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“Are you sure? Do you really want to abort the baby?”,asked the gynelogist.
“Oh I am damn sure….I want to get rid of this sin soon…”,replied Twinkle casually.
She was adamant on her decision.She was completely blinded by her so called money and Fame.She had left Kunj, she left the one who had loved her the most.
“Ok…then come inside Ms.Twinkle”
The procedure was carried out and soon Twinkle got rid of Kunj’s baby or her so called SIN….
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Knock…..knock…..Ting…tong…A bell rang in the Sarna Mansion,Amritsar…..
“Kaun aya Hai itni subah??”,said Manohar,getting up from his chair , he kept his cup on the table….He opened the door and got the shock of his life….His son ,Kunj was standing at the threshold of Sarna Mansion…..Kunj who had decided to never come back , was standing there…..
“Oh……you?…. Sahabzade aaa.. Gaye….Usha…..Tumhara bigda ladka aa Gaya….Huh!….Besharam ko tameez nahi Hai ki baap ke pair choon le!”,said Manohar with anger…..
Kunj didn’t​ say anything but hugged his father tightly……
Manohar- Kun…j…..
Manohar was boggled as his son hugged him….
Kunj sobbed in his arms…”Pa….pa….. Everything is fi…..ni…shed……woh chali gayi….. Dhoka Mil…….dhoka Diya mujhe………Pa…..pa………Sab ….Kha….tam…..main…e… Sab…..kho….diya……sab…kuch…”
Manohar now understood that something worst has happened in his son’s life….
He forgot his anger and ego and caressed Kunj’s back….
“Kuch nahi hua….Roh mat….Sssh….Kunj…..Mera beta….chup…..Sher baccha Hai na?..”, Manohar tried to console him….
Bebe and Usha came hearing the noises and were equally flabbergasted……
“Kunj….beta….”
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Usha, Manohar and Bebe were completely shook when they heard of Kunj’s plight. They were depressed on hearing what had happened with his son….They tried to calm him but he was uncontrollably crying for his love and baby,now an angel to heaven…..
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Twinkle on the other hand , forgot that she had ever known Kunj. She got successful and famous by working with Mr.Kapoor. She also worked with other Magazines including Panache….
She would behave badly with her assistants and other fellow mates.
Her manager Ms.Piya was a lady in her late 30’s . Being in the industry for a long time , she knew that Twinkle was on the verge of destruction.
“Mukesh! Areee! What kind of photos are these? Such stupid angles….”,said Twinkle to Mr.Mukesh aka Muku ji editor at Panache and Gyaan, the coordinator
Gyaan- Twinkle ! What are you saying? Rehan has clicked these pictures..He has been clicking for photos since so long and now suddenly what has happened?
Twinkle- Gyaan ! Do not argue …..please change Rehan ….I don’t like his work..
Mukesh- Areee!! Twinkle see …..these pictures are absolutely perfect….
Twinkle didn’t​ listen to him and suddenly said-“OK fine….Then shoot is cancelled…..Piya ….let’s go…..Chunni pack my stuff…..”
Gyaan- What are you saying Twinkle!! Please wait…Do not do this….Don’t go…All the money invested will be wasted. See this shoot is important for us and you also….
Twinkle- I can get many petty contracts like these…I am the Twinkle Taneja…Got it? I don’t need this shit….
Twinkle did not listen and went away….
Ms.Piya saw all this.She was sad seeing Twinkle. She knew that she has gone too far to be called back……
One fine evening, Twinkle was puffing her cigarette sitting in the lounge….
“What!…..How could he do this ?? Call him right now..!! Just right now….”,said Twinkle…
Piya said-” Twinkle! Calm down ….Alisha is now new face of CoverGirl…..Mr.Kapoor has cancelled your contract.”
Twinkle- How could he do this?…..How could he do this….
Twinkle was angry, she took her bag and rushed to Mr.Kapoor’s Office in her car.
@Kapoor’s Office – CoverGirl…..
Twinkle reached the office and went straight away into his cabin…
“What am I hearing?”,asked Twinkle.
“Oh hi Twinkle!”,said Mr.Kapoor.
Twinkle- Why did you do this?
Kapoor- Baby! Main koi bhi kaam adhura nahi chodta….Jab tumne mujhe apne paas aane se roka Maine decide Kar liya tha ki I will not leave you….
Twinkle- Such a shameless man! How dare you….Tum bhool Gaye ki Iss Magazine ko Meri kitni jarroorat Hai??
Mr.Kapoor tightly held her jaw and spoke with anger- Baby itna bolna theek nahi Hai…tum apne aukat bhool gayi ho…Mujhe tumhari nahi tumhe Meri aur iss magazine ki jaroorat Hai…Samjhi?
Lekin abhi bhi tumhare paas waqt Hai…Tum meri saath raat bitakar , kaam paa sakti ho…
Saying this he held her waist and kissed her cheeks….
Twinkle pushed him back and slapped him…”How dare you!!??”
Mr.Kapoor was angry too he held her hair and pulled her towards himself….
Kapoor- Kyu ab tumhe yeh sab kharaab lag raha Hai? Tab toh nahi laga jab tum khud mere paas ayi thi apne boyfriend ko chodkar!!..Tab toh ajeeb nahi laga jab tum khud mere saath Gulcharee uda rahi thi….. Ek baat sun lo…..you are finished….
He slapped her hard and she fell on the floor….
Mr.Kapoor went away after slapping Twinkle…..
Now,this slap brought her to reality….His words were banging in her ear drums…He was right …he was certainly right ….She had forgotten​ her limits ….she had ditched her love – Kunj…She had killed her baby for this money….With these thoughts she got up and went outside…
Outside the office , the banners containing her Picture were being torn and New banners containing Alisha’s photos were hung…..She was in tears to see this..
Twinkle had gone too far for this fame, for this money.She was also in a platonic relationship with Mr.Kapoor, to get the contracts she had spent time with that old man…..Can a person be so selfish?? Guess Twinkle had been one…
Out of the blue , media people came out and sarted questioning her…
“Ma’am we have heard that Mr.Kapoor has cancelled your contracts with his Magazine”…..”Ma’am , were you in a relationship with Mr.Kunj Sarna?”….”Ma’am were you pregnant with Mr.Sarna’s baby”……”Ma’am you ditched him for Mr.Kapoor??”……Such questions from the media people paralyzed Twinkle’s brain….She was standing still like a statue…..Their questions were revolving in her mind….Words couldn’t find a way. Ms.Piya came and protected her from the mob.She took Twinkle to the car.All the way Twinkle was not responding to anyone .She was being dragged by Piya like a dead body…
“Please go away…Twinkle you sit…please….Leave….Twinkle…sit inside he car….sit now….Go …No questions please….No questions…”,said Piya handling the mob….
Twinkle sat down and the car moved…While moving Media surrounded her and kept asking her…but Twinkle was numbed……
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After the horrific incident​ Twinkle was being consoled by Piya…
“How could he??”….”How could I do this??.”…..”I am…the…Tw…in..kle…Ta…”
“No,….”….Twinkle screamed, keeping her hands on her ears….
Piya- Calm down…Twinkle…calm…down….
Twinkle- go away….Just go.aya…GO….GO….GO!!!!
Twinkle shouted and pushed Piya….She had gone mad……
Piya left Twinkle and came out…
She was walking back to her car but while walking back , her mind was occupied with Twinkle’s agony….”Sahi kehte Hain…..Guroor aur tabakoor , insaan ko Kahin ka nahin chodti…Tanha aur barbaad Kar deti Hai…Paise ke aage insaan andha ho jaata Hai…Aur jab iss baat ka ehsaas hota Hai..Waqt haath se nikal jaata Hai…”,she thought and left in her car…
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“Kunj please beta! Please move on now! How much will you hurt yourself?….Please forget about that cheap girl, see how many alliances have come for you….Kunj at least have look to these photographs…”,said Usha who had some photographs in her hand.
“Nahi Ma!……I can’t move on…I can’t …..Maa first love if the most special one! I will never forget her ….and the pain given by her till my last breath….”,said Kunj getting up after finishing the breakfast.
Kunj- Maa! Leave that …I am going now, I’ll be back by evening…Bye….
“Kunj…. puttar ruk ja…”,said Bebe….
Kunj- Ji Bebe!
Bebe- Kunj! Beta Kal, hamare NGO ke bacche , Mental Asylum ke logon ke liye programme Kar rahe hain….Toh tumhe uss function mein Guest ke taur par Jaana hai….Aur man kare toh photos bhi kheech Leena…Mana mat karna ….Bacche Tere saath jaana chahte Hai…
Kunj- Why not Bebe?….Apne baccho ke liye kuch bhi….Ab chalun ?
Bebe- Haan Haan ja…Aur shaam ko baccho seemil aana..
Kunj- Ji Bebe….
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Kunj sat in his Audi and went off…
He reached Panache’s office…. Getting down from his car he walked inside. Staff greeted him as he walked….Kunj smiled and went inside the cabin with CEO written in bold letters…..Yes, Kunj was the CEO of Panache Magazine….5 Years had passed since Twinkle left him…Yes , Five years…..Kunj worked hard , day and night and achieved his goals. He left fashion photography and moved to wildlife and portraiture photography ….He was now a World Famous Photographer and a also a rank holder in the Time Magazine…All thanks to Twinkle because she was the one who had humiliated him, her words inspite of causing destruction proved useful and powerful. Kunj was now famous, wealthy but he was no more the Kunj he used to be…His charm was hidden under his rugged beard, he had forgotten his flirty and charming nature , his soul was killed…. Twinkle’s harsh words and her treachery had caused a deep wound which even time could not heal. It’s said words have a lot of power even more than a physical attack ,you may slap a person but that will only give a physical pain or wound but if you attack someone with your words , the wound then made cannot be cured. Kunj tried running away from his past i.e he tried everything to forget Twinkle but couldn’t . How could he? How could he forget his fist love?
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So this is part (b)……I guess I need to add part (c) that is the final one!… Thankyou everyone.I am really overwhelmed….😳😳😳😘😘You guys are the best!! I got 20+ comments that’s crazy;!!! I am super happy…Dil se shukriyaπŸ™πŸ™Continue to encourage me like this.
With love,
Cp…πŸ’•πŸ’•

23 Comments
  1. Superb β€οΈπŸ’‹πŸ˜
    Brilliant episode yaar
    Cheena u r truely amazing πŸ˜‰ awesome
    Acha hua twinkle ke saath she diseverd this ❀️❀️❀️❀️😜😜
    Feeling sad 😭 for kunj
    Ab twinkel ko samj aayga kunj ki real value aur us ke pyaar ki
    Post soon I can’t

  2. Presha

    Awesome…
    I just loved it …
    Had tears in my eyes reading it….
    i think next what is going to happen is kunj meeting twinkle in mental asylum..my guess..
    Well post soon…ur other wrks too…
    Love u…

  3. I read it just now and it was awesome , I loved ur concept to the core

  4. Nishuu

    Wow cheena awesome episode my dear
    Loved it
    I didn’t like twinkle’s character feeling sad for kunj
    Loads of love

  5. SidMin23

    Nice and waiting for next part

  6. twinjsidminfan

    Hey
    Amazing peice of writing 😍😍😍😍
    Loved kunj’s character but twinkle πŸ™πŸ™ but that’s ok…its a part of the story ryt 😊 but now it’s enough plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz make twinkle alright and unite our twinj can’t see them seperated 😒😒😒😒 plzzzzΕΊzΕΊzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz unite them…..cant wait for the next part…..
    Plzzzzzzzzzzz post sooner πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™
    Love u loads 😘😘😘😘
    Byeeeee

  7. Awesome n emotional episode…

  8. Sidmin ki sadia

    Wow just amazing. Epi luv it acha hua twinki ko aise logoun ke saath aisich hona bure kaam ka bura nateeja
    Post next one soon

  9. Ayesha51

    awsm amzng fab marvellous os
    sry for not commenting in previous shot
    I was hell busy
    & I’ve also not commented in various articles
    kya karu mumma was behind the phone

    do continue

    post soon

    love u β™‘

  10. Ayesha51

    aur cheenu tum apna love v/s infatuation part 3 c jaldi post karna

    I’m hell desperately waiting for it

    love u cheenu β™‘β™‘ β™‘

    byeee

  11. Pallavishah

    It’s fabulous
    Concept is amazing
    Post soon πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜˜πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ

  12. Aamna_2690

    OMG CHEENA😱😱
    It’s Amazing😍😍
    Just Loved it❀❀
    Twinkle Killed the Unborn Baby For Fame and Money😑😑
    Know she is suffering what she deserved😠
    She deserve worst than it cause she didn’t only killed her own child😑 She killed a Fun Loving and lively Kunj tooπŸ˜”πŸ˜”
    Her regret and sufferings can’t change her past nor Kunj’sπŸ˜”πŸ˜”
    Her sufferings won’t give her back the Child nor the trust which may Kunj had once😣😣
    Maybe Kunj may forgive her but would there relation would be same as before😐
    Just Loved ur this concept😍😍
    It was Amazing and FantasticπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ
    Waiting for next part😊
    Post soon😘😘😘
    Love UπŸ’–β€β€πŸ’–β€πŸ’–β€πŸ’–β€πŸ’–β€πŸ’–β€πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜

  13. Yaar… U r awesome.. Jus awesome….
    I luv u
    Epi is amazing….
    Plzzzz post soon.

  14. Aamu

    Ohhh…ohhhmm ggg..!!
    Cheeeennuuuuu..😍
    I gottoknow no

  15. Aamu

    Ohhh…ohhhmm ggg..!!
    Cheeeennuuuuu..😍
    I gotto know now..dat u write too..
    Wel…i read (a) too now..
    It was amazig yaaarr..😍
    Twinkle..huh..how can she be sooo selfish yaaarπŸ˜’πŸ˜πŸ˜¨
    Now paying back..huh.😏

    She even killed the unborn…πŸ˜“

    Kunj suffered too muchπŸ˜–πŸ˜­
    Painful..
    Though loved it…πŸ˜πŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’ž
    Post next soon…
    Will be waiting..dear

  16. amazing & emotional episode cheenuπŸ˜˜πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜„πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜„πŸ˜„

    post soon dear plzzzzzzz ab wait nahi hota h 😘😊😊😘😊
    luv u
    bbye

  17. Ramya

    Cheenu
    It’s amazing awesome
    And I’m speechless
    I have no words to say how beautifully you have written amazing dear
    Loved it
    Love you keep smiling

  18. Supriya18d

    luv uhhhhhh….
    Miss u….
    Cheenu… Meri jaan….
    😘😍😍😍❀❀❀❀❀😘😘😘😘😘😘❀
    Meri Shona…
    kitna awsm likha h tmne……
    plzz jldi post krna …..
    okkk bieeee

    1. yrr supu kaha h dear πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜„πŸ˜˜πŸ˜„πŸ˜˜

      miss u sweety πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜„πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š
      plz come back soon
      luv u

  19. Sameera

    Awesome loveddddddd it acha hua twinkle k saat can’t wait for next one ..
    Do cont soon 😍😍😍😘😘😘

  20. awesome..
    mindblowing..
    tw mentally unstable???
    post soon…

  21. Purnima.agrawal30

    AWESOME amazing

  22. Baby

    hayee cheenu bas kya kahun tera jawaab nahi β™₯
    u write amazingly beautiful β™₯
    loved it β™₯
    love u alottt β™₯
    osm β™₯
    plsss post d infatuation love wala plsss plsss cheenu β™₯

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