Stay away…. I m nt ur husband (episode 4)

Hii guys sujata here. … I thnk so u have remembered my name today gonna write the 4th chapter hope you all will lyk it…
But I think so u r nt liking my work as the comments are decreasing day by day n by huge number. … I m nt a comment digger bt I am new to this field so to assure myself that I am doing good I need to look for the comments. … as it’s decreasing I am getting n idea dats I am making its uninteresting as day passed …. I don’t wanna a lengthy comments but a assurance dat u read it… atleast comment a dot in comment box dat will really nt take ur tym…. Once I will be assure that ppl are reading I don’t care how many comments are coming. ..n I am trying my best to entertain you….
Links of prev ep:
http://www.tellyupdates.com/stay-away-m-nt-ur-husband-episode-intro/

http://www.tellyupdates.com/stay-away-m-nt-ur-husband-episode-1/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/stay-away-m-nt-ur-husband-episode-2/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/stay-away-m-nt-ur-husband-episode3/

GUYS TODAY GONNA REVEAL THE GIRL…
I know u r eagarly waiting sorry for making u wait n thnx for patience as story needed it…n frst it will b swasan but as mystery unfolds u will come to know it was ragsan too…. so u can imagine helly or tejaswi whom u r comfortable with. … n I m nt attracting swasan n ragsan fans for comments… I know some will feel lyk dat bt it’s nt so.. I know after reading today ep half of the ppl will come to know the story bt u ppl were disturbed abt pairs so I said it… hope it will not affect the story… srry for this bak bak…now story
CHAPTER BEGINS. … I GUESS IT WILL BE A LONG ONE…
Sanskar held the delicate angel or his ms. Afat in his arms n went to his room to keep her there whn his anger calm down a lil. …
Whn he keep her on the bed his face was too close to her….. He saw her eye swollen due to continous crying n tear stains all over her face. …
Sanskar : ( thinking ) I don’t know what just happened I just know I was nt able to control my anger… she just proposed me… huh. .. I even don’t know her… Secondly I can’t fall in love (he sighed )… n thirdly now I can’t trust any women srry dear… but I don’t know I felt a unknown pain in my heart after I saw ur tear welled eyes n whn those bastards throw u from the van just to save you from police enquiry so dat u can b treated well I brought u home … bt what was dat ‘I am ur wife ‘ drama… I didn’t thought you will be a rival pet or attention seeker but ur this move has made ur this impression on my mind… I hope it’s nt dat…. bt this has made it more important that I should stay away from u…. I m nt ur husband Dr… uff what I am thinking. … she did a huge drama downstairs n I am asking sorry. .. urggg… I should surely go for a check up… After her arrival I really need a doc…

His thoughts were disturbed whn Dp n Panchi came to his room… as DP know his son very well his anger in nt dat one which will calm so soon… as well as he has nt seen his this much angry before. ..He saw him intensely watching her…
Dp : sanky what was dat…. u know na she is nt well… u shouldn’t have reacted lyk dat…
Before he could complete he was cut off
Sanskar : what dad… what unwell… she was talking rubbish…she is all well just doing melo drama. .. bl**dy attention seekers… I know these types of girls. … I face thm daily. … u don’t know abt thm baba how cheap are they…
Dp : sanky don’t judge a book by its cover there can be a perfect reason for it.. u never know. ..
Sanskar : (sighed )I know baba u r more experienced than me bt I am more practical than u this all is a drama baba. .. don’t attach ur heart with her. .. I m feeling bad as I thought for once dat she must have genuinely got hurt. .. bt this world always amaze me bt it’s ppl…bl**dy non trust worthy ppl…
Dp : sanky ! Listen don’t bring ur past experience in this case…. beta…
Sanskar : baba no more arguments I am calling doc..as being a responsible person I dont wanna risk anyone’s life. …n thn she will gain her conciousness. … We will ask her address n drop her there… don’t expect anything more from me…I know I m being heartless but after morning incident I can’t bear her anymore. .. hope u can understand. … but I have a doubt that she is faking her faint even…wait …. what’s wrong in checking…

He went near the girl n looked at her innocent face intensely. … his heart was saying what he is doing is wrong. .. what he is saying is rubbish bt he had long before left to take advice of his heart n… now he only hears about his head… that’s the one of the reason he has become successful in business in short span…
He thn hold her shoulder tightly in her unconscious state n staked her vigorously. … saying : wake up! Wake up! I know u r faking around. .. now no need to act…. face the reality n say ur motive… I know u heard our convo. .. u know my opinion about u… dude just wake up dammit…
Thn suddenly he felt a tap on his shoulder he turned n found Dp. .. Dp gave him a assuring look.. dat it’s fine. .. He without uttering another word left the room making the call..
Dp sat beside her n caressing her hair was thinking : who r u… don’t know bt u r effecting sanky very much… He doesn’t believe in women…. n I can’t say whole fault was his frst annapurna thn kavita. …. He never got a good experience with women…. but even u being a women he trusted you for once… that’s enough for me to know he is liking u… even he didn’t talked to u it’s kinda weird…. don’t know I feel lyk u will bring the old sanky back… today ur incident hurt him a lot… I don’t know why you did this. … bt I know he is hurt bcoz he knows u r nt permanent. … may b u will leave today or tomorrow. … u r a guest… bt I pray to god that some miracle happen n u can stay here n change my son to back in his old form… but sanky is right we should nt keep expectations for those things dat can’t happen….
In this while. .. whn Dp was thnking this Panchi climbed the bed n sat near the girl. …n was admiring her…. atlast she broke her silence n also broke DPs thoughts. …
Panchi : dadu she is so beautiful na… why can’t she be my chachi… why Chachu scolded her so much…. she was crying a lot… If I will be big lyk her thn Chachu will also scold me lyk this. ..?..
Dp was going to answer her innocent questions bt both of thm got startled by a voice from back ofcourse it’s sanskar. …
Sanskar : yup she is beautiful (admiring swara )… bt she can’t b ur chachi bcoz I am nt married to her… n I scolded her bcoz she is nt a good girl… u will be a good girl always I will never scold u…. will u b a good girl Panchi. .??..

Panchi just nodded. … again looked at swara n thn at Dp n said : dadu I am getting late for school…. I m going…I m a food girl na I should nt b late… n thn she went outside of the room for school…
N sanskar n DP smiled…
Sanskar : baba I have called doc he might come anytime for her checkup… n now I m going to do my office work… as I am nt going office… bcoz I know u will nt b able to handle this drama…
Dp just smiled n said : sometimes I think I am ur father or u r mine…n he left the room..
Sanskar rolled his eyes n resumed his work ..n sometimes use to check her…
AFTER 1 HR …
SANSKAR’S ROOM
Doc has come n checked her…
Doc : her wounds r healing…. no worries about thm… give this medicines…. I m only afraid abt internal injuries… as external is easy to b healed bt internal are even hard to find… The incident u r talking abt we can say she had a memory loss bt I don’t know why she called sanskar beta as her husband…. how she assumpted that can only be answered by her…
Sanskar : (cutting off ) but I know how she assumed I am her husband… she is any desparate girl after my money…
Doc : sanskar don’t b so negative ( sanskar chukled)… The injuries which is have is real… tomorrow’s incident u have only watched… I thnk so she is victim nt the guild ( sanskar was speechless as docs statement was true n he had no defence now)… ok Mr Dp I am going now call me whn she becomes concious …
Doc was going to leave whn they heard coughing sound from the end of the room. … All diverted their attention to the bed… yup u r guessing ri8… girl has gain her conciousness. …
Sanskar ran n helped her to sit… All were shocked to a sudden change of behaviour as a second ago he was b***cing abt her n now helping her…..
Girl got up by rubbing her eyes…n thn hold her head clearly indicating that she is having a head ache…After some tym she noticed her environment. … seeing sanky near her she smiled sheepishly…. bt diverting her gaze to unfamiliar faces she became afraid n hold Sanky’s had tightly…don’t know how bt sanky didn’t jerk her hand n understood that she is afraid so he thought to introduce thm…
Sanskar : see he is my father (pointing Dp) n he is doc treat u…
Girl : but what happen to me sanskar why I need doc. .. n ohh.. I don’t remember anything. .. I feel lyk I lost a very valuable thng…I feel lyk I have lost myself. ..
Cant able to hear more
Sanskar : ( softly ) don’t say lyk dat…
All ate shocked c his concern…
Doc : beta u r his wife ( sanskar chukled n gave doc a i-will-kill-u look ) u have met with an accident. ..
Girl : (innocently ) thn why don’t remember anything
Doc : ahh..ahh..
Sanskar understood dat doc can’t able to make her understand so took the initiative. ..
Sanskar : c don’t panic… promise u will nt panic ( girl nodded )… hmm.. u lost ur memory… ( she widened her eyes ) …. I told don’t panic I am her na ur HUSBAND ( said sarcastically seeing doc )all will be fine…
○○○○○○FLASHBACK ○○○○○○

Just whn doc was telling the consequences of her memory loss.. If she had one.. whn the girl was unconscious. .. He told thm dat
Doc : (with professionalism ) c Mr. Maheshwari being a doc I suggest nt to give her any stress nt at all… If she had a memory loss which is a chance as her head is bled a lot… so plz accept dat u r her husband …
Sanskar : ( cutting off ) are you mad doc uncle… I r knowing what rubbish u r talking abt. ..
Doc : sanskar listen frst .. If we will give her pressure to remember her past she can even slip to coma… her condition is very critical ( sanskar flinged ) be practical. .. I m nt telling you to be her husband for life tymmm. . She must too have a family she will have to go back to thm … just for a month or two so dat here condition can at least b stable. …n it’s a police case we will have no Dat why they attempted her murder. …so plz. ..
Sanskar : ( thinkingly ) ok.. Doc bt just for a month…
Dp : yup I too have no problm I will get a company at home (smilingly )…
○○○○○○FLASHBACK ENDS ○○○○○○
Girl : I know u will nt let anything happen to me ( sanskar was shocked seeing her blind trust ) I know how much you love me…. bt u treated me very badly… what a kind of husband u r… u know how hurt I was…. If I had nt seen ur love at ni8 for me I would have left u…
All r shocked. .. spcly sanky as he doesn’t remember what he did last ni8 as dat she is saying lyk this…He just remembers their intertwined hands… He looked at doc n DP they gave him a questioning look.. as he was a criminal n all r staring at him..as… as… He raped her…
Sanskar : ( thinking) god .. what I did last ni8.. I don’t remember anything. .. I kissed or what? ?.. or may be more… no no no I can’t do so. . Hey they are looking like I literally raped her n they are going to sue me for it. ..oh.. god. .. Ms. Afat ‘s one more afat… only she can answer now. ..
He looked back at the girl with bowing his head looking at his shoes he thought few minutes earlier I was saying her despo. .. now I facing a situation where I am desperate man. .that’s why it’s said what we do we have to repay it in this life only….. plz I didn’t do anything god..
Sanskar : what I did that u realised my love n dat I am ur husband even after having memory loss..n if u have any problm saying I will send dad n doc outside
Girl : ur love is very strong as even after having memory loss I understood it…n why will I have shame in saying this bt I will b proud to say this even to the world.. ( sanky was shocked n thought modern girl..actually ultra modern girl )
Actually I woke up at ni8 n thn

○○○○○○FLASHBACK ○○○○○○
Girl woke she was scared to c herself in a new environment n her head was spinning. .. she wanted water so she turned left n found a man sleeping with her she was shocked n was going to shout whn found that that man has grabbed her hand n saying in sleep…
Sanskar : plz plz don’t leave me…I can’t leave without u… I will die… I will fix everything. ..will sort every misunderstanding. ..plz don’t go. .. ur sanskar can’t leave without u…. plz plz don’t go…
Saying this he again slept. .
Girl had tears seeing his love towards her in the sleep even. .. n slept by seeing his face. .. her thirst also went away with his confession. …
○○○○○○FLASHBACK ○○○○○○
Girl : I am so lucky to have a caring husband lyk u… After seeing you sharing bed I thought u r my husband n it’s true… ( smiled )
Sanskar’s mouth has felt open. .. He had so bad ideas in mind thank god..nothing happened. ..thn he stare at Dp all are giving him a glare. … ovio he has nt shared with thm dat even now he gets dream of kavita leaving him…He sighed. ..thn looked at the girl who was the sole reason of all his troubles. ..
Girl : ( confused ) plz sanskar can u say my name n who m I? … I don’t remember anything. …
Sanskar : ahh..ah.. (looked at Dp n doc thn found even they are looking at him expectingly ).
Thn he got a msg from his PA so he checked his mobile ignoring her questions as work comes frst…
Msg : sir our new production project of show “surro ka tashan “ is having problm… having a meeting with other board members at 6 o’clock …
Girl : sanskar say na u r acting as u had a memory loss. .. why r u taking so much tym..
Sanskar : (confusingly )call u princess (not realising what he said )
Girl : ( blushingly ) I know every husband call his wife like dat bt what’s my real name… don’t tell me u forgot. … how can you. …
Sanskar : yup how can I m telling na..ahh..hmm.. ( aree yâar what name should I give. .. here PA she troubling me with dat “surro ka tashan “ from morning. ..hmm.. surro. .. swara… yup swara.. good name sanky )… ur name is swara. ..
Girl : wow swara. .. so unique. .. I should surly praise him who gave me this name ( sanskar thought me only just now )… wow it matches ur name c swara n sanskar… so cool..
All smiled at her childishness nature…
Girl : sanskar what’s ur title …
Sanskar : maheshwari (said with a pride bt soon it got lost by her response )
Swara : what!… so big name. .. mine will be even bigger swara sanskar maheshwari. .. uff so big. ..Sanskar me toh fine with this bt atleast thnk abt our children they will take years to learn their mother’s name. .
All shocked bt laughed n sanky was embarrassed. ..
Swara : sanskar u talk so less. .. u r so boring. … god only knows why I married u…atleast speak something I m only talking from dat tym n she kept on blabbering. .. (sanky looked at her admiringly n mesmerised with her beauty n innocence cursed him self for cursing her earlier..)

Atlast sanky can’t take any more
Sanskar : princess now enough we will talk afterwards. .. now sleep. .
Swara pouted bt listened to him n they left the room to let her sleep. …
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After some time doc also left giving thm prescription for medicines. ..
Dp : sanky! I m proud of you how you managed the situation. ..
Sanskar : thnk u baba…
Dp : ohh.. now I became baba from dad.. huh?
Sanskar : sorry baba for being angry on u… u know na my anger. ..
Dp nodded n said : girl is good. .. take care of her. ..
Sanskar : sure… n u should be very happy that u got one more player in ur dramebaaz grp. ..against me…(sanskar pouted)
Dp : haha… she is even a bigger one from us.. (thinking – I am so happy today. .. I m seeing a glimpse of old sanskar today. .hope everything goes ri8 )
Sanskar : true. .. Acha now u take rest n I have to prepare for a meeting
Dp nodded n was leaving bt suddenly stopped n said : sanky
Sanskar : yes baba ( looking towards him )
Dp : I was thinking if the girl is so dramebaaz thn thnk abt ur children how much more they will be…
Sanskar : ( unknowingly ) ya true n laughed n thn realise what he said n shouted : that’s nt funny. .. bt he also blushed n had a stupid grin in his face. ..
Thn he realised what is he doing n screen freezed in sanskar’s shocked face

Guys yesterday I uploaded bt was rejected by telly update. .. srry for inconvenience. .. I had to wrote the story again as I had deleted the original one… bt it’s a long one hope you enjoyed. .. If you r nt enjoying u can say frankly I will stop the ff…
Guys colours have don’t a pole for jodi between swasan n raglak. .. swasan is leading as 65% bt guys do vote in twitter for swasan. …
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NOW GUYS PLZ COMMENT. .. I M NT A COMMENT DIGGER NT JUST WANNA INSURE DAT PPL ARE READING AS I M NEW TO IT… ONCE I GET INSURED I DON’T CARE HOW MANY COMMENTS I GET… ACTUALLY COMMENTS ARE DECREASING WITH A GR8 NUMBER SO I AM SAYING… I DON’T WANNA A LENGTHY COMMENT… U CAN EVEN COMMENT A DOT “.” TO MAKE ME FEEL THAT YOU R READING IT… IT WILL NT TAKE UR MUCH TYM. ..N PLZ SILENT READERS DO COMMENT. …
Thnx for reading n love you all..
(I have nt revised the chapter bcoz of less tym n rewriting so sorry for writing mistakes )

Credit to: sujata

69 comments

  1. mystery

    There r many silent readers and I m one of them…today I broke the silence to say that ur story is amazing and to beg u not to make it ragsan….keep it swasan only…whenever any swasan ff gets interesting writers throw ragsan in it…,u plz dnt do this….for God sake….

    • Dr mystery… its swasan ff only…don’t worry abt ragsan….. I totally assure you will nt b atall disappointed how it will be made ragsan…n it wI’ll b swasan only from beginning to end. …don’t worry

    • Angel thnx for reading… its swasan only… how is ragsan too u will come to know whn mystery will be revealed. .. now its beginning many thngs r left to be told have patience. …n u will have no problem from the method I will make it ragsan… bt it’s swasan only

  2. It was nyc but u rote to vote Swasan ..it hurted me…evn Raglak fans also reading this..so plz….it ill hurt their feelings..also…nw i m not gonna read this ff…so bye dr..i was really addicted to this ff but after seeing that i felt bad..Bye..Best of Luck..

    • Srry zarin if you felt bad…I thnk so I was rude. … bt personally I am a swasan fan…. I also lyk raglak…. bt I prefer swasan. … I told swasan fans to vote for swasan. … I didnt stop raglak fans for voting for thm…. hope u will understand. …srry if I have Hurt. … but It was nt intentional Dr. ..dont read my ff… but plz accept my apology… as I can’t see any one angry with me… n thnx for reading today’s ep…

  3. unab

    Hi I’m reading ur ff. And i will. Sometimes I may not be able to comment but that doesn’t mean that I am not reading. But I should say that I did not read the previous part as I cannot understand hindi so I had to leave reading in the middle. Try to write in English

    • Thnx unab …. .For commenting n reading it… hope I will entertain u further too…n srry for the language inconvenience…. now a days I only write in hindi…hope u will nt have problm furthur abt it…

    • Ayesha Dr. . Don’t worry it will be swasan only… don’t worry about pairs. … I assure you no one will be disheartened abt the pairs whn mystery will start unfolding….keep patience n I lil faith on me….

  4. Bhargavi

    This one is Good. I just love Sanskar though he is arrogant, the way he dealt with swara was cool. You have said that it would be ragsan right. Howcum it would be ragsan when it clearly shows they are swasan. I was confused on this yar

    • Thnx bhargavi. .. n how it will be ragsan that’s only the twist. …. plz have patience. …I can only say neither swasan nor ragsan fan will be disheartened at last

  5. Amazing dear…. how many comments you want to continue writing and updating fsst just tell me? i will post many many comments to make you update ;( .. I am not a sanskar fan.. kash ye admi laksh hota ;( hehe anyeays lOve ya take care dear

    • Thnx roshni…. thnx for supporting even if you are laksh fan…. n I told u all to comment nt too increase my comments.. bt as I am a new writer I am nt confident abt my story… I saw a big decrease in my comments from the frst chapter. … so I thought ppl may nt lyk it… srry if I disheartened any one….

      • Never mind it dear. so it is swalak. yeah!!! i read only two or three previous updates so I didnt actually got who will be the pair. now I am very happy. and people who give negative comments just ignore them. we are far better than then . Show them and continue the story. Decrease in comments maybe because people thought it will be swasan. stay blessed and keep smiling . cheers 🙂

  6. sethooty

    Superb superb.. What an episode… Yaar..loved it ..serious.. U gonna blast..
    Haha..I have small guess may be swara’s real name will be ‘………’…hahaha
    Waiting for next epi Dr…

    • Sethooty…. ur guess is in ri8 direction…. so don’t disclose. … u r close to the thng… bt mystry is diff… thnx for lyking it…

  7. Tiyasha

    Ur story is amazing..upload soon..and abt ur short story don’t copy paste from others dear..plzzz..u r an amazing writer..so plzzz don’t copy paste..???????sorry for being rude..?

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