stay away!!! ……Thahaan (Two shot) Part 1


Hi friends. Its been a long time. So, how are u guyzz, I know all thahaan fans are quite disappointed with the current track. Can’t say, May be some of them are enjoying too, our bihaan as angry young man. I don’t know why writers don’t get inspired with beautiful & interesting ff of this page. … … well, leave it.
It is a small two shot or may be three shot(haven’t decided till now) written after the navratri pooja episode. I hope my friends will like it and will give their response too.
Here it goes!!!

Her steps Stumbled and vision got blurred. Her legs felt weak and off course it is her fault she shouldn’t have drunk that wine while claiming it to be some kind of kadha. What else she could do?? He was irritating her so much he knew how much she hates drink as well as the people who drink that too in her room. How dare he!!! But she was no less she made him believe that it was tulsi kadha and how innocent he is!! He believed it. But the most ridiculous thing was that she drunk it foolishly Very well knowing that she can’t take its after effect. Her mind was running with image of his anger boiled face, his frustrated eyes. They way he said “humse door raha karo tum” His anger, his frustration, his pain clearly reflected in his eyes. She was Hurt she doesn’t know why??? Did he really asked her to stay away??? Was she so bad!!!
Her legs moved to and fro. Her hands tried to get hold of something to keep herself steady but failed to do so.

she slipped, and closed her eyes in fear to meet the hard floor.
Suddenly she felt a strong grip on her upper arm. She looked up in haze at the persons face. Struggling hard to focus on the features. She felt her legs going up in air. But when she realized she was already in his arms being carried away to her bedroom. She Was too tired to ask or say something.
She opened her eyes when she felt soft bed under herself. SPLASH!!! She jumped in shock Cold water ran down her cheeks. Soon her vision cleared and she met with a pair of red furious eyes glaring down at her. It was the most beautiful eyes. It was BIHAAN.
Guyzz let me know if I should continue or not. And I would love to hear my friends comments again. I really missed u guyzz.

Credit to: Mineey

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  1. very nice. you should continue this. u r an amazing writer.

    1. Thanks ammi i will continue this.

  2. Hi…… are you? iam really happy to read your ff after a long time.Its nice,you should continue it with lots of charming scenes of THAHAAN.

    1. hello Dear. I am good. Thankyou so uch honey i will love to continue this.
      i missed u guyzz so much.

  3. Finally u r back mineey love ur two shots loved the first part , really u r a very good writer 🙂

    1. Thanks u so much friend for praising me. your ff is also good. I would say very different.

  4. Hi mineey…nice to see u again! Asuseual ur this ff also interesting… Plz continue ur story dr…

    1. thankyou dear. I love to hear ur comments. It make me feel so special.

  5. of course u should continue it
    it is amazing.

    1. Yeah ruhi i will

  6. Pls mineey continue . I was also a silent reader of your previous ff. I just love u and your writings.

    1. thankypu so much vineey.

  7. i love it…but it is short too

    1. Thanks carol. I know it is short. But don’t worry i’ll make my my nxt episode longer one.

  8. Hey dear it’s amazing. …much needed for us at this time while in current track there is no sign of starting thahaan love story….one request plz make it long and 2 -3 shots more….and if possible plz try to write about thapki’s love realisation and thahaan confession. ..but plzzzzzzzzz make it long dear…..loved ur writing. .well done. .when ur uploading 2nd shot…eagerly waiting. ..

    1. thanks vinlora. Actually i am planning to finish it in two more episode. And offcourse dear i’ll make my nxt episode longer one. And may be post till tomorrow morning.

      1. Thanks dear…

  9. rafay don kon

    Is too short ko too long kr do.

    1. haha.… …i will make it toooo long. Don’t worry.

      1. And i really like ur name. Its a bit different. I would rather say its cool.

      2. rafay don kon

        Ary mara name sirf rafay ha.?

  10. Amezing episode. Keep going. And i love ur privious ff just be with me.

    1. thanks dear.

  11. Plzz continue..:) its amazing..!!

    1. yeah mishu i will

  12. too good minney….but make it more long n plz plz update daily….can’t wait for next episode

    1. thankyou oggy. But as u know it is two shot. So, i will only update one more episode. Till tomorrow morning.

  13. Very nice yaar.. Continue wid it….

    1. Thanks vennila

  14. Hey my friend mineey,,no words to say.. gajaaaab…pls update d nxt part soon..

    1. Hii jacinth how are u. After a long time right… … ???
      thanks dear i will post it tomorrow.

      1. Yp buddy..I am busy with my second yr when I sw ur ff I couldn’t resist my self from commenting..I loved it..wbu??

      2. i am just as usual FINE. Atually i am very much free right now. So, thought of writing something.

  15. Hi mineey it’s awesome and plzz continue.☺?☺I’ll be waiting for nxt u so much.

    1. thanks dear. i’ll surely continue.
      Love u too shruti!!

  16. liked it soooo much mineey..??plz continue ?eagerly waiting for ur nxt update…?

    1. Thankyou so much ashwana dear.

  17. Welcome back MINEEY………
    Good start. ………waiting for next. …Good luck

    1. Thankzz santhosh

  18. Plz continue

    1. i will dear.

  19. super yaar. Good to see u back. Eagerly waiting for next episode

    1. Thanks tara

  20. Arey Yaar! Puchne wali baat hi nahi hai! DEFINITELY CONTINUE! ❤

    1. ha ha!! Phir bhi ayushri puch lena acha hota hai hai u know impression accha aata hai lol.

  21. love ur work mineey very nice
    so beautiful
    happy to see u again

    1. hey anu i was waiting for ur comment Why are u soo late I am angry!!! (just kidding yaar)
      thanks dear.

  22. super minney continue it and your are a wonderful writer I love it a lot the way you write

    1. Thankypu manasa

  23. Hey mineey after a long time u r back with this wonderful ts n please continue yr it’s so interesting than current track n i hope that i will c u again n again with awesome stories of

    1. Thankyou prtibha i am happy that u liked it.

  24. Hi Mineey plz upload 2nd part…..I m waiting from morning …plz upload yaar soon. …

  25. Very good job..

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