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It was when that the four year lad came and gave a bone crushing hug to HER ..
soon the mobile of each and every member of beeped and Everyone received the same message from HIM..which read..
“enough now..can’t wait to see you all in front of my eyes …these two weeks were hell for me..made me realise the importance of family and love ..without whom I’m nothing except a body without a soul…I’M COMINGG”…
Everyone was feeling on cloud nine after reading the very sweet message from HIM…a cute and innocent smile they had on their lips ..except for two one was SHE who was continuously blushing and the other one was that lad who was confused eyeing the faces of his elders without any reason….’what was there in that stupid message that my family members are smiling foolishly’ wondered he with an irked face …..

“can I know that why the hell are u all smiling like fools please ” asked he in a different tone yet respectful ….
something clicked HER mind and then she called HER beloved son..
“ANSH”…..the cute boy is the symbol of extreme love THEY share for each other..
SHE called her son and “bacha…u know na how much mumma loves you”said she ..
“ofcource mom i know “..
“then will you do something for me which I’ll say”asked she …he replied”sure mom..”
“come with me then”she ordered …
the lad obediently followed her mother’s instruction and the duo headed towards the witness of THEIR love,fights..THIER ROOM …..the lady and the lad Sat on bed and had a conversation …”dad is coming and here ..what happened to mom she not exited…”wondered ANSH..”but….mom and dad love each other so immensely that they can’t live without each other not even for a second and here it has been two weeks since dad left from here …i have seen mom lost in HIS thoughts..then why there is a sudden change”he kept thinking …his inner thoughts were making him go crazy …
…..the adorable boy reminced an instance….it was when the the bot was two years of age..
SHE had an injury in her ankle and hence was not able to walk properly ..HER very lovely husband,HE can’t see her in pain …he was so worried that HE unknowingly gave a lecture of 3 hours to HER who was now fast asleep while he was giving the lecture..u don’t take care of yourself..always careless ..can’t you see and then descend the work work what all that comes in your mind ..HE was continuously blabbering while SHE slept with an irked face …our chhotu champ witnessed the immense love fight his parents had ..he sighed and then said ..”daaaaadddd… has slept just because you were lecturing her and that too since 4 hours..intead of saying that crap you should have helped her and take her to a doctor”…HE realised that his son was saying correct but for the same of his reputation he said “aammm…yaa yaa you are correct but you can’t deny the fact that your mom is the most careless lady we have ever met ..right?”
“right”said ANSH chukling and gave a highfive to his caring dad …

in no time the mansion was on the head of HIM when the doctor said that SHE could not move from bed at least for a day …and this great work was done by none other than SHE can a workaholic person stuck in the room ….the family members present in THEIR room soon left the place ..SHE felt as if they were slamming the door on her face ..she was feeling sooo helpless…but HE considered it as a great opporitinity to romance with his beautiful wife …HE use to carry her in HIS arms for every small work she had.. her injury gave him free license to wrap HER in HIS arms in front of everyone {though he gained it quite earlier at the time of their wedding} ..shared some of the veryyyyy cute moments with each other ….
ANSH came out of his dreamland dreaming about his parents when he heard the sound of a car entering the mansion…no doubt he was his father ….
HE entered the mansion and then the main hall just to feel the perfect blend of love , excitement in the air and to eye the perfect decorations done by HER in the grandiloquent way….
HE took blessings of elders …gave a bone crishug hug to his brothers and a very warm,genuine smile to his sister in laws and they were gauri and saumya…..
HIS bluish orbs just like the lad has ..were searching here and there for HER honey Brown orbs….which were nowhere to be seen ..
on eyeing HIS orbs searching for HER his grandmother said “ its enough ..goto your room ,get ready for the party this evening and then we all ‘ll have a great time together after a long time..”

suddenly HIS mom noticed and said ..”oyee where is your wife ..just before she was doing and chekcing the prepations like anything and now..see..she herself is lost “..muttered she with concern and confusion clearly seen in her voice …
“oyee now what are you doing here ..go to your room ..your wife and child must be there only waiting for you ” teasing her son she said those words of her …
HE headed towards THEIR room and saw his most cute,adorable and lovely son..
and not to forget HER ..but what is this SHE herself is busy in arranging clothesin the cupboard
sensing the serisouness of the matter and to cool the atmosphere he said ..
“heyyyyyyyyyyy champpp” showering all the love he had saved for his son from last two weeks
“daddd” replied his son with full excitement but she didn’t even turned to see him in front of her eyes…it was only she who knew what inner turmoil she was going through…..picking out an outfit for his son she called “ANSH try this ..this will definitely suit you ” showing him the dress ..the dress was in the shade of vine, the colour that suits HIM the best according to him an unsaid indication to HIM…
“what happened to your mom?” he asked..
”donnn know ” ansh said ..
“well I missed you a lot”continued ANSH
“i too missed you my jaan….but for now can I have some quality time with your mother …only if you don’t have any problem ” said HE winking …
“offcousre dad ..enjoy ” said his very smart son just like him …
after her son left she turned towards him with a pouty,angry yet cute face for him …
“SHIVAAY”…so HE referred to shivaay Singh oberoi “HADD KARTE HAI AAP BHI…how can you be so careless…first of all you left from the house and that too without informing me can I not important to you or it doesn’t even matter to you that i should be informed about where my husband is …but are so bad shivaay…i hate you hate you..” she was like a car with having it’s breaks fail…”ANNIKA”…so finally SHE is Mrs. shivaay Singh oberoi ,Annika..
“plzz plzzz relax..i did informed you for your kind information” he continued ..
“yeahh…after 7 hours of raelly shivaay do you have any idea that how was i feeling at point of time ” she said being irked with a taunting tone making him realise his importance in her life..

biting his lips he said “awww …annika you what you are very cute ”
annika-“I’m not cute okay…”
shivaay -“no you are and you look more cute when you are angry ”
annika-” and by the way ..why are you diverting the topic”
shivaay-“c’mon annika…i came after a long journey ..” he said wrapping his arms around her neck
annika- “oh.yeahh..then who said you to join that stupid meeting of yours in London and that too it took you 2 weeks “she said being all annoyed….
HE was not able to control his emotions and hence kissed her ..she was eventually hell shocked but then all her anger went on some other planet and she melted seeing his love for her…
“now plzz cool down” shivaay said after gaining a sweet kiss from her…
she got emotional and hugged him right with her eyes moist ….
hugging each other proved to be really removed anxiety and provides them strength to bear all hardships…
each other’s embrace was something truely fantastic..something which they enjoyed the most…that one hug was good enough to make their love even stronger than ever before…it was truely something a very different feeling …
just love and love for each other

heyyy guys …sairish here with the second half of this TS of mine ….REALLY SORRY FOR POSTING CRAP OVER HERE …
honestly i had Only imagined the first part of it..this second was completely out of the story, my mind …was not getting a story to continue it …
but I have tried my level best ..fingers crossed for your comments..
vhm di…thanks for your comment but I wanted to make something very clear….you wrote ‘SOMETHING DIFFERENT ‘ in your comment but that’s not true actually i was not getting an apt name for this and just wrote crap..
I have a further plot for this the 3rd part that i had planned to write in this one only..but goddd I can’t write more…or else my brain will burst ..I’LL BE POSTING THE 3RD PART 2MORO POSITIVELY (HOPE SO)

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  1. Fabb update Sarish….

    1. Sairish

      thank you so much banita di for commenting

      1. Sairish

        next part posted plzz read that one too …it’s the ending

  2. Lisaaa


    1. Sairish

      thanks lisaaa ..plzz read the next one too ..uploaded quite before…it’s the ending…

  3. Amazinggggg dr

    1. Sairish

      heyy Lauren…
      thank you for commenting…plzz read the next one tooo…posted quite before

  4. VHM

    Saiiiiiirrrrrriiiiiiiiiiisssssssssshhhhhhhhhh……….super awesome update and whether you accept or deny…this is definitely ”SOMETHING DIFFERENT” and this is final from my end…..super cute episode with right dose of emotions….way to go dear…loved it …waiting for the next….love you loads…keep smiling and take care

    1. Sairish

      can’t get enough of your such lovely words…
      glad you likedd it do mean a lot to me…
      thanks for commenting
      lots of love

  5. Zaveesha

    Good onr Sairish….it was sooo adorable…

  6. Zaveesha

    Good one Sairish….it was sooo adorable…

    1. Sairish

      heyy zaveesha di…
      firstly thanks for commenting and thanks for your lovely…words tooo…
      with love

  7. Alekhika20

    Fabulous update

    1. Sairish

      thanks for commenting dearr…..plzzz read the next one tooo……posted quite before. it’s the ending …

  8. Dhar

    Superb yaar… U nailed it to the coreeeee… Plzz do post the next update ASAP

    1. Sairish

      awe…thank you so much dhar for commenting…next part uploaded quite before…plz read that one too

  9. Navz

    Lit was soo cute and fabulous dear..why do u feel it as a crap…now dont talk too much and post ur 3rd part.

    1. Sairish

      thanks for commenting and accepting whatever i have written …

  10. Fffan1234

    Super awesome update

    1. Sairish

      thanks for appreciating fffan 1234 …plzz read the next one tooo…posted quite before….it’s the ending…

  11. Jerry_36

    Okay, so the update is here and beleive me you wrote it exceptionally beautiful, dearie !! I mean I lived how you portrayed everything and every emotion with uniqueness.
    Too too????
    Don’t dare think its bad in fact its the best, do post soon.
    Love yaa❤

    1. Sairish

      heyyy Jerry di…
      thank you sooooo much for commenting….
      glad you liked it …
      plzzz read the next one tooo……posted quite before ….it’s the ending ..
      lots of love

  12. Nikita_jai29

    Lovely dear

    1. Sairish

      thank you so much Nikita di for commenting….
      plzzz read the next one tooo ….
      lots of love

  13. Fenil

    So Dear Sairish ,your update i found when i was posting cakes.

    Its another fabulous piece.Nicely written by you.i liked how u portrait each feelings and that one msg nailed it whole part.after that Ansh’s pov was also beautiful.
    Shivaay’s return to home thats good after weeks an angry anika.

    Loved it.

    Btw i hate pppls who said this is a bad writing and bla bla, if u want to write those lines then u should stop write. Don’t feel bad…but u should write i m sure u all will enjoy.

    1. Sairish

      heyy bhaiyya
      glad u commented…
      so happy that you found it wroth a read …

      thank you tons for appreciating it and for those lovely words of yours tooo…

      I’m sorry for writing those things…really sorry if I hurted you…but you know..I’m new here and I’m having my confidence at the zero level ….

      being level headed what I think I should prefer..
      anyway plz don’t hate me …
      and ya plzzzzzzzzz read the next one tooo..posted quite before …it’s the ending..I’m sure you would like it…


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