle ki tarah stupid episodes nahi likhti.. Trust me..
      And Along with Yehi hai Ishq I write 2 more Twinj ffs..
      1-Our Love Story – Twinj Love
      2- A Tale of OBSTINANCE and Love..

      Agar kabhi Mann kare aur time mile toh padhna aur comment bhi Karna..

      and yes I am still waiting for your post..please cont your ff asap..

      Love you πŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œ

      1. SanamMel

        Don’t u dare call ur episodes stupid
        I always loved it but the only prob was that I was inactive in tu page for almost a month due to some reason and so nor did I read any1s ff nor did I post any ff

      2. SanamMel

        I will read ur ff n try to comment . Love u dear β™₯β™₯β™₯

    4. Jiya_Ani

      Okay okay fine..I just meant ki Maine likhne ka way sudhara hai..and pehle bohot spell checks aur mistakes karti thi..and zyaada work bhi nahi karti thi apne epi par..but now I’ve started.. So..
      😳😳

  21. SidMin

    Loved the episode πŸ™‚
    My Name Shruti
    Age:16 (Going to turn 16 in September )
    Live in Mumbai
    My Wildest Fantasy is to meet Sid and go out on a date with him πŸ™‚

    1. Ayu

      Yaar! Hum sabko sid se hi milna hai..πŸ˜‚

  22. Shreya098

    Wow ayu it was superb…. I mean just amazing

    The way he said babaji maine aisa kon Sa paap kar diya tha Jo ise muje parcel kar diya….HehehehehπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
    I could imagine him saying all this with that one eyebrow up….
    . I am missing that look like hell…

    And about myself….
    Hiii ayu I am shreya….19 yrs old
    I am doing graduation in science (second year)….
    And wildest fantasy……ummmm yaha pe naa hi btau to acha rahega….. 😜😜😜…

    Anyways looooved ur first shot…. Continue soon

    1. Ayu

      Thank u shreya. Really glad u liked it😘
      Fantasy ke baare mein kabhi aur batana😝

  23. dreamer..arundhati

    Ayu it was fabulous. ?.update soon
    Arundhati here
    14 yrs

    1. Ayu

      Thank u aru!! I have already posted the next epi…hope it will be here soon

  24. Jisha

    And this is your surprise…I had guessed it right…U started it very well dear…Seems great…
    I think you don’t need an intro of my mine…Coz you know it very well…Still…
    1. Jisha
    2. Banglore, but basically a mallu ( I mean keralite)
    3. 29 years old, a mother of 4 year old kid…and expecting…
    4. Wildest dream – I don’t know…
    I am sorry I am commenting late..these days a bit busy..that’s why not replying any of your comments too…I will tell you the reason for being busy tomorrow…

    Keep writing dear…

    1. Ayu

      Thank u soo much di…its ok…i understand that u are busy…apka ghar n all hai…u hardly get time..usmein se thoda nikalke comment kiya..yahi bahut hai..love you di😘

  25. Jiya_Ani

    Heyyy..I know I know late hoon but kya karu..kal raat TU nahi khola and subah tumhara message dekha toh school se aakar ab padh ke comment kar rahi hoon..
    Pehle toh yaar I must say…aprateem😍😍😍😍…Amazing yaar every thing portrayed so nicely.. Bas ek baat if you are showing sorrow for example you said when kunj left the house in anger.. You wrote ‘Twinkle lifelessly walked into the room…’..at that place lifelessly is not the appropriate adverb ..what I feel…coz Kunj use chod kar nahi chala gya…
    I really hope itni choti baat point out kar rahi hoon ..bura naa laga ho..and agar laga toh Really Sorry from the bottom of my heart..
    Now Introduction
    Name –
    Real name: Shreyani
    Nick name:…bohot saaaareeeee hain..
    Like
    Mumma calls bittu
    Papa calls Shreya
    Lil sis calls Moti (But trust me I a. Not at all fatty😳😳)
    Friends call me
    Sherni, Suraiya, cutie-beautie, baby doll, honey , bubbly and many more.
    And my one friend is there..Aashu..
    He and only he calls me Ani..

    Place –
    I live in Bulandshahr but belong to Gorakhpur …foothills of Himalayas.

    Age-
    13+ ..and I study in 9th standard.

    And my wildest fantasy…
    Ummmmmmmmmmm…
    Bata doon???
    Hmm..actually recording a romantic song for Sidhant’s Heroine..doing this means meeting him..so 2nd is this..
    And I want to paint a whole room with my paint brush..


    And aur bohot kuch hai but abhi ke liye itna hi..

    Keep going dear..😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

  26. Jiya_Ani

    Yuhoooo..I wrote the longest comment.. Toh ek lamba reply toh banta hai boss..πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

    1. Ayu

      Umm ok so i’ll try to break ur comment record!!!
      First of all…glad u liked it dear…i was sooo skeptical for this because i had never exposed any of my work before….
      N i understand and as from now i will take all of these details into consideration….i accept all ur positive and negative criticism…main ek student hoon…ur comments will help me improve my writing skills…so pos ho ya negative…its a win-win situation…
      Haye god! Tumhare kitne saare names hai…shreyu is fine for me…if u dont mind me calling u that…
      Never mind siblings shreyu…meri choti behen bhi roz mujhe ‘gros’ bulati hai jiska matlab ‘moti’ hi hai(main bhi motu nahin hunπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰)
      N mera description…kuch logon ka complaint tha ki maine apne baare mein kuch nahin bataya…soo its gonna come in my next epi….u’ll get it from there…
      Sooo i hope i broke ur record n thank u soo much dear for having commented.!! It really means a lot 😘
      N haan…i have already posted my next epi…it should be up anytime so pls overlook its mistakes this time…agli baar yaad rakhungi…
      Zyada bol liya na? Chal bye😘

  27. Awesome ayu…..
    My name Sana
    i live in gorakhpur UP
    update soon the nxt part…….

    1. Ayu

      Thank u soo much…the next one will hopefully be up soon.

  28. SIDMIN-Daamini

    Oye hoye ayu!!!!!!😱
    Kya mast epi tha dear……………n yaa sorry for being late actually busy with studies so maybe u can understand this N my name is daamini as it is already written ……….my registered name n live in delhi …………so bas abhi itna hi now u tell me where do u live n yaa sweetie great job ………..it was stupendous…😚😚
    Plzz post the next part sooooon πŸ’•πŸ˜˜

    1. Ayu

      Thank u soo much daamini. Really glad u liked it…the next epi will be up soon😘

  29. Shatakshi

    Omg Sayu
    Where in the world I was dying. ..that I left this Amazing ffπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
    Seriously it was a blast
    Are u the same Ayu(Shreya)
    Good to see ur fablous writing
    N my name is Shatakshi
    I m 15
    And in 11th standard
    I dont really have any particular fansacy but they are hilarious ….it changes according to seasonsπŸ˜‚
    Love u dear β€β€β€πŸ’ž

    1. Ayu

      Yes shatakshi i am the same ayu oof shreya….
      Thank u sooo much for appreciating the epi
      Glad to finally know u better….n i was wondering…what does ur name mean? I really wanna know cuz its unique. N ur special dear n i am sure ur fantasies will also reflect u only naπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
      N ya….LOVE YOU TOO😘😘

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