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A Story of Four Lovers (SNS+YHM) Part:11

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Thanks Riana di, Isuri, Jasmine di, Rani, Mansi di, Nandhini di, Parichary, jyoti, Tia, Sowmy and all who read and give their amazing feelings to this fan fiction. I know, I make you wait a long, Sorry for that..and dedicating this part to Ishra fans who want their love sequence to start soon….so, from this part, our Ishra story also start with a twist. So, Let’s start part 11. Hope you all will like it. Give your valuable reviews below in comments..πŸ‘‡ πŸ‘‡

Recap: Gopi has a twin..Tanveer to take revenge..Gohem romantic scene..Jhanvi gets scared..

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Gohem are shown in club….They dance on LAT LAG GAYE….
Raman signs Ishita…. Ishita nods…Ishita pushes Raman…. Raman holds Ishita’s hands… Due to push, Ishita also falls with Raman…Raman opens parachute…. Plane blasts…πŸŽ†πŸŽ†πŸŽ†πŸŽ†

SOME TIME BEFORE….

@Modi Mansion

Jhanvi stands and shouts: Tej..you…you know how much I got afraid..!!
Tej stands…
Tej: Come on Jhanvi…. It was you who turn off lights… not me..!!
Jhanvi: You was not at home..what I’ve do…I can’t go theatre… So, make my house..sorry room as theatre… then what’s in this..??
Tej: But at least… you would’ve turn on lights….You know what..you was looking as ghost..!!
Jhanvi stares at Tej..

Jhanvi: OMG really Tej… I think you’re ghost….
Tej: Okay… It was all my fault….Let forget all..We can enjoy movie together..??
Jhanvi thinks…
Jhanvi: Okay…I bring two cups of tea and two plates of snacks… Only 40 mins of movie is left…
Jhanvi leaves…Tej smiles…πŸ˜„πŸ˜„β˜Ίβ˜Ί

@Raya’s room

Ram: BTW…I forget to tell you..tap hat we shall meet Tej and Jhanvi tomorrow in cafe…let inform them…
Priya smiles…She calls Jhanvi…

@Modi Mansion+Raya’s room

Jhanvi’s phone rings…Tej picks it…
Tej: Hello… Who’s..??
Priya: Tej..Its me.. Priya..
Ram to Priya: Priya..put phone on speaker…
Priya does same..
Ram: Hey Tej..What’s up..How are you and Jhanvi..??
Jhanvi enters….
Jhanvi: Tej..who’s..??
Tej: Ram and Priya…
Jhanvi gets glad…
She keeps tray on table…and sits with Tej..
Jhanvi asks Tej to put phone on speaker…
Tej does same..
Jhanvi: Hey Priya and Ram… When you come from foreign..?? Priya: Just a week ago..!!
Tej: And calling us now..Hmm..??
Ram: Come on Tej..Well..Can we meet tomorrow in that cafe..??
Tej: You still remember..??
Ram: How can I forget.. Its same cafe from we started our friendship..!!
Jhanvi: Okay..Bye Ram and Priya..😘😘
Raya: Okay Bye…(Cuts call)…😘😘

@Modi Mansion

Tej: Jhanvi..Tea and snacks..??
Jhanvi gives plate of snacks and cup of tea to Tej…🍺🍩πŸͺ🍩πŸͺ…Both sip tea and take snack while watching movie…🍻🍩πŸͺ🍩πŸͺ

@Plane

Raman to Ishita: Ishita..I’m sorry…Please forgive me…Please..
Ishita: No Raman… It was not your fault…it was me who increased fight..It was me who start fight…Please..You son say sorry…
Raman: No..I know you’re trying to hide real fact..but truth can’t change…please..if possible then…forgive me…
Ishita: Okay.. If you’re insisting too much then…okay..I forgive you. but you also has to forgive me…
Raman: Can a mistake made by you…??
Ishita: So cute…😘😘😚😚😘😚
Raman: BTW..I forget to tell you that today Ahem is going to propose Gopi…
Ishita is stunned….She try to control her tears..😳😳πŸ˜₯πŸ˜₯
Raman: What happened Ishita..??
Ishita: Nothing Raman..!!
Raman: Okay..
He gets busy on his phone..

Ishita in her mind: Is it true..?? Dies Ahem love Gopi..??
She recalls Gopi’s words;”By becoming Ahem’s wife”….
She then recalls Ahem caring Gopi when she feel unwell…
Ishita in her mind: It means both love each other truly…
She recalls some blurred scenes…
Ishita in her mind: How much I wanted that…This secret don’t change in Reality… but..Is Raman only made for me..??
She recalls some scenes..
Ishita in her mind: It means we are made for each other… It is better that I forget my past…and live in preset starting a new…
She sees Raman..
She in her mind: Raman..I realized my love for you..How much foolish am I to consider my attraction as love….and keep my real love…my life at side…I’m sure Raman also loves me..!!

Tanveer stands from her seat taking her hand purse….
Zoya in her mind: Why I feel so that…that something wrong is going to happen..??
Tanveer passes from Asya’s seat…
Asad to Zoya: Zoya..What happened..??
Zoya: Actually… I’m scared that..
Asad interrupts: Oh Oh..You girls are so scared always…
Zoya: Oh really?? You boys are not less scared as well!!
Both argue..

Tanveer’s tune plays….

Tanveer in her mind: Then what Wrong is Zoya saying Asad…All people should be scared here.. but…What can I do..they poor people even don’t know that their death will come Like this way..!!
Tanveer comes to Pilot….Pilot sees her…
Pilot: Ma’am…You’re not allowed to come here..
Tanveer smirks… She takes gun from her purse…

Kamini’s tune from Ishqbaaz plays….

Pilot: Are you mad..??Keep this gun down…
Tanveer shoots pilot…Pilot stumbles and falls which lead him to death…

Dita Tata tune plays….

A man comes here..
Tanveer asks: Work is done..??
Man: Yes..I’ve put plane on autopilot….
Tanveer: Good job..
Man: Indian Government didn’t agree to our demand… We request them to free our companion from prison… but they hang him on “Phansi”…We would’ve hijack the plane if they haven’t hang him on “Phansi”..but..no benefit now…what had to happen..has happened….Now Indian Government has to pay for this..!!
Tanveer: Is air hostess ready..??
Man nods….Tanveer smirks….

@Club

Gohem are shown… Gopi is Jacqueline’s dress from song LAT LAG GAYE.. Ahem is shown in Saif’s dress from song LAT LAG GAYE..They are taking soft drink….
Ahem to Gopi: Gopi..how did you get into love with me..??
Gopi: Like Love happens.!
Ahem: and what’s your family do..??
Gopi: Oh Yeah.. My family…You know… I came India for studies from New York… My family came last week here…
Ahem: Hmm…Okay…let’s dance Gopi….
Gopi nods…
Gohem start dancing(as Saif and Jackquiline dance on this song)…

Hey…
Baimaan dil bada baimaan
Hota nahi aasaan
Ise hai samjhana
Baimaan dil bada baimaan
Tere liye shaitan
Meri na ek mana…
Dil jeete ya main jeetun
Dekhungi dekhega tu
Lo dil se sharat lag gayi
Mujhe to teri Lat lag gayi lag gayi
Zamana kahe lat yeh galat lag gayi
Mujhe to teri lat lag gayi lag gayi
Zamana kahe lat yeh galat lag gayi
Mujhe to teri
Ahh ahh aa.. aa.. yeh
Ahh ahh aa.. aa.. yeh

Ahh ahh aa.. aa.. yeh lat lag gayi
Mujhe to teri
Ahh ahh aa.. aa.. yeh
Ahh ahh aa.. aa.. yeh
Ahh ahh aa.. aa.. lat lag gayi
Mujhe to teri
Ahh ahh aa.. aa.. yeh
Ahh ahh aa.. aa.. yeh
Ahh ahh aa.. aa.. yeh
Ahh ahh aa.. aa.. yeh
Ahh ahh aa.. aa.. yeh
Roku jitna utni bagawat ho
Lagta hai aisa haal dil ki tum zaroorat ho
Roku jitna utni bagawat ho
Lagta hai aisa haal dil ki tum zaroorat ho
Mujhko bhi tu zaroori
Tu bhi nashe main poori
To kaisi yeh talab lag gayi
Mujhe to teri lat lag gayi lag gayi
Zamana kahe lat yeh galat lag gayi
Mujhe to teri lat lag gayi lag gayi
Zamana kahe lat yeh galat lag gayi
Mujhe to teri
Ahh ahh aa.. aa.. yeh
Ahh ahh aa.. aa.. yeh
Ahh ahh aa.. yeh lat lag gayi
Mujhe to teri
Ahh ahh aa.. aa.. yeh
Ahh ahh aa.. aa.. yeh
Ahh ahh aa.. lat lag gayi
Mujhe to teri
Ek tu ek main
Ek baat hui apni
Hairan hai kyun sara jahaan
Jo raat hui apni
Ek tu ek main
Ek baat hui apni
Hairan hai kyun sara jahaan

Jo raat hui apni
Mujhse tu aake mila
To yeh hua hai sila
Ki saath tohmat lag gayi
Mujhe to teri lat lag gayi lag gayi
Zamana kahe lat yeh galat lag gayi
Mujhe to teri lat lag gayi lag gayi
Zamana kahe lat yeh galat lag gayi
Mujhe to teri
Ahh ahh aa.. aa.. yeh
Ahh ahh aa.. aa.. yeh
Ahh ahh aa.. aa.. lat lag gayi
Mujhe to teri
Ahh ahh aa.. aa.. yeh
Ahh ahh aa.. aa.. yeh
Ahh ahh aa.. aa.. lat lag gayi
Mujhe to teri

@Plane

Air hostess serves food to all travellers.. Tanveer is shown…
Tanveer in her mind: Only once you people eat this food… you people will lost your senses and then plane…plane will blast…

Air hostess comes to Asya for serving food to them…
Zoya: Please..take this food back…
Asad: But why..??
Zoya takes out Wada Pao from her purse..
Asad is surprised…
Asad: You please take food back..
Air hostess takes food back…
Asya share Wada Pao…

Air Hostess come to Sidni….
Sid: Please..we do not want food.. take it back…
Air hostess irks..
She in her mind: What the hell problem with these people..??
She leaves…
Sid: Roshini..yaar..take out our potato chips packets….🍟🍟🍟🍟
Roshini takes out Potato chips packets🍟🍟🍟🍟
Roshini gives one of packet to Sid..🍟🍟and opens other one🍟🍟

Air hostess comes to Ishra….
She: Sir..this pizza is especially for you both…πŸ•πŸ•
Raman: Are we so special..?? thank you..but we are no in mood to eat pizza… you can go…
Ishita says same…
Ishita takes out a chocolate packet🍫🍫🍫🍫
Raman: and where is other one..??
Ishita: For now…I’ve only one… But..we can share it Raman,,if you want!!πŸ˜œπŸ˜œπŸ˜œπŸ˜œπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
Rama: Not a big deal….
Ishra share chocolate 🍫🍫🍫🍫….

Ishra, Asya and Sidni see other travellers unconscious and try to wake them up..but in vain….

Air hostess comes to Tanveer….
Air hostess: Work is done ma’am…. Now give me money….
Tanveer: Actually..I’m sorry… I forget to tall you one thing… that if you want to money…you’ve to go up….God will surely give you space in Hell…Because you’ve done a very good deed…
She takes out gun…
Air hostess: Hey you see…I’m saying…don’t dare you…I don’t need any money…
Tanveer smirks….She shoots her..

Tanveer’s tune plays….

Zoya to Asad: Mr. Khan… we should inform thus to pilot.
Asad nods…He turns…And gets shock seeing Tanveer….
Zoya asks him: What happened..
She turns and also get shock seeing Tanveer..
Asya: You..How you come here….??

Kamini’s tune plays….

Tanveer: Its doesn’t matter now I come here….Its matter that you all will due in just some mins…so get ready for dying…..
She takes out Bomb’s remote….She presses button on remote….
She: Your life’s countdown has started…. Get ready..Only 10 Mins….Whatever you can do in these 10 mins… you can do…
Ishra, Asya and Sidni get shock…They hear bomb’s voice..
Ishita: we’ve to search where bomb is..!!
They start searching for bomb in everywhere….
Tanveer: Only 8 mins….BTW…You will get no benefit as bomb isn’t inside the plane…It is under the plane….
All get shock….
Tanveer’s man opens plane’s door…
Air starts pulling them towards itself from outside….
Girls hold boys…
Sid manages to take parachute’s….
Sid: Raman…we have only. 3 parachutes…. We can distribute among ourselves….
Zoya: Do it fast…
Sid give Asya and Ishra parachutes…
Tanveer falls ad she can’t manage her balance….
Sid: Roshini…hold me tightly….
Roshini hugs him tightly…. They jump from plane’s door….

Zoya: We four should also get out of plan…
Ishita: But other travellers… what’s their fault in all this..??
Raman: Ishita..for this..we’ve to be alive and when we will not be alive then….
Asad: He’s right.. Before helping someone..we should see in which problem Other is..!
Tanveer holds Ishita and Zoya’s leg…
She shouts: I’ll not let you go…You all have to die…Specially you Asad and Zoya…

Sidni are shown in air..Sid opens parachute….
Asad and Raman steps on Tanveer’s hands….
Tanveer shouts in pain….
Zoya hugs Asad tightly….
They jump from plane…..

Ishita hugs Raman….
Tanveer holds Ishita’s leg tightly….
She: Only 3 mins are left…They both left…But they’ll repent..that because of them… you both and other die…
Raman signs Ishita..Ishita nods… Ishita pushes Raman…Raman holds Ishita’s hand…

Gaaliyan(Instrumental) plays….

Due to pushing force…Ishita also falls with Raman…Asad opens parachute…Plane fly forward….Ishita hugs Raman tightly in air…. Plane is shown flying…. Raman opens parachute….Three couples are shown flying in air through parachute….

Tanveer and other people are shown inside the plan….
Plane blasts…. πŸŽ†πŸŽ†πŸŽ†πŸŽ†
Dita Tata tune plays….
Dead bodies…machinery parts fall after blast…..downward with fast speed….

Three couples are shown in air….

@Raya’s room

Priya wakes up shouting: Ishita….
Ram wakes in hurry and turns on lamp…

@Modi Mansion

Jhanvi wakes up shouting: Raman….
Tej wakes in hurry and turns on lamp…

Precap:
Ishra,Asya and Sidni fall in pool…. Ude di bifikre plays….
@Cafe
Raya and Tejanvi meet… meanwhile, Mr. Khurana enters in the same cafe….

22 Comments
  1. Nice story Shaka!!!

    Hope that the people found survivor and then will tell the whole story of what happen. Raya and Tejanvi will be relieved that children are safe and sound.

    Thanks to Zoya wired feeling and friends overheard it and refused to take food from hostage to save their lives. So sad that people who are unconsiuous lost their lives by Tanveer. Tanveer had killed innocent people.

    I like how Ishra confontation and accept it that it is their fault. Zoya and Ishu almost trapped in Tanveer but Raman and Asad save Zoya and Ishu from Tanveer but Ishu was bit late as Raman sign Ishu to push him so that he pull her to free from Tanveer and Ishu agree and did it to save Ishra. Ishra’s mother have bad dream of Ishra plane blast and shout that wake their husband up.

    Can’t wait to read more of your next ff.

    1. Shakaib

      Thanks a lot Parichary for your this sweet comment😘😘😘😘

  2. Superb dear finally ishu realized love for raman hope ishra will propose each other soon

    1. Shakaib

      Thanks a Lot Isuri😘😘😘😘yep Ishra will propose soon each otherπŸ˜‹πŸ˜‹πŸ˜‹πŸ˜‹

  3. Mansi

    Hey Shakaib how are u now???Get well soon n take a very good care of urself my little broπŸ˜‡πŸ˜Š….Coming to the update it is super duper with Emojis and I got reminded of Ishqbaaz n DBO of how it gets started n then showing the actual episode like before sometimeπŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜—tejhanvi scene was very sweet of both each other as ghosts n then deciding to watch movie together😘….Raya knows tejhanvi from before n are friends too good n meeting in a cafe😊…..Gohem dancing on lat lag gaiπŸ˜πŸ˜—…..Ishita realize her feelings for Raman😘after knowing about ahem proposing gopi….Ishra apologize to each other was very sweet😘…..Tanveer is very dangerous as she has planned all of this from beforehand😱….Good that asya SiDni n Ishra not eating from that food in plane n eating their own food which they brought n tanveer’s plan failedπŸ‘Ώ….Ishra sharing chocolate😘…..Asya shocked 😱 to see tanveer n all the co passengers unconscious…..On the right time they all jump from the planeπŸ‘….SiDni first n then asya n Ishra by going from tanveer’s hands she deserved thisπŸ‘Ώ…..Tanveer died in the plane crash????…..How sweet of u to add Raya n tejhanvi scene of understanding something is not right with their kidsπŸ‘πŸ‘….Soo ishita is raya’s daughter right???…Precap is πŸ†’….Can’t wait for next part😎

    1. Shakaib

      Thanks a lot Mansi di…😘😘😘😘yep tanveer died in plane crashπŸ˜‹πŸ˜‹πŸ˜‹πŸ˜‹will update soon…

  4. superb dear

    1. Shakaib

      Thanks a lot sowmy..😘😘😘😘

  5. Thrilling update shakaib, really yaar, you nailed today episode very beautifully, I love the whole episode,Tejanvi first fighting and then sharing tea and snacks and watching movie, so cute of him, wish it would be Tej from IB not Manish Khana,,, Even then, I enjoyed their scene a lot, I was surprised that Tejanvi and Raya are friends, shocking, How you manage to show these twists, I can’t imagine that thy could be friends? But In MM, only 4 members, Tejanvi and Rahem live, is it no alitte awkward, Though,few charactes means more drama, fun, thrill,
    love the way Ishra apologize to each other, But what Ishita recall that she realise her love so soon? Waiting for real mystery to unfold, does it leads to any twist, will you show Ishita -ve, OMG!!!!
    Asya arguing and Tanveer thinking in mind and ten shooting pilot drama reminded me of DBO, Oh so Tanveer has full fledged plan for all this, And terrorists also join her in mission in order to take revenge from government, as government hanged their mate, Live Gohem dance on LLG, and their attires were also awesome, AH try to give food to 3 couples but they refuse as they have their own food, Loved the scene, Tanveer even kill ah, hmm, But why Tanveer want revenge onAsya? Please show this..
    The scenewas thrilling where Tanveer hold Zoya and. Ishita legs but Rasad free them,so cute of them, But Tanveer thought of holding Ishita leg so Asya could feel guilty, I was scared there, OmG! Blast scene was thrilling and man opening door of plane remind me of Race 2 where the same scene happen in end of movie, Galiyan song love it, Ishita hugging Raman in air, Air Romance, Ishra’s mothers must be dreamed of the blast but shocking that Ishita is Gopi’s twin sissy, Huh Huh, couple to fall into pool and udb as BG song, So, Mr. Khurana and Ram are bros, right? Waiting the real mystery to unfold, please, update soon..

    1. Shakaib

      Thanks a lot Tia😘😘😘😘

      1. Shakaib

        Will show why Rajbeer want revenge,….😏😏😏😏

  6. Thrilling update shakaib, really yaar, you nailed today episode very beautifully, I love the whole episode,Tejanvi first fighting and then sharing tea and snacks and watching movie, so cute of him, wish it would be Tej from IB not Manish Khana,,, Even then, I enjoyed their scene a lot, I was surprised that Tejanvi and Raya are friends, shocking, How you manage to show these twists, I can’t imagine that thy could be friends? But In MM, only 4 members, Tejanvi and Rahem live, is it no alitte awkward, Though,few charactes means more drama, fun, thrill,
    love the way Ishra apologize to each other, But what Ishita recall that she realise her love so soon? Waiting for real mystery to unfold, does it leads to any twist, will you show Ishita -ve, OMG!!!!
    Asya arguing and Tanveer thinking in mind and ten shooting pilot drama reminded me of DBO, Oh so Tanveer has full fledged plan for all this, And terrorists also join her in mission in order to take revenge from government, as government hanged their mate, Live Gohem dance on LLG, and their attires were also awesome, AH try to give food to 3 couples but they refuse as they have their own food, Loved the scene, Tanveer even kill ah, hmm, But why Tanveer want revenge onAsya? Please show this..
    The scenewas thrilling where Tanveer hold Zoya and. Ishita legs but Rasad free them,so cute of them, But Tanveer thought of holding Ishita leg so Asya could feel guilty, I was scared there, OmG! Blast scene was thrilling and man opening door of plane remind me of Race 2 where the same scene happen in end of movie, Galiyan song love it, Ishita hugging Raman in air, Air Romance, Ishra’s mothers must be dreamed of the blast but shocking that Ishita is Gopi’s twin sissy, Huh Huh, couple to fall into pool and udb as BG song, So, Mr. Khurana and Ram are bros, right? Waiting the real mystery to unfold, please, update soon….

  7. Superb update

    1. Shakaib

      Thanks a lot Jyoti….😘😘😘😘

  8. Riana

    In your words…BLASTING EPISODEπŸŽ†πŸŽ†πŸŽ†πŸŽ†πŸŽ†πŸŽ†πŸŽ†πŸŽ†πŸŽ†….All the couples were Romantic!!…Plane blasts seen recalled be of Anika’s dream in IB…😱😱😱😱😱…All the couples fall on Swimming pool n the Ude dil befikre song played was really awsome😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

    I was missing the ff since many days…Thanks for updting…😍😍😍…Hope u r okay dear☺

    1. Shakaib

      Thanks a lot Riana di…😘😘😘😘

  9. Jasminerahul

    ishra apologizing to each other was lovely.ishita was so sad knowing about gohem.but glad that she realized that she had only crush for ahem and her true love is raman.tanveer killed even the airhostess who helped her.this shows that those who do bad deeds will only have ill date.why does she want to kill asya?ishra chocolate scene was short and romantic.loved all couples escaping with parachute and tanveer failing.ishita hugging raman in air was romantic. did tanveer die? priya calling out ishita’s name.so does she know that ishita is her daughter?tej jhanvi scene was cute. you are one of the few writers who shows middle aged romance.I am surprised that tejvi raya are friends.gohem talk about love and dance were superb

    1. Shakaib

      Thanks a lot Jasmine di….😘😘😘😘Will reveal soon why Tanveer wants revenge 😏😏😏😏yes…tanveer is deadπŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„

  10. Nandhini

    Loool tej and jhanvi’s fightπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ and finally ishitha changed her mind,, realized the truth and started to love raman😍😍 the aeroplane track was like looking an action-packed hollywood movie😎 but i am very sad that other innocent passengers have died in plane blast😞😞 this is the more thrilling episode so far in this ff😊😊

    1. Shakaib

      Thanks a lot Nandhini di….😘😘😘😘OMG! My pleasure that you are assumed by this Hollywood-action packed story…thanks a lot😘😘😘😘

  11. Orchid

    Wowwwwww nice concept I really liked it I have read the whole 11 parts it is just awesome. Tejanvi’s fight is cute. Glad that Ishita understood her love. Post the next asap plzzzzxz

    1. Shakaib

      Thanks a lot Nafisa/Orchid….😘😘😘😘Will post soonπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

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