That smile!!!! OS ”EDKV ” by angel_pari

Hey r u all.. Hope all r doing well… Sorry i didnt reply to cmnts as was bit busy
OK so firstly no this is not my love story…i,m kinda boring type girl who believe that love only exist in fiction…
So lets start it….
Love stories…how love stories started???? Sometimes At first sight???
Sometimes frndship turns into love
sometimes an unknown person walks into our life and our story begins… Some how like this my story also started with a smile of stranger..
THAT SMILE!!!which took away my heart….
Hi i,m sharvan malhothra…. I was the student of 11th standard when i got invitation by my frnd…inviation of his parents anniversary….when i put my first step at door….i feel smthng new…some pleasure in wind…some melody in that noise….and among that noise a sweet melodious laughter i heard!!!!!

And in search of that laughter my eyes caught a veiw of an angel,,in white gown,,her talks, her laugh, her cute movements were making my eyes locked at her..
And she saw me!!!!! Yeah but not in loving way…in a way.,as if i was some goon who was gazing at girls……she gave me disgusted look and walks away…..
And i greet my frnd i was with him in whole party searching for her.. But could not get a glance of her..
Party was almost over now it was time for bacha party at terrace…so we all boys walks towards terrace and as soon as i reached there!!!

ahhhh!!!! I know u hv got for what u were searching…that angel is just in front of u..but y u r beating so fast..
I scold my heart in mind…
And then i come to know she is my frnds sister,s besiee
”hiii sharvan malhothra”
i forwarded my hand and she looks at me in confuse way..first at my hand then in my eyes…
And at last she shake hand with a smile…

That smile cause a curve on my lips we both were looking at eachother wind start playing with her long hairss….BEAUTIFULL!!! That monent wad very beautifull..
That was our first meet!!!!
After that we use to talk online….with passage of time how a stranger turns into my frnd…my love and at last my life i never came to knew…
It has been three years now..
It was time to confess my love but before that my parents should know abt that….
And when i talk to thm i came to know that destiny has played a great game…my soulmate is daughter of the person whom my dad hates the most…

Yeah relations btwn we both families are not good!!!its bitter……..
But we didnt lose hope!!! We were stick with our descion that if our families cant forget their hate for us then y should we forget our LOVE!!

love cant lose over hate!!!!
But it loses!!!!!
Till a year we try our best to make our parents understnd..and we were ready to try till last breath but that day i,got a message..
I rushed to her house but i cant step in..cause i dont want to make situation worse…i glance at her from window she was broken as she loses her father..yeah her father died in accident!!
But i cant hold her…. That day our hope to be together also died….we understood that our story was not written to be completed!!!

I was not able to talk to her for month almost at last we meet somewhere outside
i was waiting for her at beach i heard her steps but i didnot turn..
And she talks..
”till last breath my dad oppose this relation…then how can we tie that relation..
I was ready to fight for us coz i hd some hope…but that hope loses….our love loses..our story was incomplete and it will remain incomplete”
thats all and she walks away..

I looked at sky
But our love cant lose,till our hearts are beats for eachother……
Our hearts are together forever no matter how far we are…….


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  1. Ariana

    Haaaaeeee! Emotional kardia. Nd sweeto don’t say u r boring nd being in love-fiction only, coz I’m like u too. Hi5!!! N being like tht isn’t boring,it’s more of ‘slightly realistic’. As for the story… I’m a crybaby now. The whole story went breaking through my heart but the ending was so hopeful!!! Loved it. Beautiful shot. Wonderful sweeto
    Take care
    post more shots
    love u sooooooooo much

    1. Angel_pari


      Hi5 sisso!!!!! Same like me 😉

      awww my aruuuu baby dont cry lov u shoooooo much

      thanku so much take care 🙂 🙂 🙂

  2. WeirdSister

    It was so amazingggg…angel.
    I don’t think any story has a sad ending….urs was a logical ending and I loved it…
    So beautifully written….!!!
    I just loved it so so much…
    D ending…o gosh…it killed me…!
    It was awesome…!
    Love ya..
    Take care..!

    1. Angel_pari

      Ahhhh!!!! WS Thanku sooo much

      i,m glad u like it love u take care

  3. Pari di
    This was so beautiful a story….pls write more…!
    Love u
    Ur doll?

    1. Angel_pari

      Thanku so much!!!!

      Lots of love to my doll 🙂

      take care

  4. Nikita

    This was something so beautiful!
    I loved it so much di..
    I’m such a cry-baby!
    Now tears are gushing out, why do you do this?
    Anyways, I loved it so so much..
    Do write more like this!
    Love you so much!

    1. Angel_pari

      Awwww sooo sorry to make u cry!!!!!!!

      Lov u loads i,m glad u like it

      take care 🙂 🙂

  5. Anushika

    Beautiful story and a wonderful thought, Didn’t mind the sad ending.Pls post more OS.

    1. Angel_pari

      Thankuuu so much anu i,m glad u like it…..

      Lov u loads

  6. Fatimagulesarfraz

    Hayeeeeeeee api !!!!! ??????????????????????????????????
    Lovely OS …. don’t worry sad ending hy to kya huaa ?????
    It directly touched my heart ..
    Beautifully written dear ..
    Great ????
    Nd api I wanna tell u something I am also that type of boring person who thinks that love stories only exist in fictions ??????? so in this matter u r not alone ??
    Really awesome one ?
    Lotzzzz of love ??????
    Take care ..

    1. Angel_pari

      Awwww fatima…. M glad u like it muahhhhh lov u loadds!!!!!!

      Awww my sisso is also like me hahaha i,m glad i,m not an only wonder hehehe 😉

      lov u take care 🙂

  7. nice one yaar …

    1. Angel_pari

      Thnku ishana!!!!

  8. Awsm story pari

    1. Angel_pari

      Thnx sumo!!!

  9. Awsome one no words keep it up and u know I am still waiting for the next part of ur ff

    1. Angel_pari

      Awww!! Thanku so much harshita….
      Nd i,m so sorry for making u wait for ff.. I,ll start posting from nov coz of exams!!!!!
      But i,m glad u like this

      stay blessed

  10. ????? so long…
    From WHR they r are..
    Hope so…these two love birds…
    May met some WHR in life’s again…
    And turn around to watch their moments…and feel it at once…???
    Nice story

    1. Angel_pari

      I also wish that,let the unexpected thing happen and their story ends on happy note…..

      Any way thanku so much lov u loads di……..

  11. It was so emotional ?
    What a story though ?
    You said it was real, right?
    The girl was really a great person who respected her dad more rather than loving that guy.
    And oh yes I wanted to ask you about your ff.. when will you post its next episode? I can’t wait to read that. I love your ff. Its story is so different yet amazing. ?
    Post that soon please.
    Take care. Loads of love ?

    1. Angel_pari

      Hmmm yeah she is enough courageous to sacrifie her love!!!!!
      Any way thanku so much…
      And abt ff ahhh i really dnt knw coz studies are getting on my nerves these days i,ll post from nov again, hope so!!….

      Lov u loads take care!!!!

  12. Zuha Fatima

    Angooo Api ??? Itna intense likha ❤❤ Mujhe nahi pata that ke meri Angoo Api itna intense or emotional bhi likh sakti hai ? Wow‼ I must say u wrote it beautifully‼ Good going Api? Keep it up ? Take Care ?
    Loads of Love ???
    Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂


    1. Angel_pari

      Hahhahaha mjhe khud b nh pata tha mn esa kch likh sakti hn 😀

      awwww glad u like it miss u shoooo mch

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