Simple si love story (kanchi os) by Abhilasha dedicated to khamoshi and tu friends

Hello my sweeties…..I know you all would be ready with buckets of shoes to throw on me as I left my ff incomplete and I m worth that because leaving incomplete anything is crime but I have some personal problems so please sorry!!
This is an OS dedicated to Mitali/khamoshi/vikram_swarda
and my all tu friends …….hope you all like a farewell gift as I am not sure that when I will write again!!
A huge beautiful mansion is shown written mathur’s mansion on it!!
The house seemed to be full of noises ……
One lady shouted-
Sanchi beta get ready …..boy’s family is coming in 30 min

A room is shown …..a girl is trying to set her saree pallu…
She is Sanchi!
Sanchi- uff I m fed up now …….I can’t wear this …..
She takes out a navy blue gown suit and matched it with simple elegant earings …..
Jaya comes !
Jaya- looking beautiful but why u didn’t wear saree…
Sanchi- Mumma I think they should meet the real me ….not a girl who look proper wife material with layers of makeup!!

Sunil- proud of my daughter!!
Sanchi- papa!!!
Sanchi hug him….
Jaynil- god bless you beta …..our princess has grown up now !!
Sanchi- oho no emotional drama plz…
Car horns outside!!
Jaya- they have come.

Jaynil goes ….while sanchi checks some files of her patient as for her the only thing matters first is her parents and job.
Jaya comes to take Sanchi!
Sanchi goes in living room!!
She is not able to see the face of boy but see his parents.
Sanchi- why I feel I have seen them before?

Sanchi sits on front sofa but she is reluctant to see boy …her eyes are lowered …
Boy looks at her ……
Boy- why I feel I have seen her before …..why my heart is beating so fast??
(Boy is kabir of course)
Jaya- my daughter is no 1 doctor of whole sdch …….she has record of 20 surgeries in 1 day .
Sanchi- Mumma ….
Kusum- yaa I have heard so much of her ….my son has came from Bangalore yesterday …….he is topmost IIT .
Jaya- I think you both should talk in private.
Kanchi- m….no

Kusum- oho I thought that my son is shy so my daughter in law would be little like me but see she too is more shy…
All laughs while kanchi blushes.
They both go in Sanchi’s room.

Kabir- let’s have introduction first.
Sanchi- before that I want to say something …,I don’t know whether you believe in teenage love but actually I was in a relationship with a boy in my high school and I love him today also
Kabir- oho my chatterbox still the same …….didn’t give me chance to speak…..if you don’t mind ….that boy still loves you a lot and his name is kabir ….ur kabir…
Sanchi- kabir!!!!
Kabir- yaa sanchi!
Flashback-
A group of girls is shown holding some pizza slices . one girl opens coke shaking it and as a result it spreads in all directions …..

One boy who was behind her….
Boy- u idiot stupid ….can’t u see …..u have eyes or buttons
Girl- aye chachunder…..lamapat langur…….in whole school ground u got one place that too behind me……who told you? Huhh…
Boy- u….I will kill u…
Girl- dare u …..

Both indulge in big fight….
Pragya isha and riya shouts – Sanchi!!!
Girl turns …..yaa she is sanchi!
While veer Garv and satish shouts – kabir!!
Boy is kabir….both give cold looks to each other.
They all go to class but…..
Teacher- woowwww!! Class stand up for my respected students ……see break was over before 20 minutes but you all ……u got time ?? Or u need more time ….wait for ur busy schedule I do a favour that stay out for 40 more minutes till that I will teach my class and u are big people ….u don’t need to study science!!

All in corridor!!
Sanchi- because of this langur we all have to stand outside that too on cost of science class.
Kabir- oh really?? Who spreaded coke??
Prashaya- plzz guys stop?? And this teacher …hitler ‘s son ….
Veer- let’s eat leftover chips and play games.
Whole group play games and eat chips.
Next day-

Kabir and Sanchi are fighting for bench………
Teacher- you both!!! Get out of class!!
Kanchi gets punishment ….both started fighting but later ends up solving it.
At recess!!
Some boys fights with sanchi as she complained of them to teacher …
Kabir- hey!!don’t u have manners to talk a girl….idiots ……if next time u dare to talk rude to any girl I would beat u all.
Sanchi smiles!!
Sanchi- we can be friends …..you are not that bad.
Both shakes hands.

Time passes and kanchi’s friendship becomes stronger.
In 10th standard.
Teacher assigns a project to pairs and kanchi were the pair along with pratish…ishveer and gaya.
Ishveer are in relationship while pratish are good friends pragya has crush on satish and Garv on riya.
Kanchi are besties but with tom and jerry fights .
All started working on project ….in this sanchi begin feeling for kabir ….kabir too but he suppressed his feelings for his studies.
Final day of project-

Kanchi were giving final touch to the project….
Sanchi- kabir I want to say something.
Kabir- yaa speak.
Sanchi- wo actually….. Wo….we are really good friends but I don’t know how…..wo…I want to saym..mmhdbdi she close her eyes….-I love you!!
Kabir was numb ……
Kabir- Sanchi…this time….is it right ……and really love or infa…….I need some time.
Sanchi- hm …I am not forcing you or I don’t want a relationship tag but I couldnt hold it longer….
Both shared an eyelock and an awkward feeling ……..
Sanchi- I should leave…..

In evening-
Kabir looking at Sanchi’s profile pic-
Kabir- I too love sanchi but what proof that its love …all say that this age develops temporary feelings….
He close his eyes and sanchi come in front of his eyes …her antiques…their fightings….their drama plays ….parties….trips everything …
Next day in school
Kanchi are in library along with ishveer setting for their assembly ….
Kabir- sanchi don’t u want to listen my reply…
Sanchi become nervous.
Kabir – I love you!!
Sanchi blushes …her happiness knew no bounds.
Kanchi’s relationship goes with love and purity……
Teasings by friends and late night chattings …..

And some cute moments .
High school passed and all get good results .
In 11th the group gets divided in medical non medical and commerce but the friendship and love continued.
Same month summer vacations…… Kanchi had completed 1 yr
Sanchi feels kabir is ignoring her……
Sanchi- I don’t want to be a burden on kabir….he needs a break ……
Kabir on other hand- I m not able to give her sufficient time.
I know she don’t say anything but she always understand me and me I don’t even do a single thing so that she feel special.
Jaya comes in sanchi’s room-
Jaya- sanchi do you have a boyfriend?
Sanchi- maa……
Jaya- sanchi I trust u and know that you won’t do anything wrong so that our family’s honour comes to risk and at this stage its better to focus on us career …..u have 1.5 yr only …..
Sanchi tells everything to jaya!
Jaya- sanchi I swear u …..get away from him ……if ur father come to know then u know the consequences ……
Sanchi cries ….

Sanchi- god how is this dilemma …..I love Mumma the most and I can’t avoid her but my love……
Sanchi’s innersoul appears- sanchi so what ur mum said. ….u can get another love but not another mother….if ur love is true then whole universe will make u meet him at right time.
Sanchi cries.
Kabir on other hand is feeling restless….

Kusum- kabir I am observing that from many days you are not paying attention to anything….. If there is any problem ….plzz tell me……and kabir I know u love some girl …….I am ur mother beta but beta it would be better to stay away …I know u r my son and ur love gives u power but son its not good to travel on 2 boats at a time.

Kabir- maa!
Kusum- at right time u will get ur true love ………but for now ur only priority should be ur career.
Kabir- hmm
At night-
Kabir and sanchi are holding their phones….sanchi call …kabir with lots of efforts pick phone…
Sanchi- kabir I want to talk something impportant………
Kabir- sanchi why are u crying??
Sanchi told him whole matter.
Kabir- I think we should end this.
Sanchi holding her tears …..agrees …she cut phone ….both burst out in tears.
After summer vacations in school.
Sanchi goes to meet pragya and riya but collides with kabir…..
She ignore…….
Kabir too
Time passes …….

Both face each other everyday but ignore…….
12th farewell
Sanchi comes wearing black saree…..all were mesmerized…..
Kabir come in black shirt and blue denims…..

Sanchi sings – phir bi tumko chahungi.
At end kabir meets sanchi!!
Kabir- sanchi I want to say one thing only……..if our love is true we will meet again ……and our story will not be incomplete.
Both bids goodbye!!
Fb ends-
Kabir- see I comeback to fulfil my promise.
Both hug each other.
Both say yes to their families.

Kabir- I want to take u somewhere…. Here is a gift.
Sanchi opens an find red beautiful red and golden shoulder cut floral crop top with red long skirt .kabir wears white tuxedo.
Kabir blindfolds Sanchi’s eyes….
Time skips ….and sanchi founds herself in temple.
Both pray ….kabir propose sanchi there and make her wear

a gold and diamond pendent written SK on it on heart.
Then he take him to church ….gurudwara …masjid….. Tujme rab dikhta h plays in BG….
After that kabir takes sanchi to a beautifuly decorated isolated place ………..sanchi opens her eyes….but kabir disappears.
Sanchi- kabir!!! She become tensed….rose petals fall on her …..a helicopter is seen in sky ….kabir is inside and throwing rose petals on her…..sanchi becomes teary eyes…..
Kabir makes sanchi sit in helicopter and both have helicopter ride(swasan scene which is my fvt.)
Then both have dinner ……
Sanchi- this is the most special day of my life …….
Kabir- I will make ur each day special………
Both kissed each other.

Later all wedding rituals take place.
Kanchi’s grand wedding take place……pratish ishveer who are married with 1yr daughter gaya and mishra and kapoor family!!
Kabir-oh god who made this wedding process so long.
Sanchi- oho my lampat langur husband …..u r still the same.
Kabir make faces but later all laughs……
Cameraman ask kanchi to give a pose.
Kabir pulls sanchi in his arms …..
Both share an intense eyelock………and screen freezes!!!
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Hope u all don’t get bore…..love uh all!!
Keep smiling!!

Good bye and plz if anyone dislike plz do it openly so that I can find my mistakes and this is my last writing so better don’t leave anything unsaid.
PC credits- @vikramswarda_obsessed

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  1. Anu88

    So so amazing and outstanding and superb and fantastic story yaar…….I can’t express my feelings by comment yaar…….I love it so so much dear……tc sweety…….??happy birthday mitu dear??

  2. This was so fab….there was a complete smile on my face all the time…..indeed tooooo good

  3. Dhruti

    abhi it was amazing and superb story………..i have no words to express my feeling……………i just loved it………….tc abhi and don’t say it’s farewell story…………..you will come back asap on TU and i’m sure about it and pray to god to solve your problem…………….love you khub saraaaaaaaaa……………

  4. It’s superb..outstanding

  5. Anhsaa

    amazing…

  6. Aafiya

    Superb…

  7. Amazing…. Loved it very much

  8. Riyarocks

    Abhi……..meri pyaari witch………..plz isko last mat bol………..thoda break le le, but aise khatam mat kar………….& abt story…………mast mindblowing………..superrrrrrrrrr se upar types……….luv u a lot Shona…………bye……..tc

  9. Sanveer

    Loved it! And I as well love the Swasan Scene, it’s good U did that lovely scene With kanchi

  10. Swethaa

    soo amazing fantastic mind blowing fascinating…loved it dear..hope you come soon again when you get time…love u dear..miss u…

  11. It’s amazing. Please come back soon we will wait for you dear. Take care

  12. Awesome and superb

  13. Anee

    Abhi dear….suuupper duuppper hit dear…..comeback with another Os/ff like this…luv you dear.

  14. Ale wah!!!awesome mindblowing superb fantastic wonderful…..u have so good sense of humour abhi..I know my abhi will not leave TU easily..jab time milegi jaroor likhegi…tc..love uh dear!!

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