A Story of Four Lovers (SNS+YHM) Part:4

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Thanks Jasminerahul,Mansi,kumud,jyoti,Rianaa, Sara,Ishra fan,Sowmy,Parichary and all who read and give their amazing feelings to this fan fiction. So, Let’s start part 4. Hope you all will like it.

Recap: Ishra kiss scene,Gopi’s strange condition,Ishra’s “party” dance,Gohem and Ishra’s “photo” dance.

The Episode starts with Ahem saying to Gopi that we should leave now..!! Gopi says see them, they are dancing like mad.

Raman says Ishita I want to say something..!! Ishita says yeah tell me. Raman says actually Ishita…. Ishita says hmm. Raman says actually, Ishita,I love you..!! Ishita stares at him and says Love and with me. She laughs. Raman also laughs.

Ahem says Once a minute, we can make Ishita come to her senses. Gopi says But how..?? Ahem takes a glass of water. Gopi says But…. Ahem says Just wait and watch..!! Gopi nods. Ahem calls Ishita. Gopi says they are drunk, let’s go to them. Ahem nods. Gohem comes to Ishra.

Ahem says Ishita. Ishita looks at them. Ahem throws water on Ishita’s face. Ishita comes in her senses.

Ishita murmurs that Ahem and Gopi, what happened to me..?? Ahem says Don’t ask Ishita,what happened, ask what what hasn’t happened..!! Gopi says see, Raman,He is a good example. Ishita looks at Raman and get flashes where she drinks,dance,etc. Ishita says Oh My God! if it really happen. Gopi nods.

Ishita holds her Head. Ahem says Now, Help us in make Raman sitting in car. Ishita says Raman. Raman come to them in drunk state and says Guys,let’s enjoy. Ishita says Raman, I’ll give you my special thanks, please, come now with us..!! Raman says which special thanks..?? Gopi jokes that Raman has lost his memory after drinking. Ahem says he is already dumb. Ishita pulls Raman.

Ishra and Gohem come to car. Raman says I’ll drive car. Ishita says you are in drunk state. Ahem says Ishita is right, We should not take risk. Ishita and Gopi makes Raman sit on Backseat. Ahem drives car.

Screen shifts to Modi Mansion. Ahem rings bell. Gopi says Ahem…. Its not right like this…. Ishita says Gopi! Its 21st century, Now-a-days, Women not shy like used to be in previous times. Ahem says Gopi, Ishita is absolutely right.

Jhanvi opens door. She is shocked to see Raman. Gopi touches Jhanvi’s feet. Jhanvi says Stay Happy! Gopi smiles.

Ishita folds her hands and says Namastaie Aunty! Jhanvi says Namastaie. Ahem, what happened to Raman..?? Ahem says He has drunk. Ahem points finger at Gopi and says She is Gopi. Ahem points at Ishita next and says she is…. Ishita interrupts saying, I’m Ishita, Ishita Khurana. Jhanvi says you kids come inside. Gohem and Ishra come inside. Jhanvi says I know how to make Raman conscious..??

Sometime later….
Raman starts coming in his senses. He holds his head and says Ishita, we here, we were in farmhouse na..!! Raman is shocked to see Jhanvi and says Mom..!! Jhanvi says Yes. Raman, At least, if you drink, so drink till a limit, that you can control yourself. Gopi says Ishita and Raman, one min. She take out her phone and shows their pic. Jhanvi bursts out into laughter and says Raman, you’re looking like six-year old boy. Raman says mom! you also. Jhanvi says you both go to your room,Raman and Ahem. And Gopi and Ishita, you also go and take rest. you both are looking tired.

Gopi says Aunty, but…. Ishita says But At home, all will be worried. Jhanvi says Don’t worry, We are not kidnapping you. Tomorrow Morning, you can go. Gopi says Okay..!! Jhanvi leaves from there. Raman says I’m very tired, I’m going. He leaves. Ishita thinks, like this, like I’ve entered ahem’s home, I’ll soon enter in this house as his bride. She smiles and leaves from there.

Ahem comes to Gopi and says What had happened to you there, Gopi..?? Gopi says I tell you na ahem, I don’t know even myself. And I’m tired as well. Ahem says Okay! But I think you should go to Dr. Gopi says you cure/treat me. Ahem says what..?? Gopi says Nothing! Go and sleep. Ahem says But…. Gopi says Ahem..!! Ahem says Okay. Both turn to leave.

Suddenly, Both turn back and calls each other names.

Sanam re
Sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re
Sanam re
Sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re

They look at each other.

Karam re
Karam re
Tera mujh pai karam hua re
Sanam re
Sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re

Both hold each other by neck romantically.

Tere qareeb jo hoanai laga hoon
toa tutai sarai bharam re

Both kiss.

Sanam re
Sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re

Gopi shy. She runs from there shying.

Sanam re
Sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re

Ahem also shy a little and smiles. He also leaves.

Precap: Gopi comes downstairs. She comes to dine. She feels weird and leaves from there. Ishita sees a photo with garland and smiles.

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17 Comments
  1. Jasminerahul

    Raman confesses his love to ishita.but unfortunately they were drunk so confession had no effect. In a way good that they were drunk.otherwise ishita would have rejected him leading him to pain.bringing back ishita into senses was funny. Ishita dreaming of entering modi bhavan as ahem’s wife like a fool while gohem are romancing. Loved gohem’s sweet kiss and sanam re as bgm.whose photo with garland did ishita see?

    1. Shakaib

      Thank you jasmine di, photo with garland is a twist. There is need of villain in story. So I’m thinking Ishita as villain to move story. The person in photo will cause Ishita change at the end.

      1. Jasminerahul

        In the movie Zameer too the main villain was Amisha.Here Ishita represents Amisha.

  2. Nice update pls update soon

    1. Shakaib

      Thanks jyoti.

  3. no l don’t like ishits as a villain. please
    introduce new character as a villain
    please please please

    1. Shakaib

      Hi isuri, first, its based on movie, zameer: the fire within, so, here Divyanka aka Ishita is playing role of Amisha aka pooja. I don’t like that pooja commit suicide, so I am writing it in my way. Mohammad nazim aka ahem is playing role of ajay aka suraj, and devoleena aka Gopi is playing role of mahima aka supriya. And Karen Patel aka Raman is playing role of Ishita’s love interest. But if you want Ishita positive, I promise, I’ll change her into +ve soon.

  4. Mansi

    Awesome update lovd it😘lovd Raman confesng HS love towards ishita😍n she laughng on tht as she nt in senses gohem n Ishra cme to ahm n Raman homes n ishita dreaming to cme here as ahm bride😰lvd bgm on gohem n thy both turng shy😍wondering wht relatn does ishita have wth the garland photo update soon😎

    1. Shakaib

      Thanks masni.

  5. Isaaq

    Very good. I think Ishita as a villain is good. Please comment on mine! Mines already action packed with Dadi and Gaura fighting with each other over Gohem wedding

    1. Shakaib

      Thank you isaaq di, its first time, you’re commenting on my fan fiction,or maybe second. Thanks a lot. I just love your fan fiction. My fan fiction is based on movie, zameer: the fire within, so, here Divyanka aka Ishita is playing role of Amisha aka pooja. I don’t like that pooja commit suicide, so I am writing it in my way. Mohammad nazim aka ahem is playing role of ajay aka suraj, and devoleena aka Gopi is playing role of mahima aka supriya. And Karen Patel aka Raman is playing role of Ishita’s love interest. I’ll change ishita into +ve soon.

    2. Jasminerahul

      you are the first one to show courage to cast divyanka in a negative role

      1. Isaaq

        Kumari was only a minor vamp. She was a grey character. She wasn’t as evil as Sindoora.

      2. Jasminerahul

        yes i know.Still she was negative in the beginning.Ppl prefer to see Divyanka as a pure soul

  6. Riana

    Hey Shakaib…Nice episode but Ishita as a vamp is a bit tough to imagine…but whats wrong with Gopi…Last scene was cute😘😘😘

    1. Shakaib

      Thanks riana di, yeah, its tough to see Ishita as vamp but she will not be fully vamp, she will have some emotions. She will not be totally evil.

      1. Jasminerahul

        Right.Amisha was’nt a complete vamp in Zameer.She was a just a spoilt girl who was obsessed with her professor.But she turned positive later

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