Stay away…. I m nt ur husband!!… (Episode 9) ” I am urs n u r mine “

Hii guys. .. I m totally overwhelmed by earlier ep response…A gr8 thanX to all the ppl who commented… n I will miss you the most sissy (natasha ) will have to wait for 15 days to resume our none stop bakwass… In two days u literally created a sis – sis bond with me… now let’s leave the emotional talk…

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Chapter starts :

Mall

Swara : sanky…

Sanskar : ( cutting off n looking at his mobile ) hmm swara I know…. let’s go.. We will see more clothes…(just thn he saw..her… from toe to bottom… He just dropped the phn n the shopping bags on the floor n had a open mouth… He was nt able to believe his eyes…He thought he is seeing a dream…)

Swara was in front of him in a torquisue blue colour short dress
Link of the dress : here

He was nt able to say a word
Swara : ( comes near him… With a finger in his chin shut his mouth ) mr. Sanskar maheshwari how’s ur wife looking (she winked )

Sanskar : ( without realising what he is saying ) hott…

Swara blushed n sanskar smiled…

Sanskar : I never thought u will wear these dresses…

Swara : I never used to wear these dresses before memory loss… (shocked ) thn what I used to wear…. I thought u married a modern girl who wear these typs of dresses means me…

Sanskar : ( thinking – I don’t know only which typ of dresses she used to wear ) Swara u don’t have to wear anything for me… buy clothes for urself nt for others (he winked )
*remember guys swara said the same dialogue*

Swara : ( naughty smile ) accha ji… copying my dialogue… (thn watches her dress ) n I lyk this… I m comfortable. .. atleast 100 tyms more than that saree… (make faces )

Sanskar : ( laughed ) I don’t have any problm… u show me others what have you bought…

Swara : hmm hm.. give me 2 mins I will come wearing other dress which I have selected… (n she goes to trial room)
Sanskar is giving his idiotic grin…remember the scene of his HOT presumed wife…

??????15 mins later??????

Sanskar ws waiting for her for last 15 mins… 2 mins have turned 15 mins..He is becoming restless… walking here n there n waiting for her… Every secend seeing the watch…

Sanskar : ( to himself ) this is her 2 mins… I don’t know why girls take so much of tym also in trial room… (frustrated)
Thn swara comes n sanskar was mesmerised….

Swara wore crop top n long skirt… she was looking breath-taking. ..
Frst sanskar was nt able to take his eyes off her…. whn he comes to his senses he founds that she is totally nt comfortable in those clothes n ppl around are staring her… He gave thm I-will-take-ur-eyes-off-from-the-socket-if-u-continue-watching-her-like-this look…

Crop top link to make imagination easy : here
He goes near her n hugs her so that she doesn’t feel more discomfort because of her naked belly… He was frst angry on her if she was nt feeling comfortable thn why she wore that…

Sanskar : ( whispers in her ear while hugging ) Swara why are you wearing this?..

Swara : huh.. mmm.. u didn’t lyk it. ..

Sanskar : I loved it but…….

???????flashback???????

In a party…
Kavita n sanskar entered a wild party…. music is on… mood is on… alcohol is full… its party tym…
Kavita was in a black dress n sanskar in dashing black shirt n pant…

Kavita dress : here
It was a pub… party was in full mood. ..

Sanskar : ( uninteresting mood ) Kavi whn we will go.. u know na I don’t lyk these high music n loud parties…

Kavita : sanky… plz. .. now only we have come… let’s enjoy.. don’t b a spoil sport….

Sanskar : ok… as u say… bt plz jaldi Haa. ..

Kavita : ok.. will try….u r just opposite of me… urggg. ..

Sanskar : ( smiled ) n opposite attracts (he winked )

Party was full on… thn sanky saw boys flirting n talking to kavita…. n he felt bad bcoz kavita was enjoying it even if they are committed….
He catched her with arm n dragged her to the corner…

Kavita : what the hell sanky… I was talking…

Sanskar : talking or flirting

Kavita : don’t act like a jerk ok… don’t b a hypocrite…

Sanskar : hypocrite. … wow… I would have nt have been a problm if u were nt committed bt u r committed to me dammit…

Kavita : (jerking her arms from his grip ) so what haa… I m committed bt I am nt ur slave ok…. I m also an independent human.. n every human lyk attention… even if the human is u….

Sanskar : ( speechless ) they were eyeing u badly I was nt able to control..

Kavita : so what.. its there problm nt urs…

Sanskar : why you wear yâar so small clothes… I love even if you will nt wear it. ..

Kavita : I am nt wearing it for u…I m wearing it for myself.. I lyk it…n u r my boyfriend nt my husband to guide me what to wear…n if u have so much of problm. .. plz plz leave the party I will go with anirudh.. (saying this she left )

Sanskar : ( broken down ) I am nothing to her or what. … I don’t lyk ppl staring her…. she doesn’t care abt my attention bt others. .. m I important to her… (wiping tears ) yup dumbo u r… u r her boyfriend.. n u must have only reacted very much so she yelled at u…

???????flashback???????
Sanskar : ( in mind ) I should nt make swara angry too…by saying those stupid words again… n this tym I am not her her bf or husband.. (disappointed )

Sanskar : but it’s ur life u can wear anything….

Swara : I… actually… I didn’t lyk it.. I thought u will lyk ur wife to be lyk this so I wore it…

Sanskar : ( still hugging n disbelief look ) Swara now only I told… u don’t have to do this. ..

Swara : ( cut off ) sshhh.. I know bt I am happy I did this. .. as I saw how possessive my hubby is…

Thn he realised he is still hugging her… He parted away…

Sanskar : u r fine….

Swara : haan mujhe kya hona h… (confused look )

Sanskar : actually u r girl… mm. I shouldn’t interfere in ur dressing…(remembering kavitas word )

Swara : shut up Patidev. .. now as I am nt comfortable in it. …u know my Patidev is also becoming possessive (sanskar unknowingly smiled ) so u choose a dress for me… A casual one…

Sanskar : are you sure…

Swara : double sure… (happily ) as…
What u will choose for me
Will be divine
Bcoz I am urs n u r mine…

*guys I just wrote these lines as they just popped up in my mind I know it’s nt too good nt frst tym writing some poetic lines so don’t bash me…*

Sanskar : aahaa shayari n All..

Swara : yup ur Patni is multitalented

Sanskar : ( smirked ) hmm.. If pati will be multitalented thn company ka asar toh padega…

Swara : now stop praising urself. . Or I will nt able to digest more…n haan digest se yaad aaya. .. plz do fast I am hungry…

Sanskar started to stare at tops n tees.. frst of all he was totally confused what yo select what nt too..

Sanskar : u girls get many choices… its complicated

Swara : I know ri8… ab start… don’t waste tym…

He was going through different collection n was getting very confused

Looking at his confused face she starts laughing…

Sajde mein yun hi jhukta hoon
Tum pe hi aa ke rukta hoon
Kya yeh sab ko hota hai

Hum ko kya lena hai sab se
Tum se hi sab batein ab se
Ban gaye ho tum meri dua

( sanskar hears laughing sound n peeps from the clothes collection in front of him.. only to see swara laughing heartedly… After seeing it he too had a curve on his face..)

Khuda Jaane ke mein fida hun
Khuda Jaane mein mit gaya
Khuda jaane yeh kyun huwa hai
Ke ban gaye ho tum mere khuda

Tu kahe to tere hi kadam ke
main nishanon pe
Chalun rukun ishaare pe
Tu kahe tho khwabon ka bana ke
Main bahana sa
Mila karu sirhaane pe

( while he was in his dreamland.. He got a tap on his shoulder he turned to see it was swara… He was confused as she was there so he again sees there where she was earlier to find no one there… swara signed what happened n he nodded as nothing… n again start to choose something )

Ohhh
Tum se dil ki baatein seekhi
Tum se hi yeh raahe seekhi
Tum pe marr ke mein tho
Jjee gaya

Khuda Jaane ke mein fida hun
Khuda Jaane mein mit gaya
Khuda jaane yeh kyun huwa hai
Ke ban gaye ho tum mere khuda

( he again got a tap…. n again it was swara… He showed what expression bt she showed him the clothes he was selecting. .. n thn he looked at thm at it was all dress collection thn he remembers swara wanted casual… so he swifts his hands through his hairs n smiled foolishly for his foolishness n again swara laughed at his expression n sanskar was in his own land )

Dil kahe ke aaj tho, chupa lo tum
panahon mein
Ke darr hai tum ko kho doonga
Dil kahe ki sambhal zara khushi ko
Na nazar laga
Ke darr hai mein tho ro dunga

Hooo
Karthi hoon sao vaade tum se
Bandhe dil ke dhaage tum se
Yeh tumhe na jane kya hua

( whn swara ended her laughing session she took his hands n took him to the casual section. ..In the way too his concentration was only on swara..he again saw the clothes n gave confused look )

Khuda Jaane ke mein fida hun
Khuda Jaane mein mit gaya
Khuda jaane yeh kyun huwa hai
Ke ban gaye ho tum mere khuda

( this tym swara gave him leave it typ expression n started to search herself… bt he stopped her hand n now became serious n watched all clothes there )

Sajde mein yun hi jhukta hoon
Tum pe hi aa ke rukta hoon
Kya yeh sab ko hota hai

Hum ko kya lena hai sab se
Tum se hi sab batein ab se
Ban gaye ho tum meri dua

Khuda Jaane ke mein fida hun
Khuda Jaane mein mit gaya
Khuda jaane yeh kyun huwa hai
Ke ban gaye ho tum mere khuda

Ke ban gaye ho tum mere khuda

( sanskar was watching everything perfectly thn his eyes fall in a top n he showed it to her. … she too loved it..n ran n kissed him on the cheeks… n showed him thumbs up )

Dress Link : here

Swara : ohho Patidev. .. choice toh bht achi h… offcourse it will be na what a stupid question… I m ur choice.. bt soo much of tym…. I thought u will never find one

Sanskar : ( confidence ) every precious thing needs tym

Swara : Hmmm. (Winked n left for trial room..)

Sanskar was smiling continuesly… n again waiting period started… n again mr. Business man become impatient…

Now whn swara came she was looking too classy… With high platform heels n high pony tail n matching accessories….

Sanskar : now let’s go…n u r looking divine in my divine choice…

Swara blushed n they cleared there bills n moved towards the food court….

Ppl were staring swara n as sanskar saw any prsn giving scnd look to her his grip in her waist goes more firm. .. swara was smiling in this process…atlast they went to the table. .n sat opposite to each other…

Swara : ( smiling )

Sanskar : swara yâar why you are smiling from that tymm…

Swara : wo chodo …. u r very possessive yâar. .. n I am…..

Sanskar : ( cutting off ) srry don’t be angry I some times become hyper… plz sorry… I know every body lyk attention… bt…I…

*He is remembering kavita’s statement n after break up he compare every girl with her so he is reacting as if he wanna mend his earlier mistakes *

Swara : ( cutting off ) hey hey wait… u r telling me a attention seeker. .. u r so mean sanskar… u should have frst listened my words I was going to tell I am so lucky to have u…n u… I hate u…

Sanskar : what lucky… bt I was behaving lyk a… jerk..

Swara : hey how dare you called my husband jerk (sanskar amused ) I will punch u if u repeat it.. I lyked it… It gives so much relief whn u will feel that there is someone who cares for u… who is there for u… u don’t know how much protected I feel whn I am

with u… u will never understand… bcoz u have never gone through a pain ( sanskar saw swara’s eyes which was only filled with pain )

Sanskar : what pain..

Swara : ummm….umm.. nothing just aayese hi… n forget that bt now I am angry with u… Sanskar I only want ur attention… what will I do of others attention they are no body to me bt the prsn who is sitting in front of me is everything…
♡“U r everything to me
Others are nothing
Ur arms whn around me
Gives me the feeling as
I am nt ur anything bt everything…”♡

Sanskar : (overwhelmed n moist eyes ) yâar swara sorry…

Swara was silent no response

Sanskar : again mon vrat shuru… urggg…

They completed the lunch silently… bcoz a naughty idea was going on in sanskar’s mind…

All of a sudden a big ice cream bowl came on the table…

Swara glared at it with hungry eyes bt can’t do anything bcoz of her ego…Sanskar was enjoying it. ..

Sanskar : ( took the frst the frst spoon of ice cream in his mouth n saw swara’s watery mouth n smiled) u want some ( showing a spoon towards her n again taking it back ) no no no u r angry with me… thn why will u…( again he started to eat it…swara was seeing him from corner of her eyes )

As sanskar took more two spoon. .. now it was enough for swara. …she snatched the bowl from his hand n started it eating..

Sanskar : Arre what is this

Swara : ( eating ) forgiving u last tym… I m nt an attention seeker ok.. I can even live with u in that saree if you gaurentee me it will nt fall… n now don’t disturb me I am eating… ( n thn she became fully involve in the ice cream..)

Sanskar was adorning her childish acts.. n was smiling ..

While eating the ice cream…. In middle…

Swara : sanky… I forgot only… I have to buy some more clothes what will I do with only two pair…

Sanskar : I know…. finish it thn we will buy..

Swara : sanky what papa will think.. He was against the marriage n now this (nervous look)

Sanskar : what what..?

Swara : I m the bahu of the house n I am in jeans… n I have only bought jeans n dresses… I forgot only. .. awww… how papa will react

Sanskar : ( smilingly ) (in mind ) she doesn’t know baba is broad minded… now let’s take it as an advantage n let’s tease her

Sanskar : yup u r ri8 swara

Swara : hmm.. If he will become angry n will kick out me our of the house thn..

Sanskar : thn what I will get u in..

Swara : shut up stupid… how can u go againSt papa’s order…

Sanskar : thn what you will do. .

Swara : shopping…

Sanskar : that only we are doing from morning. ..

Swara : ( stands up from seat to go ahead ) let’s go. …

Sanskar : ( murmurs ) baba was ri8 shopping with women are not atall a easy job… (sighed n stood up n start to go ahead )

Swara : ( turned ) jaldi

Sanskar : hmm hmm..

BT suddenly a girl came n closed sanskar’s eyes from behind…n ws giggling… swara was shocked…

Girl : guess it dude….

Sanskar : hmm hmm it’s yup… its u.. its u…( touching her hand to guess )

Screen freezes at swara’s shocked
Sanskar’s excited n girls happy face….

Tomorrow : girl revealed, traditional avtaar , ACP calling…

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Who is the girl? A girl hater happy to find a girl something fishy? How Swara will react? What pain Swara was talking about? Is she getting her memory back? Will she leave sanky thn?… lots of questions right…. let’s see what happens…
How ws the ep guys…hope u lyked it…
Acha I wanna do a poll
Story needs a couples entry so choose guys :

● randhir n sanyukta (sadda haq )
● asad n zoya ( qubool hai season one )
● arjun arohi (kitni mohobbat hai )
● manik nandini (kyy )
N others u can also suggest.
Actually I can imagine these couple easily n can’t write the nxt. ..I give preferences to SanDhir n asYA… as they will perfectly fit in the story… bt every thing depends on u all…

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Guys cvs have gone mad… I have heard many spoilers… bt recent is shomi prego …. swara kidnap… Memory loss n swara will act lyk kid… bt I don’t lyk it… I will love If she forgets everything except shomi n dida.. means back to modern swara n swasan love again blossom. .. This swara will act lyk a child is pathetic… earlier also this concept ruined the show madhubala…

Acha ek aur poll..

□ swara as a kid after memory loss
□ swara only remember shomi n dida
□ swara remember laksh n loves him

Choose which u lyk…?..
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N ATLAST THNX A LOT GUYS FOR SHOWERING SO MUCH OF LOVE ON ME… LITERALLY I CAN’T THNX U MORE… PLZ GUYS COMMENT N MOTIVATE ME LYK ALWAYS N PLZ SILENT READERS DO COMMENT…

Credit to: Sujata

161 comments

  1. Bhargavi

    I dont know anything about the couples di, so I am not speaking anything about them.
    Coming to the story, story was just awesome and I am just loving how swara I changing the opinions Sanskar has because of his past.I too want to know about the pain swara was speaking and about the girl who came. I am so eager to know di, Please post the next one also early

    • sujata

      Thnx bhargavi ?
      U will get ur answers soon as the story proceeds
      Have patience sweety…?
      Will upload nxt soon

  2. Neha

    Yaar regarding ur queries I opt sandhir n second one both first n second case is OK with me as in both swasan scenes gonna come but it would be more good in first case when swara stays in mm regarding shomi pregnancy I don’t wanna comment for me it’s unnecessary and suju right now I don’t wanna think what will happen next in ur ff just wanna enjoy swasan scenes ?? Hahaha unke aage kuch nahi

    • sujata

      Hahah.. true neha… me too want frst case in 2nd poll…n yup shumi’s prego topic is out of mind typ concept…
      Yup will keep trying so that u can enjoy swasan to the fullest.. bt soon intense track will come…

      • Neha

        Hehe Yup correct shomi pregnancy out of mind topic but hey u started uploading this ff on fb also…. Right?? I saw till epi 2 it has been uploaded… It’s good now more will know ur talent

      • sujata

        Yup I started it.. n u didn’t answer my question earlier. .. R u the neha of FDTL OR TLND? ?..

      • No

        No dear I don’t have such talent, I’m only a reader not writer u guys only take that responsibility #neha uploads her ff on fb u can check there

  3. sweety

    Awesome dear…..this is the first time Im commenting on ur fiction…… Actually I read all the episodes yesterday only and I really loved it yaar…….and I was very much desperate for ur next update…. Alas!!!! I got it…..awesome yaar….nyc story….

    • sujata

      ThnX sweety ? for breaking ur silence
      Yup I was also missing you all lyk hell..
      Will upload nxt ASAP

  4. Neha

    Swasan scenes are so good especially sanky unknowingly saying sorry n then swara realizing him a true girl’s nature n changing his thinking ……..it’s awesome lovely

  5. jaf

    I thought i would be the 1st one but huff!!! My mom! It took me ½ an hr. to read. She was scolding as i didnt study. Whatever u nailed it again. Kavita was so bad wid my sanky! Poor sanky 🙁
    But my swara is bst.
    I lykd the possessive sanky!
    Luv u suju!!!! 🙂

    • sujata

      Thnx jaf ?. .. no problem jaf… I m happy that you read it…
      Hahaha.. All mom’s enemy mobile ? I tooget scolding for using excess phn n nt studying. .. lola ?
      While writing kavSan I too felt why I am writingthis bullshit.. bt alas it was necessary ?

      • jaf

        Yeah! Mom’s r too much… but we hav to suffer at last anywys….. love u & ho sake toh post asap ok? Gud mrng ! I am gonna sleep now! Its gonna b 2 am
        Bye

  6. sneha

    Hey sujata…i ws soooo restless to read ur ff…nd yeahhh at last i found it..thnk goodd…nd ya abt the coupleszz…it doesnt matter much as i toh only want our swasan… 😉 but still.. out of them all sandhir lookzz nice…epi was full of cutenesss…waiting fr the nxt one soon…thnxx.. 🙂

    • sujata

      Thnx sneha ?
      I ws too restless to post it… bt server problm cant help it…
      Yup couple will be decided by the votes ?
      Will upload nxt ASAP

  7. I prefer arjun n arohi..

    I want to see swara as a Kid… Actually I want to see sanky taking care of her…

    N rahi baat episode ki to I was dying to read… It was so osm… The was sanskar behave protective… Was a complete aww
    In these two days when site was down…. my mumma was lyk beta phn ni chla ri aaj ????

    • sujata

      Thnx meher ?
      Sanky taking care will be good…. bt again love story blossoming will be awesome … so I want 2nd option ??
      Haha. .. lyk ur mumma my frnds too said the same. ..

  8. Anu

    I was having Biryani in peace park while reading this and my sister was giving me the stop-chatting wala look. It was perfect. And the poetic lines were superb. You are a wonderful writer Suju!

    And. . .

    I want Manan ♥

    I love them after Swasan. They are so adorable.

    • sujata

      Thnx anu ? ?
      Hahah…. same happens to me whn I open my phn in family tym… even my phn gets snatched ?
      Thnx for the poetic lines. . I thought to do something romantic bt again I dropped in cute section… now toh I have left thinking that I can do a romantic scene…
      Yup manan are adorable. .. bt let’s c what vote says
      N love ya..?

  9. priya tripathi

    Awesome like always n ya i choose Asya for the pair i m big fan qubool hai pair of Asya n sanam Aahil n i think that swara lose her memory she will remember laksh lov or shomi dida

    • sujata

      Thnx priya ?
      I am too a fan of qubool haI bt only for karan Singh grover. …
      I m a die heart fan of karan Singh grover ?

  10. Sneha garewal

    Nice episode.. Bt i think swara is just pretending.in reality she remembers her past..as she say what pain she go through that means she forgot nothing..now waiting for next part ..pls update soon

    • sujata

      Thnx sneha garewal ?
      Let’s see what story comes…
      Anything can happen… n if she remembers her past thn why she is doing so…. All questions will be answered soon ?
      Will upload asap

      • Sneha garewal

        As she was not happy in her past life.even people in her life torture her..she talk about pain..thats why she doesnt wanna go..so she is pretending.. This is my view..bt i hope ur imagination is best ..whtever the rsn of her behavior is..it makes ff more interesting..

      • sujata

        Sneha I have added the scene only to make it more interesting…
        Let’s c ur imagination is related to the story or nt…

  11. Dev

    Hey sujatha long time…missed u buddy…..lovd d epi …..n d dress of swara…..n d goofy grin plasterd on sanmys face….lovd d childish swara…ovrall nc epi
    Lots of love n hugs….

    • sujata

      Hey urmila welcome dr in TU…
      Dr couples will be solely based on votes let’s see who wins….

  12. Shagun

    For pairs iwill choose sandhir
    And for current track of swaragini i will choose swara only remember shomi and dida in modern avatar
    Awesome ep and thanks for giving dresses links

  13. Anamika

    Manik and nandini.
    There is another suggestion for couple. Its sid and roli. Its just suggestion. You may take and may not.
    Episode was fab. Waiting excitingly for next one.

    • sujata

      Thnx anamika.. ?
      I loved the suggestion bt Dr no other commented for thmm… so can’t take it…
      Will upload nxt ASAP ??

  14. Anjali

    Loved it suuu……

    Such a sweet and nice epi….

    As for the first poll no idea.

    2nd no way swalak… the kid one or only shomi and dida. Both are fine

    • sujata

      Thnx anjie ??
      Thnx for the compliment Dr ?

      Lol no idea. ..

      Me too want the same. ..
      Love you ?
      Take care
      Tata

  15. tani

    swasan.k alawa koi couple samajh e ni aata,set r best…but as u r asking I will say arjun n arohi.

    n ya coming to d episode it was good….I loved it….update next epi soon

  16. Shabrin

    It was really nice….why I am feeling that swara has not forget anything..But I don’t know about 1st pole….as u like but in 2nd one I will like if swara remember dida and sumi only

    • sujata

      Thnx shabrin ?
      Let’s see what’s going on.. have patience …
      Me too want the same in 2nd poll…
      Will upload nxt ASAP Dr

  17. Niku

    Really awsome episode n ur dress selection also gud….its suits d situation….. n i thnk couple must be asad n zoya ….baki dkhte h votes kya aaye ge…ty for d update
    N ys poetic lines r also gud & simple but ncy

    • sujata

      Thnx niku…?
      Thnx for the compliment Dr..
      Yup let’s see who will win…
      Will upload nxt ASAP Dr
      Thnxfor the poetic lines.. Dr tried to be romantic bt again landed at cute ??

  18. aditi syam

    Awesome sujatha no words to say cant stop myself frm cmnting nd yaar cn u plzzzzz bring back that kavita becuzzzz she has to knw wat she has lost nd swasan could be closer plzzzz think abtbit post soon will be waiting

  19. Sree harini

    After reading this, I understood that you asked for something but I am really sorry for not commenting befure SUJJU..will read the episode now and then I will comment.

    • Sree harini

      Hello SUJJU!!! The episode is good..I loved reading it and the first blue dress of swara is ….???? I loved it. You really have a good selection.
      And haha, sanskar always wants to tease her but khuda jaane song is my favourite infact that was the very first song I heard in Hindi.
      And then coming to your question about the girl, I guess you will introduce the one for whom are taking the poll. And sorry for not participating in it because I really don’t know any of them because my mom watches only colors and hence I know hot pairs in it
      Now coming to SR pole, I wish a childish swara because in the other two cases, sanskar will be broken into million pieces. If she remembers only her family, then sanskar is a stranger to her and if it swalak, then the other three leads will suffer and another advantage of a memory loss swara is that we will get to see more of sanskar and he will once again prove his love.
      I just opened SWASAN ff Facebook page today morning using my dad’s ID and saw your fiction there. God! You must see me, I was jumping like a lunatic in happiness and all the best sujju

      • sujata

        Sree again yaar. .. now I am angry ? ? frndship mai no sorry no thank you dr….
        Thnx for appreciating the ep…lol..
        Ur reaction for the dress ??. .. many ppl say I have gr8 choice..??
        *proudy look*??

        Khuda Jaane na… I added this song just before uploading it was nt earlier in my update…. bt don’t know why In science lab in school I started to humm it n ended up uploading it… may b for u ????
        Ooo.. u r only colour fan… Dr watch other channels too.. u will find many other hot couples too..?
        I wish 2nd in SR poll… I know I will feel sad to see broken sanskar bt the sadness will go away whn will see again the love story rekindling??

        Lol.. u were soo happy..thnx dr.. n haan u should also give ur updates there…. more pPl will come to know abt ur talent babe..
        Try it. .no harm..?
        Love you babe ?
        Take care

      • Sree harini

        Okay baba..I won’t say sorry..smile now beacise that stupid angry face first suit you *runs away to escape*

        I am glad that you uploaded the song for me…I ..ican understand your love sujju..you don’t need to show off..lol.

        Yeah will get a new love story but my choice is a childish swara.

        I wish I would have updated there but I don’t have an fb account dear SUJJU. My mom is not permitting. I use my dad’s that too secretly..don’t spill it out…shh it’s a secret

        CRAZY ME!!

  20. Jitha

    great going yaar…i just love ur ff…keep updating….nd yeah i would prefer sandhir and abt the upcming track in swaragini it ll b lyk swara forgeting everuthng xcept dida nd shomi thats it …so we can find our old swara back and a new love stry blooming b/w swasan…in swaragini when 1st they met sanskar was acting childishly nd he never noticed swara i want a new love story for swasan with lot of confusions and possessiveness nd lotzzzz nd lotzzzz of love

  21. Priys

    yaar superb plz update next soon.yhamx sujata for providing the link.but i have a problem. actually i added a link it works properly in word but when i copy past the dicument the link gets vanished.it converts into a simple writing.plz ifvu can then help me.

    • sujata

      Thnx priys. ..
      Dr I don’t have any solution for your problm… as I never faced it sorry dr

  22. Tweety pankaj

    Wowwwwww Awesome !!!!! I read all the episodes in one shot waiting for the next episode plzz update sooon!!!

  23. sujata

    Dr readers really really sorry bt moSt probably I will post on Monday for sure as I have 2 exams on Monday so I don’t think so it will b possible for me to post tomorrow… even I have nt read any ff from tomorrow…. really hell busy bcoz of exams… so plz forgive me… hope u will understand my situation… n will try my best to find tym to write tomorrow sorry readers…. really really sorry hope you will understand n will nt bash me…
    Love you all
    Keep supporting

  24. Sree

    Waiting for ur ff di.loved this ep.plz post soon and alllll thheee besttttt for ur exams.

  25. Aditi

    Today I Read all the chapters in one go………I will have to agree that you are a great writer. Now I’m waiting eagerly for the next episode.

  26. Natasha

    Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii….am back for some days…You didn’t miss me na sissy????????bt I missed u like hell..(its heaven actually)..???

  27. Natasha

    The chap was awesome.. lil busy.. later I’ll give long comment..I came out WD my friend..am roaming in mall now..

    • sujata

      Yayy. .. how r u behena. … me too missed you lyk hell…
      Enjoy enjoy mall n all…
      EXmas were good…
      Hope so good marks
      *fingers crossed *
      N congo for ur results nats…..
      Love you n miss you ??…

    • sujata

      Yayy. .. how r u behena. … me too missed you lyk hell…
      Enjoy enjoy mall n all…
      EXmas were good…
      Hope so good marks
      *fingers crossed *
      N congo for ur results nats…..
      Love you n miss you ??…
      Eeee..?

    • sujata

      Yayy. .. how r u behena. … me too missed you lyk hell…
      Enjoy enjoy mall n all…
      EXmas were good…
      Hope so good marks
      *fingers crossed *
      N congo for uur results

    • sujata

      Yayy. .. how r u behena. ???… me too missed you lyk hell…
      Enjoy enjoy mall n all…
      EXmas were good…
      Hope so good marks
      *fingers crossed *
      N congo for uur results

  28. Natasha

    Sissy am fine.. u were enjoying without me.. i know..nd ur song nd dress selection is just awwwwwwwwww…. I’ll tell u something abt this song in mail..ok???? nd thanks..

    • Natasha

      Today I was soooooo happy… I was roaming in mall wdout ny tnsn after suuuuch a long time…. uffffffffff…me nd my friend roamed whole day…half kolkata…in this hot weather…. I know everyone will say me mad….

  29. Natasha

    Sujju..my sissy..my cutie..where are u behena???!?? am worried dear..plzzz inform me sissy. ???????

    • sujata

      Dr.. sorry exams eXmas I am hell busy sorry dr… from tomorrow I will be active … hope u will be free tomorrow. … will wait for ur mail?
      Mall is always fun.. whn fends r around… n jab mall jate h Tention khudba khud chali jati h…
      Why will I be angry on u… whn I sissy is so sweet no one can be angry on u…??…
      Dr I am nt even replying on fb… I was hell busy…
      Tc
      Gn.
      Love you ? ?

  30. ishu

    I was waiting a long it was just superb epi fantaastic loving swasan scene and my vote goes to second one swara only remember shomi and dida plzz plzz next part asap plzz plzz plzz plzz

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