A simple love story …A TS (shot-7)

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The journey towards the temple was simply very awkward.
Though we had conversations after a few constant intervals of time but it was of no use.
Finallyyyy! after a wait of 40 minutes we reached the temple. it’s one of my favourite places in the whole himachal the reason is not very different . it is so because it was here where we shared some very pure memories. Indeed the purest I remember everything but seemed he didn’t . As usual he forgot that we don’t go in a temple with wearing shoes along . it’s against rituals .
the stair leading to the idols were quite a 10 minutes walk . we reached the top . He was panting . May be not going to temple is common in Mumbai and so he now isn’t used to his childhood habbit of running on the stairs rather than crossing them step by step .
“Shivaay…we don’t wear shoes while we are in temple”
the reply was not something I expected .
it has always been a habit of his forgetting to take off his shoes and mine to remind him everytime to gain a typical answer
“OKAY MOMMM!” it used to be a sarcastic one though .
but this time …
“ohh..thanks ..I had forgotten actually”

at that moment I felt an usual wetness in my eyes. between a bit shaky chords i replied
“never mind…seems you’ve forgotten many things”
I noticed he had a bewildered expression on his face but followed me in.
THE peace inside the temple was very helpful. All of the miseries suddenly went away ..donn know where ..The aura was so. and so I was really engrossed in prayer ..praying and asking for something which i have been asking for years and years now. I don’t know about him but when I finished i again saw him looking in my direction with the corner of my eyes.
I moved my head in a left-right direction with my brows raising a bit tryin’ indicate him
‘done? shall we go?’
and he responded with a warm smile .
****
“ok…bye ..see you later . ” I said
“Oy!. but where are you going?” asked a confused he.
“well…I’m going to college . I’m a professor and so have to teach Mr.”
I feel he didn’t wanted me to go as when i turned to go , i came to a sudden halt as he was holding my hands. ‘A TYPICAL HINDI CINEMA SCENE’
“is it necessary to go” asked he

“well…I’m a professor and so it’s my moral duty to teach . you know a professor’s never off duty”
“at least lemme drop you yaar!”
“No thanks ..you have actually done enough to me .”
he looked as though my reply didn’t fitted in his brains. He gave as if ‘i-am-too-peculiar’ look and stared while I went at least i felt so ….

☆☆☆☆☆☆☆
Hi..firstly sorry I’m a few hours late ..was caught up by sudden fever!
anyways ..guys the comments were comparatively too less this time . is the story being boring? please tell me if so. I really would improve myself or stop it at the moment .
well…HOW WAS THIS? DO TELL VIA COMMENTS. PLEASE!
thanks infinite many times for being so strong supporters. means a hell lot to me .
LOVE
Sairish
😘😘😍😍

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37 Comments
  1. Ff is very nice…. But plzzz make it long… And particularly 2day episode is very small..
    But nice…. I am early waiting for shivaay POV.. Update next soon… TC

    1. Sairish

      hello sahasra di
      I’m so glad you commented for the first time .
      I have tried making the next long . it’s published…do read ..link at the top of chapter
      keep reading
      love
      Sairish here

  2. Pui

    Hey Dearie ,
    Superb epi. Dont feel that its boring, its very refreshing to read…
    Hope ur fever goes down soon !
    Take care

    1. Sairish

      hello pui di
      Thanks a million times
      you’re lovely
      next part is published..link at the top ..do read if haven’t
      love
      dearie

  3. Fenil

    Superb….
    Bole toh ek dum jakkkks

    1. Sairish

      thanks a lot bhaiyyu for such a jhakkas comment .
      do read next it’s published already
      love
      sissy

  4. SatyendraSharma

    Hey sairish,
    Do not think it’s Boring
    It’s a treat and indeed pleasure to read it

    1. Sairish

      heyy aayushi di
      I’m soo happie after reading your comment.
      next part is already published..do read …link at the top of the chapter
      love
      Sairish here

  5. Alekhika20

    Superb update

    1. Sairish

      thanks a lot Alekhika di..
      next part is already published..do read…link at the top of this chapter

  6. awesome 😉

    1. Sairish

      hamna aapi ..
      next part’s already published ..do read..link at the top of this part
      Thanks a million
      keep reading
      love
      Sairish here

  7. Oleen

    Cute one😘

    1. Sairish

      thanks alot oleen di

  8. Meow

    very nice sairish

    1. Sairish

      meow di
      thank uhhh so muchh
      do read next
      here’s the link
      http://www.tellyupdates.com/simple-love-story-ts-shot-8/
      love
      Sairish here

      1. Meow

        ur welcome

  9. Nice and not at all boring

    1. Sairish

      thanks a lot bulbul di..
      I’m so happy that you commented for the first time.
      read the next one tooo
      http://www.tellyupdates.com/simple-love-story-ts-shot-8/
      link above
      love
      Sairish here

  10. Nikita_jai29

    It is lovely dear.. Take care dear

    1. Sairish

      Nikki di..thanks is a million
      link for the next …
      http://www.tellyupdates.com/simple-love-story-ts-shot-8/
      love
      Sairish here

  11. Ashwinee

    Hey sairish, hope you are well now…Take care dearie…coming to the update…even though the update was short it was written very well…Don’t think that your story is boring…you’re just amazing…keep it up dear…
    Lots of Love

    1. Sairish

      Ash diii
      thank uuh sooo much.
      means a hell lot to me …
      you’re tooo cooperating
      loads and loads of love
      Sairish here

  12. Niriha

    Awesome…lovely update
    Don’t think it’s boring update dear…
    Waiting for next part update

    1. Sairish

      niri di ..
      thank uhh sooo soo very much
      love
      Sairish here

  13. VHM

    Hey saiiiirrrriiiiissssshhhhhh…how are you now? Went to dictor or not? Taking medicines or not? Get well soon !!!!!

    The episode was super awesome …as usual….it isn’t boring but it’s making me enthusiastic….fabulous update…when are you posting next….

    First health , then studies and then all these…so take your time, get well soon…we all can wait….

    In love with your works…..

    1. Sairish

      dii….
      itna concern ..well it’s justified coz I can understand ..you’re a mother too ..
      well..feels like I’m much better
      next part ..here’s the link
      http://www.tellyupdates.com/simple-love-story-ts-shot-8/
      lots of love
      Sairish here

  14. Heya Sairish!
    Lovely Update as always. It wasn’t boring at all. Totally enjoyed reading it 😊
    Waiting for the nxt!
    Hope you get well soon. Sending you warm wishes ❤
    -Rhea

    1. Sairish

      rhea diiiii

      how to say tha is for so much of support .
      link for the next..
      http://www.tellyupdates.com/simple-love-story-ts-shot-8/
      lots of love
      Sairish here

  15. awesome chappy.. did u visit doctor?? take care and rest well.. we can wait for the update.. hope u get well soon..

    1. Sairish

      prabha diii
      firstly thanks a lot for your lovely concern.
      yaah..I did visited doctor and I’m better now ..
      next part posted long back
      http://www.tellyupdates.com/simple-love-story-ts-shot-8/
      do read
      love
      Sairish here

  16. UF3355

    AWESOME EXCELLENT INTERESTING MIND BLOWING PERFECT SUPERB👌👌👌😘😘😘
    Take Care And Stay Safe😊

    1. Sairish

      hiii…UF DEAR
      Thanks a million times yaar
      next one here
      http://www.tellyupdates.com/simple-love-story-ts-shot-8/
      love you loads
      Sairish here

  17. Heyy Sarish!!!!
    Take Care of urself dr….
    This one is Awesome dr…. Luv it….
    P. S.
    Miss u too dr…. TC and Get well soon😘😘😘😘

    1. Sairish

      bani diiiiii
      million dollar comment .
      thank uhh soo muchh
      means a lot
      love you loads
      Sairish here

  18. Hey my sis….hope u are better now,……update is incredible as always but short….whenever I start reading ur ff ….I wan to read more & more….I become so much demanding😂😂 …..lots if love to u & take care sweetie pie.

    1. Sairish

      diduuu
      how’s you ..? I’m better now ..
      sorry it’s just but I hope the next one’s long enough …
      nooo problem …you can be demanding ..
      you have that right 😂😂🤣🤣
      next part here
      http://www.tellyupdates.com/simple-love-story-ts-shot-8/
      loads of love
      Sairu

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