Story: Incessant Fog (Prologue)

SHE felt her arms heavy. Limbs. Head. And whole body. A grimace appeared on her face at this sudden unexpected malaise while waking up. The trick of twelve hours of sound slumber made her blandly seek for its cause but an impulsive glance by her side made the reason obvious. There lay a man on his stomach, still on his sleep. The man possessed a strong and muscular undressed body. She must be heavy as lead indeed. Looking at his face, she could say he was far away from the real world. A lazy smile crept on her lips at the way his one arm away from her twisted carelessly and mouth half opened. Cautious to not disturb him, she softly disengaged her shoulder from his chin. Then she carefully picked away his another arm that wrapped about her waist and slid away from the blanket. He stirred slightly when she stepped down the bed. She stiffened for a moment and smiled at him quickly getting back to sleep. She blinked as she couldn’t believe he could appear this tamed. This instant he looked totally a different version of himself. His rough manly face bereft of those sharp hawk eyes and thin lined mouth looked approachable. Easily and very much easily. Like she’d never before felt. Even in sleep he was always on his guard. She’d always feared him. Fear of falling for his assiduousness and overly manliness. She might have had covered it well, but to speak honest since she’d met him she dreaded most of the times with the way he was approaching her with his queries. With his dangerously calm demeanor and inflexible narrow gaze despite her reluctance in cooperating with him. His strong s*xuality added more to it. He was unknown and s*xy. Masculine and handsome. Plain and sharp. Sensual and sincere. Unreachable and determined. Unrelenting and listening…She always had had to summon all her will powers to bring on distraction from her desperate want to curl and disappear into his strong arms. To turn a blind eye to that hey-woman-I-know-you-are-affected blatant throw of face. Now looking at him this gullible, she felt the need to run her lean fingers through his tousled silky locks. Just as she was about to move a step, she realized her weightiness was not only because of the hard, prolonged s*x session she’d had last night but also of the hangover. Her face distorted as she clamped her forehead on either side with her left hand in an effort to keep her body in contact with the ground. Oh god, what was that brand, she wondered irritably. She should’ve given ear to her gut-saying when she dubiously wondered about allowing new stuff enter her body last night itself. And he too had had it just for her sake. An impulsive guilt made her have a look at his face. That was why he looked this tamed, she realized. A moment, she felt the mixture of happiness and regret take birth inside her conscience. Happy because she’d never seen him giving blind credence to anyone. He’d even removed his gun when she asked just like that before they made love. Regret because he was almost unconscious now. Which she knew he surely wasn’t going to love later.

Leaning over, she whispered near his ear, “Hey”.

When he didn’t budge, she gently tapped at his shoulder twice but to no avail. She pecked his lips and drew the thick blanket up to his naked nape before putting on her nightgown. Slowly she guided her legs and stood by the window at the nook of the single bedroom flat. As she slid the blinds aside, fog would’ve assaulted her to suffocation, she thought, if the glass barricade wasn’t in between. The glossy white mass was thick and strictly restricted one’s vision through it. Suddenly she felt in her veins the flood rush of covet for an incessant fog all through. It’d already been falling for over a week now and she wanted it for all her life. Until her death so that no one could see through it and penetrate into her world. Her failure life wouldn’t be served as a delicious tittle-tattle for the chewing teeth. She could conjure up men and women in leather clothing randomly moving somewhere out there but she was sure any existing entity would fail to sense her silent existence past this veil of fog. Each and every soul from the other side of this shield wasn’t aware she’d a shitty life. A barking dog passing by didn’t know a tear drop was trickling down her cheek by now. That shivering cat which meowed in its utter discomfort in this cold weather had no idea she anyhow was extremely happy with what had now turned up to be life for her. The person who just now drastically rushed the car somewhere very, very close to her flat, into the garage under the apartment, had no clue that her chosen life was unholy according to the so called norms of the society. This was her life and no one could make a breach through this protective shield. She felt her gut grow thick with a new born intrepidity as her spine straightened up without her noticing it. Her past was past and she needed her present and future to be lived within this secured wall of fog. With this, no one could be able to nose her. The dogging crowd and all the flashing lights of craps would be occurring on another planet. Everything was perfect and complete from being here. A drop of beauty amid hell and ominousness amid heaven with which she was more than contented. All she wished now was she had the courage to inform her father that her decision was to lead the rest of her life with the man on bed, quitting everything else. Could she be able to do that? Could her father survive that shock? Shock! No, her insides protested emphatically. How could your own father deny you your happiness? He would definitely understand her. And she could do that – could quit. She loved this man and…wait! But did this man love her back actually? He loved her she knew but as in real love? Real love that ends up in marriage, making family, holding hands and growing old together to finally tell each other with pride “We made it.”? To her appall, she realized anew he’d never made such promise. In fact, he never said he loved her. Maybe he was caring and possessive about her like every man who truly loves a woman but he never admitted it in simple words that he loved her. Sensing the rapid fear brewing in each fiber of her muscles, she turned rather abruptly. He was there. The burning sensation around the flesh of her ears and forehead immediately subsided. She shifted her gaze past the window glass again. The fog was there. Falling incessantly. Seducing and spilling whispers which she was in no mood to listen to. While losing her into the hazy spell, little did she know it was she whom the magical white layer was actually leading up the garden path from witnessing the other side of the world. It blindfolded her just before the curve that paved a dark path to the ferocious and hungry big cat’s den ahead. You never know the power of the torrential currents roaring in the shore being sailing in the midst of a beguiling beauty of the vast serene ocean. She’d no idea a storm was approaching to wreak havoc in her life when she determinedly detached her sternly clutched fingers from the fabric. She didn’t draw the blinds back, but instead, almost ran to him.

“Oh my god, I love you so much,” she said convulsively as she threw herself on his back burying her face into the crook of his neck.

It was when she gasped she realized she struggled breathing as her nose blocked because of crying. Her behavior surprised herself but she didn’t care. She was no longer in a need to carry a fake face as she felt happy crying her heart out. After really a long while, she’d shed off the inhibitions and come out emotionally stripped off. Call her the weakling now, she wouldn’t give a shit. Because, she wasn’t the one she knew.

She groped and then grabbed the gun from the side table. “Hey, you, listen.” She sucked her nose, wiping her eyes with the back of her gun held hand to get the coherence of his image. “Now I’m gonna carry your gun out to the kitchen to prepare some lemonade. I swear you are gonna give me that spine chilling stare for severing your wife from your hips,” she babbled in a slurry voice and chuckled in between her gasps. “But you can’t intimidate me anymore for I really love you, dammit!”

Burying her face even more into him, she started shuddering uncontrollably.

Each of her cell stifled in a death grip when she heard him mumble back in his sleep, “Love you, too.”

She heard her heat beating the wildest against her ribs and temples. They were alone. He and she. She felt hypersensitive that she worried if he could hear her. Did he just voice it! What else did she want? Other than being like this forever. Fairytale could happen. Only she’d been wrong all this while. She was going to love him day and night and shape her life perfect sculpting off the unnecessary heart shredding pieces. It itched her to hear him again and with such gusto she was about to shake the life out of him when there was a…

BANG!

What was that!

She found herself jump out of her skin and her heart skipped several beats. Was that a gunshot! She was unequivocal it was from the kitchen as the other room her flat had was only that besides the washroom which anyhow was straight opposite from where the sound emanated. Taken the breath away, she darted to the kitchen in a flash, unaware that he too sprang off his sleep right then. Her legs stopped dead in their tracks at the kitchen’s doorway. An incredulous gasp escaped her lips as she sealed her mouth with her hands at the sight before her eyes. A person wearing red checked shirt lying haphazardly on the kitchen’s floor on his stomach.

“No!” She vigorously shook her head.

She broke into profuse sweats and her cold body started shaking visibly. Her bones loosened and turned feeble. This wasn’t real! The shirt color wasn’t red, it wasn’t checked and not particularly the one which she’d purchased just the previous day. All the more he wasn’t bleeding and blood wasn’t spurting such wildly out of the pernicious rupture below his left shoulder. She was dreaming. bl**dy dreaming! But she unfortunately was aware enough she was too real a hysterical by flesh and bones to be on a dream. Her muscles locked and turned frozen hearing his erratic breathing. Beads of perspiration popped up on her forehead. His pants turned drastically quick, more audible and he was straining himself to flip over. It seemed like he wanted to convey her something before taking his last breath as he despairingly stretched out his arm toward her but failed miserably to exert his head up.

Her trance broke. “No, no, no!” She shrieked out dashing toward him. “You aren’t dying. This isn’t done for god’s sake,” she kept on shouting out maddeningly. He needed to be hospitalized in the soonest of times.

Her whole form froze dead when she heard him take a long deep breath and then his body relaxed in a persistent sag. His outstretched arm slowly settled on the floor. No more movement then. Tears didn’t stop streaming down her cheeks. The fact was obvious. She felt thousands of poisoned darts making way past her heart shredding it into pieces. Hadn’t she stood startled for some seconds, he could’ve been saved. She was sorry to her death.

“I’m sorry,” she sobbed bearing a pang of remorse. Her jaw twitched, lower lip convulsed as she sucked a heavy inhalation through her cracking throat. “I’m sor…”

“Finally. very. well. done. woman!” The categorically gruff voice gave her a turn toward its direction. The tone of the voice was totally eccentric to her.

There stood him. Her love. At the doorway. She looked at his blurry form through the brimming tears. His malevolent stance scared the living daylights out of her. The hard planes of his face were evident and he wore such belligerence that she couldn’t stomach it. All of a sudden he gave her a total stranger’ share of presence. It bore no global concern toward her that would generally say you simply knew the other person. He seemed deliberate. He wanted to be straight and outward – cutting off the ties and undoing everything they’d shared in a tap. The intense of his approach was gashing harsh. It started slicing into her flesh painfully squeezing the blood out of her soul. At the loss, she forgot about the dead man behind her and about the need to think about the cause for his murder. The absolute twinge she felt because of the fact she couldn’t even get to see the dearly face of the killed person for one last time was overtaken by the black calm look his love hurl at her. It threatened her of throw up. She cringed feeling dirty as her body was covered with the burning disgust he was weaving around. What could it be? She followed his stern rancorous gaze and it ended on his gun she’d on her hand. Her eyes rounded in horror as realization dawned on her. Her shivering fingers went lax abandoning the weapon; she was broken into speechlessness. Had he…had he just inferred… Just then something unusual happened in her stomach. It churned, she restrained a gag but before long everything spun around. She felt she was coming into the possession of strong band of arms. It wasn’t him though, she sensed it from the hold. She could say it was more than one person. It felt like a small crew. He thought she was a murderer! He just had inferred it! How could he! How could he even think she could kill, and that too, this man particularly…Wait! Was she tricked? Was she set up for this moment and used for granted on the process of reaching this conspired instant? Wasn’t he really for what she thought him to be? Whatever the shit it was, she fathomed out she was going to be marked and flashed as a killer in all the headlines of the tele channels now. Period. Oh, her father. No! She shouldn’t pass out. She just shouldn’t pass out like this. Not now. Not when she was tackled and framed up. She needed to break the snare and get out of this house. She should escape before her father saw things about this obscenity, lest the poor soul would die in shame for sure. She must stay conscious no matter what. She must fight. But strange things were happening inside her body she couldn’t interpret and fight. She knew she was gliding down into the dark cave and attaining buoyancy but couldn’t help giving in.

Pitch black…

Credit to: Thena

71 comments

  1. Anu-Annie

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    wow thena di.. atlast u r back. i missed ya too much. haven’t read it yet but i know it will be beautiful.

    pls don’t disappear again for such a long time…

    • Thena

      Wow, feels like getting cmmnt for the first time. It’s been too long indeed. Thanks a lot @Anu-Annie 🙂 actually testing if i get ur name coloured different if put @ 😀

    • Jessie

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      Thenaa.. this is thenastic.. hahah.. absolutely thena’s.. magic spell.. love u loads dear.. was she framed?? I was like.. Man.. that’s Arjun ri8.. hahaha.. eager 4 nxt one..

      • Thena

        ‘thenastic’ lol. Hey Jessie, its always my pleasure reading ur comment. Thank u so much. n tats nt Arjun b’cos can be seen nowhere in this story. its NeSam’. sorry forgot to mention 🙂

      • Jessie

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        No Arjun!!!! Hey bhagwan!!! I like Nesam too.. but Ardhika is ma fav…
        too much partial u know😉😉.. so…d dimple boy has got a new shade here.. wow!!! Wish u decide 2 write one on Ardhika simultaneously…. sooo.. when is the 1st chapy of this… am eager… am still like..,what if she dint1 pick d gun then.. so it can’t be a planned one…gosh…am thinking like a detective…lol.. 😯😯😯😯 TC n loads of love

      • Thena

        wow Jessie wat a sense of reasoning! alright. lemme say this is just the prologue n the story is to cum up 🙂 if u know wat i say <: o) hope the plot will stand up to ur minuteness all thru. n no arjun in this. yep, i didnt wanna hv him actually. u know wat. i rather am an ahamian than an ardhikan. it makes me fall for my own creation while writing Arjun' scenes lol 😀 😀 😀 just felt of having a change dear 🙂 n u say neil as cute dimple guy na. bt jessie if he narrows his eyes while gritting his teeth altogether, omg he'll be a spine chilling devil. extremely handsome n bad guy 😀 😀 😀 love u girl 🙂

  2. karnika

    Hey the na welcome back after can love sparkle…looking forward to it ..will read it later but thot to comment first..by title it looked like either u or blue..gud wishes for new ff..hope it goes like CLS .I have told u na I will read ur n blue ff again after 2-3 yrs

    • Thena

      Hey Karnika thanks a lot. yeah i do remember u said tat. in fact i do remember ur pattern’ shade. it was kinda maroon. y the colors r turning different now. everything seems different. mine too. i dont like tat dull shade of mine. need to find a new id 🙂

  3. Dev

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    Omg thena……welcome back….and d prologue was just BANG……my goodness……cant wait 2 read more……n wat an epi buddy…..im hanging at d moment……n wow…….waiting dear buddy……
    Love u lots….hugs…tc

  4. Rasha

    Hai thena after a long interval finally.I was thinking y u r not writing.I was really waiting dear.I didn’t read yet but I got a doubt that is the you by reading the title. I was right.please write the one dear THE COLOUR OF HEART .I was really expecting you to continue that one.plsssss it’s a request.any ways hearty welcome and God bless sass ùuuu dear always.

    • Thena

      Thank u so much Rasha. means a lot. and actually this is inspired from ‘the color of hurt’ plot. I mingled two of my own already created concepts. PLC n TCH 🙂 so this is of course from TCH plot. I’m writing it dear:)

  5. Brin

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    Oh my god Thena back, I’m so happy, welcome back, story so good, eagerly waiting for the next update. 🙂

  6. Kruti

    Hey i did a happy dance, seeing ur name Thena 🙂
    When i saw the title and started reading my mind said its Thena…but as usual the narration was so gripping i didnt scroll down to see ur name. And last when i saw ur name i was so so happy.
    Welcome back dear.
    I had missed ur writing… i even enquired abt u in Lurking frm beyond 🙂
    Now that u r bk…plz keep writing.
    And as usual superb suspense story.

    • Thena

      Hey Kruti dear, how have u been doing? its been so long. i was waiting fr ur response actually. was like ‘wud Kruti get to come on this page’? and u did. thanks fr the cmmnt dear. yep i did see ur cmmnt on LFTB. bt wen i came it was like i cudnt respond. its amost many times like tat. n u know, i always do tat. writing. u always say tat 😀 but its just now i got the space to shift the content from my system onto here 🙂 n this is indeed from the plot TCH. if u cud get to recount the prologue’ content of TCH u can get to feel tat. n i took some pinch frm PLC too. its u will get to be rung when the story proceeds 🙂

      • Kruti

        Thx for the reply. I love these little conversations we hv with u writers.
        Good to hear that the plot is frm TCH 🙂 very interesting… ur writing style is superb.
        Hey i keep saying “keep writing” bcoz u guys r so talented and people like me can just read, enjoy, and support u all writers. 🙂
        All d best for all ur other tasks in hand too. But do keep updating whenever u find time 🙂

      • Thena

        Thanks for the wish Kruti. and u r always saying tat u love these covo facilitation here. u hv said this earlier too. yeah, it indeed is. but is it tat u r reading frm anywhere else too? or frm many other sites? just asking. never mind dear 🙂

      • Kruti

        Hey nopes dear this is the first and only ff site i hv visited… that too i was just browsing around to see if Manmarziyaan serial was really ending and tn while checking the comments section i first read Farha’s story and tn i started visiting this site 🙂 and fell in love with all ur amazing stories.
        Otherwise its usually novels/ebooks 🙂

      • Thena

        usually novels/ebooks! omg! Kruti, u really r a reader then yaar. happy to get ur appreciation 🙂

  7. Yamini

    Hi thena di I am big fan of yours I just loved your creation can love sparkle?can you please send me all links of it? 🙂

    • Thena

      Thank u so much Yamini dear. i dont find it likeable to call the elders di bt wen someone calls me ‘di’ it feels too good 🙂 I dont hv any link of CLS dear.

  8. Starz

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    yipee you are back!!!i am big fan of urs and ur story can love sparkle…afirst time commenting…seeing your story i was super thrilled…love you di and take care…eagerly waiting for next one

  9. Aasthu

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    Thenuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu happy that u came back………..I didn’t read this…………I am going to..Thenu I heard frm Jess that as sme1 was copying ur wrks u hd requested TU to remove all updates of “can love sparkle”……but I want to read it………I missed out ur last chappy as u posted it in March and my boards was going on………….so can you mail me??????????????????????????????????????? plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz ????????????????????????

  10. Aasthu

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    Thenuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu happy that u came back………..I didn’t read this…………I am going to..Thenu I heard frm Jess that as sme1 was copying ur wrks u hd requested TU to remove all updates of “can love sparkle”……but I want to read it………I missed out ur last chappy as u posted it in March and my boards was going on………….so can you mail me??????????????????????????????????????? plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz ????????????????????????

    Is this story ardhika or nesam ???????? anyway update the first part soon……..

    Thenu don’t tell me that u didn’t save ur chapters in ur computer or lap b4 posting in this site…………I want to read it………plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz………….

    • Thena

      Hey Aasthu dear, thanks a lot 🙂 oh maybe bt untimately it was for i wanted to improvise tat plot again. wanted to remodel it without any stitch.
      actually i got my google account crashed some days ago. didnt know how n i cudnt retrieve my acc at any cost. it made me lose my head. worst is i lost many contacts. its k. no problem in sending u Aasthu. i hv those chaps saved in my system. bt i dont find a way getting ur mailid. lemme get tat. i’ll send u dear:) this is NeSam’ 🙂

      • Aasthu

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        CLS???????? Was it the one you started writing first???????? Did you finish that?????? I want that one too…………..sorry fir being so demanding…..but who wouldn’t be when it is written by u………………..

  11. Tara

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    u knw what when i saw the title… i was like.. wow. must read it..and now that i have read.. i feel like its worth reading…
    too good.. super awesome..
    continue soon..

  12. Myra

    |Registered Member

    And the legend returns…..it is so amazing thena….its like i couldnt even blink my eyes, thats the power of your narration. Soul gripping….
    Update soon 🙂

  13. Rossy

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    Finally thena the great come back…mere aakhein Nam Ho Gaye the…I was waiting waiting for another blockbusters like CLS…u know I couldn’t find any of ur cls chapter..if u have it please send me that story…i thought it was ardhika story…got soooo much excited…chalo koi nahin…tum ho to kosiah karke nesam Ki bhi padh lenge…lol…btw m seriously very very happy to see u back

    • Thena

      Hey Rossy dear, how have u been doing? yep, i hv CLS n sure I will dear. gimme ur mailid. I too am greatly biased toward ArDhika 😀 actually just for a change i chose it to be of NeSam’. want a change 🙂 Hope u will support me in this too as always. Love u 🙂

  14. Advaita

    Hi di ! Good to see u again . I really missed u ! I was so much disappointed that neither u nor Farah di are updating . No offense , all other mmz writers are wonderful too but u both are my FAVOURITES!!!! LOVE U BOTH!!!
    As everyone have already mentioned I also got confused after reading the title . So I too did the obvious thing and scrolled down and then BANG!! It was u ! Welcome back di !
    And di , one more thing : can u plz ask Farah di to post ASAP ? She hasn’t showed up since ……eternity ?! Lol ! But plz jokes apart , if possible , plz convey my msg to her .
    Everyday I check TU to see if u guys updated or not .Love u guys so so soooooo much !! I know I’ve already mentioned this but what to do …Farah di rarely replies and u have been missing since long too!
    Ok now , I’m stopping my whining .
    Plzzz don’t disappear again !
    Do update as per ur convenience , I’ll be waiting (as if I have an option 😉 ).
    Love ya !! 🙂
    Take care.

    • Thena

      Hey lil sis, hw hv u been doing? seriously u made me bark a laugh wid ur cmmnt. tat bracketed note lol. yeah, yeah, i sure will convey ur message. Actually she always writes if she gets time. tats a promise. Love u too dear Advaita. thank u very very much fr ur love n this cmmnt. n hey sweety, i get this feel ur exam papers will look so class n neat 🙂 I mean the sketches n all the presentation u do 🙂

      • Advaita

        I’m fine ,di.Thanks! What about u? Thanks for laughing at my blabbering and also for the compliment too. It’s just that I want to express my every emotion through my words since I can’t meet u in person . Hence, all the sketches and presentations.
        And , I know Farah di is busy and u would be too, but I just am too impatient and desperate when it comes to ur updates. Plz don’t misunderstand me.Love u guys so much , this is the only excuse I have for all my antics. Stupid me! And do convey my msg to her,thanks!
        And yes, my exam papers are quite clean or at least I feel so . Actually , am doing maths hons. from DU .Maths doesn’t really need that much of literature, it does in proofs of analysis but mostly we use the notations and numbers. Ok I’m so sorry for going off the subject . I just love to chat with u .
        Bye di !
        Gd nyt.

      • Thena

        hey Advaita, didnt tell me, my lil sis! i too am frm mathematics grp bt general. nt hons. i dont like maths generally. in the sense viewing it from abstract point. bt doing proofs on analysis. its crazy u know. many concepts which i feel vague while reading i find them as so much rational while being in the middle of my exam hours. i start proving those myself, understanding n relating the concepts suddenly thr. its crazy u know. but marks make u do anything. miraculous r those analyses n algebras. in fact i started liking the subject wen i was introduced to those analyses n mechanics like papers. currently am doing research on ‘topology’. funny is tat i didnt know such existence until pg. bt tats an awesome concept which fr no good reason we’re introduced really lately 😀 see, now i talked a lot about this 🙂 love u loads Advaita dear 🙂 tc.

    • Advaita

      Oh , that’s great !
      Sorry for the bluntness di, but did u convey my msg to Farah di?
      Ok , gotta go now!
      Plz reply ASAP.
      🙂

      • Advaita

        I’m sorry ,di. Was in a hurry yesterday. Plz don’t take me as a stalker or something . And plz don’t bother urself and Farah di much. I know u guys are busy , and will surely update whenever can. It’s just that I get retarded sometimes *making weird faces due to embarrassment* .
        Love u !

  15. farjana

    My favourite author is back… i was missing y so badly… i read all ur cls updates the way i read kfar stories.. u guys r great.. very interesting plot with nesam.. cudnt get better.. pls post early n don disappear thena… when i read yr name, i was having goosebumps n finally she is back..

  16. lucky

    Woah thena u r back wow such a bang entry u know i wasnt execting u i thought u were taking a break or somethnig dear it feels so good to have u .i dont need to praise u bcz every thing u write is amazing …plzz continye this ff mysteriouss ff ..love u so much dear post next one soon

    • Thena

      Hey lucky good that I got u here. wanted to thank u since i saw tat long amazing cmmnt of urs on LFTB. it made me feel so, so good dear. we both did feel great of course. n myself had no idea if i wud return back here. it was like i was so stuck. felt isolated n helpless. just then wanted to post the written stuff here. i seek solace in writing. wenever i feel stuck i keep on writing without break. it gives u the elevation 🙂 Thanks a lot fr the cmmnt lucky. luv u too so much 🙂

      • Thena

        Lucky, i said ‘we’ as in ‘Bluena’. donno if i made sense up thr 😀 actually loved u mentioning the line on LFTB. tats wat came to say dear. bt wen wanted to thank, the page was like doomed. wud b good if the cmmnt sec stays alive fr at least a month. it is needed time n again 🙂

  17. S.v

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    U r a magician . What an updaye thena seriously superb. Lovely one next part soon desperately waiting for the next part. Lovely one love u soo much.

  18. Sammy

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    Thenaaaaaaa di …..you are back …first let me dance …okay i am dancing now …..and a prologue ..waoooooo…i am so happy ..pls never leave us again ….puppy eyes …i was just dying to read something written by you ..really thank you so much di …for coming back …missed you so much …never vanish again …and as usual ..the prologue is mindblowing …waiting eagerly for the new chappy 😍😍😙😘

    • Thena

      Hi Sammy baby, luv u 🙂 tell me hw u doing. hope u r doing good n great. b’cos tats u as i’ve seen u wen i was once here 🙂 then it was drastic as my days were demanded to b busy. now s am back. thanks a lot Sammy 🙂

  19. Sweetie

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    Thena dear,you are back.. 😀 I’m so happy to see you back here.. 😀 Excellent prologue,I loved it.. 🙂 So it’s NeSam this time,I’m so in love with this prologue itself.. 🙂 Waiting for the first chapter,actually I pinched myself for like hundred times to believe this is real,haha,me crazy self.. 😉 Stay blessed and lots of love.. 🙂

  20. swathi

    Thena…I am so glad that u r back with this intriguing plot.

    N wat about ‘My hate story’??will u continue it??

  21. bluena

    Hey babe glad that u started with another story. Bang on too this time. Great to read something closer to my heart after really so long. Felt the words and the story. Lots of love.

    • Advaita

      Hey bluena! Are u Farah di? If yes, then plz update ur stories soon,any of them,if not , then am sorry.
      Plz don’t mind me!
      Take care!

  22. _Ritu

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    Thena…wow again u r back wid a bang….what to comment about ur work…I don’t deserve it 🙂 looking forward for nxt…loads of love. 🙂

  23. Roma

    Thenaaaaa. ..finally u r back with a bangggg….wowwww marvellous prologue. …loved it to the coreeeee. ….I missed you sooooo sooooo soooooooo muchhhhhh my sweeeeeethearttttt. .. so glaaaaaddddd to see u …..you nailed it my honeyyy. ..you n your magical words wowwww awesome awesoooooome awesoooooome. …keep it up honeyyy. ..love you loads….will wait for story ahead…. muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug my sweeeeeetheart darling thena. ….♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡

  24. shiva

    hi….. girl i am not a very regular person who comments but reading ur story couldnt wait to and dear let me tell you am one of the people who was very disappointed to know that you removed urr story can love sparkle though i once read it whole but stil i liked it so much wanted to read it again but found that there was no trace of it.U couldnt imagine i spend two whole day searching everyday for that link.. as i said was a silent reader and comment very rarely.Any way it was glad to know you hav posted a new story..and one more thing are you on wattpad and hav you posted the story there if yespls send me the details.. next time will give my mail id… and one more thing ilove urr writing style … am a typical classic fan but urs was the first romantic story i ever read and really loved it thoroughly am actually in my final year so kinda off busy will try to comment regularly sory in advance if couldnt and dear keep on writing like this a thorough fan of ur writing………..
    ahahah i thinked blabbered a lot bear with me and kp on writing..
    Take care see u soon with ur next part
    Bye.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!……………………………..

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