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A simple Love story …A TS (shot-3)


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With his steps followed by mine we entered the house . It was indeed classy and why it shouldn’t have been…after all this is something for which the oberois famous. Unlike other boys , he was not a dirt freak!. Cleanliness was in his blood it seemed. However ,…like a true gentleman he offered me to sit and have some juice or tea..whatever I like .
“How are you?”..he asked with utmost politeness . This was something I couldn’t answer. What should have I replied that I’m not fine because I have been waiting for you since the time you left Himachal and this stupid fella is in love with you no matter she hadn’t seen you for the past 20 years. What a stupid answer it would be and I answered with a ‘fine’
“How are you by the way” I asked him pretending to be calm as much I could
“Absolutely fantastic” he said and was visible on his face .
I felt he got that I was a bit uncomfortable and why not you just cannot hug someone you’re meeting after 20 years and say I love you. It indeed was the silliest idea.
“You ok ?”..asked a concerned him and I replied with a nod
“But you doesn’t seem so” he fired back …guess he was in a mood to fight but I was not and so replied
“’s nothing like that..I’m absolutely fine”
But he wasn’t satisfied ? Somewhere I felt he was doing it deliberately but never mind he didn’t gave up
“Oh common I can see that you’re not fine but you’re not telling it coz you’re annika…the tadibaaz annika ..never admit your problems”

I have had enough ..don’t know how but my inner fire got light up again
“Oy!..don’t say rubbish about me . Yes!.. I’m annika.. tadibaaz annika..what will you do huhh??.. what’s wrong in that if I’m a soul with a lot of self respect. You can’t do anything in that…you’re nothing in front of me..just a mere might be a business tycoon in front of media but this is Himachal not your Mumbai..
You……” Rest of the words faded .. I needed some breathe for i have been speaking continuously. A break was needed and during the break’s duration I saw him standing in front of me all red …not because of anger but laughter!
He have been trying to control it for ling but as visible from his face .he could no longer handle it and he bursted out with fits of laughter accompanied by my inaudible chuckle,a sheepish and embarrassed one though .
After a certain interval of time we paused . And unknowingly I was comfortable . That awkwardness was kind of no longer between us. I was feeling happy. We had a lovely evening .
Must say..he’s a great cook. The third love of my life,pasta..he still remembered it . I was elated ..why? I myself didn’t knew. A morsel of pasta got stuck to the edge of my lower lip . Since I was busy in blabbering about Himachal’s beauty and enjoying my pasta I didn’t noticed it but Seemed he did. Gently coming towards me ,bending a little and then finally getting the morsel out . God knows ..this small task have been so awkward and difficult with me . Nervousness hovered me again ,awkwardness regained power.
After emptying my plate as soon as I can I bid him a formal bye with no friendly hug along . Admist the food..we didn’t talked even a bit and maybe the rest of the evening as well! I was In such a hurry to get back home . With my legs almost running I left for my place without even listening to what he was saying. I’ll do everything later but now I seriously needed my grief sharer,my pillow. Badly needed it .
After crying my heart out I layed down on a small yet cozy and comfortable bed of my cottage . The night was same as usually . Under the shadow of stars and shade of moonlight . Pondering on the day’s events . Suddenly phone beeped! It was a message from him ..I read the notification . But decided to open and see it later in the morning tomorrow.
I closed my eyes with a sigh and drifted myself in a deep slumber .
Salut mon amies!
Well…a big HIIII! …so with 3rd part of this simple love story . I wanted to ask the way of writing clear to you people ? It’s not confusing till now? If any problem is there or if will be in future ..then do tell me . And a biggest request ..GUYS PLEASE COMMENT..IT WON’T TAKE MORE THAN A SECOND. PLEASE.
Once again thanks a lot for the immense support and encouragement
infinite love

  1. Awesome

    1. Sairish

      Thank you so much charu di(I can call you charu …can I!)
      Have posted the next one
      Here’s the link
      Much love

  2. UF3355

    Take Care And Stay Safe😊

    1. Sairish

      A big hello UF DEAR
      your immense support is pleasure to read .
      Keep reading
      Much love

  3. Fenil

    Awww so cute chappy siso.
    Anika’s emotions her thoughts so nicely u wrote. When shivaay came towards her at pasta eating i thoght finally kiss will happen but u throws full bucket of water on my dreams huhhhj.loved it.

    1. Sairish

      Thank you so much bhaiyya
      I’m glad you liked annika and her thoughts .
      Well…hahaha…sorry for spilling water over your dreams ..
      Thanks again

  4. Oleen

    It’s quite good

    1. Sairish

      Hello oleen dear,
      Glad you adhered to my request .
      link for the next …here you go

  5. Your story is different from others.I like your ff.

    1. Sairish

      Hello sadia dear,
      Your name is lovely ..
      I’m glad you found my story different.
      For the previous parts you can go to the link given at top of the part and for the next here you go
      Keep supporting
      Much love

  6. Aashi9

    Wonderful chapter. Do update soon.

    1. Sairish

      How’s you..I returned after a long time ..
      Missed you so much year!
      Ahain thanks and a ton for supporting me and commenting
      Do read the next one too please
      All of my love to you
      Little sissy

  7. Zaveesha

    Very nice cutie girl… everything is Crystal clear no confusion at all…great going…best wishes..

    1. Sairish

      A big hello to the sweetest di
      What do I have always been so understanding.
      I’m too small to say thanks to you ..
      The next part is already published quite before .
      Good and read if haven’t
      Loads of Love

  8. A very cute story. Loved it. Plz update sooner. LOVE U

    1. Sairish

      Hello dear
      I’m so glad you came up and commented .
      It means a lot to me
      Glad you found it cute
      Have posted the next part
      Link’s here
      Keep supporting
      Loads of love

  9. Awesome 😉

    1. Sairish

      Heyy gamma aapi
      I really really like your name ..
      Thanks a ton for commenting . Meant a lot to me.
      Do read the next please
      All my Love

      1. Sairish

        I’m sorry it’s hamna aapi..

  10. Nithu


    1. Sairish

      Well…hello nithu di
      Thank you so very much for commenting…
      Please read the next
      Lots of love

  11. Nikita_jai29

    It is lovely dear….

    1. Sairish

      Nikki di,
      Thanks a million times for always supporting me.
      Do read the next of haven’t ..
      Link’s here
      Tons of Love

  12. Niriha

    Awesome fabulous…loved it

    1. Sairish

      Hello niri di,
      Loads of thanks for commenting
      Keep supporting me the way you have done
      Do read next . It is published
      Much love

  13. Ashwinee

    fabulous update sairish…

    1. Sairish

      Hi ash di..
      Well firstly I’m soo sorry for the misunderstanding . I never meant that .
      Coming to it,
      Thanks a ton for liking and commenting it
      Do read the next
      Lots of love

  14. Alekhika20

    Fabulous update

    1. Sairish

      Hii alekhika di..
      Thanks a lot , again and again .
      Keep reading and supporting
      Link for the next part

  15. Lovely one Sairu…..loved it from bottom of the heart….do update soon & lots of love to u.

    1. Sairish

      How’s you?
      Well…thank you soo sooo sooooooooo very much for appreciating it.
      It means a lot to me
      Keep supporting the way you do
      Next part has been published . Do read if haven’t
      Link for the next is above
      Lots of love

  16. VHM

    Awesome chappy saiiiiiiiirrrrrrrrrrrrriiiiiiiiiiissssssssshhhhhhhhhh…love it…when will you post the next is what i am waiting for

    1. Sairish

      To the loveliest lady,
      Your appreciation is really worth of me or not is what i usually wonder .
      Again thanks a million times for linking it .
      It means a hell lot to me
      Lots of love

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