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This Is My Story… OS…Raglak…

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Hiii…friends this is Mahi back with another story…. actually friends this was my first story…which i have already posted but thought to post it as Raglak…i know many of u had not read it…hope u will like it…and sorry for mistakes….

This is my story OS

Have u ever wondered if love ever exist??? Or how it would feels like ever to love..well i was in those shoes till something came up..
Hi…i m Laksh… Laksh Maheshwari…and this is my story..
I woke up frm bed..shaking uncontrollably..the sweat beads on my forehead bcame heavier than block..hallucinations darkened my face..as i grasp hold of my late old grandmother waving a pleasing hand as she smiled..my legs through me out of the bed as i rolled on red rug..as i coughed i spat out blood..the watery blood..something was wrong with my body…i thought doc said..i have 3 more weeks to live..as i grasped the air..i feel the room getting thinner..in my blurry vision..i could see someone rushing towards me…thats all i can remember..thats all i know….the rest was totally dark..the pitch black just like i was in hell….

“- mr Laksh we r sorry to break this news to u..but u have approximately 24 hrs before ur death…i m sorry..”i could hear the doctor say..biting his lips in anguish..and my mother wailed out in pain.. i shrugged my shoulder funny enough to be responded…
“Can i walk”i asked doc..
“Yes ofcourse”..doc said,surprised the news didn’t budge me..

“Than lets make 24 hours memorable”i getting out of the bed..

Doc- ur condition could get crtical..r u sure u want to take risk..

I-“ofcourse its just 24 hours” isaid wearing my clothes..
My mother knew if i had fixed my mind at something that is how it goes…

“I had billion things to do before i die, so lets began the count”with this i was out in the street,hiring a cab..
My first stop was at Ragini..the girl i liked from high school,she knew all experiences about me and also may be that i like her or may be not..

“F*** the internet,f*** the friends,f*** the p*rn” i keep saying that everyday knowing my life will be never be the same..the more i get addicted, igrew more shy and more i became hermit but this one girl brought me back to life..this one girl could single me out among all genius in the class..for her i was her Albert Einstein, her da vinci with all boxes of tricks..

Laksh-yo! How r u doing??
Ragini- u know..as always getting ready for work..
Laksh-could u dedicate today for me???
Ragini-it depends at what’s at stake before i can do that..
Laksh-ok..lets say its an occasion and everything thing is centered around u..
Ragini-is it date??
Laksh-not exactly lets say party..
Ragini-no problem if i can get the autograph of Aditya roy kapoor..

“I chuckle while entering the cab..as drove through eternity..all i could think of was scent of her hair..””all strawberry flavour..maybe her lotion or hair cream may be of that flavour.. what do i care?? The thing is i love it..”

“Have u ever been to museum??”i finally found my tongue after minutes of contemplating..

Ragini-yep! Couple of times..for all those artifacts and that type of stuffs..not really my type but i just had to try taking notes..if i had to pass history classes..

Laksh-then lets go there for different course it’s called “museum fun”

Ragini(amazed)-how do u play that..???

Laksh-we just buy some spray cans and paint the wall in all sort of graffitti..

Ragini(little afraid)-what if we got caught???

Laksh(smirking)-if we get caught we run…

Ragini-sounds interesting.. but r u sure, u can keep up the pace parth..

“I smiled remembering my school time, how i used to win all races from my friends before all this s*ht”
Laksh(grinned)-i won’t even break a sweat..

“Then we stopped at shop and buy spray cans and all the accessories.. and went to museum..”

“Everything was going well as we kept signing our names in all the sections of Museum till gaurd caught us doing so”

Gaurd–hey stop there, he screamed while blowing his whistle..
“The alarm screamed as darted to safety..Ragini was a fast runner so she kept the race kinda pretty well…me??i think was doing well till my heart skipped saveral beats and i came crashing on the tiles, the gaurd caught me up and almost beat me to the pulp and all of sudden in my blurry vision isaw tearful girl, begging them to live me….”her tear were compassionate to river Ganga..”that is all i remember before i was left alone…

Ragini(tears flowing down)-i know its risky from the beginning..

Laksh(smilling awkwardly)-i just wanted to please u..
“I coughed,spitting out blood, my plague coming out again..
Laksh(while holding her hands)-i want to tell u something..
“This is moment of death, i could fill it..So it was the perfect time to tell her,how i feel for her..and if indeed say NO, it would not be painful since im gonna die anyway..””i could feel curiosity in her eyes as she waited for this anxiously”

Laksh-I’ve been trying to say this from high school but i never had the courage, even since we became friends….

Ragini-Laksh,i know, i knew u loved me,i knew..between her sobs..and tears flowing more rapidly…
Laksh-i just could not tell u too..,i was afraid of what u will do and how u will feel..”she said while kissing my lips ”

“MY FIRST EVER KISS IN MY LIFE,I FELT LIKE I WAS I ETERNITY,somewhere calm better than this World, is this truly LOVE”

“I could see my grandmother,this time she was not waving but calling me”

Laksh-Ragini promise me u’ll be okay..promise me u’ll live life normal..promise…..”as when i realised that i have very less time left with me”

Ragini-Laksh i promise but u r not gonna die…please… please don’t leave me…i love u…pleassss..”she said crying vigorously and pleading me”

“But i myself was helpless, i could not do anything even if i want to…”
Laksh-Ragini may be i could not be the boyfriend u wished………….
“I coughed out blood..watery blood..thats all i remember…as i left…”

“I could hear Ragini screaming and crying… sirens wailing.. mom was already there,crying……

“Truth is that i was given 24 hours but hardly spent less than 8 hours the most beautiful time..The time which i spend with my love…my Ragini….”

A/N-Thank u for giving ur precious time and reading my story…i hope u people liked and i would have conveyed the storyand characters feeling well…again thanku for reading my story… best wishes to all… bye….🙋

22 Comments
  1. Raglakholic

    It’s so emotional nd beautiful os mahi
    Totally loved it alot
    Thanks for this raglak os

  2. you make me cry..it was so emotional and heart touching

  3. Aashi

    Nice

  4. sooo heart touching…!! loved it soo much…!!

  5. Superb

  6. nice amazing love it

  7. its amazing superb outstanding mindblowing speechless plzzzz its a request to all raglak ff writer plzzzz write guys bcoz now raglak ff is so less and decreasing and all those who are writing also stop in middle and some are ending there ff ts ss os plzz guys start new raglak and write but plzz don’t end it soon or leave in middle bcoz all raglak ff are keep raglak alive and plzz try to post new and if ur writing keep writing regular don’t stop in middle plzz guys waiting for raglak ff writer to show write more as possible reach 100 and thanks who are writing this from crazy Temish fan who dont have writting skill but love to read

  8. Awesome os and emotional too. Please Write more Raglak stories

  9. Rj12

    loved it an amazing heart touching story

  10. IQRA222

    awesome and heart touching
    u just nailed it

  11. Astra

    nice..

  12. Devihaa

    Its really emotional….
    My throat is filled….
    I don’t why…..but it was something….that could anyone….sob…
    Thanks for this is. Dr…
    I just loved it…

  13. AWESOME

  14. emotional
    superb

  15. SRSL

    Amazing…loved it..

  16. Ragz_teju

    awesome

  17. Superb part

  18. Very emotional

  19. Asra

    it’s so emotional dear…loved it…tkcr dear…

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