Story of a Girl – Ragini (pt 4) by Aliya: will ragini gets saved??

Let’s begin…..

Doctor gets worried….. Seeing ragini’s condition
Doc: she lost the blood due to internal injury arrange the blood fast….
She gives her injection

(Don’t worry i won’t create o-ve blood scene)

After few hrs….

Doc comes out….

Raj goes to her: dr… Ragini
Doc: she is not responding…. To the treatment
Sw; wat do you mean by that?
Doc: now there’s nthng in our hands.. Of she didn’t get conscious in 4 hrs.. She may slip into coma… Now Only ur prayers can save her
Lak: how can you say this Dr…?
Doc: plz try to understand..

Sw cries.. Raj hugs her.. He too had tears….

Raj:shh….ragoo ko kuch nahi hoga

Raj angrily goes from there…

Lak consoles swara….

He goes to police station…
Officer:sir…u can’t take law in your hands
Raj:ahh… My sister is in this position bcs of them
Officer:no sir… You are an army official.. It may risk…
Raj:bhaad mein gayi aisi….
Jst then he remembers ragini telling him


Rag:wow bhaiyya dubai…m proud of you
Raj:bt i m not
Rag:you r working in Indian Embassy..
Raj: by i don’t want to leave you and go
Rag:stop your drama now..pack your bags…
Raj: you r so happy to send me
Rag:bcs…my bro got promotion… He transferred to Dubai as Indian officer and wat else an Indian needs… Serving India living in other country
Rag:u joined army… With it wish… And i know your dream… So go now
Raj:bt u r more important to me
Rag: no first or county then family… Promise me
Rag:wat promise…
Rag:u vl not leave your dream job or talk abt leaving it
Rag:promise me that if something hpnd to me too u vl not leave the job
Raj: don’t u dare to say that… If you say this again then i you
Sw: nobody can say that you r not brthr and sister
Rag: jst cousin doesn’t make away or own brthr doesn’t make brthr for life..
Bt the love makes the relation…..
Rag hugs her

Fb ends

Raj word his tears
Officer: don’t worry sir..i vl look after them
Raj goes from there….

Here ragini’s condition is getting worsen.. She was breathing heavily

Car racing track

Many ppl were cheering there

2 cars come there… One is read and the other is black

A girl flies the flag

Both the drivers gets mad ? they are driving so fast

And the both car finally reach

Black car show is speed…. Then again speeds it

And black car wins the race

A guy come out

Even the another racer too comes out

Both looks at eachother and laughs

Red racer: i can’t win over you… Not in post not in present by in future will try
Black racer:hmm…suraj i won by still m feeling like something is incomplete.. I feel like someone needs me..i don’t know i think i m getting mad

At the time a guy comes running
Black car race revealed to be..i don’t think so.. i should need to reveal obviously you vl know ?

Guy:sir..we need to go
He nods…
While walking he removes his coat and wears a formal blazer
Changes his watch…

Guy: sir.. You are the best
He(still i don’t want to say his name now ?):ya.. You vl say that bcs u r working with me.. In reality u know ryte wat ppl calls me…
Guy:no sirrr…
He: ya.. He owns matrimonial site bt fails in his marriage even before getting fixed..ppl says this
Guy:sir.. Couples are made in heaven i think God didn’t written any girl in my life
Guy:m sure sir u will get a girl
He: everytime you say that athul
Atul:this time i feel it sir
He:hmm..lets see…if that so.. Then she vl listen my call…..

Here ragini’s breath stops…. Everyone are shocked…….

They reach the same hospital….

Doc comes out:m sorry

Everybody were shocked

Doc: she slipped into coma.. i think it’s someone’s prayer that she got saved… Don’t loose hope..

Here athul:sirl..ur dadu is in day care

Raj: don’t cry.. Everything’s ok.. See she vl be back…
Bt he was crying hard
Lak:plzz raj swara..

He was moving to day care….
And rag was bringing out of emergency

His eyes fall on her… He sees her lifeless

Athul pats him:sir…

He sees her.. Who was in stretcher…

He sees her until she was visible to him…..

Athul:sir wat hpnd?
He: that girl…
Athul: it looks like she was been……..
He stops him

To be continued…..

Something unexpected ryte….

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  1. Akankshanna


  2. Amazing dr finally sanskar is back

  3. Awesome waiting for ragsan scenes

  4. Asw

    Amazing yaar keep going

  5. Awesome

  6. Awesome

  7. Perfect di …..and ya the hero is finally here…sanskar is here. The perfect chapter. All the best for future too

  8. Wonderful dear nothing bad happen to ragini because sanskar is there na for her.

  9. Wow sanskar came. Eagerly waiting for next

  10. Amazing sissy. Poor rags

  11. Awesome

  12. Asra

    awesome dear….loved it alot…nothing happen to ragu…bcz her bro s with her soon her love s also going to join with her…and most important aliya s with ragu na…eagerly waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear

  13. Outstanding part

  14. Awesomeee

  15. Bela

    I wish Ragini gets well soon. And glad that the new guy is here already ?

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