Story: Drawn Together (Chapter 10 Contd.)

Drawn Together- Chapter 10 (Hurt)

Radhika tried again dialling Sam’s number, but it went into thevoicemail altogether. Just great! Today was not her day too. She had to make up with Sam, at any cost and she also had to something else about another thing.

She determined her will andclamped down the rising uneasinesscompletely and walked towards her wardrobe, gettingthe fresh clothes, she showered, and got ready. Wearing a red chudidaar, Radhikaproceeded out to leave. But, not before wearing the golden hoop earrings and bangles, applying a little make up, alight mascara in her eyes and free flowing thesilkentressesdown on her shoulders in waves, she moved outof herroom.She went into the kitchen and grabbed the chocolate fudge, she had made, because she was frantic and anxious very much last night and did not go to bed at allafter the bone shivering nightmare. She went into the garage, got out of her green Nissan Ultima, and zoomed it out of the drive way.

Thank god, nobody was at home. If dad would have been there, he would have asked thousand of enquiringquestions. Hmm, now she wondered, no, he wouldn’t care about her that much. He had very muchwashed his handsoff Shaina without even blink, didn’t he and never bothered to maintain a contact with her till now over two years. Radhika missed her too much. She didn’t understand why Shaina had agreed to getmarried as such, and so fast. Something had happened that she didn’t know, Radhika understood the hushed outwhispers going about the house. She was in the hostel then with Sam.Dad did not allow her to come home even for the mehendi and sangeetfunctions of her own sister.She had arrived home the day of the wedding and had seen how dead Shaina looked. Even though and very well after that, Radhika still had a dailycontact with Shaina.

Radhika kept driving in the morning fog, she opened the car window and felt the breeze flow her hair about and a light smile creased her lips, it was six in the morning, and she felt already refreshed but a little drawn up since last night.

An hour later of driving around in the gatheringtraffic of Delhi streets, she parked the car to halt, inside a shiny big empire of a building, the last time she came here, Radhika had gaped like a complete loon with mouth hung, of countinghow many storeys had it, the hugemodernised art of architectural structure. It was bigger than her father’s office, which was an hour from her.

Radhika still did not get out but kept thinking. She gulped hard with ever rising uncertainty. Oh,for heaven sake, she fumed and got out of the car.

See him. Make sure if he is well,and…..Um, Radhika looked downat the box with an eyebrow raise, should she givethis chocolatefudge caketo him? As inlike a sorry foreverything about last night, because really shewasthe one who went to his mansion but not he.

Wouldn’t it be bizarre. Oh, whatever, move your feet, she told herself.

Radhika turned the large glass entrance of the revolving door in a flung. She got in and stared around. The office already bustled with activity.

She avoided sudden curious gazes, abrupt silence and hush hush conversations. Radhika didn’t look anywhere, but walked up to the lift and got in fast, punching in the fifth floor number. Heavens, she could the people’s daunting penetrating stares right into her head. She sighed a relief and felt the lift float above.

Five minutes she reached the floor, and moved her feet on the world’s most pristine white floor and the neatest aisle of the office. Radhika moved the red lacquered reception desk.

Sitting there was the most beautiful girl, she had ever seen, in but mundanelygrey office blazerand skirt, but even in that tasteless thing she looked very ethereal.

The girl about the same age as Radhika looked up sharply, and Radhika was graced with berry red lips, full pouty mouth, large grey eyes, wide cheekbones and straight shiny hair arranged in a bun over the even more pretty shaped head.

“Yes…may I help you.”The girl asked in a sneer looking at Radhika up and down.

Well, not so a great an inner personality then, Radhika thought.

“I came here to see Mr. Arjun Mehra.”Radhika replied, uncaring the looks of the girl.

Radhika’s eyes went to the identity badge of the girl. Ruha Singh.

A twist of a mocking appeared on the receptionist face.

“Do you have an appointment?”She asked still in that steel robotic voice.

Radhika’s mind derailed at that. Appointment? She didn’t get an appointment when she came here last time. Well, thinking about it, in the extreme burst of anger,she had taken the stairs from the other side to thereception areaand directly barged into hisoffice then.

Suits you well now. Should have takenthat option, than facing this porcupine lady.

“Uh..he is my to be fiancé.”She said in a very weird voice, because it still was strange of her to getmarried soon to a rather stranger.

The receptionist, the porcupine lady, Suha Singh, snorted out a laugh. Radhika’s face twisted in a scowl. What was so funny?

“Certainly.”She agreed in a mock.

Radhika’s eyes narrowed. A firmness entered into her demeanor. She was aafter allafather’s daughter, if she didn’t get his brutal nature, she at least got his determination. She could very well handle a bully, and this shouldn’tbe a hard thing tolet it under her control.

Radhika leaned in and narrowed her eyes more at the equally freezing look she got from the girl in a clash.

“Call him and say that, Radhika Mishra, had come to meet him.”She said succinctly, and in a no nonsense voice.

The girl stared at her some more frostily, but she took the receiver to the earand connected a call. She nodded her head and still looking across at Radhika in a cool narrowing of eyes. She put the receiver down.

“He is in a conference. You have towait near the waiting lobby as all theinterviewersdo.”She pointed out with a flick of a one raise of elegant hand.

Radhika’s curious gaze swivelled around to the closed office. Conference?

She sighed and turned around, but her back straightened in a strain, when she heard as raw throaty sneer of a office.

“Hundreds of these trampsstrut around his office, telling that he is their fiancé. Like as if we should believe….”

Radhika thought to slap the girl across her face, but really why should she soil her hand getting into a fight here. She tilted her chin in the air and moved towards the said lobby.

She sat down with a great stuttering sigh on the red couch thing. Her eyes strayed towards the shielded glass wall of his large rectangular office.

Why was she doing this really? She asked herself, but her mind stayed ever mute and unanswerable.

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Arjun was frustrated to an extreme. He had been a boar in the office, growling and shouting atnobody in particular atthe employees. The reason to it was, he couldn’t find out with moving heaven and earth around in a spiral, about who was responsible for destroying the breaks of his car. Who was bent on killing him? It seemed like a day’s plan. A carefully laid out plan. Enter into the shrubbery. Destroy the outside cameras. Break into the mansion garage and cut the breaks. With as heavy as thesecurity of the house, the intruder had the dare to enter into his premises taking the risk of even beingkilled.

With options all gone and nothing could he see in the dark, he finally called Rohan, and explained the situation. He had alsowarned him to not get the media involved in this. Rohan had agreed and curtly told him that, the details of it would be on his table by the end of the evening.

Arjun had the conference end in a success, and waited back in the office for the foreign delegates to leave. It was a gruelling two hour meeting and it had gone just as he controlled it to be.

He loosened the tight clutch of tie around his neck,and walked by the large glass walls of the window. He glanced around and moved forward several steps to the door, but his form froze and his hand stayed glued to the tie, and his feetremoved unmoved on the floor for a second. His feet back step slowly, without actually turning around, his body moved to the view of the glass walls, his eyes went back to the red flutter he had overlooked before just a second ago. His eyes looked sideways, and narrowed.

He turned around and moved closer to the glass wall.

His left hand went up and stayed attached to the wall.His eyes became a warm swipe over the huddled figure on the lobby couch. He moved back, swivelled his chair, removed his coat and slid it on the back, he slid down on it, and leaned back.

The phone of the buzzed through the reception area, Arjun picked it up.

“There is a girlhere, Sir, in the lobby, wanting to meet you?”The receptionist’svoice travelled into his ears.

“Let her wait.”He clipped, and cut the call.

He leaned back on the chair observing the vulnerable face, stirring uncomfortably, athin figure on the couch. The eyes large and almond abruptly moved towards his sideand peered. Arjun straightened, he felt the stare pierce into his eyes, travelinto his blood, and heat it to a boil. The hazel of that soft gaze moved away and looked around the aisle of his office.

He leaned back, and sat there staring, movinghis gaze all over, for morethan an hour, then he had toget on another meeting, which went on rather smoothly too, but his eyes strayed to huddledtime and again.

Morning went away and afternoon came in lazily, still she didn’t move away from the lobby. He sat there again, and his posture got stiff more and more when she refused the refreshment and even the lunch offered by the office assistants.

He had ten cups of coffee, still looking across at her. The eyes lost the sparkle and a swirling storm covered around the hazel, as she glared at the glass wall. Nothing could be seen fromoutside, except a dark shadow.

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Radhika waited and waited, and a deep burn of humiliation stung her too much looking at the smug face of the lobbyreceptionist. She felt like as if waiting for a cut throat job interview than rather meet and see…whatever to her, he was. What was she really doinghere?The reality of her situation started to dawn on her. There was nothing here. Nothingin between. What did she really expect, that someone for the first time in her life had understood her or connected with her, she had so many dreams of having a lovely wedding and a even more a beautifulmarriage, but she never expected the hit of this. She was fated to be ruined, in between people who only knew business to deal with but rather than have a care for others. Radhika was all locked upin a rock and a hardplace. A wave of disappointment and mortification coloured her face. Remembering the moments of little things about him she got up to leave.

“Hey, you’re being called in his office, now.”The porcupine lady announced out loud from behind her.

Radhika turned around, and froze her with a black glare. She started to wonder if she should go into the office at all, but well now, you don’t want to meet me then so be it, she thought and turned around and walked out of the aisle. The black heels she had onclicked on the floor while she did.

But, as she turned around the floor,her arm got caught by a from grip of a hand and was turned around in a spiral.

Radhika jumped and looked up and moved a little looking at a pair of angry brown eyes swirling down at her in a storm.

“Always have the habit of creating a scene, don’t you.”He glared down at her.

Radhika couldn’t do anything but stare open mouth, but she closed it when he pulled at her hand and made her to walk all the way to his office.

“Let’s get this over with once and for all.”He muttered down at her curtly.

“But, I…”She started to say, but when he looked down at her, the very breath caught in her throat looking at the warmth and heat curling around his eyes and the hard angles and planes of his face.

From the corner of her eye, Radhika saw the receptionist stare at the two of them in a gape.

Radhika struggled to out of his strong hold on her right arm.

He pushed open the glass and got her in and closed it behind them in a thud.

She gulped hard when he pushed away from the door and walked towards in a slow drawl. He got closer and closer and Radhika moved back and stuttered to a stop when her legs hit the large table. She leaned away as he got closer, and immediately she could feel the heat radiating off from his body and reaching to hers.

His leaned to hers and she leaned back. He put both of his hands on either side of the table and caged her to it.

“Why did you come here?”He asked in a burring tone.

Radhika blinked a little at the sharpness of his question.

She folded and went for something else, which came entirely stupid, as he looked down at her lips.

“I…I..I was just passing by.”She said stuttering.

Radhika saw his whole body freeze at that, and she too couldn’t believe how idiotic she sounded. She felt the need to beat her palm over her forehead.

“I meant that…uh.”She started to explain, but he cut her off frowning down at her.

“You were just passing by?”He asked a little amusingly.

His eyes turned less swirling and the tightness of his face softened a little. A shadow of a smile turned the corner of his lips up a little but it vanished before she could get her mind around it.

But a deep burn of red coloured her face feeling a little patronised a little by his tone.

“Yeah, I was just driving around and…”She started to say again, but he cut her off before she could speak any further.

“You were driving around and found your way to my office? Like three hours drive from your house?”He asked, tilting her head to side and sliding his gaze all over her features, catching her lie very easily.

Radhika narrowed her eyes at the sneer of a satisfaction brimming in his eyes while he looked down at her in a mock.

“I didn’t drive to your office. I was going to my father’s office. It’s just an hour from here.”She said ever nonchalantly, tilting her chin in the air.

His forehead creased as he really smiled now.

“Your father isn’t there in his office. He is out of station, and if you were really going to there then, why did you stop here?”He asked again in that impossible arrogant, that made her blood boil.

Damn, he was good. How did he know about that?

She sighed, and narrowed her eyes looking up into his eyes. Fine then.

“I’m here to apologize for what happened last night.”She said flatly and honestly.

And alsoshe had been very much afraid of the look of freeze he gave her last night.

Immediately as she said that, the smile and themocking that coloured his features and lips wiped away and a shuttering of a shadow followed leaving a grind of his jaw and lock of his muscles. He pushed away from and folded his hands over his chest.

“What happened last night?”He asked in a cool tone, and his behavior looked like he had forgotten about it there and then about the accident.

Radhika gulped suddenly feeling a little peeved at his hard cut manner.
“I…I didn’t mean to take your car and..”She started to explain, but he cut her off with the whip of his left hand in the air.

He was wearing white shirt, and a half blazer with a white and grey plated tie and pants. He looked like a cut out hard core no non sensebusinessman.

“You driving around here for thatwasn’t necessary.”He said in a cold voice and moved towards the table, and started sorting out papers, but he looked when she stood there stillin absolute confusion.

He gave her a once over all her body and caught her eyes.

“Why do I feel that you are taking this marriage thing as a serious one.”He said in a dark tone.

Radhika’s body went cold at that, and burn of humiliation covered her skin.

He walked towards her carrying a document in his hand.

“You know what this is?”He asked, looking down at her in a stealth.

She gulped hard, her eyes brimming up a little looking at the paper.

“This is a piece of paper in whichyour father signed you off to me.”He continued in that terrible tone.

Her teeth grinded at that and she remained ever mute.

He caught her hand and Radhika looked up, but he seem to not care as he dragged her to the glass wall.

He pointed at a cabin, which can be look though from here. There were about more than fifty girls sitting there on the couch lounge. Radhika frowned.

“Look how many like you are waiting for a chance to meet me.”He said even in an even more cold voice in her ear, and pulled her around and held her up in his arms, almost dangling her in his arms….”Do you think you resemble in appearance with any of those.”His eyes like brown marbles looked down at her body in a slow swipe of a sneer…”Do you think..”He laughed a little, and bent down to her face, his breath falling on her lips in a hacking sound of anger…”with your very ordinary capabilities you have it in youthe means to ensnare my attention…. Look at yourself in the mirror twice before thinking as such.”He said the words in apoisonous sneer and with a curl of his lips, looking down at heover, he pushed her away and turned around.

Radhika staggered a little. A lone tear escaped her eyes at his sharp stinging of words, but nothing of her pride hurt her, as it was already tarnished by her father. She walked around him and ripped the paper from his hand, and tore it into pieces.

His eyes narrowed at that and looked into her eyes in a cool sharpness.

“I’m not going to be a part of this. I already had made it clear. You’re the one playing around this piece of paper and taunting it in my face time and again.”She said fiercely, covering the hurt very well in anger.

She tore the paper into more of the pieces until the humiliation and mortification of being a subject of a dealbetween the aristocrats would diminish and vanish in the air of her determined will.

Radhika took his words in, about her being a nothing compared to others, she absorbed that hurt but did let it flow into her veins.

She looked up, narrowed her swimming red eyes and rearranged her burning features into a wall of unhurt and threw the pieces into his arrogant face.

“I hope this will silence all your doubts about me wanting your attention.”She flung the words in the same tone of the disgust as he used at her, and turned around to leave.

What nonsense had she cooked up in her mind, that he wasn’t a smooth talking devil that he was? How wrong was she? As a new feeling dishearten and a break of something to unfurl in her stomach.

But, a hard cutting bite over her upper arm, made her wince and before she could turn around completely, he whipped her around and pushed her against the wall, grabbing and locking both of her hands beside her head.

His face looked angry. No, not angry. His features were twisted into a furious angry. Radhika’s breath stuttered. His vanilla breath fell on her lips as he whispered out more sharp words. His lips curved in a cool quirk of a smile.

“What did I tell you, my sweet.”He sneered…”That you aren’t the one holding the wires of control here but me. You are already my possession.”He smiled a little, and Radhika struggled more to free herself….” Or have you forgotten about the humiliation your familywould face if I ever cancel the deal and if you want such a thing to happen….then, I could very well be honestwiththe media and describe every word that had been exchanged by your father…”Radhika’s eyes widened at that, and a new fear started to ripple into her skin.

“You wouldn’t dare to do that…”She whispered, as her eyes started to sting again.

His eyes narrowed at her words and he moved away and started to turn his walk to the table.

“Do you want me to call your father right away and say that you’re here to break his consignment….I could explain your situation…”He went on again playing at her emotions, and drawing her very blood to freeze.

Radhika’s heart failed at that and her features twisted into an extreme fright.

Instantly the broken and beaten body of her mother came into her mind. No! Dad would kill her. He would pour out all the anger and god knows what he’ll do if such a thing happens.

“No! No! Please don’t do that. You don’t know what will happen if you do that!”She cried out loudly in panic.

His back went erect,his form froze and he turned around with face all curious and stealth catchingthe desperation, pain and fear in her tone very well. His brows strained into deep furrows and a shadow of suspicion crossed his features.

“What will happen?”He asked in an abrupt tone of softness.

Radhika covered her face into a shade of shutter, and she gulped the convulsing of fear down her throat, she just stared back into his dark brown enquiring eyes and questioned herself. Would he be an extremeheartless to do that to her? What about when he let down his guard and turnedhis actual self to her? Was it all a play? Play to make good with her? A tactic to let her stay meek and soft so that it would a smooth sailing business move. How did she ever fallinto his play? Radhika cursed herself for that,andnow he must belaughing at her, thinking that howdid she ever the silly mouse,sawherself as his equal. Radhika felt so small now. Her back steeled up and she veiled the unsettlement quickly into a disguise.

“You don’t deserve an answer to that. You’rea nothing to me.”She tilted her chin up in the air, and said the words as coldly as possible.

He just stared back at her, slicing his eyes all over her face in a slow assessment, trying to see through into her words. He walked towards her, but Radhika’s body turned alert. Her eyes became wary and tired. Her eyes widened when he suddenly grabbed her face, holding her head upputtinghis large warmhands on both of her cold cheeks.

His face became a soft whisper of angles and planes, as his lips touched a feature on hers.

“Don’t give me that determined backbone now.”He whispered huskily.

Radhika’s stinging eyes caught his in a swirl of emotions.

“What is it that will happen?”He asked softy, yet cautiously.

Her will stuttered and her breath caught at the sudden change of warmth circulating into his cold and hurtfulmanner. She just stood there suddenly able to connect the strings of attachment she felt all the while when hanging closer to his body, those that he severed the delicate ones with his bitter words. His left hand slid down and moved around her waist pullingher closer and up.

Her eyes started to water when she felt the heat of his strength started to curl around her wary spirit. Disgusted with herself forfeelingdifferent kinds of emotions all at once in his disturbing of intense presence she moved back, but he held her still in his arms.

“As I said before, you don’t deserve an answer to that.”She said looking down at the floor.

His body seem to turn stone at her reluctance, and she felt his jaw grind in frustration.

“Fine. Be that way,”He said in an impatient tone and pushed her away.

She staggered a little but held her ground firm in only a second of steadying herself.

Radhika walked across at the chair and got her purse, all the while keeping her eyes away from his, but she stuttered a little, but got out the fudge box and walked towards him.

“Enjoy your victory with this, but know this,I’m never going to let go of my dreams just because like that. You can use your fury or hell or hath, nothing could unsteady my will.”She flung the words chastely and threw the box at his chest.

She turned around to leave but his ever cool and drawly voiceto be held her to a stop.

“And you knowthis too, that, whatever the wordswhichgot stuck on your tongue, would not be a hard taskfor me find out soon.”He warned her sharply but yet in a softest of tone.

She turned to face him, flustered and flushed too much now.

“Why do you care all of a sudden?”She asked in a frustrated tone.

He held the box in his right hand and leaned his back on the table.

A shadow of something passed over his features. Something which she did not understand or could not decipher. He was like a page of mystery to her. He had depths of certain things she did not understand. His eyes turned a shade darker as his jawline smoothened in a set.

“I don’t care. I just protect what is mine.”He said shortly and very casually, but the words did not fail to provide it’s profound effect.

Radhika stared as her heart skipped a beat at his deep burring tone. She again steeled herself against his ever changing way of words.

“I’m not yours.”She said flatly and little annoyed too.

How many times shoud she have to make this clear, so that it could enter into his thick arrogant, ego filled bulbous head.

His eyes snapped to hers, and became lazy and warm all together.

“You became mine the first timeI saw you.”He declared, even more calmly than before.

“I’m not an asset to be yours.”She volleyed back.

His lips spread into a smile now, and Radhika’s head jerked back looking at it.

“Who is saying that you’re an asset, you might be a liquidity, for all that I know.”He taunted with eyes all like heavy lead.

Radhika face coloured up and her temper knew no boundsnow.

How dare hesay that she was a weakness.

“I hate you.”She said through a glower.

His eyes flashed but his face remained in a set of stone.

“And I’m glad that we are on the same page.”He said flatly.

She just glared back,turned around and let out some choice blasé words and moved forward, but not before she heard a deepbooming of a laughter behind her that seemto vibrate all around the walls and clashin her ears.

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As soon as she left the cabin, Arjun laughter just vanished intothin air ofhis anger as it surrounded and palpated around,and his teeth grinded a little.That was easy, to make her hate him, but the thing that passed over herfeatures. That sheer terror, when he said, he would call her father. What was that?

That pained tortured voice as it came out of her throat, made his back straighten in alert. What the hell would happen?

He slid down on the chair, and opened the plastic box. The smell of the chocolate flew up into his nostrils, and his hands reached to the cake. He started devouring it, bit by bit in extreme hunger.

The door of his cabin opened suddenly and he growled like a boar again.

His secretary stood there blinking at his cake spread mouth and at the box in his hand.

“What?”Arjun barkedirritatedly at the disturbance.

Karthik gulped and just shook his head, trying to get the image of his boss in such homeliness of attitude.

“Uh..Mr. Rohan Khanna is on the other line. Should I connect to your phone, Sir?”He asked in a robotic tone.

Arjun straightened in his chair and leaned back.

“Of, course, I was waiting for his call.”

His secretary nodded his head in assertion and went about his business.

Arjun wipedhis mouth with a paper napkin and got the call with his left hand.
“Yeah.”He clipped, and his demeanor darkened waiting for the answer.

“The man who cut the break wires of your car, had been in a follow up of your whereabouts since a few weeks now.”Rohan informed him through the line, in a hard voice.

Arjun brows furrowed at that.

“Who is he?”He asked in a calm deceptive tone, and his mind kept thinking and moving over the line of enemies he had made against his business.

There were many. He could think of in numbers who wanted to harm, but not one had dared of making it in reality than except thinking in mind of killing him.

A silence ensued on and Arjun stirred in the chair annoyed at the delay.

“Are you there on the line, Rohan?”

“It’s the man hired by Raghav Mishra. Your own to be father-in-law.”Rohan concluded, and the receiver almost slid out of Arjun’s hand at the words, but his grip tightened and his ears started to ring on and on.

“Alright.”He concluded, and put down the receiver.

His face covered in a sheen of sweat and heleaned his head on the glass table. A second later, Arjun beat his hand on it hard.

f**k the nerve of the old goat. So, this was the means he would apply to get the advertisement deal out of Arjun’s hand. To slither out of the his play, the man had goneto an extreme end.

Arjun sagged back on the chair, and his mind started to churn. His fingertips joined together.

Playing with a lion’s meal now, are we Mr. Raghav Mishra, but a sudden thought raced his mind. He should act fast now.

He dialled back Rohan’s number. It rang for a while but got connected an instant later.

“Yeah?”

“Does he know that his daughter was at my mansion?”

Arjun’s hand still fisted on the glass table.

“Well, we don’t know about that, but the man as cunning as that would go to any lengths…. the guy he hired escaped out from our clutches and vanished into thin air.”Rohan’s voice came out frustrated and angry enough.
“Yes. He would go to any lengths.”Arjun agreed, an abrupt sliver of fear rankled his mind now.

He put down the receiver with a deep frown marring his ashen features. A lot was riding here on the marriage. His father’sland. His family’s last memory. His peace of mind, and someone’s else’sfreedom and dream too. Why not make a proposition? Both he and Radhika would be in advantage of this, but he wouldn’t go too trusting onher, after all she was his nemesis daughter. Bloodwill be blood, he thought disgustedly. Who knows it was all her father’s plan. He couldn’t help but wonder now. Was she involved in this?Maybe her father suggested to doas hesays if she wants to persuade her dream in New York, she has to do what he says. She was a bait then, was she aware about the vehicle being tamperedor she was just there as anteasing temptation trap carefully laid outfor him to fall into it.Something like ugly suspicion roared its uglyheadinto his mind. If such a thing as this was in the play, both of the father and daughter will have hell to pay. For that his mind already planned out a map.

He dialled a number and waited for it connect.

His jaw set in stone when he heard a familiar buzz of a voice on the other line.

“Do you think your dirty paws could even make a scratch at me.”He growled low through gritted teeth.

He heard a low chuckle.

“Finally I get the young pup on my trail…..what it was…wasjust a trailer… You don’t threaten an old experienced field player in the business game. Be aware young man. Be very aware of your back. You never will know from where the strike would come hitting your headas a surprise…”He started to laugh a little.

“I don’t frighten easily, Raghav Mishra… So, you and your god damn threats could go eat shit.”He said calmly in a whisper of a warning.

He didn’t get an answer but only laughter, and Arjun tightened his fist and asked the next question through gritted teeth.

“Did you involve your daughter in the dirty play too?”

The laughter stopped abruptly and there was only a silence for a while and Arjun waited with baited breath, for a negativereply.

“Of course, my dear daughter does whatever her papa’s says. She is one hidden soldier that one………”

But,before the old goat could continue, Arjun roared an hurled the phone across the cabin with a deep rising violence from inside his mind and heart.

The betrayal of her innocent facecame like straight out hard hurting punch to his face. Arjun pulled at his hair, his eyes watered and reddend with the affect of it.

The fool that he was, and his raging softness went and believed, and fell right into their trap. What kind of closeness was he afraid of now? They must be laughing at his state.

Arjun wiped away his eyes, and his face set in a stone of a mask. It’s about timehe take his payment with double the pain to give that he really did went through.

The man did a great mistake leaving his dear daughter all alone. To what extentshe would go for her dreams.. innocence be damned the acting of hers….. Once he wasdone with themarriage she would have nowwhere elseto turn.

He into the coat and set out of his office…

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In a far away place, and in a darkened corner of a high end expensive members only club, Raghav Mishra sat back in a leisure on the cashmere leather sofa couch andflung back the glass of fiery liquidscotch and smiled at a shadowed figure.

“Our work is done. We would get the marketing project soon enough.”He leered in a drunk state.

“You would throw your daughter under the bus to get what you want, this is not surprising.”Said a young deep drawl of a dry voice.

The old man just smiled at the shadowed figure.

“I would throw anyone under the bus, to get what I want, and don’t forget you are in advantage here too or have you forgotten about your revenge.”He leaned away and kept drinking.

The shadowed figure held a black scowl.

“How would I forget about that. I have a long vengeancehistory with the Mehra’s.”He gritted his teeth.

“I should commend you for the previous accident ploy too, but he missed just by an inch….the other vehicle driver died though. I wishhe could have died last nightof the break failure, but dammit…the fate is at his side…”Raghav went on gritting his teeth, and staring on his numerous failedattempts.

The young man, the shadowed in corner, who nobody knew just chuckled in reply. Who was he? And what was his motive is yet to be known.

The place around vibrated with the hate and feud against a person that the two drinking people despise the most, making way for a more sinister of plans to destroy two of the young lives..coating their existence in lies, doubts, suspicions and a cloud of betrayal….

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Radhika drove her car in the darkened street, tears stinger her eyes thinking of how such a fool she was, it started to drizzle now but she didn’t care as a deep hurt and sadness rose in a sob in her throat.

Humiliation and embarrassment covered her body thinking back and repeatinghis sneering words continuously in her mind. Why did she ever go to his mansion yesterday.

Two of the big tears rolled down her eyes, as she just drove aimlessly on the road. But a screech of some other vehicle behind her car annoyed her attention away from her saddened thoughts. She saw through the rectangular narrow mirror that a dark black car kept zooming closer behind hers.

What? Who?

She ignored the incessantly honking of the car. There was lot of space beside to her car. What the point in getting begin her vehicle, she thought frustratedly and shook her head.

But, everything happened in a zap and also in a slow, and the car behind her screeched forward beside to hers and moved forward. It turned and stopped right infornt of hers. Radhika’s eyes widened and she halted the car, before it screamed and just burst into by justan inch the one that stopped hers.

Her body propelled forward, all her tresses flew over all over her face, and her head hit the starting wheel hard. An immediate swarm of vibration rang into her ears. Radhika slid her right hand over the side of her forhead. A little of blood created her fingers. She squinted front with the pain, and all her blood leeched off her face.

The car door opened, and a leg came out. Radhika froze, when she saw full form get out of the car. The night’s light rain drizzled around as he walked forward in all his darkness. Radhika’s heart palpated looking at his hard face.

She started breathing heavy, as she saw him turn at her side. His eyes held such a shadow that she drew back a little in surprise. He opened the car door, and he caught her hand. All the while she could just stare open mouthed at him. He dragged her out of the car, and Radhika stumbled on her feet.

His hold was brutal, she couldn’t do anythingbut gazeat his averted face now.

He just dragged her to his car, and that’s when she got out of the trance, and started to struggle against his hold.

“What are you doing here? And just…”She grabbed at his fingers that but into her wrist, and she winced in pain.

“Get in.”His voice burred down at her coldly, and Radhika’s body locked in surprise at his too far away a tone, and something of a punishing gruffness to his voice.

“What?”She asked in a whisper and jerked back.

His eyes narrowed at her face, and his jaw ticked in danger.

“Get in.”He bit down, in her face.

Radhika felt her heart rate spike up. The drizzle and cold covered around their bodies in light wetness. Beads of water dropped dampened the sharp spikes of his locks. The shiny water droplet from his one dark lock of golden for head and travelled down in the air and it then fell on her heated right cheek. Her lashes blinked downon her eye and her body banged into motion.

“No.”She whispered and moved forward to escape from his hold.

But, he caught her waist from behind, and her eyes bugged out at that. An immediate panic set in at that and she started to shout and scream.

“No! No! I said I’m not going to get in!”She shouted, but her throaty scream just fell on deaf ears as she whipped her in thebai, and a round and pushed her into the backhis limousine.

He pushed away from her as if burned, and slid opposite of the seat. Radhika’s eyes went to the car door, but he locked the doors before she could reach for it.

She tried to pull it down but it didn’t budge at all.

Her chest moved up and down rapidly, looking across his shadowed face suspiciously.

“What is this? Where are you taking me?”She asked cautiously, andher wild eyes peered out of the car window in rising anxiety.

He leaned back and his hand went across at the top of the seat in a leisure support.

He stared at her like that in that hateful insolent gaze of his brown eyes.

“Someplace very far. So far and out thatyou couldn’t reach anyone even if you wanted to desperately.”He said in a calm voice, that raked shivers across her skin.

Radhika’s heart gave out at that in fear. Her face paled and her lips lost the colour.

“You…you…you’re kidnappingme?”She asked in a convulse of a breath.

He just remained silent and dark. A shadow of a light beard appeared over square jaw hard mean jaw. His eyes lost all the warmth and the sharpness of a edged angles appeared on his face.

Her mind went into utter panic and fright.

“You can’t do that.”She gasped incredulously and in disbelief.

The look he gave at her high cry, surprised her to the core. His brown eyes swirled such disgust that she had to move back to escape his eyes. Why was he looking at her like that? Her mind rankled on and on. Something was wrong here. Too wrong. She could feel it in her blood.

He leaned forward and his face arranged in a sneer down at her.

“You’ve no idea of what things I am capable of or what things I can do.”He whispered.

His body warmth turned into a heatstoke that burned her skin. The vehement and censorious tone of hisjabbed at her senses. Why was he talking to her like that? Like she was somecholeric resentment in his life.

Radhika too leaned by the car and moved it up and down. She breathed hard.

“Somebody of my family will find out and come looking after me by the night.”She narrows her eyes and sharpened her too.

He leaned away and laughed in a jeer at that.

“Who would come looking?Yourfather?”He asked belligerently.

His laughter vanished and he leaned forward… His eyes turned molten lava, and Radhika’s hand froze on the handle.

“Before anybody would find out, everything will be sorted outby then.”He whispered sinisterly in her face.

Radhika stared and stared in drawing sorry that raise goosebumps all over her skin.

“What is going to be sorted out by then?”She asked in a low breath and stuttering of tone.

Her very life seem to flash out from her life. It raked. It rippled. It burned. It denoted. It cleaved. It heated.Looking at the shadowof extreme hostility in his face.

In a sudden movement he was on her and clutched at her hair. He pushed her face up to his. His hot breath mixed with hers and her scalp hurt at his hold.

His eyes ran all over her face in an irascible antagonism. His jaw set in a rankling.

“Does your father always throw you as a temptationat the men he deals with? This is howhe does the way of business.”His lips curled in a disgust…..”By pushing his daughter as a display.”He slandered in an umbrage, and pulled hard at her hair strands.

Radhika winced and flinched, she grabbed at his hand to free her hair, her face flamed at his shameful words. Whole of her body ravaged at what he said.

What the hell was he talking about? Her swimming eyes slid all around his face, but she could see a seeth and rage. She did not like it at all.

“I should commend you though. This mask of innocence lead me almost in, but you know what, I only have revulsion for the likes of you.”He said in a loathand pushed her aside and moved away.

Her body hit the seat hard. Histone filled with extreme repugnance waterer her eyes too much. Her jaw grinded and her eyes narrowed. She slid upright on the seat.

“You can’t make me do anything against my will.”She said fiercely, trying to gulp down the rising tears.

He just smiled sneeringly.

“Not even when dies in your family? Even then you wouldn’t do as I say?”He asked her innocently in a taunt.

Radhika blinked and she gasped at his words. Her heart failed. He wouldn’t? She just kept staring in a shocked widening of eyes.

“You wouldn’t do that.”She breathed in a broken whisper.

Her face and the whole of her self contorted in pain.

He only stared back at herewithin the seat opposite in utterflatness of look.

Her blood boiled and her hand raised in the air to hit right across his face a slap, but caught hold of her hand, and pulled her body on his in a splat. His face went into her neck, as his arms went around her waist.

His lips slid across her skin a whisper. He groaned low in his throat.

“Your skin is like pure silk. No wonder you’re put as a temptation.”He murmured in a husky tone.

Radhika felt disgusted at his last word, she tried to free herself. His lips formed and trailed in heated feather of kisses all along her neck and jaw.

“How much are you ready to give of yourself for this play, huh?I don’t really mind now until I could have you anytime and anywhere.”He whispered in a hotbreath in her ear.

His lips touched warmly over her cool skin along her ear shell.

She tried to get out of his arms more now. Her eyes watered at his sneer of the words. He was talking to her as if she was a person who had no self esteem.

“Let go off me.”She said firmly, pushed at his shoulders hard, but he tightened his hold around her waist more.

“You shouldn’t struggle like this, my sweet. It would hurt you more if you do.”With a chuckle on her skin.

The limousine suddenly halted, and Radhika’s heart spiked upand dread crippled her body to an extreme.

“Finally.”He growled in her neck, and moved his face out her hair.

Where had he brought her? What was going on?

He opened the side door, still holding her hand, he got her out. Radhika pulled back, but her mouth gaped. It was some kind of a far away dark castle kind of a large house.

It was big and grotesquely lonely. It lookedlike some kind of a ghost ridden mansion.

The wind blew up around and her red scarf flew up in the air. It spread around his face, and he tied it around his wrist moving it up and down in his hand.

He looked down at her and smiled a mocking one.

“Come on, let’s get tied down, it would be a dreamy one,like the way you would have never imagined even in a nightmare.”He said in arankling impatience and embitter of rage.

It colored his face and distempered his features. He didn’t look like himself. He was seething and shaking with enraged temper.

“No!”She cried out in agitation.

Hot tears rolled down her cool and pallor of the skin.

“Don’t do this.”She sobbed, and clutched at his hand.

But he didn’t listen and just dragged heracross the towering castle steps. He flung open the door. The interior was the modern one capared to the outer look of it.

“You’re mistaken about something. I don’t know what it is, but please stop with this…”She started again brokenly.

“Oh, do stop with the f**king tears and the act. It wouldn’t work on me now.”He grated in a sneer, with his face still averted from hers.

She wailed inside at his manner.

He took her inside a wide beige carpeted room. There was a black suitedpot bellied guy over a wide table. He got up immediately at their entry.

“Hello, Murthy, have you arranged the papers as I told you too?”Arjun asked from behind her.

“Yes, Sir, they are ready.”The man whispered looking at the two of the them in a wide smile.

“Act along. You know what I can do, if you don’t agree to this.”He whispered in a threaten.

Radhika smiled a watery one. He moved her forward.

“Here is my fiancé. She was too exited to get a registered marriage, that I had to move heaven and earth to get you out of the court and made you come here.”He chuckled, and slid his hand over her waist and pushed her forward.

Registered marriage? Radhika eyes bugged out. The man in his mid forties just perched the large glasses over his eyes and looked keenly across at their features.

He just cleared his throat, and counted the papers and slid a few across on the table to towardsthem.

“You need to sign on these papers right away then.”He murmured disinterested a little, looking at the too touchy and feely couple.

She just stood there staring down at the papers in a hurt of her heart. Her eyes stingedand flowed too heavily.

“Uh…I don’t see any engagement rings in your hands, though?”The man in keen observation.

She looked across at Arjun, her gaze glared in a freeze at the man who was bent on ruining her life., but he only smiled down at her and took out a blue velvet box from his coatpocket.

“My fiancé is such a romantic, she says that we should put on the rings while we signthe papers.”He said in an act of saccharine sweetness.

Her breath caught in her throat looking at the box, and when he opened it, the caught up breath left out of her body all together.

It was the rings that they chose for each other that day. The same day, he had bent her will and today too he was doing the same. But, there was anoceanic difference of manner. That day too he had threatened her and this day too he was just the same, but there was certain coolness then. Now he was all nettled. More furious and angry. What caused the sudden change? She looked up and tried hard tocatch his gaze,but he caught hold of her left hand.

The hot tears of her eyes rolled down, and fellover his wrist bone, his eyes snapped back to hers and stayed locked there. His brows furrowed in a pain. His eyes went soft a little looking at her while he slid the ring over the heart finger. The hardened features of his face became grave. He shook his head, and pushed his ringon her hand and made her to push it into his heart finger. His jaw ticked in unfeeling while doing all this. A sob rose in her throat but she but the inside of her cheek to not bawl. He was going to regret this. Whatever it was thathe was under a misunderstanding, if and when the truthcomes out and whatever the accusations he was snarling downat her, he would regret it all quite heavily that too.

He didn’t glare down at her but calmly signed the papers one by one. Radhika’s heart almost gave out when he slid the pen towards her. She just stood there unblinkingly, feeling a wealth of pain course into her body.

Arjun chuckled beside from her.

“She is just too shy.”He said in a false explanation.

The court just grunted and went about his business sorting out other papers.

She felther now sneering fiancé grabbed ather waist and got behind her. His warmlips touched her cool skin of the ear.

“Sign the papers, my sweet.”He whispered into her ears.

The last two words, those familiar drawl of his words, the terms of endearment, said in a tauntfelt like a tight slap to her face.

When she didn’t move, his right hand slid on top of hers. He made her grab the pen, and folded her fingers on it. He tightened his hold on the pen over her hand and made
her sign the first paperforcefully.

She struggled but he caught her waist and held her still, and he gripped hard in a brittle hurting hold and made her sign all of the documents in one go. He moved away and Radhika’s hand slackened down and the pen away on the floor in a roll from her hand.

Everything is done now. Over, her mind emptied out.

“Well, good….I will submit these on Monday then. Today is Saturday and it’s already past time….so the ministry will be closed.”The man explained and moved away and out.

When he walked out of the room, she was flung and pulled hard into the hard wall of a chest.

“Why not seal the deal with a kiss, huh?”He said fiercely, and his mouth fell on hers brutally.

He kissed her with such forceful possession that, Radhika beat at his chestin protest. His hands tightened on either side of her hair, ashe tried to pull a response out of her. His lips became less demanding suddenly, and whisperfeathered on her lower lip over and over in softest of deep heated kisses. His breath all stuttering and hackedmingledwith hers.

“Kiss me back.”He whispered in a hoarse husky voice.

Radhika remained ever impassive in his arms, but a sudden rack of tears and sobs attacked herbody and held both of his shirt collar sidesand pulled hard in demand.

“Why did you do this?”She cried out indeep pain wrecking tears, and her eyes blurred too much.

She kept pulling at his shirt collar and repeated the same questionin a blistering rage and and such violence that, all of the buttons ripped away and fell on the floor.

But, nothing deter his motives, nor his body moved back while she went all agitated at him. He remained on the floor firm and umoved as a good cut marblestatus.

“As I said before, this all melodrama would not work at me anymore.”He said flatly, and caught hold of hand again.

He dragged her across a dim lit kind of a hall, Radhika did not have the energy o resist anymore. He made a walk of ten minutes and burst open an door. A large elongated room with white washed walls and with beautiful painting hung around everywhere came into view.

He pushed her in it, and moved closer to her body. His hands grabbed at her upper arms, as he pulled her up and off the floor and bent down his head more closer to his face.

“For three days you will stay in this mansion with me. For three days your father will forlook for you everywhere frantically. Finally they won’t find me too. It doesn’t take a genius to put two and two together and find out that you eloped with me. In these days thoughts would creep into people’s mind…..”He smiled a a slow one….”That, we have already done the deed many times in the process of the days…”He said lasciviously, but Radhika turned head away disgustedat the meaning behind his words.

His lips touched her earshell.

“And in three days, my sweet, our marriage document would reach the ministry and in three days we will man and wife officially and nothing could be done but people to accept the truth that I married you out of pity…. So that your name would not be creased as a fallen woman…..for the people I will be your saviour and you will bethe damselin distress….”He breathed in a whisper into her ear.

He slid his left hand forefinger under her chin and turned her face to his.

His eyes sparkled too much and the lines on his face softened.

“How is the story, my sweet?”He grappled at her nerves with those words.

He grinned abruptly at her black scowling blistering of a glare.

“That right. It’s a great story with hell of a whirl whirled drama given to the public.”He concluded in an ill humouredhumoured chuckle and moved back.

The smile left his face as he started across at her in a fierce intense look. He stayed like that for a minute and turned around to leave finally.

“I will run away from here!”She cried out vehemently, and saw his body lock in a freeze.

He didn’t turn around but his head tilted to the right side.

“Feel free…but please inform me too, as how to cross the wild thick forest and the crocodiletrovein the process while escaping….and also close the windows as the cheetah is let loose on the prowl from around here.”He flungthe words casually over his shoulder and went away walkingout of the bedroom.

Radhika gulped hard. Wild forest? Crocodile trove? Cheetah?

With wild beat of heart, she moved towards the large window, where the night’s breeze passed into the room in a cool refreshedair. She peered over and looked across up at the moonlight. It was all dark outside, except she make out large trees and opening of a forest. Radhika suddenly assumed two big yellow animal eyes staring back at her from the darkened night. She immediately bolted the fivelarge windows in atight shut. Extreme fright hit her mind and heart. What is this place? It was right in the middle of the jungle.

She paced about for more than an hour making upof ways toescape the place.

Tired out emotionally and bodily, she finally moved towards the bed and slid down on her back. She closed her eyes to let the events of the the daybe just a nightmare.

The ring on her finger and her sign in the papers. Please god, let it be a bad dream that would pass away. Her eyes drooped down in ashuttering like that, thinking and crying too many tears.

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Arjun sat on the bed with arms folded and head leaned down, he kept glaring at the ring glittering on his left hand.

He stood up paced the room in frustration. Something new and hurtinggnawed and tore at his conscience but he ignored it and moved out of the room in a set of stone.

He crossed an aisle and went into a different alley of the many antiqued decorated interior corridors.

Arjun reached the room and pushed opened the door of it slowly. It creaked but opened up in a stealth.

His eyes looked all around in a wild swipe, but finally they located and settled on a sleeping figure of her on the bed.

He walked forward and stopped beside the bed. The silky long tresses covered the pillow in a cloud of darkness. Her lips, eyebrows and the tightness around her features looked drawn up and pained. His jaw grinded looking at a red dried up blood spot over the left side of her forehead.

He muttered out a curse, and pulled at his hair. He just shook his head and went towards the reading table. He pulled out the glass drawer slowly and cautiouslyand got out a first aid box.

He moved towards the bed, slid down beside to her and opened the plastic box. He got out an antiseptic liquid, poured a few drops on the cotton swab and slightly dabbed at the little wound. Her forehead creased and she moved restless on the bed. Arjun took out a small plater sticker and removed her hair from over her face. He firmed himself against her innocent angelic face and got about the process of sticking the plaster over the cut as unfeelingly as possible. His eyes though strayed time and again to thefull redlips and the porcelain fairness of her creamy smooth and soft skin.

His eyes became lazy warm and caressing all over her slender yet curvaceous body. She had the curves in all the right places. He could feelher softness filling out of his hand when he grabbed at her waist.

Arjun got out of the bed in a flash. He felt disgusted with himself for caring and becoming a loony over her yet again. He just shook his head, and hardenedhis will against her and prowled out of the room.

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Next up Part— Debt Paid So Heavily…Sufferance Is His..

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Long chappy of DT ? forgive the toooooo many typos?
Sorrrrrryyyy wasn’t updating it for a while? Hope u likeeeeeeee this part. Really excited really really excited for u guys to read?
Plsssssss do tel how do u like da part means a lot if u do dears??

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Been bad days since Monday guys so couldn’t cm up here and talk of even update?
Will update DT2 next for sure.

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Somthng about me: I literally break into a dance anytime anywhere…cept outside though…dey will put me in an asylum if I do dancing like crazy outside haha?

U know what tune I dance on: mai nagin nagin nagin nagin dance nanchna….I literally curve my hands over my headand start hissing hahaha?

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I’m sooooooooo wiped. My eyes like too bleary. Its 2:30AM, so this night owl saying nighty night to u?

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Til den, love u, tight warmhug,keep smiling, loving and caring and ever rockingggggg my lovelies?

Credit to: kfar

243 comments

  1. oh oh oh…farha finally ua hre..u knw hre evry1 hd assumd dat ua gonna stop updatin ua stories…bt im glad to see u back again…
    love u deary keep uodatin nd doin nagin dance..

  2. Aru

    Farah…i’m getting late for the college…but still could not stop commenting…..u gave us shock with ardhika s unexpected marriage dude…lot to say..ll be here in eve…till then bye..luv u and thank u soo much for updating…..

  3. MooN

    oh Tnk You So Much Farha Finally YOur Story is Ubdated ?????
    as usual Your Story Is Awesome???
    tnk You Soooooo Muchhhhh and Take Care ya

  4. Roma

    Thaaaaank you sooooo muchhhh Farha dear for coming back. 🙂 You wouldn’t have any idea how much we all were worried about you and your family…Shukra hai Allah ka, tum wapas aa gayi…I’ll comment more after reading this update, love you loads… it’s 10pm in US. So I can read this update in peace… 🙂

  5. Preity

    Thank you so much for your DT update n finally they got married well I hoped the marriage would be at least like Radhika wanted but nevertheless at least it happened n I loved it though I know Radhika might have felt getting married that to forcefully. Well please update Nesam story. Thanks ?????

  6. Hayathi

    Hi fara dear…. nice update…. but arjun was so rude…. plzzz dr in next chapter arjun ko radhika ke bareme patha chalma chahiye dr…. radhika was innocent na…

  7. I have been waiting for our story these days… I wish u to update fast…plzzz… Story was really awesome….. Update soon yaar… Plzzz updates other DT’ s also fast… Plzzzz……tq

  8. kirti

    Thanks kfar for updating ur story…..bt pls let him know that radhika is nt at his fathers side…pls… and update soon the next part and nesam story…
    love u and missed u….

  9. Kruti

    Oh Farha thanks for such a long update..
    This chapter had so many things going on… first arjun and radhika’s little fight, then his misunderstanding and finally thier wedding 🙂
    Wow superb chapter…
    Just thinking wat will happen when Arjun comes to know that Radhika was innocent and not involved in all her father’s evil plans 🙂
    So waiting for the next update…. just hope u will be able to update soooooooooooooooooooooooooon 🙂

  10. Shub

    Farha thanks for the update. Was checking mobile day n right for update on dt. It was a treat today. Racy episode!! Really heart goes out for Radhika. Farha I am amazed at the way you hv built the character. He hate for arjun, he soft corner for him later, her dillema now…you are making us travel through your characters with ease. You are an amazing writer… Best wishes . stay blessed

  11. Roma

    Wowwww Farha drrrr, superb, mind blowing, awesome update… felt sad for radhika getting arjun’s torture due to his misunderstanding. I hate Raghav Mishra to the core. Arjun should know about rads innocence soon. Very well written and narrated with excellence. Very unexpected marriage of ardhika but I hope radhika will win arjun’s heart in upcoming chapters. ..eagerly waiting for the next update, love you loads and very very tight warm looooooong hug. …and my nature is somewhat like you too farha. I love dancing and music, don’t talk to others much but if someone come and talk then I can talk nonstop…. sorry for long comments. ..and yes I watched the ‘wildest dreams’ many times while reading dt2, loved it very very much. Thx again. ..

  12. kavita

    Thank you farha for the long update. Loved it. Pls end this misunderstanding between them. Thanks again and may God bless you always.

  13. poornimaa

    Nice track fara.loved d way radhika felt bad whn arjun would cme 2 know d truth n he would feel bad abt his rude behaviour.also lked arjun’s care 4 her atlast.can’t aait 4 d next episode.bt plz turn our arjun’s character soon.
    our radhika s hurt too much by heart cme on arjun show ur love 2 her.

  14. Kruti

    Hey Farha…when v fans keep telling you to update sooooon, I was thinking how much effort you have to put…I mean u hv to visualise the story as a whole, then those little twists and turns, then tr dialogues and feelings,tr character, then feel all of it and put them into those mesmerising words….wow ….u r doing all this so so well.
    U r really very talented.
    I just read ur ‘Beauty and the beast’ once again, it too is a beautiful story…
    Be it radhika-arjun, sam-neil, shaina, b&b, arnav-khushi or forever ….each story is so unique, characters so beautifully defined, aaaah am just in love with all ur stories 🙂
    Good wishes dear… keep writing

  15. advaita

    Hi kfar ! Thanks for updating . Was eagerly waiting for ur updates. Finally u posted it . Always write looooonnnnggg chapters like this only. Plzz clear the misunderstandings b/w ardhika and unite them . Want to see Arjun’s love for radhika. Keep writing. Take care 🙂 🙂

  16. Liya

    Luvd it soooøo much. . . No words to say dr. . .outstndng. I hate radz dad, he is an evil. Am feeling so sad for radz. . . And 1 mor thng, plz include sam n neil as a part f ardhkaz lif, lik der convrstn, angr etc. . . Pls updt bd n dt2 soon. And also updt DT regulrly as posibl. I was so hapy wen i saw this post. . . Thank u so so so much farah:-)

  17. Natasha

    Bap re itne kum samay par itne loge hazeer. Wow!
    @Kfar what to say………i mean this marrage that too unexpected. Ur really very good in writing and giving surprises. May Allah bless u.
    Here im seeing many people with beautiful names.
    @Deepthi ur names meaning is light, right?
    im seeing two people whom can be only seen on the sky but today on tu.
    @Moon im wishing u for a bright future of u. Hope u will light the whole world like moon.
    @ poornima r u bengali? In bengali poornima means full moon. Do u know that?
    @preity i always read ur comments. And ur comments r preity like ur name.
    @Shanpriya how r u? Ur name is very beautiful. Can u pls tell me its meaning?
    @seher , aru where were u all? I was finding u.
    @Kruti i always make mistake between u and kirti. Ur name is nice.

    Today i talked to many of u for the first time and believe me i enjoyed a lot. Hope u all will be keep connected with me.

  18. manha

    Farha. I think i m in sone trance and mind got frozen. No words to say. U give me such type of blasts that i not able to get words so easily. But this was beyond beyond my imagination. What radz thought of the day and what happened. Ah feeling bad for radz. No love, not her selection, no dreams r bcoming true, atlast u didnt gave a royal wedding yaar. Wedding just like that with out her consent. Ah its too hurting. Make arjun more hurt than this. Stupid arjun who told him to ask to his father abt her.

  19. Krithi

    Farha finally u updated yar. So happy to this ur update. Really nice part. But felt bad for rads. Plz make arjun realise his mistake.
    You are really talented person. Keep writing so well. All d best. If possible update ur other stories especially Dt2 nesam….. Take care…

  20. Harani

    At last my dr farha u gave this update …u know u were making me glued up to this story …even the late updates are left uninterested aftr u give these long update…
    thank u soo much …even in so much hate and hurt ardhika always rockzzzz
    Arjun will definitely feel very hard to digest the truth wen he will cme face to face…pls update the nxt part soon yaar plzzzz?

  21. manha

    Now I’m back. Forget all those crap I wrote earlier. First thanks for the long update. first I was happy that radz is back on fire. But later my happiness exhausted. Really arjun believed that stupid man,her father. I hate it. But nothing to say as arjun has already suffered a lot by others that everything seems like betraying. Make him suffer but less in the last everything will be transfered to radz. And I don’t want that to happen. For her father she is justlike a business deal. Ah it really hurts.after all the drama arjun did he is doing first aid to her. it was enough for me for now. Plz farha
    update next part asap or I will be dead by my anxiety. U r a fab writer. Plz yaar jaldi update karo. Ignore me if I am saying anything stupid. Bcoz my mind is not with me. Ur story is really affecting me a lot. I’m becoming totally mad. Finding new words to appreciate u and express my madness. Plz update it fast yaar.

  22. nisha

    Hey , farha aweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesome dear . Seems like awesome
    I just loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed it.
    God gives you such a beautiful talent with a beautiful words. YOu know I never ever cherished so much reading to any of ur story but When I read today episode You took my breadth away.

    Loved it dear.
    Ardhika chemistry awesome loved it. Marriage in a jungle.

    JUngle me mingle karane ka irada rakhtee ho. Intersting dear.

    This one is for ur exceptional story and for today’s plot Loved the jungle romance and their marriage who cares it it forcibly done marriage hone chahiye bas

    Do pyar karne wale jungle me kho gaye
    Baghee bane pagal bane divane ho gaye
    Kaho abb kya kare, kare abb kya kare
    Arre abb kya kare, ajee abb kya kare
    Do pyar karne wale jungle me kho gaye
    Baghee bane pagal bane divane ho gaye

    Darr lagta hai yar kahee na sher aa jaye
    Paake akele me na ham dono ko kha jaye
    Dekhega jo tujhko tujhpe mar jayega
    Meree jan pe woh apni bhee jan lutayega
    Tere husn ke jadu se woh bach nahee payega
    Dare ham kyon dare, bhala ham kyon dare
    Arre ham kyon dare, ajee ham kyon dare
    Do pyar karne wale jungle me kho gaye
    Baghee bane pagal bane divane ho gaye

    Hamne suna toh par purane log kehte hain
    Aise ghane jungle me kale bhut rehate hain
    Tere naino se agar woh naino ko ladayega
    Tir nigahon ka usake dil me gadh jayega
    Tere ishk ka bhut bhuto pe chadh jayega
    Galey milke galey chale aasheek chale
    Chale milke chale divane ham chale

    Do pyar karne wale jungle me kho gaye
    Baghee bane pagal bane divane ho gaye
    Kaho abb kya kare, kare abb kya kare
    Arre abb kya kare, ajee abb kya kare
    Do pyar karne wale jungle me kho gaye
    Ek doosre ke pyar me divane ho gaye

    Luv u farha luv u all my deareeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees.

    Lots of luv for all of u.
    s

    • Roma

      Soooooooo sweet of you nisha, marvellous song… you turned all my sadness (due to forcefully marriage) into wide smile.. 🙂 . Finally our ardhika are married now. 🙂 ..who cares if it’s forcibly. ..keep it up buddyyy and take care, love you loads 🙂

    • manha

      I agree with u nisha, ardhika ki marriage that’s all we want. What will happen next is another story. Kya song hi. Jungle me mingle. Ha-ha. Nice.

  23. Ameena

    Thanqu sooooo much for this long update….awesome chapter….eagerly waiting for next chapter….plzzz update soon…love u soo much..
    One lovee?

  24. haya

    Superb….

    Long update…..
    All DT as are wonderful and don’t know how to rank them…can’t compare with each other… Want to read all….
    Don’t worry abt the lengthy updates…you can write even more…..we are ready to read it….
    Really addicted to your story.
    Waiting for each and every DTs and the upcoming ones also….
    I mean you said that you will start writing about rohan and gayathri too….
    Raghav mishra is an impossible man…

    Coming to you kfar….
    I like to call you kfar bcoz its a unique name….it suits you….coz u r unique…
    Was bit worried since last update that you will come back or not….
    I thought of writing a comment then I thought you need some time and I was sure that you will not let us down….
    You will not leave us in the middle of nowhere…..
    And you came back…..
    You are talented writer…..
    Everyone might have a story to tell….
    But it depends on how its been told….the way it is presented….
    And you have got everything story,how to tell and the way of presenting is awesome……
    Keep going…..
    Give us a chance to say everyone in future that ‘we read her story first..
    We used to comment her….and she read us and wrote back too….’
    We want to say it proudly…..

    Plsss take care of yourself…. Have sound sleep.,.
    May Almighty shower all his good blessings upon you

  25. nandhini

    Farha
    Just awesome
    I felt bad that arjun turns bad to rads
    But last Part is good and proved arjun can’t halt his love for rads
    Arjun regret himself when he knows the truth
    Big punch to raghav Mishra hell dad
    Poor radhika lost the dream of her marriage
    Can’t stop imagining arjun mouth filled chocolate it’s totally funny
    Please reveal truth to arjun

    Update bb soon and waiting for very long time

  26. aaisha

    Please update BILLIONAIRE BANKER AND THE CHIRPY BEAUTY!
    Just waiting for its update! Life seems incomplete without reading your NeSam story!
    Totally addicted to it!! Please give a dose of its update as I would probably die in its wait!!
    No need to appreciate your talent in words I guess! The number of comments on your update are fair enough to make you realise how much we all love your talent and your stories!
    It has that magic which forced silent readers like us to comment over your posts and to appreciate your work as you are incredible girl!!

    Love you!!
    A tight hug and a BIG thanks!!
    Live long and keep writing long long updates for us ?

  27. daizy

    Hii farha…..finally u came back…..thankz for the long update…..
    Don’t know wat to say about this episode….first i was glad to see ur update….then when i started reading…….i liked radhika & arjun’s meeting at his office….she was worried about him and went to just check on if he was fine….good one…..also liked arjun’s concern when she said ”plz don’t call my father.you don’t know wat will happen”…yaar plzz arjun dear go and find out why she is so scared….
    And this “raghav mishra”.. just hate him…and how could arjun believe such a man..he knows him very well….
    And a new mystery man involved with him….i hope he is not someone who is close to arjun….
    farha….dear plzz plzz….make arjun realize soon dat he is wrong in his opinion about radz…he should suffer for hurting her like this….
    And “the marriage part”…such an unexpected marriage…no girl would dream about marrying in such a way….i was literally feeling like crying reading today’s episode….but finally was little relaxed reading last part when he came to do first aid to radz…..
    plzzz plzz plzz farha….clear out the misunderstandings between them….i just luv this couple so much dat i don’t like hating them each other…..
    now i can’t wait more for next part….plzz update next part as soon as possible…..
    And just wanna tell…ur all stories are awesome….but among all stories and DT series i love this one d most….love u a loads….

  28. Ameena

    Farha plzzz update the next chapter today…..plzz if u have time then update it now….eagerly waiting for it yaar…..plzzzz…..love u sooo much….
    One lovee?

  29. Manisha

    Farha…… We really really luv ur way of storywritting…. I know it take a lot of time to visualise all thia but still i request u to update your stories regularly within 1-2 days…. It will be so nice of u if u could do it

  30. abbz

    hey evry1!!!!!!!! ur strory s is totally worth much more than d wait ….. lookin forwaed 2 ur next update ……

  31. Samiha

    Hey everyone! My exam is ongoing and the past ones went well. Please pray for me everyone that the upcoming ones also gets past well. Today I finished my revision a little earlier, so made it here with all of you.

    @Farha: Didn’t get time to read your story but I can bet that it’s the best. One day I peaked in your DT-2 and fell in love either the character ‘Dev’… He is just soo cute! Please write ‘If Only’ by the third week of November(my exam’s gonna end then)…

    @all other friends: Will read all your stories once my exams get over. And all the newcomer friends, will chat with you guys whole day long…:p

    @Roma: Read one of your comments and started feeling a little curious about you, liked your appreciative and gratitudel attitude. Will talk to you too later buddy…

    No more time today, it’s already 10:35 now and I got to get to bed by 11. Or else my mom will become furious… Well, goodbye then and goodnight… ‘Sleep tight, don’t let the bedbugs bite!’

    • Roma

      Hi Samiha dear, thx for noticing me. I also want to talk to you. Very best wishes from me for your exams, work hard and get awesome grades. I’ll definitely pray for you my friend, always keep in touch. I’m blessed to be in this friendship. Love you loads all my deariiiiiiieeess take care.. 🙂

  32. Dj

    Hi Farah please update FAA waiting for it from longtime and also nesam …….

    Atleast update any one series once in 2 days……..regularly………it’s a request………

  33. Woooo thanx yaar at last update chesavu !! Hey jus love u farah !!!

    Hey pls yaar jaldi nxt chap lik na dear !!

    Will b waiting !!
    Do u remember me ???

  34. omg faraha hw long u make us wait for DT…this part is jst awesome
    …arjun ka behavior bahot hurt huwa..litterlly tears roll down frm my eyes..bichari radhika kitana suffer kar rahi hai yarrr…feeling really pitty on her…pls uodate ths story soon m excited to read wht will happen nxt..3 days me aur kya honga…arjun ko bata chalega ki rads is innocent.. omg cant wait pllllzzzz di update it yarr..love u….muhhhaa dear…

  35. roshini

    Wow..! what an update…u are very good. you should seriously think of writing a book…Please dont make us wait for long…dying to read the next chapter

  36. jade

    Fantastic. Just Fantastic. I’ve been waiting for this update for like forever. Reading this was the first thing i did after waking up this morning. “Let the events of the day be just a nightmare.” This line made me cry.. you are awesome. Loved it. Loved it. Loved it. First Arjun created a hell of a drama and then he came to see her in the room.. how sweet. All the scenes and and dialoges were marvellous. Waiting for the moment when Arjun will get to know the truth and how he’ll feel knowing that he hurt Radhika to no extent when it wasn’t her fault at all. But why the hell he believed that old cunt?? Anyways.. please update the story soon.. eagerly waiting..
    Loads of love.. kfar.. YOU ARE AWESOME. :-* :-*

  37. Aru

    Gud morning dearies..:*:*
    i read all the comments just now…just as farah is a gud writer,there r many good commenters here….i agree with all of u…..hate that raghav mishra…he dont deserve to be the father of 3 gem like girls…..i don know abt gayathri,but he dont care for the future of radhika and shaina ……and the most worst thing is arjun believes that jerk….
    I imagined arjun having mouth full pf chocolates….and his feeling that “it was easy to make her hate me”……
    Everything was nicè before the misunderstanding….but aftr that he was soooo rude….
    Last part was nice where arjun does first aid…….
    Luv u farah……i pray god to give u more leisure time to come here………

    @ samiha all the best dear…….will pray for u dude…
    Your exms ll end in november,mine will start on Decembe.i hope i could chat with u too….
    @nathasha,i’m here dear…..thanks for remembering me dear…..even in south we call full moon day as poornima dear….
    Luv u all……SORRY for long comment..Have a gud day every one

  38. aastha

    tanks 4 te long update….hope u ‘ll update sooooooooooooon………u cn mke urupdates as looooooooooog as u waaaaaaaaaaant.we r sure 2 read it.

    wen ‘ll arjun realize tat rads was nt involvd n te plan????????????????poor rads……..she suffers a lot frm hr father n nw frm arjun…………..i felt soooooooo sad 4 hr……

    who s te guy tat wantd a revnge n arjun???????????will sams probl wth rads b ovr wen she cms 2 know f tis n console hr?????????????????tat wud strenten hr 2 face all te consequnces……………

  39. Thena

    Hey my kfar dearyyyyy, just lovd tis update yaar. My God, i went crazyyyyy aftr getting tis part. May b, 10 times r mor than tat, i wud hv read this update. DT is the most favourite to me n this part, aaahhhhh!!!!!! u took away my breath. Hw beautifully, the scene variations wer given!!!!!

    Radz luvs arjun madly here na. Cos of tat she rushed straight to his house aftr heard of his acci n then drove straight to his offi the nxt mor bt at last, she ws just trapped. n arj’ luv fr her is more deeper than tat of hr fr him. Marvellous presentation. Evn aftr knowing tat she ws behind hr fathr, he cudnt resist himself frm attending hr wound n admiring hr innocence. Bt one thing, u r gonna stop my breath in a whole aftr arj gets to know rads ws reallyyyyyyy innocent. Oh!!!!! Hw Arjun ll show his love in his unique style. You ll just rocccccckkkkkkk it baby.

    n last bt nt least, wat a selection of thumbnail fr tis part. Ohhhhhhhh!!!!!!! Arj looks daggers at innocently detrmined his girl. Tight hugggggggggg to u my girl.

  40. manha

    Farha u r just really awesome. Kya likhti ho tum. Har ek scene jaise chal raha , with all descriptions,with all emotions. O baarish ki boond wala scene kya tha woh. really superb. Aur arjun chocolate cake ke saath, tum to superb ho yaar. mashaallah. Kisi ki najar na lage. Bas aise hi likhti rahna aur chajati rahna. Dua hi ke tumhare saare khwaab pure ho jaye. Ameen. Love u. Bas ab ke liye itna hi. Yaad aaye to phir likhungi. Bura mat maanna. Jaldi update karo next chap.plz

  41. manha

    Nisha kya tum ek aur song de sakti ho. When radz went to arjun’s office and he was seeing het from his room. I think that seen need a song yaar. Farha tumhi koi song suggest karo naa.

  42. nisha

    Hey manha dear try to imagine the song when she come to arjun office and all the humiliation starts with her along with the secretary and when arjun hold her hand and snatch her to his cabin. And the convo between the two that maximise the atmosphere making so hot.

    So when she enter in the office her secretary told her to wait. wait and wait In between when she heard the convo of the secretary and her eyes start teared but she is trying to hide it and then this song plays in bg .

    This song has both the male and female lyrics and driven both the emotions of the two . They both know that they starting love each other but no nobody between the two excepting this truth.

    Enjoy it my dearieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees.

    Ishq Ka Dard Hai Dard Hai Ishq Ka
    Ishq Ka Dard Hai Dard Hai Ishq Ka
    Ishq Ka Dard Hai Dard Hai Ishq Ka
    Ishq Ka Dard Hai Dard Hai Ishq Ka
    Meri Duniya Mein Aake Mat Jaa Mat Jaa Kahin Mat Jaa
    Meri Duniya Mein Aake Mat Jaa Mat Jaa Kahin Mat Jaa
    Meri Duniya Mein Aake Mat Jaa Mat Jaa Kahin Mat Jaa

    Kya Maine Pa Liya Hai Kya Maine Kho Diya Hai
    Shayad Yeh Soch Kar Hi Dil Aaj Ro Diya Hai
    Tu Hi To Tha Mera Apna Kaise Phir Yeh Toota Sapna
    To Jo Mil Ke Kho Jaayega Jeena Mushkil Ho Jaayega
    Meri Duniya Mein Aake Mat Jaa Mat Jaa Kahin Mat Jaa
    Ishq Ka Dard Hai Dard Hai Ishq Ka
    Ishq Ka Dard Hai Dard Hai Ishq Ka
    Ishq Ka Dard Hai Dard Hai Ishq Ka
    Ishq Ka Dard Hai Dard Hai Ishq Ka
    Ishq Ka Dard Hai Dard Hai Ishq Ka
    Ishq Ka Dard Hai Dard Hai Ishq Ka

    Yeh Ishq Ki Hai Raah Mein Jin Pe Chal Raha Hoon
    Is Aag Mein Na Jaane Kab Se Main Jal Raha Hoon
    Main To Hoon Tera Deewana Tune Mujhko Na Pehchaana
    Dilbar Mere Aisa Na Kar Chahat Mein Tu Ruswa Na Kar
    Meri Duniya Mein Aake Mat Jaa Mat Jaa Kahin Mat Jaa
    Meri Duniya Mein Aake Mat Jaa Mat Jaa Mat Jaa
    Meri Duniya Mein Aake Mat Jaa Mat Jaa Kahin Mat Jaa
    Meri Duniya Mein Aake Mat Jaa Mat Jaa Kahin Mat Jaa
    Ishq Ka Dard Hai Dard Hai Ishq Ka
    Ishq Ka Dard Hai Dard Hai Ishq Ka
    Ishq Ka Dard Hai Dard Hai Ishq Ka
    Ishq Ka Dard Hai Dard Hai Ishq Ka
    Ishq Ka Dard Hai Dard Hai Ishq Ka
    Ishq Ka Dard Hai Dard Hai Ishq Ka

    If not remember this song till now then enjoy the video also.

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LFauzlgvtaE
    ishq paagal hai dard hai ishq ka video for my lovieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees.

    Luv u farha keep writing this one and also waiting for Dt2 Update it as u are getting time dear.

    NOt going to force u at all. Coz know already how much difficult to get the time for writing a story. Luv u dear. Waiting for the part.

  43. nisha

    Hey nemi, hello dear , how r u, Seriously channel pe serials kii kami ho hi gayee hai dear.

    this is the place to find our own manmarziyaan .

    See yaahan pe apnel lovieeeeeeeeeeeeees ke sath time spend karo ya tv ke saath time spend karo . Bath to ek hi hai.

    Time to dono hi jagah equally kharch hota hai. So better here we are finding our mann ki shanti. NO harm in it . Is it.????????????

  44. nemi

    nisha seriously this is not man ki shakti .this is ur soch.is me jo actors and actress thi wo aage bad gaye hai

    • Isha

      @Nemi-whoever you are..miss medical student?Without appreciating her stories,you are spreading negativity here..you cracked the entrance right?then you should have the right mind to understand that life is not only about WORKING! Get a life girl! Mind your own business!

      And Farha you are a gem..continue writing..after a hard day at college,i love winding up after reading your fanfictions! Kisses!

  45. nisha

    Hey nemi, interesting soch yaar, U are right wo log aage bad gaye hai,

    An intelectuall thinking dear Respect ur thoughts totally by heart.

    Whats ur manmarziyaan dear. Share it with us . We may read all that stuff what u shouldn’t like but I really want to know what ur manmarziyaan. May be we start liking that .

    Dear Friend Luv ur thoughts And respect it fully

  46. ritu

    Sorry nemi I m a silent reader here and I don’t agree did ur words……. When u will go through d story then u will feel what crap r they showing us on d TV.
    Its just that when we have better option then why to waste time on TV……..
    Also we need to appreciate these guys that they have such imagination that they r making us crazy for their story………..
    For all fanfiction writer never stop writing.…………
    nemi before asking them 2 stop writing 1st check their stories how different r they from each other…… Each has it’s own feel and emotions……….…
    Sorry nemi if I my words are hurting u, but please don’t ask them 2 stop. Also u Hv option if don’t like it don’t visit this page and watch ur fvt serial………….

  47. Arrjay

    hey Farha….. thank you for the beautiful update…. waiting badly for ur update….. @kfar, u please continue writing ur stories and updates, i am used to ur stories and i wish u never stop writing…… there will lot of criticism, but also there is lot of appreciation….. we love ur stories and u as well….

    Waiting badly for DT2… Nesam story……. mmmmmuuuaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh………………. love u sweetie….

  48. nandhini

    Hello nemi
    I don’t know who you are but your thoughts has to think in different angle
    Yes it is not about the end serial and characters alone
    Because we friends are interacted only because of manmarzian.
    This manmarzian has created many writers here .
    This is very good opportunity for people like kfar,thena,kirti,Tanya
    Etc
    Who has passion of writing ,will proceed life towards their dream
    So it is amazing platform for writer to know the different reviews of audience
    So if you don’t like the opportunity for them ,don’t discourage like that yaar
    Moreover here all are friends and motivates,encourages everyone .
    This is another social media which people of one kind joined and inspire,admire the writing skill of fellow friends

    Everyone has different taste and always want anyone not comment on it

  49. ritu

    All the manmarIyan writers its very bad yaar no fan fiction on manmarziyan yesterday. Please make it fast…

  50. nisha

    Hey nemi, keh do ki tum humse dosti karogeeeee.

    AAkhir chai ke liye jaise toast hota hai waise har ek friend zarooree hota hai.

    Respect ur thoughts and want to know more what u like what’s ur liking .

    Aakhir u also a part of TU(telly update page) a friend dear. Share nahi karogee apni pasand.

  51. kavita

    Nemi if you don’t like to read the story then don’t but atleast don’t comment on others hardwork

  52. kavita

    And by the way she is not continuing the story she has written a new one with just the name of the characters

  53. nisha

    Hey my lovieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees,. ritu arrjay nandhini, kavita

    even I am little heart by her words . Coz I yesterday start writing a story on even manmarziyaan and nemi think dat even i am a stupid.

    But I like her to saying that Yes I am a stupid in her or his perception . I respect her thinking Coz I know so many people near by me who have many reasons to not like manmarziyaan at all.

    They are practical , close to reality , and Really having different thinking with us . But they are also good courageous ,

    Aakhir kuch to unhe bhi pasand hoga . Nafratoon me hi unki manmarziyaan chupi hai .

    I want to know nemi liking coz want to know what makes him or her feel hurt and make him or her forcibly come here and give us suggestion to stop this .

    I want to know the reason of hatred .

    Guys each and every friend important hota hai.

    Instead of saying bitter things to him or her. Trying to be friend of him or her So that we get to know why his or her thinking made this perception about the serial characters and

    check this thing i find not bad that each and every character in reality goes so far to their new lives.

    But kya kare hum pasand hi itna karte hai unko aakhir issi ka naam to fan hai naa yaaron.

    Hey my dearieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees for all of u nemi, kavita , ritu, arrjay, and all my tu friends.

    Remember we are here to spread love friendship not bitter memorieeeeeeeeeeeees. mY lovieeeeeeeeeeees U all are my heart and I am here to spread love.

    doesn’t see anyone in hurt condition so don’t feel affected by nemi comments instead of making him or her ur dushman make himor her a dearest friend of urs.

    Chai ke Liye jaise toast hota hai–Vaise har ek friend zaroori hota hai
    Aise har ek friend zaroori hota hai

    Koi subah paanch baje neend se jagaye

    Koi raat ko teen baje jaan bachaye

    Ek teri kadki mein sharing kare

    Aur Ek tere budget mein sneak in kare

    Koi nature se guest koi host hota hai

    Par har ek friend zaroori hota hai

    “”Ek ghadi ghadi kaam aaye par kabhi kabhi call kare

    Ek kabhi kabhi kaam aaye aur ghadi ghadi call kare””

    Gossip ka koi ghoomta phirta satellite

    Koi sath rahe toh kar de sab alright

    Koi effortless koi forced hota hai

    Lekin har ek friend zaroori hota hai

    Chat Room friend koi classroom friend

    Koi bike pe race wala vroom vroom friend

    Shopping mall wala shopping friend

    Koi Exam hall wala copying friend

    Movie buddy groovy buddy

    Hi buddy–Bye buddy —-Joke buddy Poke buddy
    Gaana Buddy Shaana buddy —Chaddi Buddy Yaar Buddy
    Kutte –kamine—
    Everybody—Sab buddy
    A to Z

    Gin din ke naam bheja Roast hota hai

    Par har ek friend zaroori hota hai

    Lekin har ek friend zaroori hota hai

    luv u all luv u all my loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees

    • manha

      Nisha my deary I agree with u totally. We r here to spread love and make friends. Jaroori nahi ke hame jo pasand ho dusron ko bhi pasand ho. And yes har ek friend jaroori hota hi.

      Tum story stop karbe ki socho bhi mat. Yahaan ek dost intezaar kar rahi hi yaad rakhna darling.

    • hyy nisha..uua such a sweetheart u hndld d situation vry wll instd of bein voilent u hndld wth ease…
      nd evn i agree wth u dea evry1 hv their own manmarziyaan…
      thy hv right to sy their pov to us..
      n i really respct u fr ua such a sweetheart behaviour…
      keep it up dude…
      n about nemi,,,i dnt wanna sy cz u xplnd hr very well….
      love u…tke cre

  54. Sapna

    Can’t W8 2 read d next update….
    Diz 1 ws sooo damn amazing and awesome….
    Plzzzz…. plzzzz…. plzzzz. ….. continue soon….

  55. manha

    Nisha luv u so much. Thank u for the song. U r really too good.
    Hi nemi, here we don’t know eachother we haven’t seen them at all. Who r they, what they do. But we r frnz. And the link which connects is manmarziyan. So we love it, and the feeling too. I agree with u that the actors hav moved on and they shouldmove on bcoz there is so much for them. And who told u that we didn’t move on. Ofcourse we moved on but with a diff perspective than urs. Some r studying, some r doing job, some r preparing for exams, every one has their life yaar. Some r writing their stories and we love them and their stories. So we r here to support them and their stories makes us happy. So i think u shouln’t hav any problem with it.

    We loved the show so much that we want to live that manmarziyan forever. I hope u understand.
    Like nisha said u can tell us ur wishes too and we can be frnz.

  56. Saran

    Nemi if u don’t like pls don’t visit and comment on this page…. Farha and all writer pls continue ur stories don’t stop writing….

  57. Natasha

    A agree with u nisha. Everyone has their own of thinking. We should befriend with nemi.
    So nemi share ur thoughts we r there for u. At least not these story written by me, kfar,thena,nisha,kirti but for me. Okay?
    according to u im a stupid right? I dont mind because stupid r the one who helps others without thinking about selfishness.
    So nemi will u be my friend?

    • manha

      Ah natasha what a def for stupid u gave yaar. Heart touching. Actually I want to ask one ques. Are we friends? Waiting for ur update yaar. Update it fast. If u r a stupid then I am ur stupid frnd. Cant do anything.

      • Natasha

        I want to give u a punch. Dont u realise that we r friends even after commenting and talking to each other since so many days. Of course we r very good friends.

    • manha

      thanks for the punch yaar. i sometimes need it. but u didnt reply to me yesterday in our page after i wrote that big explanation of or friendship yaar. then what to think.

  58. nisha

    Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh nemi. Ab to itni saree friendship request aa gayee hai. You are getting lots of love here.

    Chalo chalo ab to friendship kar hi lo.

    Well I am a stupid person . I am happy in my stupydities and will try always to make my friends happier and always smiling .
    MUjhse dosti karoge????????

    Love u dearieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees also my friends naty, manha, ritu sapna, saran (koi baat nahi saran let him or her come hum use bhi apna dost banaayenge or bitterness ko dur bhagaayengee just like andhere ko roshni se hi mitaya jaaa sakta hai my loveeeee being his or her friends and shower your love to him or her and spread love and friendship)

    love u all my lovieeeeeeeeeeeeees

  59. nisha

    Hey nemi, my deareeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees friend .

    This one is for u .

    Nafraton mein mili tum hume is tarah kaisee ye manmarziyaaan.

    Teri baaton me hai ajab sa nasha badli ye manmarziyaan .

    Ab to hum tumhe apna friend bana ke hi chodenge Luv u dear. Lots of hugs for u . Come here . And get soooooooooooooooooooooo much love from all of us.

    • manha

      Are yaar nisha uske piche pad gayi ho tum. O dar jayegi aur kabhi nahi aayegi. Ek dinme itne bhi high dose mat do yaar. Lagtahi use pata nahi tha ke hum manmarziyan ke liye kitne pagal hi. Isliye usne aisa kaha.

    • manha

      nemi i agree with u that time is precious. we have to make gud use of it. but after the busy schedules of our life and all the deep thoughts abt future. we can come here, read give our opinions , share our feelings it is good na. after all no one will tell u anything except their love.
      if u dont agree with me. no worries dear. as i said everyone is diff and has diff opinions.

      so we hav a doctor here. ah thats cool.

  60. Aru

    Ohhh my dear friendz…nisha,manha,rithu,nats….u r all vry kind hearted…i’m very proud to have friends like u all (hope i’m ur friend) and yes,i too agree with u all.just as the actors moved on,we are also moved in our individual lives…..this is a social place where we find many friends,their feelings,their thoughts….this is giving us happiness…and its a best place for gifted writers.nemi….where did u go dear…u hve got so many friends…
    Nisha,what u r doing in ur life dear..i’m impressed by your thoughts….luv u allllllllllll
    i want manmarziyan forever…..

  61. nisha

    Hey nemi, my love when I say I want to be ur friend I said it by heart. Dear.

    Don’t ever think to hurt u at all. I respect ur opinion. Hazaaro me ek aisaa sachaii dikhaane wale dost achaa lagtaa hai.

    Luv uu dear . Come at my page also. Loved to heart what u felt negative positive neutral worse gaaliyaa jo chaahe do chalegaa .Dost ho kuch bhi kaho right hai tumhaara. Only on Naadan dil ki manmarziyaan.

    Always aise hi rehnaa Sach kehne ke liye himmat lagti hai. Respect to u dear. Baat karti raha karo achaa lagta hai.

    Tell me what ur favourite song Waise har ek friend zaroori hota hai.

  62. nisha

    And don’t stop commenting at all. Love u by heart Din banaa diyaa . Itni lambi chat kabhi nahi karee kisi se nahi .

    Sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo miuch love to u .

  63. nisha

    Aru Always loving u dear. Once a friend always a friend . Friend ki zabaan hai , Kabhi bhi aaoo khaali haath nahi bhejenge bhar bhar ke pyaar hi denge.

    Hey nemi a serious talk in all of this yes , we all r working studying and doing work in all our lives . But instead of watching tv we enjoy coming here not for ardhika nesam and soon.

    But to live our own manmarziyaan. Bataoo mann se kahin bhi kisi bhi social networking site pe itna warm welcome milegaa that to when we even didn’t know u at all.

    But respect ur caring behaviour towards ur friends I am trying to focuss more on my work dear for ur respect and sake my loving caring dearieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees friend nemi. Loved ur name love u soooooooooooooooooooooo much .

    Kabhi saath math chodnaa aatee rehnaa miltee rehanaa achaa lagtaa hai.

    • manha

      kya yaar nisha aaj bahut ache mood me lag rahi ho. sab ko dialogue maar rahi ho. sach me i want to thank nemi aaj uski wajah se lambi chat huyi aur naye dost mile.

    • manha

      kya yaar nisha, nemi kaise aayegi tumhare page par jab tumne update hi nahi kiya. kyun sataa rahi ho.
      update karo naa jaldi.

  64. Ameena

    Hi guyzzzz…HOW R U ALL???…i was planning to write a long comment but i was veryyy busy in bio project….finally done with it…feeling so much better now?☺..

    @kfar ur story is best story ever …actually waiting for this chapter from the time i waz born…nd waiting for next chapter eagerly….plzzz try to update soon dear….from yesterday no one posted their story so i read this chapter again….so emotional episode(especially the last part)…i really want to know arjun’s feelings when he finds out that radhika is innocent….waiting for this part eagerly….love u from all my heart dear…i pray from god that he fulfils all ur wishes….nd u be veryy successful in ur life…my wishes r alwayzzz with u dear…I’m soo glad that u r doing sooo much for us…love u ??..

    @nisha–hi dear, how r u??…ur song is sooo AWESOME…loved it…nd lots love to u dear…ur story is FABULOUS…just like u…nisha plzz update it soon…eagerly waiting yaar…

    @nemi- hi dear! How r u??….well i think every1 have different opinions abt things….nd I’m not against ur opinion….but i also agree with nisha that this is the place where most manmarziyan fans find peace nd love…hope understand our feelings dear…love u from all my heart..??

    @Thena–hi dear! How r u???…plzz update ur plc episode soon…I’m really excited for it since the last episode….nd today my busines studies teacher was explaining us about private limited company (plc)…nd then suddenly thought post love confession nd i also thought that ur plc is sooo much better than this stupid private limited company ???…love u from all my heart..??..

    @Samiha–Hi dear! How r u??…GOOD LUCK!!for ur exams…i will pray for u dear…come here asap dear..love h from all my heart??

    @Natasha–Hi dear! How r u??…plzz update ur fabulous story soon…really missing it..how is everything college??..love u from all my heart??

    @Manha–Hi dear! How r u??..i think our thoughts for this fabulous story are very similar to mine…love u from all my heart??

    I’m soo glad that new people r comming here nd commenting on FABULOUS stories written by our FABULOUS writers…love u all sooo much…bye every1…take care..love u all from my heart??
    One lovee?

  65. nemi

    actually i m worried about ur tym ki isi tym tum log pad loge to hamari country me kitne tallend log ho jayege

    • Roma

      Hi nemi, life bahut chhoti hai. Jab bhi mauka mile tab apne dil ki sunna chahiye, phir kahan itne achhe dost milenge… tumhara dil chahe toh humse dosti kar sakti ho. Love you dear

  66. kavita

    Hey nemi I am a CA student and even we have to study very hard. I used to like reading books but after I joined CA I don’t get any time. So here at this page I find solace and peace and do my manmarzian . I am sorry that I was rude earlier. And will you be my friend??

    • Krithi

      Hey kavita I am also doing the same course. And u r right. After hard studies coming to this page reduce all stress. And feel really happy and good.

  67. Krithi

    Hey everyone I think today was a good day. All were chating more than usual. Thanks to nemi.
    My exams will start this Sunday. And after my studies when I came to this page and saw long chats. Felt really good seeing these comments. You guys are true frnds. By the way Nisha nice song.
    And want to ask u guys can I too be ur frnd??

    • manha

      Krithi u r always welcome girl. So tdy one more frnd added. When r ur exams going to be complted. Come we will chat for long time. Study hard and wish u good grades. All the best for exams.

      • Krithi

        Thâñk u Manha. My exams will be finished by 21st of this month. But will try to visit during relaxing times.
        Farha plz update nxt part soon. May be before Saturday…..

  68. Natasha

    Today im seeing many new ones.

    Like as nemi, ritu, sapna, saran. Hi guys im natasha. Welcome to our group. Im inviting u to my page where is heart there love. Hope u will like it.

    @Nemi hello how r u? If u get time u can come to my page its where is heart there is life. Its medical based story. Main charecters name is after the mmz charecters but story is fully different. As u a medical student i hope u will like it.

    @Ameena im fine. Everything is good in college.

  69. ritu

    Hey nemi I HV completed my pg course in mjmc and preparing for competitive xam……… Mainly iis its Indian information service…….. So for all of us here TV is like why 2 waste time when such interesting episode are here & lots of people 2 make fnds, though I m a silent reader nemi be my fnd. Luv u n tight hug dears……

    • manha

      Oh ritu . I didnt know abt the exam yaar. See we r not only getting stories we r getting GK too. Dont be a silent reader dear. Come often . See whos telling that. I was a silent reader since the start of the show. But then realized and now iam here. All the best for the exam dear.

  70. Dj

    FARAH

    ***************************************
    UPDATE DT 2 & FAA
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    WAITING FOR IT SINCE LONG
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  71. Roma

    Hi deariiiiiiieeess, how are you all. I’m the biggest fan of all these stories and the all new talented writers…I saw nemi’s comments and all the replies from my deariiiiiiieeess…I just want to tell nemi that the life is very busy and it’s not easy to be working all the time. We all need some rest and some time for ourselves…and in that personal time if some of the talented friends write their thoughts and we appreciate that and feel relaxed after reading these stories, mind gets fresh and also takes you to the imagenary world of these stories. This refreshment give us strength to deal with everyday’s tough life.
    Itni busy aur mushkil life mein agar koi Hume thodi si khushi, pyaar and attention de raha hai toh it’s the best thing in this selfish world.
    I love my all deariiiiiiieeess friends and also all the talented writers.
    You all gave me so much love and attention which I always wanted. …
    Love you loads my deariiiiiiieeess and very very tight warm hug to all of youuuuuuuuu, muaaaaahhhhhh

    • Roma

      Hi nemi, I’m one more of the stupid friend, iss duniya mein sab movies, drama aur novels ke writers apne Mann se hi Kahani likhte hain. Tumhe kabhi time mile toh sirf ek part padh kar dekhna tum TV dekhna bhool jaaogi, hamari tarah. Hum sab time Barbaad nahi kar rahe, par free time ka sahi istemal (use) kar rahe hai. Love u soooooooo much nemi. Tum apne free time mein kya karti ho?

    • Isha

      @Nemi- And you are taking all of our parent’s name?!!! One song is coming to my mind “HATERS GONNA HATE HATE HATE”!

  72. nemi

    plz Gaye’s last bar samjha rhi hu band karo ye sab .and ya aru mujhe lagta hai tum jaise log hi jhuti tariph karke force karte hai ki aur likho .plz bad karo ye sab

    • manha

      Nemi kyun lagta hi tumhe ke ham time waste kar rahe hi. Agar koi apne dil ki sun raha hi aur kuch karna chahta hi to hume encourage karna chahiye. I wish any of the girls who r writing stories may just stary write books and novels in future. Atleast v hav to encourage their talent yaar. Not to discourage them. Here v r not going mad over any old serial. These girls r writing their own stories but the characters r same.

    • manha

      If u hav time plz read their stories. They r really good writers. As i already told u no one is wasting their time. If u can get some happiness from these things it is not a bad thing dear. I am not saying u r wrong. But everything cannot be happen the way v think.

  73. ritu

    Thanx nemi for calling us stupid again n again……………….. Luv u loads……….. Will u b my fnd……………….

  74. Aadil

    Hi to every talented writer in this fan fiction. .. im a silent reader and a big fan of ur stories… pls update drawn together asap.. cant wait for it.. i have read ur update 3times already… i no it will be tiring for u but i put forth as a humble request… thank u for all the captivating storylines… its ao refreshing.. pls update sn..

  75. khushi

    Hiii kfar I just love to read ff. I eagerly waits for your ff..plz don’t think abt descriminatin …their will many hurdles in the way we should over come ..their r many who love ur ff.plz update nxt episode soon.I know it’s nt easy to write after busy schedule..bt u write…thanks.plz update soon yaar??…..waiting……..

  76. Aru

    Hii nemi….Yeah,i am a bigg stupid and there’s no limit for my stupidity….but i respect my parent’s and my friends…..

    whenever i have praised my friends…its by heart..ese joote tharif math karo..kyu ki meine dill se likha hii…

    I dont want to give u any explanation….still i’m doing it…because i have considered u too as my friend…

    Being a friend i respect your concern and assure u that we will give our best in our streams and also gud citizens…

    And btw,i’m doing engineering dear…..5th sem,electrical stream…for now preparing for internals…

    We respect your advice…..please do understand our thoughts

  77. Aru

    Hii nemi….Yeah,i am a bigg stupid and there’s no limit for my stupidity….but i respect my parent’s and my friends…..

    whenever i have praised my friends…its by heart..ese joote tharif math kaho..kyu ki meine dill se likha hii…

    I dont want to give u any explanation….still i’m doing it…because i have considered u too as my friend…

    Being a friend i respect your concern and assure u that we will give our best in our streams and also gud citizens…

    And btw,i’m doing engineering dear…..5th sem,electrical stream…for now preparing for internals…

    We respect your advice…..please do understand our thoughts

    • Manha

      Hi aru. U r right yaar. We r stupid and hav no end for our stupidity. Hehehe. Prepare well for ur exams. All the best.

    • Roma

      Me too, I’m an engineer in USA, very busy with work and family life. In my free time, I always find peace and love here with all my deariiiiiiieeess. ..love you all, muaaaaahhhhhh

  78. manha

    Farha kahaan ho tum. Hope everything is fine. Update ke liye intezaar kar rahe sab. Plz try to update fast. Plz. Plz. :-):-):-)

  79. nisha

    Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh nemi, my friend my lovieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee,
    mereeee wellwisher.

    I can’t read any story nor commented any of the story today . But can’t resist tumse baat karnee thii.

    Come talk with me dear. Jaisaa tumne kaha tha Kuch nahi padaa . Kaam hi kaam kiyaa.

    Chalo chalo ab to baatein karo.

    Pura din kaar karke bitayaa.

    Now u will have to be friend with me. Come on dear Share something Luv to know that u r a medical student.

    Seriously a toughest line . My dear. My best wishes r with u . U have to get top marks . Do full study and get higher marks and have a very successful career .

    I pray to god , Thanks for giving me friend like u Who always says what her heart says never thinking about anything . Shukrallah. to give me friend like u . Sachaa dost ho to tumhare jaisaaa

    luv u yaar aati raha karo acha lagta hai.

    Oh my dear , my love Kade te has vi diyaa karo.

  80. Manha

    Nisha hamare dil ke baare me socho aur apni nadaan dil ki manmarziyan update karo. Waiting eagerly. Plz.

  81. Manha

    Nemi plz dont be like that dear. See how many u hav got. Hamse dosti karogi. Wish u luck in ur life dear.

  82. Manha

    Nemi plz dont be like that dear. See how many frnds hav got. Hamse dosti karogi. Wish u luck in ur life dear.

  83. daizy

    Hey nemi…welcome to fan-fiction zone dear…..i respect ur thought that we should value our time….and i m sure everyone over here have their own work…..all r busy with some stuff….but everyone should take some time for themselves to get relaxed from work….
    U r right that manmarziyan has ended and the charcaters has moved on….but this is a place which made us all connected…we all the readers became friends here….this is a social place where we r staying connected n we all share our views…
    Coming to the stories…..we should appreciate the talent of all this fanfic writers….they r describing the stories so beautifully……nowadays on television they show such crap serials…..its my request to u plz once read stories here….i hope u will start liking it….
    Whenevr i m upset or depressed….i came here n read these updates again n again even if i hav already read once….i forget everything n i feel such relaxed…..thanks to d fanfic writers…
    Sorry dear if i have hurt ur feelings…my intention was not to hurt you…it was just what i feel…

    And a request to all the writers here——farha,thena,natasha,tanya,deepa,nisha,anu and all others….now plzz don’t think dat ur wasting time by writing here n don’t again think to stop writing…..writing is ur hobbies…n if one finds peace in their hobbies n they should not forget those things…..love u all my dearies….

    Farha plzz update next DT part early…..i want to see arjun realizing that radz was innocent…plzz update soon….

  84. ritu

    Nemi I only want to ask u one thing, what will u say abt chetan bhagat, amitav ghosh, jk Rowling’s and many other………………….. The serial which u see is also written by people like us only, I can say bcoz 2 of my classmates r working in starplus………… I did masscomm in 2011 and pg in mjmc in 2014. so I know it well that if a person has sum kind of talent and they r presenting it then we should appreciate them……. I agree that criticism is also necessary but +ve not -ve….. Just think if above mentioned people would HV stopped writing then from where would we be getting best book seller authors………. Its also true that the character name which we r getting in this page r from manmarziyan, but plz chek it that every story has diff title………….. We r here 2 enjoy our manarziyan…………….. & what’s the problem Farrah , thena, Natasha, nisha and many r writing on their own no one is asking u to do their job………. If u don’t like it then u HV options just ignore it yaar……. Don’t spread -ve commments as it can stop the emerging talents an also we might not get another best book seller author from amongst us…… Sorry if my words r bitter 2 u…………..
    But I willll still ask u will u be my fnd, luv u from bottom of my heart…….

  85. manha

    ritu, daizy our thoughts r same girls. today no has updated their stories till now. dont no why?
    nemi dear v r not against u nor we r taking ur comments in negative. but plz i say only one thing appreciate the talent. i am just afraid that by ur words our writers dont get hurt yaar.

    farha yaar plz in batoon ko lite se lo aur apni story update karo jaldi. atleast give a reply.

  86. kfar

    Hey my dears a very heartful thankuuuuuuuuuuu for al of ur lovely cmnts. luv al fr the amaznggg support. im like litetally flying in the sky bcz of ur heart touching words 😀
    Im never goin to stop writing n had updated the next part if DT. excited that u’ll like it. U guys are the most amazing people in the world. you make my day and spread a happy smike on my face. I sit and write for u guys. I hope one day I wish to write smthg amazing and u guys are the insipration for it. This dream of mine I’ll never stop chasing as I got ur love now I feel like I can cross any bridge n any wall, befr I didn’t have this much confidence. its bcz u dears cmnt soooooooo lovely dat ke maitoh going cray cray 😀

    Allah karey ke aapsabke dreams fulfill kare and happy rakhe yahi dua hai bas.
    luv u all lovelies 😀 warm tight hug n keep writing always 😀

    • Hayathi

      Hey fara dear my girl….. aap ko bhi alla karhe aap ki har manzil.. har kwahishen sab aapko mil jaye aur always be happy and try to write a book dr…. surly u wil be a great writer…. god bless u always….. ????

    • Roma

      Lovely Farha and all deariiiiiiieeess, you’re such a sweetheart. Dekhlo hum sab tumse kitna pyaar karte hain. I love be friend with all you deariiiiiiieeess. ..I’m so overwhelmed seeing all these comments. Farha you are awesome. You replied back with full smile. You made my day… love you loads and very very tight warm looooooong hug to all of youuuuuuuuu. @Nemi be my friend too. @nisha I loved your each and every comment. Specially the song har ek friend zaroori hota hai, muaaaaahhhhhh
      @all, take care and have a great time

  87. Manha

    Farha tumne to din banadiya mera. I was really worried abt u dear. Dont know how many quer raised in my mind. But ur cmmt made all go vanish. We should thank u yaar.

  88. anu

    hey farah u replied after a long time. how r u doing?
    ur story has been an inspiration for me and i have even written a novel by ur inspiration I have narrated the story to my friends and they all liked it and asked me to publish my story but i don’t want to publish it now cos I’m studying in class 10 and I don’t think that anyone will publish it…but i wanna thank u from the bottom of my heart cos it was u and ur story who inspired me.. to write.

    thanx a lot

  89. Manha

    Anu u r writing novel. Congratulations for that. Whenever u feel u can publish it. But do tell us when. Wish a bright future to u.

  90. Krithi

    Farha thanks a lot for updating nxt part. Was eagerly waiting. Now our long wait will end after few minutes I guess. When nxt part appears on the page.
    Farha a small request u said u updated DT right but plz update Nesam DT2 if possible. Really waiting for that Almost 1 week. Plz plz when u get time. Love u lots. And a big Thâñk u…..???

  91. Ameena

    Eagerly waiting….donno when they will put it on the page….i want to read ur fabulous story before i go in bed…..kfar u r the best….love u sooo much…i pray from god that he fulfils all ur wishes and have a very wonderful nd successful life with lots of love…take care dear….love u from all my heart..??
    One lovee?

    • kfar

      Yaar ye gayes gayes kya lagarakha hai its guys abhi aur mat hasao nemi I literally am laughing. TNks ha tumhari vajese aaj sab dost bohot acha baat karerahi mere aur chalo tumhare frnds bhi. Luv u all dears 😀

  92. nemi

    ki apna tym apne parents ke sath bitao na ki en stupid story ko pad kar. jisko padne ke baad kuchh matlab bhi nahi likalta.

  93. nemi

    tabhi to ye etna long likhte hai. ki dekhate hi gussa lag jata hai .aur mai to comment karne ke liye itna dur aati hu.ki puccho hi mat.

    • kfar

      gussa lagnahi jata gussa ata hai hahahahaha oh my god rofl nemi

      Jao nahi puchte tumhe itna chid kyun rahi ho khana hazam nahi huwa kya subah ka breakfast toh yaha chalin ayiho chakkar lagane…omg im hvng so much now. Yaar chil maro aur yahan koi time waste nahi karahahai toh hyper honeki zarurat nahi bp ajayega gussa lagjayetoh lol.

    • kfar

      I Don’t give a crap. First learn to write clearly in hindi, hindi bhi seedhi nahi ati toh kaise hoga yaar. U seriously r making me laugh wit it. n my family is filled wit doctors n dey r voracious readers and I pity ur literary stuntness.

      Anu dear u shud go on wit the publishing dear im sure u wil rock it darling.
      have a goooooooooood weekend al 😀

    • kfar

      Other wise wat u’ll do I have more means to than u so u mind it dear. Yahapekoi loser nahi except u. Attention seeker alert.

    • kfar

      Hello yaar nemi Arey tumtoh mujhe bhot praise karrahiho yaar but god of hindi kahona kyunke maine tumhari hindi corct ki english ka toh ekhin word crct kiya hai…..ab tum guys ko gays bologi toh hasi aygihina dear.

      aur aisa hai ke tum sabko yahan stupid bolrahi ho toh ek muhawra yaad aarahahai

      Aisa hai ke pagal jo duniya sab pagal nazarati hai aisehi stupid ko duniya sab stupid nazar ati.

      Yaar nemi humtoh life me bhot cooooooooooool idiot hai hahahhaha tum bhot entertain karahiho mujhe. Sprite piyo yaar dimag clear hojayega.

  94. nemi

    likhne ne ka itna hi man hai to ja ke kahi aur likh .and ya mai hindi me likh rhi hu kyoki mera man hai.i think u understand .u loser

  95. nisha

    Nemi, hye dear, how r u?????????

    Seriously you gyes are making the atmosphere so hot???

    I seriously doesn’t want this convo reach on this heights.

    Nemi to u my deareeest friend

    Badlaav wo nahi jo tum kar rahi ho, Badlaav ek soch hai , jo logo ki razamandi se aati hai

    Hitlergiri se nahi.

    I am trying to protect u dear. Kyun nafratein bana rahi ho apne liye.

    Kya tumhe friends ka pyaar nahi chahiye.

    Yaar mai jaanti hu jo tum keh rahi ho shaayad wo galat nahi hai But this place is not good for that.

    These things are working on friends that to when u know them personally

    Par jo advice tum de rahi ho yaha sabko , you didn’t know anyone here personally

    what if yahan tumse bhi zyada educated log ho , who are finding happiness here. Mann ki shanti , yes my love

    har kisi ki life alag hoti hai . May be tumhari Life Perfect Princess kind of ho.

    Humari nahi hai, we are normal human beings , Living life and fulfil each and evry duty of ours without saying no. even

    We all are respecting and loving our parents . Har bachaa apne mom dad se equally pyaar karta hai.

    Time spent bhi karta hai.

    My love , I am telling u for ur sake, You don’t have the right to go in their personal lives without knowing their life hurdles difficulties happiness and all the things.

    Samaj me badlaav aise to bilkul nahi aa sakta.

    • Ameena

      I totally agree with u nisha….don’t know when nemi will understand our feelings…anyways love u from all my heart nishu..??
      One lovee?

  96. kavita

    Hey nemi its you who is being a loser by coming here and unnecessarily commenting. You are just degrading others hardwork. If you have only this to offer then kindly don’t come here and waste yours and others time.

  97. nisha

    Its been 3 days now , Still I am thinking , Why u visit here, What’s your motive. j

    Why Just only Farha page, Do you obsessed with her.Or Do you want attention from us.

    From Last 3 days I and all here giving full attention to u.dear, Friendship tak karne kaa try kiyaa

    Tumhaare liye reading chodi, commenting chodi.

    but I am still dissapointing by reading yours and farha convo. Its Not good . Its not friendship love.

    We are here to smile not to get tensed or angry.

    Dear What do you want. Tumhare comments bahut negative hai . Are you really like this in real.

    Kya friends aise hote hai. Tum jaise . JO negativity de . Dhutkare Insult kare . No my dear .

    I feel so sorry for u .

    I try to be friend with u . Spreading my happiness and all of ours happines in u . But getting failed in it .

    maine reading commenting choda , tumne kya kiya , Phir se negativity shuru kar di.

    Luv u my dear. Doctor bano medical field me .

    But remember Doctor ko god kaha jaata hai maana jaata hai. And with this attitude Seriously You need some positivity my love. I am really tensed for u by heart.

    Really want u to be happy . Aa to rahi thi kyaa zaroorat thi itna negative commment karne ki.

    Good bye not going to talk to u anymore . or else please chod do negative kehna.

    But if u seriously want us to be change . Be a friend spread positivity thendekho

    Has has ke tu karle sitam ye pyaar na hoga kam sanam teri kasam.

    luv u dear. Have a long happy and successful life.

    Lots of Love good bye.

  98. Nemi plse don’t waste your time….if u r interested to read farha’s story then read otherwise don’t….we like her stories….n plse frnd stop worrying about others

  99. nisha

    Hey farha, if u r reading nemi comments , Kindly don’t react.

    We all love u my dear. All respect by heart. You are the master of this page don’t forget.

    This is your house. and If somebody came by this like don’t worry we all are here also.

    We all at least try to handle it . But don’t react or if u want to react . Calm down first .

    Take a deep breath and then react with a cool mind . Make it positive. Stay positive.

    It help my dear. Love u by heart.

  100. nemi

    10x nisha to support me.but i m not taking kfar.beech me ghus jata hai idiot .mood hi kharab kar diya loser ne.apne dirty comment se.

  101. Krithi

    Nemi its really too much now. If u don’t like to come here just don’t. But stop giving these bad comments. And by the way no one is forcing u to read the story and u don’t tell us what we should do. Its irritating telling the same thing again and again. Everyone was talking to u so nicely and wanted to make frnds. But u are just ignoring all.
    This is farha’s page and she will write stories and we will be there to read, support and encourage her always. If u don’t like all these plz don’t come to this page….

  102. ritu

    Sorry nemi u can’t be anyone fnd.n if u r then I can say that which type of group u belong & what slang u use. U r such a crap don’t know why u r jealous of others hardwork………… & what did u say kfar she should HV a serial yes surely she will HV & I bet that u will die for her serial u looser………………..…
    Stop being jealous nemi and stop forcing ur opinions on others……….. I doubt u r u really a medical student or not bcoz my mothers family is full of doctors and they r very fndly and respect other hardwork and supportive which u r not…………….
    N lastly if it is such a time wasting for u then plz don’t visit this page………… One more thing we guyz here spend a lot of time with our parents helping in cooking and other household work which I think u dont , bcoz u r a medical student lack of time…………….
    Again sorry to say that u can’t be anyone fnd……………………..
    Soch badlo logon ki mehnat k bare m acha bolna sikho tab dekhna u will HV lots of fnd………..
    From bottom of my heart I m sorry for u………….

  103. Hayathi

    Hi fara dont take such type of words in ur heart dr…..
    Sometimes it happens….. dont worry of anything @nemi hum sab pagal nahi koi time waste nahi kar rahe hein…… i dont want come in between both of u but i dont like the way ur words towards fara…. she is doing fabolous job….. yeah uska talent hein…yaha most of all students working people…. sab apne apne life mein busy hein… phir bhi yaha aake we are reading and commenting about stories because we like her stories and woh hamare liye itna sara update karthi hein sirf hum sab ke liye so dont disrespect any one…. sorry mein kuch jyaada kaha tho…..

  104. nisha

    Oh my god. Hatred . It is a very stong feeling . And now I am thinking why.

    Farha never knows you at all or Do she????????????

    Do both of u know each other. ???????????

    U hate farha to the core of ur heart. ??

    Tell me do u hurt but why ???????? hatred comes when we hurt but something but why????

    Confusing sooo much.

    I read the first argument . Thinking . Why you are against farha that to when she is not even start writiing for u . U are saying something like wo itna lamba or bore likhtee hai (nemi’s words) Why????????

    Why just on farha page. I have a huge doubt Do you girls know each other.

    Hatred and d comments between the two sounds really tensed .

    I am sorry my lovieeeeeeeeeeeeeeees both nemi and farha . Just try to understand the situation.
    Coz I am sitting here in your house farha. Well wisher from heart of both of u . Please don’t use harsh words. As it make the situation worse for all.

    Not for farha . Not for nemi. It makes the whole Place full of violence. Please stop this .

    A genuine request to my would be writter farha and would be doctor nemi. Please stop this .

    For humanity sake.

  105. nisha

    Hey farha dear, I try to be nemi’s friend and I am also your friend too.

    Loved your comments and stories my love.

    Don’t react or comment on nemi’s comments I think it is the only option left to get out of this situation with clean hands.

    We all have very beautiful thoughts about u ur personality

    Just comment on all of our comments and don’t read nemi comments .

    As in my eyes, this is the last and safest option left now to get rid of this situation.

    Guys , Here my last word no more fighting or argumenting Lets spread love friendship again.

    Luv u all my lovieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees.

    And yaa this is for u farha and for all my lovieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees

    Enjoy this and Get smile on ur beautiful faces. Always smile farha. It makes u more beautiful naturally . A nice therapy for all ,my lovoieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees smile always never get sad.

    Hmm…. hmm….

    Ham toh bhai jaise hain, waise rahenge

    Ham toh bhai jaise hain, waise rahenge -2
    Ab koyi khush ho, ya ho khafa, ham nahin badlenge, apni adaa
    Samjhe na samjhe koyi ham yahi kahenge
    Ham toh bhai jaise hain, waise rahenge -2

    Hmm� ham dil ki shehzaadi hai, marzi ki mallika
    Haan� ham dil ki shehzaadi hai, marzi ki mallika
    Sar pe aanchal kyun rakhe, dhhalka toh dhhalka
    Ab koyi khush ho ya koyi roothhe, is baat par chaahe har baat toote
    Ham toh bhai jaise hain, waise rahenge -2

    Hamein shauq mehendi ka na shehnaai ka hai
    Ho.. hamein shauq mehendi ka na shehnaai ka hai
    Hamaare liye toh apna ghar hi bhala hai
    Sunta agar ho toh sun le kaazi, lagta nahin kabhi ham honge raazi
    Ham toh bhai jaise hain, waise rahenge -2
    Ab koyi khush ho, ya ho khafa, ham nahin badlenge apni adaa
    Samjhe na samjhe koyi ham yahi kahenge
    Ham toh bhai jaise hain, waise rahenge -2

    Aa aa ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha, oh ho ho

  106. nemi

    i know meri spelling mistake ho jati hai kyoki mai comment karte tym mai dubara nahi dekhti aur post kar deti hu

  107. nemi

    plzz mujhe bataye kya mai itni bhi buri nahi.wo to kfar ne start kiya nahi to mai wrong comment nahi karti .sorry everyone if i hurt u.

  108. nisha

    Nemi, my dear, kfar is a girl , she explained so far before coz we all think that kfar is a boy but she is actually a girl.

    And yes I do read your and kfar comments, Main ye nahi kahungi tum sahi ho ya wo.

    coz Its a hit n miss . When 2 people are saying these things .

    Ok Let me make easy for u . When u are going to an unknown home instead of saying hye to him or her . You are saying others that don’t come here. Don’t waste ur time.

    Dear my love my friend any one blood boils after hearing this . If I say after your back to ur friends in ur classroom at your place. U r starting to saying me lots of bad words and after hearing that I am also getting angry.And I also do the same.

    Its not that U are wrong she is wrong u are right she is right.

    Dear My love my friend , I have teary eyes when I am saying that Whole heartedly saying to u..

    People will change . Let give them time instead of leaving it now. Be a friend of ours don’t visit if u don’t want to read here.

    Instead of that do visit to just meet us , say hello get lots of love warm hugs and warmness , Yaar we always try to release ur tension. Know and understand how much u r exhausted routine . We all r facing d same and meet here to share.

    I always tell u to share / U feel relaxed.

    If u stop saying bitter things to others. Then u will see u will get lots of warmness and happiness heree.

  109. nisha

    As I always said Nemi be my friend You will get lots of love.

    And yaa In ur next comment think think think.

    say to kfar , that lets forget what we say to each other and start a new friendship not because of ur story if you (nemi) doeesn’t want to read) but you want to by her friend . Try to know her.

    NObdy is bad dear. Kfar is not bad . YOu are not bad. Be a friend and then u will see.

    kfar never says bitter thinks but always praising u and giving u reasons to laugh if u not want not giving u in her stories but throught her sweet comments . She will give u lots of love.

    Be a friend nemi, Be afriend of all of us. I am saying and requesting u.

    If u are here my friend I will give u a tight hug. and say u these things .

    A flying kiss from my side to u and say in ur next . Ready to be urs all friend including kfar and get lots of love warmness here. Sweet memories that makes ur life beautiful . Giving u so much releif , calmness in ur mind.

    Luv u nemi, luv u farha , keep smiling keep commenting. Always Lov u both

  110. nisha

    nahi, this time u r thinkind soooooooooooooooooo wrong . I am with u my loveeeeeeeeeee

    We all are be with u . Nobody happy to see u sad. As in these 3 days. You make me and all of us laugh , and so much mauka to know a friend like u.

    U have a very beautiful heart . A nice sweeheart girleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.

    Come here always and if u wanted you can come up to my page also naadan dil ki manmariziyaan not saying u to read a story . But my eyes are active on my page.

    At least got to be in touch with u. Sharing each other difficulties happiness . Warmness. my love.

    As I always said Tum pyaar karo to pyaar milegaa

    Say that my love say that take first step . Be a special angel here. I am with u. We all love u.

    all are saying before that we all want to be friend with u.

    Just be a little calm and say at once Mujhse dosti karoge. And then you will see how much love u will received.

    Jaanna chahogee to chalo type karo Mujhse dosti karoggee girleeeeeeeeeeeees.

    Everybody is ready to make u a friend my lovieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.

    Even farha also take a step forward and shower her love and friendship if u say this . We all have a same heart. dera.

    Starting to karo

    Always loving u . U r always be in my heart. For always Once a friend always a friend.

  111. nemi

    10x nisha.but mujhe lagta hai.aur koi happy nahi hai.aur sab mujhe aage comment karte hue dekhana bhi nahi chahte.sorry nish agar maine kuchh tumse wrong kaha ho

  112. nemi

    tum kah rhi ho ki mai kfar ki story par gud comment karu.abhi mera man huaa jab maine seriously pada.but nahi kiya comment

  113. nisha

    nahi koi nahi karegaa , I assure u , Just be nice do say what ur heart say. but don’t force anyone to change.

    Maine tumhe waise hi accept kiya jaisee tum ho . A gem from ur heart. And others bhi waise hi karengiiii.

    Ok , Now came on the Drawn together fresh page. So that I will help u to make sooooooooooooooooooo many friends and get sooooooooooooo much love.

    Come fast I just have few minutes left here. come on Dt today
    s pge.

    Everybody is ready to be a friend with u just say mujhse dosti karogee to kfar with a smilee and to others and see we all are dying to shower our love to u.

  114. nisha

    Hey need to go now. Aur haan Kal raat nahi aa payee to Titanic aa gaya iss pge pe

    Ab kal jab mai aau to hi aana , We all are ready to be friend with u . Come here by tomorrow.

    Aur agar phir be comment karna hai. To please don’t say any bitter it will harm u . Requested to for ur own sake.

  115. nisha

    Aur haan mann ho to puraa karo gud comment karo phir dekho kitnaa pyaar miltaa hai.

    But on fresh page. Yahaan friends nahi aa rahe it is old page she post a fresh part on Drawn together .

    Comment there. my lovelyly friend.

  116. kfar

    Alright now lets clear the air as Nisha said. I sorry for the comments as it’s just was a reaction. Everything cool now Nemi. Now I need to go coz its weekend so family time hai. Mum doesn’t encourage phones while we gather at home in the evening so hope ur saturday and sunday turns awesome dears 😀

    love all have a happppppppy weeeeekend 😀

  117. kfar

    Idiot stupid kfar it’s I’m sorry not I sorry hahaha see Nemi maine tumhareliye apni insult karli just thodi so chill yaar cocacola daldo sab cmnts par aur jhapi palo all fine yaar. par cola waste nahi karte hai han coz i like it in ice cream.

  118. nemi

    10x kfar .ki tumne mujhe maph kar diya.i don’t read ue comment.but mujhe nisha ne bataya ki old page par tumne comment kiya hai.u r rly a sweet girl

  119. nisha

    Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. Thank God.

    World war Samapt hua.

    Aaj Ki taaza khabar . Nemi and Kfar friendship .

    Yaaron dosti badi hi haseen hai.

    Yaaron dosti badi hi haseen hai
    Yeh na ho to kya phir
    Bolo yeh zindagi hai

    Koi to ho raazdaar
    Begaraj tera ho yaar
    Koi to ho raazdaar

    Yaaron mohabbat hi to bandagi hai
    Yeh na ho to kya phir bolo yeh zindagi hai

    Koi to dilbar ho yaar
    Jisko tujhse ho Pyaar
    Koi to dilbar ho yaar

    Teri har ke buraai pe daante woh dost
    Gam ki ho dhoop to saaya bane tera woh dost

    Naache bhi woh teri khushi main
    aree Yaaron dosti badi hi haseen hai

    Yeh na ho to kya phir
    Bolo yeh zindagi hai
    Koi to ho raazdaar
    Begaraj tera ho yaar
    Koi to ho raazdaar

    Tan mann kar tujhpe fida
    Mehboob woh
    Palkon pe jo rakhe tujhe
    Mehboob woh
    Jiski vafa tere liye ho

    Are Yaaron mohabbat hi to bandagi hai
    Yeh na ho to kya phir
    Bolo yeh zindgi hai
    Koi to dilbar ho yaar
    Jisko tujhse ho pyaar
    Koi to dilbar ho yaar

    Luv u kfar naaa farha seems closer, nemi and all my lovieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees.

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