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SIYARAM KE MAHAN PREM GATHA (episode 1)

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Hi guys….. this is my first fan fiction on siya ke ram……….. hope u all like it……….

The scene starts with all the four couples roaming in the garden………
Ram- sitae, aap aaj bare ache mood mein dikhai de rahe hain. Koi vishesh karan ???
Sita- nahi. Koi karan nahi.

Ram- aap mujhe batana nahi chahte ???
Sita- nahi, aisi baat nahi hain. (in her mind-main aap koh kaise iss din ke vishaye mein baatau??? Yeh main aap koh nahi baata payungi)
In some other part of the garden was bharat alone…
Mandvi- (running) hey bhagwan, meri pati kaahan chali gayi hain. ab main unhe kaha dhundoongi ???
After a couple of moments, she finds bharat and hugs him….
Bharat- kya hua hain ??? aap atyant vichleet kyu lag rahe ???

Precap- mandvi asks bharat for some vaachan….. bharat hands her a bouquet of flowers….

Plsss don’t forget to comment………
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Thank you for reading guys!!!

Hope it was good ??????

20 Comments
  1. it was awesome suchi dearie , but make it a little long .

    1. Thnk u so muchhh diiidiiii

  2. Padmaja

    Hey suchi dear it is superb loved it . And make it long dear..

    1. Thnks dearie dii

  3. loved it suchi but plz make it a little bit longer

    1. Thnks preethi darls

  4. Shrinithi

    its awsome dear

    1. Wowww thnk u vry muchhh shri dii

  5. Plz post in English
    so tat everyone can read n enjoy it

    1. Of course I will try dii

  6. Anushya

    loved it especially sira convo…. but try to make it longer

    1. Thnkss Anu sweetie and more sira convo r coming……

  7. Lakshmila

    Guys actually I had no time that’s why couldn’t most much of the ff……. Actually my mother was calling me for dinner and so I could only write this much….. I will surely try to post much in the second epi….

  8. Sudeshna

    Khoob bhalo di kintu ektu bodro likhar cheshta korbo otherwise fabulous.. Love u😘😘😘don’t mind

    1. Lakshmila

      y should i mind ????thnk u re swastu bonu…

  9. awesome dear

    1. Lakshmila

      love u and thnk u diidii

  10. Really nice written by you……………. Great.
    But very short….. .

  11. NABANITA626

    Very good….
    Awesome…………
    And very very sorry for late comment🙅

  12. Really really nyc dearie ur gr8 fan is here.. U r jus superb.. I didn’t luv it I liked it,. Luv u soo much.. 😘 😊 😘 😊 N as ebry1 said make it jus a bit longer .. It was nyc lyk u.

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