A story of RagLak and Sanskar

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Guys, you might have been reading RagLaksan ff in raglak fb page. I didn’t submit last part still. So, I’m submitting it here.

I wrote it as Rajkumari Ragini there.
If anyone didn’t know about the story.. here I’m giving summary…

“The story starts from actual serial, where Laksh comes to see Ragini the first time and he actually starts loving her from then itself. Then Sanskar enters as mad acting guy and decides to separate Raglak for revenge on Laksh and Dp. He makes RagLak to do forced romance, same as (swa and lak scene) and all family members misunderstands Raglak. Then, they both does a fake marriage to expose Sanskar, but the plan back fires. Now, the next story.. and final part.”

Last part

Sanskar was fuming in anger.

“No Lucky..! You have snatched my love from me. I won’t let you be that happy. You need to know my pain..!! you are the one, who said Dp about my Kavitha. I won’t let you get Ragini.” Says Sanskar.

“That means, you didn’t love Ragini?” asks Sujatha.

“No maa. I was just acting for my revenge.” He says and looks at Kavitha’s pic and sheds into tears.

Next morning,

Ragini wakes with the smell of coffee. Laksh was standing beside her with coffee cup.
“Bed coffee.” He offers her.
“I don’t drink bed coffee” Ragini says.

Ragini gets off from bed and Laksh looks at her waist.. he sips coffee.
“Tasty” he says looking at her. ragini turns back.

“I mean, coffee..” says Laksh innocently.

Ragini just goes into washroom without giving any smile.

“Ragini, come and bolt the door. I will bring any breakfast..” says Laksh and leaves.

Meanwhile, a man comes near Sanskar.

“Sir, Laksh and Ragini has acted. They have fooled us. They didn’t get married in any registered office.”

Sanskar smirks. “Lucky, now it’s party time..!” he says.

Meanwhile, Ragini completes her bath and gets ready. Then she hears the knock of the door.

“Laksh has come.” Ragini thinks and opens the door, but shocks to see other person there.

He sprays chloroform on Ragini, Ragini falls unconscious.

He is not Sanskar, he is Sahil..!

Sahil smirks.

Meanwhile, Sanskar makes other person to revel that RagLak aren’t married for true. Shekar and rest all shocks and he decides to get back Ragini from Laksh.

Laksh returns to the house and gets tensed that Ragini is missing.

He thinks Sanskar has did something, Laksh furiously goes to MM.

Sanskar was acting mad before all.. and Laksh goes and furiously beats Sanskar.

“Where is Ragini?” he asks.

Sanskar shocks with his question, he holds his collar,

“where means? Where is Ragini..? what happened to her..??” asks Sanskar in reverse.

All family members looks shocked that Sanskar wasn’t mad actually??

Now, Sanskar gets shocked that he himself has exposed.

Meanwhile, Ragini wakes up in a room… where all her pics are hanging on the wall..

And on a big screen her big smiling picture is there.

Ragini gets looking amazed by everything. Then she hears a guitar sound, Ragini looks in that way…

“Tu hi meri sab hei.. subha hei..” sings Sahil and comes in front of her.

“I love you madly Ragini. Plz, marry me..!!” Sahil says.

Ragini looks at him shocked.

Meanwhile here in MM, Dp is scolding Sanskar..

“That means, Laksh was saying correct. You were acting all the days..!! why are you fooling us??” Dp questions.

“Because you all have killed my Kavitha.” Sanskar takes out his frustration.

Ap in tears,
“we haven’t killed her Sanskar. But, your bade papa has saved her.”

Sanskar looks shocked.

“She is in hospital. But, in coma. She is in her treatment.” Ap says. Sanskar looks in tears at Dp.

“We searched for you everywhere Sanskar. But, we didn’t find you. At last, you appeared before as retarded. In such situation, how can we say this..??” Laksh says.

Sujatha feels guilty. “why didn’t you say this before Jiji, I have misunderstood all.”
She hugs Ap.

Laksh: bhai, now we have to search Ragini..!!

San: let’s go..!!

Both brothers leave to search Ragini.

Meanwhile, Sahil was sitting on his knees and requesting Ragini.

“Please marry me Ragini. I love you.”

“Let me go. I love only Laksh. He is my husband.”

“You both aren’t married. I know..!!” sahil says. Ragini shocks.

Then, Sahil listens to some sounds in hall and goes. He is shocked to see Laksan have arrived.

{Guys, heros can do anything right. So, they came.. how they came—I’m leaving this to your imagination}

Sahil sends his men to fight with them. Laksh and Sanskar fights with all. Meanwhile, Shekar calls to police and they arrest Sahil.

“Ragini… Ragini…” Sahil keeps shouting, but he is taken to station.

Ragini runs and hugs Laksh happily. Sanskar looks at them in smile.

Later,

All are in hospital. Kavitha is sleeping on bed. Sanskar holds her hand and whispers in her ears, ‘kavitha, I have come.’
His voice makes her nervous activate.
{these things happens in movies, why can’t in the stories??}

Kavitha wakes and hugs Sanskar. All looks at them happily.

Laksh and Ragini holds their hands tightly happily. He suddenly kisses Ragini’s cheek. Ragini looks at him amazed, he winks his eye.

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On a good muhurtha(time),
RagLak and Sankav are married.

Story ends with here

Stay tuned now to read the romance of RagLak….

Laksh has entered the room and Ragini was removing her jewelry sitting before mirror. Laksh comes back of her and nuzzles his nose in her back. Ragini gets tickling and she says, “Lakshhh” and stands.

Laksh holds her and hugs her from back. His hands are tightly wrapped around her waist. He was rubbing his nose and lips on her back and neck.

“you look dangerously beautiful..!” he says.

“you are too..!” she says.

‘what beautiful?” laksh asks. Ragini chuckles, “no, handsome..!”

Laksh turns her back.

“acha, now this handsome hubby is going to kiss this beautiful wifey” he says. And wraps his hands on her back.

Ragini closes her eyes.

Laksh locks her in his charm of love and Ragini gets entangled in his mesmerizing aroma. Both get intimate in their lovely atmosphere of love…

Next morning,

Laksh wakes to see Ragini is getting ready before the mirror. He smiles and goes near her. he makes her wear mang tikka. Ragini looks at him mesmerized.

He holds her shoulders and make her stand.

She was bending her head.

“Ragini, I always loved this girl. Who is traditional, who is calm, soft… never change Ragini. I love the way you are..!”

Ragini looks at him and smiles. Then, Laksh takes sindoor dibbi and places pinch of sindoor in her mang.

“I love you Ragini.” Laksh says.

Ragini hugs him happily.

“I love you Laksh.” She says. Laksh keeps hands around her and both keeps closing their eyes.

THE END

So guys, this is what my opinion on serial. I felt like, it would have happened like this from first.
Give your comments on the story…

Bye..

#Astra

28 comments

  1. Astra

    Astra

    |Author

    guys, this stupid TU has removed the matter at the end. i don’t know why..?? but, I’m posting here in comment section…

    Stay tuned now to read the romance of RagLak….

    Laksh has entered the room and Ragini was removing her jewelry sitting before mirror. Laksh comes back of her and nuzzles his nose in her back. Ragini gets tickling and she says, “Lakshhh” and stands.

    Laksh holds her and hugs her from back. His hands are tightly wrapped around her waist. He was rubbing his nose and lips on her back and neck.

    “you look dangerously beautiful..!” he says.

    “you are too..!” she says.

    ‘what beautiful?” laksh asks. Ragini chuckles, “no, handsome..!”

    Laksh turns her back.

    “acha, now this handsome hubby is going to kiss this beautiful wifey” he says. And wraps his hands on her back.

    Ragini closes her eyes.

    Laksh locks her in his charm of love and Ragini gets entangled in his mesmerizing aroma. Both get intimate in their lovely atmosphere of love…

    Next morning,

    Laksh wakes to see Ragini is getting ready before the mirror. He smiles and goes near her. he makes her wear mang tikka. Ragini looks at him mesmerized.

    He holds her shoulders and make her stand.

    She was bending her head.

    “Ragini, I always loved this girl. Who is traditional, who is calm, soft… never change Ragini. I love the way you are..!”

    Ragini looks at him and smiles. Then, Laksh takes sindoor dibbi and places pinch of sindoor in her mang.

    “I love you Ragini.” Laksh says.

    Ragini hugs him happily.

    “I love you Laksh.” She says. Laksh keeps hands around her and both keeps closing their eyes.

    >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>THE END<<<<<<<<<<<<<

    they have cut this matter and god should know the reason…

  2. nikky

    thanku and yaa really appreciate the work of all writer who write and hope they continue writing and give us more ff but it’s a request there is many writer who stop in middle plzz come back and complete it’s a request actually some one says that she was boasted by my comments to write ff so hope I can do for all raglak and ragsan ff writer who write but now inactive and yaa and those who completed ff come back with new one in TU bcoz raglak fan is missing and so as TU and raglak FB hope soon all are back and plzz be regular write more and more ff as os plzzif possible write on tag serial track like swara memory loss Malkin track , ragini pregnancy abhimanu and many more ASU think plzzdont take it as order it’s a request

  3. Ammu

    It’s Awesome ending dear and Raglak scenes are really beautiful. So u r Rajkumari Ragini. I really missed this story in Raglak FB and if possible post other Raglak story ( you wrote as Rajkumari Ragini in FB). Please post your all stories one by one dear. Because I really missing your stories and also our heavenly couple Raglak. Love you dear and take care

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